Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06WXJMNJF9D8CXTBRG2TD

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Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.000964
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a figure standing in the dim hallway. Rory's heart skipped a beat before settling into a steady thud. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman’s heterochromatic eyes scanned the room, his platinum blond hair catching the light from the streetlamp outside. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth as silk. "I didn't expect you to move." She leaned against the doorframe, her hand tightening on the doorknob. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "A matter of urgent business, I’m afraid." He stepped closer, his ivory-handled cane tapping the floor. "Can I come in?" Rory hesitated, her mind racing. The last time they had been in the same room, things had ended bitterly. She had accused him of betraying her trust, and he had walked out without a backward glance. But here he was, unannounced, and she couldn't ignore the urgency in his voice. "Fine," she said, stepping aside. "But make it quick." Lucien entered the flat, his presence immediately filling the space. The cramped one-bedroom above the curry house on Brick Lane was a stark contrast to his usual environs. Books, scrolls, and research notes cluttered every surface, and a tabby cat named Ptolemy jumped off the sofa as Lucien passed. "What’s so urgent?" Rory asked, closing the door behind him. He turned to face her, his eyes locking onto hers. "There’s been a development in the case we were working on. Something that shouldn’t have happened, but did." Rory's brow furrowed. "What case? We haven’t worked together in months." Lucien's lips pressed into a thin line. "The one with the missing artifacts." Rory's mind flashed back to the last time they had collaborated. They had been tracking a series of stolen relics, each linked to a mysterious cult. The investigation had led them to a dangerous confrontation, and Lucien's involvement had cost her dearly. "Those artifacts were supposed to be secure," she said, her voice tinged with suspicion. "How did they go missing again?" "Someone with inside information," Lucien replied, his tone measured. "They knew exactly where and when to strike." Rory crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. "And you think I can help you with this?" "You’re the only one I trust to get this right," Lucien said, his gaze unwavering. "We need to retrieve them before they end up in the wrong hands." Rory felt a surge of irritation. "You never trusted me before, Lucien. Why now?" He sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back hair. "Because I realize now that I was wrong. I underestimated you, and for that, I’m sorry." The words hung in the air, and Rory felt a strange mix of emotions. She had always been drawn to Lucien’s intelligence and charm, but the hurt from their last meeting still lingered. "An apology isn’t going to cut it," she said, her voice steady. "You walked out without a word, leaving me to clean up the mess. What’s to say you won’t do it again?" Lucien’s expression softened. "I won’t. I promise." Rory studied him, searching for any hint of deception. He looked genuinely remorseful, and she knew that despite everything, she still believed in his abilities. They had a history, and sometimes, even the most complicated relationships had their own kind of gravity. "Fine," she said, her resolve hardening. "But we do this my way. No more secrets, no more lies." Lucien nodded, his eyes meeting hers. "Agreed." Ptolemy meowed from the sofa, breaking the tense silence. Lucien reached down to scratch the cat behind the ear, and Rory couldn’t help but smile at the sight. It was a small moment of normalcy in a web of tangled emotions. "Where do we start?" she asked, her voice a mix of curiosity and determination. "Let’s start with the most recent theft," Lucien said, pulling out a folder from his jacket. "The amulet of Alaric. It was last seen in a private collection in Soho. I have the address." Rory took the folder, her fingers brushing against his. She felt a spark of electricity, a reminder of the connection they once shared. "Lead the way, then. We don’t have much time." Lucien smirked, his heterochromatic eyes gleaming. "Always the leader. I like it." She rolled her eyes, but the corner of her mouth twitched. "Just don’t get us killed." He chuckled, the sound low and warm. "I wouldn’t have it any other way." They stepped out of the flat, the door closing behind them with a soft click. The night was cool, and the streets of Brick Lane were quiet, the curry house below them closed for the evening. As they walked towards Soho, the tension between them began to shift, the old familiarity returning like an old song. "I’ve missed this," Lucien said, his voice soft as they turned onto a dimly lit side street. Rory glanced at him, her heart fluttering. "Missed what?" "This. Working together. We make a good team." She hesitated, then nodded. "Maybe we do." The amulet of Alaric waited in Soho, and with it, the chance to unravel the mystery that had haunted them both. But as they walked through the night, Rory knew that the real challenge lay not in the artifacts, but in the unresolved history between them. And whether they could navigate it together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"skipped a beat"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"racing"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"charm"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"normalcy"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"unravel"
count1
17
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"skipped a beat"
1"scanned"
2"silk"
3"racing"
4"stark"
5"furrowed"
6"tinged"
7"measured"
8"unwavering"
9"charm"
10"resolve"
11"silence"
12"normalcy"
13"reminder"
14"gleaming"
15"tension"
16"unravel"
17"navigate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords879
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount616
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Rory13
Lucien14
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
Soho2
Alaric1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Frenchman"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Alaric"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.364
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.23% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.138
wordCount879
matches
0"not in the artifacts, but in the unresolved history between them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean23.76
std14.49
cv0.61
sampleLengths
043
114
217
320
450
59
649
710
828
911
1013
1142
1220
1317
1416
1528
1614
1725
1833
1933
207
2142
2218
237
2441
2514
2634
2732
2812
2916
3014
3156
3217
339
348
357
3653
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"was, unannounced"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount619
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.029079159935379646
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008077544426494346
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean10.85
std5.56
cv0.512
sampleLengths
012
111
22
318
48
56
611
76
816
94
105
1114
1217
1314
145
154
1610
1718
1821
1910
2010
2118
223
238
247
256
2611
2715
2816
2914
306
319
328
337
349
3515
3613
376
388
399
4016
4114
4219
4312
4421
453
464
479
4816
4917
69.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.41975308641975306
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences55
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth"
1"She leaned against the doorframe,"
2"He stepped closer, his ivory-handled"
3"She had accused him of"
4"she said, stepping aside"
5"He turned to face her,"
6"They had been tracking a"
7"she said, her voice tinged"
8"He sighed, running a hand"
9"She had always been drawn"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"He looked genuinely remorseful, and"
12"They had a history, and"
13"she said, her resolve hardening"
14"It was a small moment"
15"she asked, her voice a"
16"She felt a spark of"
17"She rolled her eyes, but"
18"He chuckled, the sound low"
19"They stepped out of the"
ratio0.382
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences55
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Rory's heart skipped a beat"
2"The Frenchman’s heterochromatic eyes scanned"
3"he said, his voice smooth"
4"She leaned against the doorframe,"
5"He stepped closer, his ivory-handled"
6"Rory hesitated, her mind racing."
7"The last time they had"
8"She had accused him of"
9"she said, stepping aside"
10"Lucien entered the flat, his"
11"The cramped one-bedroom above the"
12"Rory asked, closing the door"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"Rory's brow furrowed."
15"Lucien's lips pressed into a"
16"Rory's mind flashed back to"
17"They had been tracking a"
18"The investigation had led them"
19"she said, her voice tinged"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth as silk"
1"Lucien replied, his tone measured"
2"Lucien said, his gaze unwavering"
3"she said, her voice steady"
4"she said, her resolve hardening"
5"she asked, her voice a mix of curiosity and determination"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.4995%