Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06Y9132DWBZ6ES0A1DASJ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 24s
Cost:
$0.024898
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the crime scene tape at the mouth of the abandoned Camden Tube tunnel. Her boots crunched on broken glass and something softer—black velvet, sodden with damp. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three hours since the call. The tunnel exhaled air that smelled of rust and burnt cinnamon, wrong for a place sealed for decades. She descended the iron stairs. Each step landed with military precision despite the rusted gaps in the treads. Her torch beam caught her salt-and-pepper hair as she ducked under a dripping pipe. The abandoned station platform stretched ahead, a Victorian cavern where the Veil Market had stood three nights past during the full moon. Now wooden crates lay splintered among scattered bone tokens—entry requirements for the supernatural black market that shifted locations every thirty days. In the exact center of the platform, a body in an expensive suit ruined the symmetry. Constable Reeves stood too close to the corpse. He kicked a nearby crate, sending a bone token skittering across the concrete. "Drug deal gone wrong. Caught a blade in the ribs." Quinn circled the scene. Her sharp jaw tightened. She crouched beside the body, ignoring the copper smell that mixed with the cinnamon. The victim's hands clutched a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris patina. Protective sigils covered the face. The needle spun counter-clockwise, restless. "Name?" "Marcus Webb. Hedge fund manager from Kensington." Reeves lit a cigarette. The flame illuminated his skepticism. "No reason for a man like that to be down here." "Everyone has connections." She studied the blood. It pooled beneath the torso in perfect hexagonal angles, too geometric, too contained for a stab wound. The splatter on the curved brick walls arced upward, defying gravity, forming patterns that looked deliberate. Alchemical. The compass needle slowed, then pointed at the corpse's chest. Then it trembled toward the east wall. Reeves exhaled smoke toward the ceiling. "Dealers lured him for a buy. He balked, they cut him. Classic Underground nonsense. We find these types monthly." Quinn lifted Webb's hand. The fingers had stiffened around the compass, but the position was wrong. The thumb pressed a specific sigil on the casing, as if activating it. The verdigris had flaked away there, revealing bright brass beneath. Fresh exposure. "The wound," Quinn noted. Reeves crouched, peering over her shoulder. "Single puncture. Heart. Clean." "Too clean." Quinn leaned closer. The fabric around the tear showed no fraying, no defensive marks. The blood had flowed after death, not during. "He died first. Then they opened him. Then they positioned him." "Positioned?" "Look at his feet." Quinn pointed. "Parallel. Military precision. Webb was a civilian. Civilians fall sprawled. Someone arranged him after death to align with the platform's center." She stood and walked the perimeter. The bone tokens scattered in a pattern—not random, but radiating outward from the body like spokes. A ward. A cage. Quinn opened the jacket herself. Inside the breast pocket, silver dust shimmered against the silk lining—alchemical residue, banned substances from the Market. She touched it. Her finger went numb, cold spreading to her wrist like frost across glass. "He wasn't buying." Quinn's fingers brushed the silver dust. "He was selling." "Selling what? Retirement plans?" "Access." Quinn stood, her 5'9" frame casting long shadows across the platform. "The Market requires bone tokens to enter. Webb had none in his pockets. No token, no entry. Yet he died in the exact center where the portal opens during the full moon. The epicenter." She walked to the blood-spattered wall. Up close, the arcs formed symbols when connected mentally. Protective sigils. They matched the etchings on the compass face, reversed, mirrored. Someone had attempted to seal something. "The blood patterns." Quinn traced the air near the brick. "They don't radiate outward from a wound. They converge inward. Toward this wall." Reeves squinted at the brickwork. "Dead men follow physics." "Dead men follow physics with precision." Quinn pointed at the mortar between the Victorian bricks. "Look here. The color differs. This section has been repointed within seventy-two hours. After the Market moved on. After it should have been empty." She pulled out her phone. Her thumb brushed past DS Morris's number in her contacts, still saved three years after the funeral. She snapped photos of the sigils, of the convergence pattern, of the fresh mortar. The compass in her hand grew warm. It pointed now at the repaired wall section, insistent. "He didn't die here." Quinn's voice carried in the damp air. "He died there. And someone moved him to mark this spot." Reeves stepped back, crushing a bone token under his heel. "You're saying he walled himself in?" "I'm saying he was the new seal. And I need that wall down. Now." Officers brought sledgehammers. The first blow cracked the fresh mortar, sending white dust into the damp air. The second blow revealed darkness beyond the Victorian brick. The third released a rush of air that smelled of myrrh and rotting lilies, preserved for years. Behind the wall lay a narrow chamber, brick-lined, barely wider than a coffin. Curled inside, gripping a second compass identical to the first, lay DS Morris. Three years unchanged. His Metropolitan Police badge still glinted on his chest. His eyes were closed. He looked asleep, not buried. Quinn's worn leather watch felt heavy as stone. The compass in her hand spun wild, then stopped, pointing at her dead partner with magnetic certainty. "He wasn't the victim." Quinn's sharp jaw set. "He was the lock." Reeves stared, the cigarette forgotten between his lips. "That's impossible. That's Morris. We buried him three years ago. I attended the funeral." "Yes." Quinn stepped into the chamber. "We did." Morris's right hand gripped a bone token—the entry requirement for the Market, clutched so tight it had left indentations in his palm. But his left hand pointed upward, through the brick, toward Camden above. Toward whoever had used Webb to replace the seal, to maintain the Market's concealment from both supernatural and mundane discovery. The geometric blood pool beneath Webb's body marked the threshold. The convergence pattern meant the blood had flowed toward the wall during death, not away from it. Webb had died facing the brickwork, maintaining the seal from the outside through some alchemical substitution, while Morris maintained it from within. The hedge fund manager had been sacrificed to take Morris's place in the ward. Quinn touched Morris's badge. Cold. Preserved by something not in any police handbook. The compass needle trembled toward the tunnel entrance. "Close the scene." Quinn's voice cut through the damp air. "Nobody leaves until I map the geometry."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Reeves stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.061
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"perfect"
2"trembled"
3"shimmered"
4"silk"
5"traced"
6"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount920
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Camden2
Tube1
Victorian3
Veil1
Market6
Reeves7
Webb5
Morris7
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Reeves"
4"Webb"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Victorian"
globalScore0.576
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if activating it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.903
wordCount1107
matches
0"not random, but radiating outward from the body like spokes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"need that wall"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.68
std19.34
cv0.699
sampleLengths
064
191
231
346
41
527
63
755
825
941
104
1110
1235
131
1427
1526
1638
1712
184
1946
2033
2123
229
2339
2436
2516
2622
2716
2814
2943
3026
3121
3225
3312
3422
358
3654
3763
3821
3917
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"been repointed"
1"been sacrificed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"Her boots crunched on broken glass and something softer—black velvet, sodden with damp."
1"Now wooden crates lay splintered among scattered bone tokens—entry requirements for the supernatural black market that shifted locations every thirty days."
2"The bone tokens scattered in a pattern—not random, but radiating outward from the body like spokes."
3"Inside the breast pocket, silver dust shimmered against the silk lining—alchemical residue, banned substances from the Market."
4"Morris's right hand gripped a bone token—the entry requirement for the Market, clutched so tight it had left indentations in his palm. But his left hand pointed upward, through the brick, toward Camden above. Toward whoever had used Webb to replace the seal, to maintain the Market's concealment from both supernatural and mundane discovery."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.014109347442680775
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.53
std10.42
cv0.903
sampleLengths
018
113
210
35
418
55
613
714
822
921
1016
118
1213
1310
144
154
1614
1714
185
195
201
2111
225
2311
243
254
2617
2716
281
2910
307
316
3219
334
3412
3513
3610
372
384
396
404
415
4211
438
4411
451
466
4721
486
4916
77.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners48
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then it trembled toward the"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her boots crunched on broken"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"She descended the iron stairs."
3"Her torch beam caught her"
4"He kicked a nearby crate,"
5"Her sharp jaw tightened."
6"She crouched beside the body,"
7"She studied the blood."
8"It pooled beneath the torso"
9"She stood and walked the"
10"She touched it."
11"Her finger went numb, cold"
12"She walked to the blood-spattered"
13"They converge inward."
14"She pulled out her phone."
15"We buried him three years"
16"I attended the"
ratio0.23
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences74
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
1"Her boots crunched on broken"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"The tunnel exhaled air that"
4"She descended the iron stairs."
5"Each step landed with military"
6"Her torch beam caught her"
7"The abandoned station platform stretched"
8"Constable Reeves stood too close"
9"He kicked a nearby crate,"
10"Quinn circled the scene."
11"Her sharp jaw tightened."
12"She crouched beside the body,"
13"The victim's hands clutched a"
14"The needle spun counter-clockwise, restless."
15"Reeves lit a cigarette"
16"The flame illuminated his skepticism."
17"She studied the blood."
18"It pooled beneath the torso"
19"The splatter on the curved"
ratio0.811
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Now wooden crates lay splintered"
ratio0.014
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Now wooden crates lay splintered among scattered bone tokens—entry requirements for the supernatural black market that shifted locations every thirty days."
1"The splatter on the curved brick walls arced upward, defying gravity, forming patterns that looked deliberate."
2"The thumb pressed a specific sigil on the casing, as if activating it."
3"Officers brought sledgehammers. The first blow cracked the fresh mortar, sending white dust into the damp air. The second blow revealed darkness beyond the Vict…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn noted (note)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.03
leniency0.061
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.061
85.8310%