Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06ZFC567KXJS20M5BHVQY

Run Details

Duration:
31.3s
Cost:
$0.011475
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Blue strobe lights fractured the grime of the Camden alleyway, casting rhythmic jagged shadows against the brick. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a curdled puddle of rainwater and motor oil, her boots crunching on broken glass. She tapped the face of her worn leather watch. Three in the morning. The air tasted of ozone and wet soot. Uniformed officers huddled near the mouth of a service entrance that led down into the guts of the abandoned Tube station. They looked pale. Even the veterans kept their hands tight on their utility belts, necks craned toward the darkness of the stairwell. "Quinn. About time." The voice belonged to Miller, a man whose career had stagnated into a comfortable routine of filing paperwork and ignoring anything that didn't fit into a box. He stood beneath a flickering streetlamp, his yellow high-visibility vest clashing with his sallow skin. "What do we have, Miller?" Harlow didn't wait for the reply. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket, the snap of latex loud in the humid night. She pushed past him toward the station entrance. "Vandalism. Squatters playing chemist. Maybe a drug deal gone south." Miller followed her, his breath smelling of stale coffee and cigarettes. "The boys found a body down on the maintenance level. Messy stuff. Looks like a boiler explosion or some pressurized gas line let go." Harlow stopped at the threshold. A peculiar scent drifted up from the depthsnot the sulfur of a gas leak or the metallic tang of blood, but something like burnt lavender and scorched copper. It pulled at a memory buried deep in the scars of her mind, three years old and still raw. "You smell gas, Miller?" He sniffed the air, wiping his nose with the back of his hand. "Smells like a tip. Come on, the ME is already complaining about the damp." They descended. The silence of the disused station swallowed the city’s roar. Dust motes danced in the beams of their heavy flashlights. The walls here were plastered with rotting advertisements from the nineties, peeling away like dead skin. At the bottom of the second flight, the environment shifted. The grime seemed deliberate. Symbols—scratched into the tile with frantic precision—lined the archway. Harlow paused, tracing a jagged mark with the beam of her light. It resembled a weeping eye trapped in a circle of thorns. "Don't get distracted by the graffiti," Miller grunted, gesturing toward the platform. "The local kids use this place for satanic panic roleplay. It's all hollow aesthetics." "This isn't spray paint." Harlow leaned closer. The grooves were deep, carved into the ceramic tile as if the stone had softened for the blade. "These marks are fresh. Look at the dust displacement." The platform opened up into a vaulted cavern. The tracks were dry, filled with decades of debris, but the center of the station had been cleared. In the middle of the floor lay a man flattened against the concrete. Miller pointed a meaty finger. "See? Like I said. Pressure. Whatever pipe burst hit him with enough force to liquefy the internal structure. No external trauma, just... flat." Harlow approached the body. The victim wore a heavy wool overcoat, expensive and out of place for a Camden squatter. His face remained frozen in a mask of profound confusion rather than pain. She knelt, her knees protesting. "The structural integrity of his ribcage is gone," she noted, her voice a low rasp. "But look at his clothes, Miller." "What about them? They're ruined." "They're dry." Harlow pointed to the fine cashmere of the lapel. "If a high-pressure pipe burst, he’d be soaked in condensation, rust, or steam. This man is bone dry. Not a drop of moisture on his skin or the floor around him." She reached out, hovering her hand an inch above the victim’s chest. A faint vibration hummed against her palm, a static charge that made the hair on her arms stand up. "He's carrying something." She reached into the man’s inner pocket. Miller hissed through his teeth. "Wait for the scene techs, Quinn. You’re contaminating the site." "The techs are standing twenty feet back because they're afraid of the dark." She pulled out a small object. It was a brass compass, the casing heavy and cool. A thick patina of verdigris clung to the metal, smelling of old pennies and sea salt. The face wasn't marked with North or South. Instead, concentric rings of etched sigils spiraled toward the center. The needle didn't point toward the magnetic poles. It spun in a frantic, humming circle before snapping toward the far end of the platform, where a series of heavy iron doors led deeper into the maintenance tunnels. "A shadow compass," Harlow whispered. "A what?" Miller stepped closer, squinting. "Just a bit of brass junk. Probably picked it up at the market stalls upstairs. Look, the guy was a collector. Maybe he was looking for copper wire to scrap." "In a five-hundred-pound coat?" Harlow stood, her sharp jaw set. "The physics don't work, Miller. Look at the floor. The dust is blown outward in a perfect circle, five feet in diameter. It’s not an explosion. It’s a vacuum. The air was ripped out of this space." She walked toward the iron doors. The needle on the compass ticked like a frantic heartbeat. "Quinn, stay in the light," Miller called out, his bravado thinning. "We need to wait for the perimeter sweep. There were reports of people down here earlier. A group. High-society types mixed with the dregs." Harlow ignored him. She felt the pull in her gut—the same sickening gravity she’d felt the night DS Morris vanished into a London fog that refused to lift. This station wasn't just a ruin. It was the site of the Veil Market. She’d heard the whispers in the holding cells and the back-alley informants' dens. A place that moved with the moon. She pushed the iron door. It didn't creak; it slid open with a frictionless grace that defied its rusted hinges. Inside, the maintenance room had been transformed. Tables made of reclaimed driftwood and bone lined the walls. Small glass vials, still shimmering with iridescent liquids, lay shattered on the floor. The scent of lavender and copper intensified, thick enough to coat her throat. "Miller, get in here." The other detective shuffled into the doorway, his flashlight beam shaking. "God. What is this? A lab?" "A marketplace." Harlow moved to a central table. A single bone token—polished human femur, by the looks of it—sat in the center of a velvet cloth. "They weren't making drugs. They were selling things that shouldn't exist." She looked down at the compass in her hand. The needle had stopped spinning. It pointed directly at a brick wall at the back of the room. Beneath the beam of her light, the bricks seemed to shimmer, the mortar humming a low, dissonant frequency. "There's a door here," Harlow said. "It's a wall, Quinn. Solid masonry." "Look at the pattern. The bricks don't overlap." She stepped forward, reaching out to touch the cold surface. "Detective Quinn?" A new voice echoed from the platform. Harlow turned. A young woman stood in the doorway. She wore a heavy green coat and a leather satchel that looked like it had survived a war. Deep red curls escaped a messy bun, and round glasses sat crooked on her nose. "Eva Kowalski," Harlow noted, her eyes narrowing. "Research assistant at the British Museum. Why are you inside a police cordon at four in the morning?" Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, her green eyes darting toward the brass compass in Harlow's hand. She looked exhausted, her freckled complexion pale under the harsh LED lights. "I heard the sirens," Eva said, her voice steady despite the slight tremor in her hands. "I was worried. This station has... historical significance." "Does it?" Harlow stepped away from the wall, the compass still gripped tight. "Because it looks like a crime scene involving an atmospheric anomaly and a dead man with a flattened skeleton. You want to tell me about the historical significance of that?" Eva's gaze drifted to the flattened man out on the platform. She swallowed hard. "Pressure differentials in deep tunnels can be... unpredictable. If a pocket of methane ignited—" "Stop." Harlow cut her off. She held up the compass. "I found this on the victim. It’s pointing at that wall. And the marks at the entrance? Those aren't historical. They're instructions." Miller looked between the two women, his face reddening. "Quinn, you know this girl? If she's a witness, we need to take her up to the surface. We don't talk shop with civilians in the middle of a hot zone." "She's not a witness, Miller. She's a specialist." Harlow walked toward Eva, closing the distance until she could see the dust on the girl's satchel. "You’ve been looking for this place, haven't you? The Veil Market." Eva didn't flinch. She adjusted the strap of her bag. "I don't know what you're talking about, Detective. I’m an academic. I study the past." "The past is usually dead, Eva. This place is still breathing." Harlow gestured to the humming wall. "The man out there—he didn't die from a gas leak. He was caught in the wake of a displacement. Something left this room in a hurry, and it took the air with it." "If that's your theory, you should put it in the report," Eva said softly. "But if I were you, I’d be careful with that compass. The brass is soft. It dents easily." Harlow looked down at the device. The glass face was cracked, a hairline fracture running through the protective sigils. The needle was no longer pointing at the wall. It was swinging toward Eva. "What's in the bag, Eva?" "Books. Reference materials." "Open it." Miller stepped forward. "Quinn, she’s a civilian. We don't have a warrant for her person." "She’s inside a restricted area. That’s probable cause." Harlow kept her eyes on Eva. "Show me what you’re carrying that’s making the needle jump." Eva sighed, a long, ragged sound of resignation. She reached into her leather satchel and pulled out a heavy, leather-bound journal. The edges were charred, and the cover was embossed with the same eye-and-thorn symbol found on the station walls. "It's not what you think," Eva said. "I'm trying to track the movements. If the Market stays in one place too long, the pressure builds. It bleeds into the local reality. That man out there? He was a buyer who didn't know when to leave. He got caught in the fold when the Market shifted." Miller barked a laugh. "The fold? Reality? Quinn, the girl’s a loon. Give me the book and let’s get her into a car." Harlow didn't move. She felt the vibration from the wall beginning to synchronize with the ticking of the compass. The air in the room grew heavy, the scent of parched earth replacing the lavender. "Where does the door lead?" Harlow asked, her voice a low command. Eva looked at the wall, then back at Harlow. "Nowhere you want to go, Detective. Not without a token." "I have a badge." "That’s just a piece of tin to the things on the other side." Eva’s voice dropped. "The Market moved ten minutes before you arrived. What’s left here is just an echo. A dangerous one." The humming from the wall spiked into a shrill, metallic whine. The bricks didn't break; they seemed to dissolve, turning into a swirling grey mist that defied the beams of the flashlights. "Back up!" Miller shouted, reaching for his radio. "Dispatch, we have a structural collapse—" The radio hissed with sudden, violent static. Harlow watched the mist. For a second, she saw a crowded thoroughfare through the haze—stalls draped in heavy silks, lanterns burning with blue fire, and figures whose shadows moved independently of their bodies. Then, the mist solidified. The bricks snapped back into place with a sound like a gunshot. The humming stopped. The silence that followed was absolute. Harlow looked down at the compass. The needle had gone limp, hanging loosely on its pin. The patina of verdigris had turned to a dull, lifeless grey. "It's gone," Eva whispered. Miller was shouting into his dead radio, his face a mask of panic. He hadn't seen the market. He’d only seen a trick of the light, a structural anomaly he could explain away with a report on crumbling infrastructure. Harlow turned the compass over in her hand. On the back of the casing, near the hinge, three letters were scratched into the brass: *T.M.* Thomas Morris. A cold stone settled in her stomach. She looked at Eva, who was already backing toward the exit, her satchel clutched tight to her chest. "You're not leaving," Harlow said, her voice sharp as a blade. "Not until you tell me how a man who's been dead for three years owned a compass that points to ghosts." Eva’s eyes went wide behind her glasses. She glanced at the wall, then at the detective. "He wasn't a ghost when he bought it, Quinn. He was a customer." Harlow took a step forward, the military precision of her bearing tightening into a predatory stance. "What did he buy?" "Information," Eva said, her hand reaching for the hair behind her ear. "The same thing everyone buys at the Market. He wanted to know how to close a door that had been left open." "And did he?" Eva looked at the spot where the man had been flattened on the platform. "The price of closing a door is usually your own body. He paid. But clearly, he didn't close it tight enough." Miller finally got a signal on his radio. "I need recovery and a structural engineer at Camden Tube! We’ve got... we’ve got something weird down here." Harlow ignored him. She grabbed Eva by the elbow, her grip firm. "You’re going to help me find where that market is moving next." "I can't," Eva protested. "It follows the moon, Detective. You can't chase the moon." "I’ve spent three years in the dark, Eva. I'm getting used to the night." Harlow looked at the compass once more before shoving it into her pocket. The crime scene was no longer about a dead man in a cashmere coat. It was a trail of breadcrumbs leading into a world that had swallowed her partner whole. She looked at the marks on the wall, the weeping eye staring back at her through the grime. "Miller! Get the ME down here to bag the body," Harlow barked, her professional mask sliding back into place. "And tell them to be careful. The internal damage isn't from pressure. It’s from gravity." "Gravity?" Miller scoffed, wiping sweat from his forehead. "What the hell does that mean?" "It means the rules changed while you were drinking coffee." Harlow pushed Eva toward the stairs. They needed to get out before the site was swamped with more uniforms who wouldn't see the truth even if it bit them. She could feel the weight of the compass against her hip, a cold, ticking reminder that the case she’d closed three years ago had just been reopened. They climbed the stairs in silence, leaving the strobe lights and the broken glass behind. Above ground, Camden was still sleeping, oblivious to the market that had just breathed beneath its streets. Harlow looked up at the moon, pale and sickly through the London smog. "Where next?" she asked, not looking at Eva. "The British Museum," Eva replied. "The restricted archives. If you want to find the Market, you have to understand the geography of the Veil." "Lead the way, Kowalski." Behind them, in the depths of the station, the air rippled once more, a faint scent of lavender lingering in the damp. Harlow Quinn didn't look back. She’d spent too long looking at the past. The future was a dark tunnel, and for the first time in years, she had a light to carry into it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow stepped away [away]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.044
96.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2695
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2695
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"depths"
count2
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"structure"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"magnetic"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"rhythmic"
2"comfortable"
3"depths"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"structure"
7"profound"
8"etched"
9"magnetic"
10"perfect"
11"shattered"
12"velvet"
13"echoed"
14"echo"
15"stomach"
16"could feel"
17"weight"
18"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences165
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences222
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2678
ratio0
matches
0"T.M."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions86
wordCount1709
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden3
Harlow35
Quinn2
Tube1
Miller14
North1
South1
Morris2
London2
Veil1
Market1
Eva22
Thomas1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Thomas"
places
0"London"
1"Market"
globalScore0.476
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like burnt lavender and scorched c"
1"looked like it had survived a war"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.373
wordCount2678
matches
0"not the sulfur of a gas leak or the metallic tang of blood, but something like burnt lavender"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean27.05
std15.35
cv0.568
sampleLengths
057
143
23
342
45
533
645
752
84
927
1038
1146
1226
1334
1439
1528
1638
1721
185
1942
2031
213
2222
2313
2450
2537
265
2736
2847
2916
3035
3162
3220
3343
344
3517
3637
3745
386
396
4018
412
4249
4325
4432
4524
4643
4728
4832
4940
86.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences165
matches
0"were plastered"
1"been cleared"
2"been transformed"
3"was cracked"
4"were charred"
5"was embossed"
6"were scratched"
7"been flattened"
8"was swamped"
9"been reopened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs280
matches
0"was swinging"
1"was shouting"
52.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences222
ratio0.032
matches
0"A peculiar scent drifted up from the depths—not the sulfur of a gas leak or the metallic tang of blood, but something like burnt lavender and scorched copper."
1"Symbols—scratched into the tile with frantic precision—lined the archway."
2"She felt the pull in her gut—the same sickening gravity she’d felt the night DS Morris vanished into a London fog that refused to lift."
3"It didn't creak; it slid open with a frictionless grace that defied its rusted hinges."
4"A single bone token—polished human femur, by the looks of it—sat in the center of a velvet cloth."
5"The bricks didn't break; they seemed to dissolve, turning into a swirling grey mist that defied the beams of the flashlights."
6"For a second, she saw a crowded thoroughfare through the haze—stalls draped in heavy silks, lanterns burning with blue fire, and figures whose shadows moved independently of their bodies."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1227
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.013854930725346373
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004074979625101874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences222
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences222
mean12.06
std7.52
cv0.624
sampleLengths
017
119
29
34
48
521
63
719
83
927
1015
115
126
1319
148
1521
1624
175
1828
1919
204
2113
2214
232
2410
2510
2616
2710
284
299
3012
3111
3212
3314
347
3518
369
378
3818
3913
405
4123
424
4316
4413
455
4615
476
485
4911
43.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.30180180180180183
totalSentences222
uniqueOpeners67
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences156
matches
0"Even the veterans kept their"
1"Instead, concentric rings of etched"
2"Then, the mist solidified."
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences156
matches
0"She tapped the face of"
1"They looked pale."
2"He stood beneath a flickering"
3"She pulled a pair of"
4"She pushed past him toward"
5"It pulled at a memory"
6"He sniffed the air, wiping"
7"It resembled a weeping eye"
8"His face remained frozen in"
9"She knelt, her knees protesting."
10"she noted, her voice a"
11"She reached out, hovering her"
12"She reached into the man’s"
13"She pulled out a small"
14"It was a brass compass,"
15"It spun in a frantic,"
16"She walked toward the iron"
17"She felt the pull in"
18"It was the site of"
19"She’d heard the whispers in"
ratio0.288
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount140
totalSentences156
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
1"She tapped the face of"
2"The air tasted of ozone"
3"They looked pale."
4"The voice belonged to Miller,"
5"He stood beneath a flickering"
6"Harlow didn't wait for the"
7"She pulled a pair of"
8"She pushed past him toward"
9"Miller followed her, his breath"
10"Harlow stopped at the threshold."
11"A peculiar scent drifted up"
12"It pulled at a memory"
13"He sniffed the air, wiping"
14"The silence of the disused"
15"Dust motes danced in the"
16"The walls here were plastered"
17"The grime seemed deliberate."
18"Symbols—scratched into the tile with"
19"Harlow paused, tracing a jagged"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Uniformed officers huddled near the mouth of a service entrance that led down into the guts of the abandoned Tube station."
1"The voice belonged to Miller, a man whose career had stagnated into a comfortable routine of filing paperwork and ignoring anything that didn't fit into a box."
2"A faint vibration hummed against her palm, a static charge that made the hair on her arms stand up."
3"She felt the pull in her gut—the same sickening gravity she’d felt the night DS Morris vanished into a London fog that refused to lift."
4"The bricks didn't break; they seemed to dissolve, turning into a swirling grey mist that defied the beams of the flashlights."
5"It was a trail of breadcrumbs leading into a world that had swallowed her partner whole."
6"Above ground, Camden was still sleeping, oblivious to the market that had just breathed beneath its streets."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Miller followed, his breath smelling of stale coffee and cigarettes"
1"she noted, her voice a low rasp"
2"Miller called out, his bravado thinning"
3"Harlow noted, her eyes narrowing"
4"Eva said, her voice steady despite the slight tremor in her hands"
5"Harlow stepped away, the compass still gripped tight"
6"Harlow asked, her voice a low command"
7"Harlow said, her voice sharp as a blade"
8"Eva said, her hand reaching for the hair behind her ear"
9"Harlow barked, her professional mask sliding back into place"
10"she asked, not looking at Eva"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Miller grunted (grunt)"
1"she noted (note)"
2"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
3"Miller called out (call out)"
4"Harlow noted (note)"
5"Miller shouted (shout)"
6"Eva whispered (whisper)"
7"Eva protested (protest)"
8"Harlow barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
78.3946%