Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT071NKCCRH68TP3KMFV51G

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.016330
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell of simmering spices drifted through the narrow stairwell as Aurora hesitated outside Eva's flat. Her heart quickened as she reached for the door, a mixture of dread and anticipation pressing against her ribs like a vise. She hadn't stepped foot in this place for over a year, and the memories clung to her as stubbornly as shadows in the cramped hall. Her knuckles hovered above the wood, the brass plate gleaming dully in the dim light. Three deadbolts—Eva’s meticulous paranoia—clicked open, each metallic thunk a reminder of how secrets locked behind doors tend to fester. She hesitated a moment longer before pushing the door open. "Eva?" Her voice wavered slightly as it echoed against the paper-strewn surfaces inside. The familiar mess seemed untouched, a chaotic catalog of knowledge and distraction. Her foot had barely crossed the threshold when a blur of brown and black fur dashed out, weaving through her legs with impatient grace. "Ptolemy," she muttered, nudging the tabby aside with the tip of her boot. She closed the door behind her, its reassuring heft another layer against the whirlwind outside. But the quietude shattered at the sight meeting her eyes, jarring the very air she breathed. "Lucien." His name escaped her lips, more recognition than greeting, complicity woven with longing and bitterness unresolved. Lucien Moreau, leaning against the cluttered desk, aura of nonchalance perfected over lifetimes. He watched her with those mismatched eyes, one amber like a harvest moon, the other dark as midnight secrets. His tailored suit fit the room as incongruously as elegance in squalor. The cane, his signature accessory, lay casually across his lap, one tapered finger idly tracing its ivory handle. "Bien sûr," he drawled, the shadow of a smile teasing the corner of his mouth. "Of all the flats in London, you choose this one." Aurora's pulse thumped in her throat. "I could say the same. Didn't expect to find you lounging here, Luc." She set her bag on the floor with a soft thud, refusing to blink away the reality of him, raw and visceral after so long. "A mutual friend needed a hand." He stood, a fluid motion, and took a step closer, eyes never leaving hers. "Eva is... temporarily indisposed. Research trip, or so she claims." Eva. That woman always had a finger in every plot. Aurora's brow furrowed with genuine irritation now. "Of course, she'd leave you in charge. I should have known." Lucien chuckled softly, the sound like velvet over rust. "Not in charge, merely... keeping the cat company. Though, Ptolemy might question the latter." She couldn't deny the magnetism pulling her toward him, a force stronger than reluctance, more insistent than doubt. The energy between them wound tighter, a string vibrating with tension just the side of snapping. "You're irritated," he noted, watching the emotions flicker across her face, reading her in ways that had once left her breathless and exposed. "I'm surprised," she countered, folding her arms across her chest. "Last time I saw you, we—" "Parted ways." He cut in smoothly, though his tone lost its easy humour. A faint crease appeared at his brow, a curiosity thwarted. "It was inevitable," he murmured, yet the subtle shift in his eyes spoke of an unfinished conversation, retelling their shared story in undertones. "Inevitable?" Aurora pushed the word back at him like a challenge, biting and on the offensive. Lucien tilted his head, a cascade of blond catching the light filtering through smudged windowpanes. "Yes, Rory. You chose a different path, and I—" "Wasn't part of it?" She interjected, frustration simmering beneath her cool exterior. Her voice softened, almost against her will. "Or chose not to be?" The silence crouched between them, heavy yet poised on the edge of something transformative, a stone's throw from vulnerably raw confessions. "I made a mistake," Lucien admitted finally. A rare honesty wrapped in velvet resolve. "And I regret what I didn't say." She swallowed, her fingers absently tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. Turning her gaze away, she sought refuge amidst the familiarity of books stacked like old loyalties. "Why now, Lucien?" "In this life," he murmured, "we're always running out of time." His words hung suspended, and she found herself coaxed forward by something elemental and unyielding. She stepped toward him, closing the gap inch by deliberate inch. "Time," Aurora echoed, a word weighted with years. "It was never really ours, was it?" "Borrowed at best," Lucien replied, shadowed eyes locked on hers as though they might somehow bend time to their will. She breathed deeply, drawing courage from every corner of herself. "Then what do we do with the time that's left? Count what waits in the quiet?" "Or," he offered, voice low, "begin again." The resonance of his suggestion settled around her like warm silk, undefined, promising. The room—their microcosm—stilled, suspended. This was the place of decisions, where past and present converged, spoke in the language of second chances. Just inches between them now, Rory stood undeterred, the air turning breathless, saturated by the gravity of untamed promises. "What you said earlier," she began, her voice unwavering, "about regrets. There's more, isn't there?" A shadow of himself flitted across his face, brief and telling. Lucien took a steadying breath. "Yes," he admitted, a quiet sincerity bore into her soul. "So say it. You owe me that." He hesitated, dark gaze shifting, caught between the residue of old habits and the risk of exposure. "I should have stayed," he confessed, a roughness clinging to every syllable. "When it mattered most, I should have stayed." She looked at him, an abyss of emotion stretching beyond what words could capture. A single tear slipped unnoticed, marking her face; and though her heart ached with the immense weight of things loved and lost, it beat steadily—a reliable soldier. "Do you know what I want, Lucien?" she asked, her voice quietly defiant, the precarious equilibrium between what they were and what they might become, trembling and alive. "What do you want, Rory?" Her eyes met his, unyielding, a dawn unraveling midnight. "To start anew. With you." The moment lingered, dense and fragile, before unfolding softly between them—a new beginning, whispered into existence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice wavered slightly [slightly]"
1"Lucien admitted finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
75.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"simmering"
count2
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count2
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"amidst"
count1
19
word"resonance"
count1
20
word"silk"
count1
21
word"unwavering"
count1
22
word"single tear"
count1
23
word"weight"
count1
24
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"simmering"
1"quickened"
2"anticipation"
3"gleaming"
4"reminder"
5"wavered"
6"echoed"
7"familiar"
8"chaotic"
9"shattered"
10"tracing"
11"pulse"
12"furrowed"
13"velvet"
14"tension"
15"flicker"
16"silence"
17"resolve"
18"amidst"
19"resonance"
20"silk"
21"unwavering"
22"single tear"
23"weight"
24"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"n with longing"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount830
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Eva3
Lucien6
Moreau1
Rory1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed untouched a chaotic catalog of knowledge and distraction"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1033
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean25.2
std13.95
cv0.554
sampleLengths
063
134
259
328
416
517
662
725
844
930
1028
1123
1234
1323
1416
1546
1616
1724
1824
1921
2021
2128
223
2311
2426
2515
2620
2726
287
2935
3019
3115
3226
337
3417
3520
3641
3728
385
3914
4016
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences78
ratio0.051
matches
0"Three deadbolts—Eva’s meticulous paranoia—clicked open, each metallic thunk a reminder of how secrets locked behind doors tend to fester."
1"The room—their microcosm—stilled, suspended."
2"A single tear slipped unnoticed, marking her face; and though her heart ached with the immense weight of things loved and lost, it beat steadily—a reliable soldier."
3"The moment lingered, dense and fragile, before unfolding softly between them—a new beginning, whispered into existence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.035842293906810034
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.019115890083632018
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.24
std6.42
cv0.485
sampleLengths
016
122
225
315
419
510
613
712
824
913
1015
1116
1217
1313
1419
1512
1618
1715
1810
196
2038
2120
2210
231
249
257
2611
279
2814
2918
3016
3123
3210
336
3413
3510
3623
3716
3815
399
4012
417
425
4321
447
457
467
4712
4816
493
79.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners39
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Just inches between them now,"
ratio0.016
3.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her heart quickened as she"
1"She hadn't stepped foot in"
2"Her knuckles hovered above the"
3"She hesitated a moment longer"
4"Her voice wavered slightly as"
5"Her foot had barely crossed"
6"she muttered, nudging the tabby"
7"She closed the door behind"
8"His name escaped her lips,"
9"He watched her with those"
10"His tailored suit fit the"
11"he drawled, the shadow of"
12"She set her bag on"
13"He stood, a fluid motion,"
14"She couldn't deny the magnetism"
15"he noted, watching the emotions"
16"she countered, folding her arms"
17"He cut in smoothly, though"
18"he murmured, yet the subtle"
19"She interjected, frustration simmering beneath"
ratio0.541
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"The smell of simmering spices"
1"Her heart quickened as she"
2"She hadn't stepped foot in"
3"Her knuckles hovered above the"
4"She hesitated a moment longer"
5"Her voice wavered slightly as"
6"The familiar mess seemed untouched,"
7"Her foot had barely crossed"
8"she muttered, nudging the tabby"
9"She closed the door behind"
10"His name escaped her lips,"
11"Lucien Moreau, leaning against the"
12"He watched her with those"
13"His tailored suit fit the"
14"The cane, his signature accessory,"
15"he drawled, the shadow of"
16"Aurora's pulse thumped in her"
17"She set her bag on"
18"He stood, a fluid motion,"
19"That woman always had a"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But the quietude shattered at the sight meeting her eyes, jarring the very air she breathed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He cut, though his tone lost its easy humour"
1"She interjected, frustration simmering beneath her cool exterior"
2"Aurora echoed, a word weighted with years"
3"he offered, voice low,"
4"she began, her voice unwavering,"
5"he confessed, a roughness clinging to every syllable"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he drawled (drawl)"
2"he noted (note)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"She interjected (interject)"
5"Lucien admitted finally (admit)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
7"he admitted (admit)"
8"he confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.818
effectiveRatio0.5
73.7900%