Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT072RE0NPC0J2E4Q0ZSAET

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory didn't recognise the shadow through the frosted glass until she'd already unlatched the third deadbolt. Three knocks at past midnight meant trouble. Three knocks at her door, specifically, meant trouble with a London postcode, so when she pulled back the chain and found Lucien Moreau standing in the stairwell, the exhaustion evaporated. He looked like something that had been dragged through Marseille and back. His platinum hair had lost its architectural precision, falling across his forehead in a way that suggested he'd raked his hands through it repeatedly. The tailored charcoal suit, normally pristine enough to cut glass, bore a dark stain along the cuff. Most tellingly, his ivory-handled cane wasn't for show tonight. He leaned on it with genuine weight. "Lucien." "Hello, Rory." His heterochromatic eyes, that impossible amber and black, fixed on her with the intensity that had always made her chest feel too small for her ribs. She'd learned to hate that intensity. Had spent months learning to hate it. "It's half midnight." "I'm aware." He didn't move from where he stood. "May I come in, or shall we continue this conversation in a manner that alerts your neighbours to my presence? I'm assuming discretion remains a preference." The old Lucien would have swept in without permission. This version, the one bleeding subtly into her stairwell, waited. Asked. It unsettled her more than his presumption ever had. She stepped back. He moved with careful deliberation, favouring his right leg. The limp hadn't been there four months ago. When he'd told her goodbye in the back office of some Shoreditch gallery, his gait had been flawless. He'd walked away from her like a man who never second-guessed his decisions. Rory locked the door behind him. All three bolts. The sound of each one clicking into place felt like a deliberate statement. "You look like you've been in an actual fight. Not a metaphorical one where we both say cruel things and you make some exit I'm supposed to admire." She moved into the flat's main room, not looking at him. The space felt smaller with him in it. "What happened?" "Your Eva has a cat named Ptolemy." The non-sequitur landed wrong. Rory turned. "What?" "A tabby. Exceedingly hostile. Bit me during my climb up." He settled into the nearest chair with the care of someone whose body was negotiating terms with gravity. "I considered biting back. Professionalism stayed my hand." "You didn't come here because a cat offended you." "No." He pressed his fingertips together, a gesture she remembered from late nights in his office, when he'd been thinking through some problem in London's supernatural underbelly that would later require her particular brand of lateral thinking. "I came because I made a decision that I believed was correct at the time, and circumstances have intervened to suggest I was spectacularly wrong." Rory waited. Outside, London hummed its nocturnal song. Sirens in the distance. A couple arguing in the street below. The ordinary cruelty of the city that never slept. "That's not an explanation." "No," Lucien agreed. "It's an opening." He shifted his weight, and pain flickered across his face before he controlled it. Someone had hurt him badly enough that his demon blood wasn't quite managing the repairs. That narrowed things considerably. Lucien didn't take damage lightly, professionally or personally. "Tell me what you want." Rory sat on the sofa, not beside him, but near enough to speak without raising her voice. "Not why you're here. What you want. There's a difference." "Is there?" "Stop." She held up a hand. "You don't get to do the evasive thing. That was the problem before. The constant dancing around, the implication, the assumption that I could read every coded gesture. I can't. I don't want to." Lucien was quiet for a long moment. His amber eye seemed to catch the flat's dim light and hold it. "I want to know if you're still angry," he said finally. "Yes." No hesitation. "Good." That single word sat between them like a live thing. "That's not the response I—" Rory began. "If you'd forgiven me, there would be nothing salvageable." Lucien's black eye fixed on her with particular intensity, the one that saw through the darkness. "Forgiveness would mean you'd accepted my reasoning as valid. I require you to still believe I made a tactical error in judgment, not a moral one." "Separation was tactical?" "Separation was necessary given what I knew at the time." "And now?" "Now I know more." He shifted again, this time reaching for something in his jacket. Rory tensed, but his hands emerged empty except for a small leather journal. "I received this three weeks ago. It contained information that suggested the threat I perceived was either greatly exaggerated or entirely manufactured by someone who wanted us apart." Rory didn't take the journal. "Who?" "That's where the evening's complications arise." Lucien set it on the side table between them. "I spent the last seventy-two hours hunting down the source. The trail led to someone who is quite invested in keeping you isolated. Someone who approached me under false pretences and offered sufficient incentive for me to believe you were in danger from proximity to me." "Who?" she repeated, sharper this time. "The name won't matter until you understand the mechanism." He pulled his hand back, cradling it against his body. "Someone convinced me you were safer without knowing about a particular threat. I believed them. I left. But the threat they described doesn't appear to exist, and the person who described it has several invested reasons to ensure we remain separated." Understanding hit her like cold water. "Evan," she breathed. "Your ex. Yes." Lucien's expression didn't change, but his heterochromatic eyes went very still. "The same man you fled Cardiff to escape. The same man who should have remained a closed chapter in your personal history." Rory's hands curled into fists. "He's in London." "He was. He's currently residing in the custody of the Metropolitan Police, pending charges related to stalking, fraud, and several counts of assault. I ensure he'll stay there." Lucien leaned forward slightly. "But that's not why I came to your flat in the middle of the night. I came because I believed you deserved the chance to decide what comes next, with full information." "And if I'd forgiven you already?" Rory asked quietly. "Then I would have spent the rest of this conversation being slowly unmade by the knowledge that I'd made you small. That you'd opted for peace rather than truth." He studied her for a moment. "You haven't." "No." "Does this change anything?" Rory stood and moved to the window, looking out over Brick Lane. The curry house below was closed, metal shutters drawn like eyelids. The street was nearly empty, just the occasional taxi passing through, carrying people toward their own complications. "What changes is that I get to choose now," she said without turning around. "Not because you've decided I'm safe enough. Because I have actual information." "Yes." "And you don't get to disappear again because you've decided something for my own good." "No." She turned back to face him. Lucien sat in her chair like he was carved from marble, waiting. Bleeding slightly into her upholstery, watching her with eyes that belonged to two different worlds. "I'm angry about what you did." "I know." "And I'm not ready to be untangled from that anger just because you've walked into my flat looking like someone's tried to kill you." "I wouldn't expect otherwise." "But I want to know everything." Rory crossed back and took the journal from the table. The leather was warm, recently handled. "All of it. The threat you thought I was facing. Evan's involvement. What happened tonight to get you injured. Every part." "That will take time." "Then I'm glad you're already here." Lucien's expression shifted. Not quite a smile, but something in the same family. Something that suggested possibility. "I'll need tea," he said. "Your kitchen is where I recall." "It is." "While you're making it, I'll explain why your ex apparently tried to have me killed approximately five hours ago." Rory stared at him. "He what?" "Oh yes. That's where this evening's complications truly begin."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
84.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"He shifted again [again]"
2"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
3"Rory crossed back [back]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.638
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.116
78.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count3
3
word"unsettled"
count1
4
word"flawless"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"implication"
count1
8
word"coded"
count1
9
word"ensure"
count2
10
word"marble"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"weight"
2"intensity"
3"unsettled"
4"flawless"
5"flickered"
6"dancing"
7"implication"
8"coded"
9"ensure"
10"marble"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1371
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount702
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London3
Lucien11
Moreau1
Marseille1
Shoreditch1
Rory13
Understanding1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Understanding"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Shoreditch"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.574
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like something that had been dragg"
1"felt like a deliberate statement"
2"quite managing the repairs"
3"Not quite a smile, but something in the same family"
54.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.459
wordCount1371
matches
0"not beside him, but near enough to speak without raising her voice"
1"Not quite a smile, but something in the same family"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"hate that intensity"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.16
std19.52
cv0.968
sampleLengths
016
137
269
31
42
539
63
735
829
93
1048
1122
1249
137
147
1536
169
1762
1828
194
206
2141
2232
232
2440
2520
2611
273
281
2910
307
3151
323
3310
342
3556
366
3761
386
3960
406
413
4236
438
4464
459
4637
471
484
4940
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"been dragged"
1"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was negotiating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
79.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount705
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.05815602836879433
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.02553191489361702
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean11.24
std9.89
cv0.88
sampleLengths
016
17
230
312
424
517
69
77
81
92
1026
116
127
133
149
1526
169
1710
181
199
203
219
228
2318
2413
256
263
2713
2839
298
302
317
324
332
341
3528
368
379
3837
3925
402
416
424
437
449
454
463
473
4814
4915
59.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38524590163934425
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences68
matches
0"He looked like something that"
1"His platinum hair had lost"
2"He leaned on it with"
3"His heterochromatic eyes, that impossible"
4"She'd learned to hate that"
5"He didn't move from where"
6"It unsettled her more than"
7"She stepped back."
8"He moved with careful deliberation,"
9"He'd walked away from her"
10"She moved into the flat's"
11"He settled into the nearest"
12"He pressed his fingertips together,"
13"He shifted his weight, and"
14"She held up a hand"
15"His amber eye seemed to"
16"he said finally"
17"He shifted again, this time"
18"she repeated, sharper this time"
19"He pulled his hand back,"
ratio0.338
40.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rory didn't recognise the shadow"
1"He looked like something that"
2"His platinum hair had lost"
3"The tailored charcoal suit, normally"
4"He leaned on it with"
5"His heterochromatic eyes, that impossible"
6"She'd learned to hate that"
7"He didn't move from where"
8"The old Lucien would have"
9"This version, the one bleeding"
10"It unsettled her more than"
11"She stepped back."
12"He moved with careful deliberation,"
13"The limp hadn't been there"
14"He'd walked away from her"
15"Rory locked the door behind"
16"The sound of each one"
17"She moved into the flat's"
18"The space felt smaller with"
19"The non-sequitur landed wrong."
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost its architectural precision, falling across his forehead in a way that suggested he'd raked his hands through it repeatedly."
1"His heterochromatic eyes, that impossible amber and black, fixed on her with the intensity that had always made her chest feel too small for her ribs."
2"Bleeding slightly into her upholstery, watching her with eyes that belonged to two different worlds."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She moved, not looking at him"
1"He shifted again, this time reaching for something in his jacket"
92.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
1"Lucien agreed (agree)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.232
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.116
76.3085%