| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The word felt right [right]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.484 | | leniency | 0.968 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 84.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 998 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 998 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "dance" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 981 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 821 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Morton | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Sheffield | 2 | | Eva | 9 | | Nyx | 9 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Saw | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Morton" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Sheffield" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.647 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.058 | | wordCount | 981 | | matches | | 0 | "Not appeared—Rory was certain it had always been there, but her eyes had needed time to understand what they saw" | | 1 | "neither warm nor" | | 2 | "not the sky above but a starfield Rory had never seen" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 27.25 | | std | 20.96 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 73 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone had gone quiet—no pulse, no warmth." | | 1 | "The air changed immediately—thicker, sweeter, like breathing in honeysuckle and old magic." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and primrose, foxglove and heather, species that had no business blooming together or in December." | | 3 | "Not appeared—Rory was certain it had always been there, but her eyes had needed time to understand what they saw." | | 4 | "Not the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given Rory—that stayed in its sheath at her hip—but good Sheffield steel nonetheless." | | 5 | "The flowers grew stranger—blossoms that opened and closed like breathing lungs, vines that reached out curious tendrils before withdrawing." | | 6 | "At its centre stood a structure that made Rory's mind rebel against its geometry—a pavilion of living branches woven together, its roof a canopy of leaves in every season at once." | | 7 | "Rory approached, feeling the weight of both blades against her body—the Sheffield steel at her back, the moonsilver at her hip." | | 8 | "Saw herself in places she'd never been—a landscape of amber skies and endless feasting, a frozen wasteland where aurora borealis never ceased." | | 9 | "One carving caught her attention—a woman with a crescent scar on her wrist, standing between two trees while shadows reached for her from behind." | | 10 | "And from between the trees opposite where they'd entered, a figure approached—silver hair catching the otherworldly light, lavender eyes fixed on them with knowing amusement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 837 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.027479091995221028 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010752688172043012 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 11.68 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.595 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 89.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5595238095238095 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She withdrew her hand and" | | 1 | "She knelt, touching a cluster" | | 2 | "They'd gone nearly translucent, as" | | 3 | "She tapped the crystal, but" | | 4 | "They walked deeper." | | 5 | "She peered into the water." | | 6 | "She saw herself in the" |
| | ratio | 0.109 | |
| 69.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones marked" | | 1 | "Aurora ran her fingers along" | | 2 | "Nyx's voice drifted from her" | | 3 | "She withdrew her hand and" | | 4 | "The Heartstone had gone quiet—no" | | 5 | "Whatever it sensed, it wasn't" | | 6 | "That came from behind them," | | 7 | "The woman wore practical hiking" | | 8 | "Eva Morton had insisted on" | | 9 | "Rory said, stepping between the" | | 10 | "The air changed immediately—thicker, sweeter," | | 11 | "Nyx solidified slightly, their violet" | | 12 | "The world shifted." | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 14 | "The trees stretched impossibly high," | | 15 | "Light filtered through in shafts" | | 16 | "Eva's practical assessment broke the" | | 17 | "She knelt, touching a cluster" | | 18 | "They'd gone nearly translucent, as" | | 19 | "A path materialized before them," |
| | ratio | 0.781 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and primrose, foxglove and heather, species that had no business blooming together or in Decem…" | | 1 | "The trees stretched impossibly high, their branches weaving overhead in patterns that hurt to follow too long." | | 2 | "The flowers grew stranger—blossoms that opened and closed like breathing lungs, vines that reached out curious tendrils before withdrawing." | | 3 | "At its centre stood a structure that made Rory's mind rebel against its geometry—a pavilion of living branches woven together, its roof a canopy of leaves in ev…" | | 4 | "Inside, cushions of moss and silk surrounded a pool that reflected not the sky above but a starfield Rory had never seen." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva called out, voice echoing strangely" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted, their violet eyes studying the image" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.097 | | leniency | 0.194 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |