Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT075JQGQP1WHTK4S568XG3

Run Details

Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.028275
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones marked the boundary like sentries from another age. Aurora ran her fingers along the rough bark of the nearest one, surprised by its warmth despite the December chill that had followed them through Richmond Park. "You're certain about this?" Nyx's voice drifted from her left shoulder, their form barely distinguishable from the lengthening shadows between the trees. "No." She withdrew her hand and adjusted the pendant beneath her jumper. The Heartstone had gone quiet—no pulse, no warmth. Whatever it sensed, it wasn't here. "But Isolde said we'd find answers about the rifts." "Isolde speaks in bloody riddles." That came from behind them, where a third figure emerged from the tree line. The woman wore practical hiking boots and a waxed jacket, her auburn hair pulled back in a severe plait. Eva Morton had insisted on coming, despite Rory's protests. "Half the time I can't tell if she's prophesying or taking the piss." "She doesn't lie," Rory said, stepping between the standing stones. The air changed immediately—thicker, sweeter, like breathing in honeysuckle and old magic. "Doesn't mean she tells the truth either." Nyx solidified slightly, their violet eyes brightening. "The Veil is thinner here. I can taste it." The world shifted. One moment they stood in winter-bare Richmond Park, and the next they'd crossed into somewhere that made Rory's breath catch. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and primrose, foxglove and heather, species that had no business blooming together or in December. The trees stretched impossibly high, their branches weaving overhead in patterns that hurt to follow too long. Light filtered through in shafts of amber and rose, though Rory couldn't spot the sun itself. "Christ." Eva's practical assessment broke the spell. She knelt, touching a cluster of silver flowers that chimed softly at the contact. "This is—" "Between," Nyx finished. They'd gone nearly translucent, as if the grove's light passed through them rather than around. "Not quite Earth. Not quite Fae. The spaces between spaces." A path materialized before them, winding deeper into the grove. Not appeared—Rory was certain it had always been there, but her eyes had needed time to understand what they saw. The flagstones were smooth river rocks, each one carved with symbols that shifted when she looked at them directly. "We follow it?" Eva had drawn a small knife from her jacket pocket. Not the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given Rory—that stayed in its sheath at her hip—but good Sheffield steel nonetheless. "What else?" Rory moved forward, boots silent on the stones. Behind her, she heard Eva mutter something about common sense and survival instincts. The path curved between trees whose bark gleamed like polished copper. Nyx drifted beside her, their form rippling. "Time moves differently here. I can feel it in the shadows—they don't fall right." Rory checked her watch. The second hand stuttered, jumped forward, then back. She tapped the crystal, but the movement continued its erratic dance. "How differently?" "Could be minutes outside. Could be days." "Brilliant." Eva had caught up, knife still in hand. "So we might starve to death while ten seconds pass in the real world?" "Or age to dust in ten seconds while decades pass out there." Nyx's whisper carried no inflection, but Rory heard the dark humour underneath. They walked deeper. The flowers grew stranger—blossoms that opened and closed like breathing lungs, vines that reached out curious tendrils before withdrawing. A stream crossed their path, its water running uphill in defiance of physics. When Rory knelt to touch it, the liquid was neither warm nor cold, and her reflection showed someone younger, then older, then fractured into possibilities she didn't recognize. "Don't drink it," Nyx cautioned. "Fae water has a price." "I wasn't planning to." The path widened into a clearing. At its centre stood a structure that made Rory's mind rebel against its geometry—a pavilion of living branches woven together, its roof a canopy of leaves in every season at once. Spring buds nestled beside autumn gold and summer green. Winter-bare twigs supported it all. Inside, cushions of moss and silk surrounded a pool that reflected not the sky above but a starfield Rory had never seen. "Isolde?" Eva called out, voice echoing strangely. The sound folded in on itself, returning as a question, a statement, a song. No response. But the pool's surface rippled. Rory approached, feeling the weight of both blades against her body—the Sheffield steel at her back, the moonsilver at her hip. The pendant beneath her shirt remained dormant. She peered into the water. The stars swirled and formed images. She saw herself in the Golden Empress, delivering orders. Saw herself in places she'd never been—a landscape of amber skies and endless feasting, a frozen wasteland where aurora borealis never ceased. Saw Nyx as they once were, mortal and whole, screaming as shadows consumed them. Saw Eva standing in this very grove, alone, flowers wilting in her wake. "What do you see?" Nyx asked. "Possibilities." The word felt right. "Things that were. Things that might be." Eva had moved to the pavilion's edge, running her hand along the woven branches. "These carvings... they're not decorative. They're instructions. Warnings, maybe." Rory pulled her gaze from the pool, blinking away afterimages of futures and pasts. The carvings Eva indicated showed figures moving through the grove, some emerging, others trapped forever in the wood itself. One carving caught her attention—a woman with a crescent scar on her wrist, standing between two trees while shadows reached for her from behind. "That's me." "Past or future?" Nyx drifted closer, their violet eyes studying the image. "Yes." A sound like wind chimes filled the clearing, though no breeze stirred the impossible leaves. The pool's surface went mirror-smooth. And from between the trees opposite where they'd entered, a figure approached—silver hair catching the otherworldly light, lavender eyes fixed on them with knowing amusement. Isolde had arrived.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The word felt right [right]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
84.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount998
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount998
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"pulse"
3"crystal"
4"dance"
5"whisper"
6"fractured"
7"structure"
8"silk"
9"echoing"
10"weight"
11"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords981
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount821
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
December2
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Morton1
Rory14
Fae-forged1
Isolde2
Sheffield2
Eva9
Nyx9
Golden1
Empress1
Saw3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Morton"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Eva"
5"Nyx"
6"Empress"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Sheffield"
3"Golden"
globalScore0.647
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.058
wordCount981
matches
0"Not appeared—Rory was certain it had always been there, but her eyes had needed time to understand what they saw"
1"neither warm nor"
2"not the sky above but a starfield Rory had never seen"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean27.25
std20.96
cv0.769
sampleLengths
039
122
235
360
422
57
616
73
875
923
1028
1149
1232
1323
1432
1525
167
1723
1824
1963
2010
214
2273
2321
247
2533
2664
276
2812
2923
3057
312
3212
331
3445
353
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences84
ratio0.131
matches
0"The Heartstone had gone quiet—no pulse, no warmth."
1"The air changed immediately—thicker, sweeter, like breathing in honeysuckle and old magic."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and primrose, foxglove and heather, species that had no business blooming together or in December."
3"Not appeared—Rory was certain it had always been there, but her eyes had needed time to understand what they saw."
4"Not the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given Rory—that stayed in its sheath at her hip—but good Sheffield steel nonetheless."
5"The flowers grew stranger—blossoms that opened and closed like breathing lungs, vines that reached out curious tendrils before withdrawing."
6"At its centre stood a structure that made Rory's mind rebel against its geometry—a pavilion of living branches woven together, its roof a canopy of leaves in every season at once."
7"Rory approached, feeling the weight of both blades against her body—the Sheffield steel at her back, the moonsilver at her hip."
8"Saw herself in places she'd never been—a landscape of amber skies and endless feasting, a frozen wasteland where aurora borealis never ceased."
9"One carving caught her attention—a woman with a crescent scar on her wrist, standing between two trees while shadows reached for her from behind."
10"And from between the trees opposite where they'd entered, a figure approached—silver hair catching the otherworldly light, lavender eyes fixed on them with knowing amusement."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027479091995221028
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010752688172043012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.68
std6.95
cv0.595
sampleLengths
012
127
222
312
48
56
69
719
819
99
1013
1110
1212
137
147
159
163
1720
1822
1917
2016
217
2214
232
243
2515
2610
2710
2820
2919
3013
3119
3210
3313
3411
357
3614
374
388
3911
402
417
429
4314
4424
453
4619
4713
4828
495
89.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5595238095238095
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences64
matches
0"She withdrew her hand and"
1"She knelt, touching a cluster"
2"They'd gone nearly translucent, as"
3"She tapped the crystal, but"
4"They walked deeper."
5"She peered into the water."
6"She saw herself in the"
ratio0.109
69.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences64
matches
0"The oak standing stones marked"
1"Aurora ran her fingers along"
2"Nyx's voice drifted from her"
3"She withdrew her hand and"
4"The Heartstone had gone quiet—no"
5"Whatever it sensed, it wasn't"
6"That came from behind them,"
7"The woman wore practical hiking"
8"Eva Morton had insisted on"
9"Rory said, stepping between the"
10"The air changed immediately—thicker, sweeter,"
11"Nyx solidified slightly, their violet"
12"The world shifted."
13"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
14"The trees stretched impossibly high,"
15"Light filtered through in shafts"
16"Eva's practical assessment broke the"
17"She knelt, touching a cluster"
18"They'd gone nearly translucent, as"
19"A path materialized before them,"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and primrose, foxglove and heather, species that had no business blooming together or in Decem…"
1"The trees stretched impossibly high, their branches weaving overhead in patterns that hurt to follow too long."
2"The flowers grew stranger—blossoms that opened and closed like breathing lungs, vines that reached out curious tendrils before withdrawing."
3"At its centre stood a structure that made Rory's mind rebel against its geometry—a pavilion of living branches woven together, its roof a canopy of leaves in ev…"
4"Inside, cushions of moss and silk surrounded a pool that reflected not the sky above but a starfield Rory had never seen."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva called out, voice echoing strangely"
1"Nyx drifted, their violet eyes studying the image"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.065
77.8867%