Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07KSQ6A66VWVMBCQ2KRN9

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54.3s
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$0.001852
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first knock was a ghost. Rory ignored it, turning the page of her borrowed translation of *The Book of Gates*. The second was a gauntlet thrown. It was after midnight. Eva was in Bristol researching a Celtic warding site, and nobody else had the address. A cold dread, familiar as the crescent scar on her wrist, bloomed in her chest. The third knock was a demand. Silence pooled in the flat, thick and expectant. Outside, Brick Lane was quiet, the last of the curry house patrons long gone. Ptolemy flicked his tail from atop a stack of scrolls. She left the chain on. The corridor light framed him like a figure in a gallery. Platinum hair slicked back, the lines of his charcoal suit sharp even in the dimness. One amber eye, one black. Lucien Moreau. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, looking for all the world like he’d just stepped out of a members’ club in Mayfair, not the grimy stairwell of a Whitechapel tenement. “You’re a hard woman to find, *chérie*.” His voice was the same. A low, smooth baritone, the French accent a subtle, intoxicating layer. It went straight to her knees. She fought it, the old, stupid reflex. “You found me.” “A professional courtesy. A lesser man would have sent a gargoyle. Or a writ.” He didn’t move, didn’t try to push. “May I come in? It’s rather public out here.” “I like public.” “And yet you live above a takeaway with three deadbolts.” The amber eye flicked past her shoulder, taking in the chaos of Eva’s research. “I bring a message. From Silas.” Her fingers tightened on the edge of the door. Silas ran the bar below her flat, her landlord, and the closest thing she had to a guardian in this strange, shadowed London. If Silas sent Lucien… it wasn’t social. She closed the door just enough to slide the chain free, then stepped back. He entered without sound. His presence seemed to shrink the room, to displace the air. He brought with him the scent of bergamot and cold night, a smell that unspooled memories she’d spent six months burying. He set his cane against the wall, the movement precise, economical. “You look well, Aurora.” “Rory.” “As you wish.” He didn’t sit. He surveyed the flat, his mismatched gaze cataloguing the esoteric clutter with detached interest. “Cosy.” “What’s the message?” “Direct. I always admired that.” He turned back to her, and for a second, the polished façade slipped. A weariness lived in the lines by his eyes. “The thing you asked Silas to find. The buyer for that little trinket you liberated from Evan’s collection? He found him.” Her breath caught. The ‘trinket’ was a jade cicada, humming with a malevolent energy she hadn’t understood until Eva identified it as a soul-trap. Getting it away from her ex had been the final act of her escape. Selling it was meant to be her ticket to a clean start, a flat without a bar underneath it. “And?” “And the buyer is… problematic. A collector from my father’s side of the family. From Avaros. Silas believes it’s a trap. For you. Possibly for me by association.” He picked up a small obsidian mirror from Eva’s desk, turning it over in his gloved hand. “He suggested a… consolidation of resources.” “He suggested you come here.” “He suggested a meeting. I chose the venue. You stopped answering his calls.” “I’ve been busy.” The lie tasted bitter. “Delivering noodles for Yu-Fei Cheung.” He set the mirror down. “A noble profession, but it doesn’t exactly prepare one for a demonic provenance hunt.” The old anger, hot and defensive, flared. “I’m managing.” “Are you?” The question hung in the air. He took a step closer. The space between them crackled. “You’re hiding, Rory. In plain sight, but hiding all the same. From Evan. From what you can do. From what happened between us.” “Nothing happened between us.” It was the wrong thing to say. It invited the memory in, vivid and punishing. His mouth on hers in the rain-slicked alley behind his club, the taste of whiskey and danger, the way his hands had framed her face, not like she was breakable, but like she was the only real thing in a city of ghosts. And then the cold withdrawal the next morning. *Professional distance*, he’d called it. *A complication we cannot afford*. His lips quirked, a humourless imitation of a smile. “A convincing fiction. You wear it well.” “Why are you really here, Lucien? Silas could have texted.” He was close enough now that she could see the faint, unnatural silver flecks in his black iris. Close enough to see the tiny, healed scar along his jawline she’d once traced with her thumb. The air left the room. “Because when I heard the buyer’s name, I knew you would do something reckless. Charge in. Use that clever, stubborn mind of yours to untangle a knot meant to hang you.” His voice dropped, a raw edge she’d never heard before cutting through the polish. “And I find, despite my best efforts, that the thought of you walking into that particular trap is… unacceptable.” The admission hit her like a physical blow. All her careful defences, the walls she’d rebuilt brick by painful brick, shuddered. “Unacceptable for your professional reputation?” “No.” The word was final. “For me.” Silence stretched, taut as a wire. Ptolemy jumped down and wound himself around Lucien’s ankles, purring treacherously. Lucien didn’t look down. “What do you propose?” Her voice was a whisper. “We retrieve the cicada together. Before the buyer makes his move. My resources, your… particular insight into Evan’s habits. We neutralise the threat. Then you can sell it to a less homicidal collector.” “And then?” “And then we go back to our respective corners of London. If that is what you want.” It was a lie. They both knew it. The tension in the room wasn’t just about danger or old hurt; it was a live wire, humming with everything they hadn’t said, hadn’t done. The attraction was still there, a dark, magnetic pull. It always had been. He lifted a hand, slowly, giving her every chance to pull away. His gloved fingers didn’t touch her skin, but hovered beside her cheek, close enough to feel the heat of him. “I handled things poorly. Before. I was… trying to protect you from the world I inhabit. It was patronising. And cowardly.” “Yes,” she breathed. “It was.” His amber eye softened. “Do you trust me, Rory? Not with your heart. I don’t ask for that. But with your safety tonight?” The world narrowed to the space between them, to the choice shimmering there. Trust the man who’d broken her trust, or face a demon alone. It was no choice at all. Before she could answer, a heavy, rhythmic thud began on the roof. Not rain. Something with weight. A slow, deliberate drag, like a body being pulled across the slates. Lucien’s head snapped up. All vulnerability vanished, replaced by a chilling focus. His hand dropped from her face and went to the handle of his cane. With a soft click, he drew the thin, silver blade concealed within. “It seems,” he murmured, his gaze fixed on the ceiling, “our buyer has decided to forgo the formalities of a meeting.” The dragging sound stopped directly above them. A shower of ancient plaster dust drifted down from the light fitting. “The back door?” she whispered, her mind already racing, scanning Eva’s flat for weapons, for exits. “Covered.” His mismatched eyes met hers, the ghost of his earlier apology replaced by a cold, gleaming resolve. “It appears we start the partnership now. Do you have a preference? We fight, or we flee?” As he asked, the front door’s three deadbolts began to glow with a sickly, green light. One after the other, they melted, the metal dripping like wax onto the floorboards. The door handle started to turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.044
92.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"chilling"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"gleaming"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"flicked"
3"traced"
4"whisper"
5"tension"
6"magnetic"
7"rhythmic"
8"weight"
9"chilling"
10"racing"
11"scanning"
12"gleaming"
13"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords12
totalWords1331
ratio0.009
matches
0"The Book of Gates"
1"chérie"
2"Professional distance"
3"A complication we cannot afford"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount895
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Book1
Bristol1
Celtic1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
French1
Eva4
London1
Silas2
Lucien5
Getting1
Silence2
persons
0"Celtic"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Lucien"
5"Silence"
places
0"Bristol"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.751
wordCount1331
matches
0"not like she was breakable, but like she was the only real thing in a city of ghosts"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.11
std19.66
cv0.783
sampleLengths
067
132
25
363
47
529
63
730
83
930
1039
1114
1247
134
141
1521
163
1748
1857
191
2051
215
2213
237
2424
259
2641
274
2876
2916
3010
3140
3264
3321
345
357
3621
379
3833
392
4017
4146
4253
435
4423
4531
4629
4738
4821
4919
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was meant"
1"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences122
ratio0.008
matches
0"The tension in the room wasn’t just about danger or old hurt; it was a live wire, humming with everything they hadn’t said, hadn’t done."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount475
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.02526315789473684
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.91
std8.48
cv0.777
sampleLengths
06
115
26
34
415
515
66
78
814
910
105
1111
1215
135
142
1530
167
175
1811
196
207
213
2221
239
243
2524
266
279
2823
294
303
3114
324
3311
3421
3511
364
371
386
3914
401
413
4218
439
4421
453
4621
4714
4819
491
59.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences88
matches
0"It was after midnight."
1"She left the chain on."
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"His voice was the same."
4"It went straight to her"
5"She fought it, the old,"
6"He didn’t move, didn’t try"
7"Her fingers tightened on the"
8"it wasn’t social."
9"She closed the door just"
10"He entered without sound."
11"His presence seemed to shrink"
12"He brought with him the"
13"He set his cane against"
14"He didn’t sit"
15"He surveyed the flat, his"
16"He turned back to her,"
17"Her breath caught."
18"He picked up a small"
19"He set the mirror down"
ratio0.443
45.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences88
matches
0"The first knock was a"
1"Rory ignored it, turning the"
2"The second was a gauntlet"
3"It was after midnight."
4"Eva was in Bristol researching"
5"A cold dread, familiar as"
6"The third knock was a"
7"Silence pooled in the flat,"
8"Ptolemy flicked his tail from"
9"She left the chain on."
10"The corridor light framed him"
11"Platinum hair slicked back, the"
12"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
13"His voice was the same."
14"A low, smooth baritone, the"
15"It went straight to her"
16"She fought it, the old,"
17"He didn’t move, didn’t try"
18"The amber eye flicked past"
19"Her fingers tightened on the"
ratio0.83
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"If Silas sent Lucien…"
1"Before she could answer, a"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He brought with him the scent of bergamot and cold night, a smell that unspooled memories she’d spent six months burying."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
88.0696%