| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.219 | | leniency | 0.438 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "calculated" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "blown wide" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1661 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1065 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Gallic | 1 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Frenchman" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "East" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.937 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach the tension in his jaw" | | 1 | "felt like cold silk over granite" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.602 | | wordCount | 1661 | | matches | | 0 | "not to touch her, but to pluck a stray thread from the shoulder of her oversized j" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 26.79 | | std | 14.65 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't strike the wood; it simply existed there, an immovable tether." | | 1 | "Lucien offered a gloved hand; the cat sniffed the leather and immediately rubbed his chin against the Frenchman’s knuckles." | | 2 | "The scent of him—the rain and the dark places—swirled around her until she couldn't breathe anything else." | | 3 | "She felt his heart thudding beneath her palms—a heavy, rhythmic beast." | | 4 | "It wasn't the kiss of a gentleman; it was the kiss of a man reclaiming something he had tried to throw away and realized he couldn't live without." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1075 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.025116279069767444 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0074418604651162795 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 16.28 | | std | 9.46 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 51 |
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| 45.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.2647058823529412 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 22.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 1 | "She moved to swing the" | | 2 | "It didn't strike the wood;" | | 3 | "He waited, his expression a" | | 4 | "She didn't invite him in," | | 5 | "He surveyed the cramped space." | | 6 | "She turned her back to" | | 7 | "Her black hair swayed against" | | 8 | "She busied herself with the" | | 9 | "He stopped just behind her." | | 10 | "He reached out, not to" | | 11 | "His fingers lingered a fraction" | | 12 | "He took a step closer," | | 13 | "It clattered to the floor," | | 14 | "He planted both hands on" | | 15 | "His black eye seemed to" | | 16 | "His suit jacket felt like" | | 17 | "She felt his heart thudding" | | 18 | "He leaned down, his forehead" | | 19 | "His breath hitched, a jagged" |
| | ratio | 0.493 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled the heavy oak" | | 1 | "The scent of turmeric and" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "The charcoal fabric of his" | | 4 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 5 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 6 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 7 | "She moved to swing the" | | 8 | "It didn't strike the wood;" | | 9 | "Lucien didn't push." | | 10 | "He waited, his expression a" | | 11 | "Rory stepped back, her heels" | | 12 | "She didn't invite him in," | | 13 | "Lucien stepped over the threshold," | | 14 | "He surveyed the cramped space." | | 15 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncoiled" | | 16 | "Lucien offered a gloved hand;" | | 17 | "She turned her back to" | | 18 | "Her black hair swayed against" | | 19 | "She busied herself with the" |
| | ratio | 0.96 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Three deadbolts groaned in sequence, a heavy, metallic percussion that echoed through the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat." | | 1 | "He waited, his expression a mask of Gallic indifference that didn't quite reach the tension in his jaw." | | 2 | "Lucien stepped over the threshold, closing the door behind him with a softness that felt louder than a slam." | | 3 | "The anger that had sustained her through the weeks of silence began to erode, replaced by a terrifying, liquid heat." | | 4 | "He tilted his head and captured her mouth with a ferocity that tasted of desperation." | | 5 | "Lucien groaned into her mouth, his hand moving up to cup the back of her head, his gloved fingers sliding through her black tresses." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he murmured, his lips finding the sensitive spot just below her ear" | | 1 | "Rory gasped, her head falling back as his teeth grazed her collarbone" | | 2 | "he confessed, the words sounding like a surrender" | | 3 | "she replied, her voice steady despite the fire in her blood" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory gasped (gasp)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "he confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.219 | | leniency | 0.438 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |