Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07Q1WB64Q0WJX0QVP5NVT

Run Details

Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.007052
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts groaned in sequence, a heavy, metallic percussion that echoed through the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat. Rory pulled the heavy oak door inward. The scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house below billowed into the room, instantly smothered by the sharp, expensive fragrance of sandalwood and rain. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim light of the landing. The charcoal fabric of his suit caught the weak yellow glow of the hallway bulb, tracing the sharp lines of his shoulders. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane. One amber eye and one black eye locked onto hers, unblinking. "You changed the locks, Aurora." Rory gripped the edge of the door until the wood bit into her palm. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom pulse. "I changed my life, Lucien. The locks were just a side effect." She moved to swing the door shut, but the silver tip of his cane slid into the gap. It didn't strike the wood; it simply existed there, an immovable tether. Lucien didn't push. He waited, his expression a mask of Gallic indifference that didn't quite reach the tension in his jaw. "The Golden Empress has a new delivery driver today because you didn't show for your shift. Silas mentioned you were barricaded in here with a stack of scrolls and a nervous disposition." Rory stepped back, her heels clicking against the hardwood floor cluttered with open manuscripts and half-empty mugs of tea. She didn't invite him in, but her retreat was an admission of defeat. "Silas talks too much. I'm busy. Eva left me with a translation project that actually requires a brain, not a motorcycle helmet." Lucien stepped over the threshold, closing the door behind him with a softness that felt louder than a slam. He surveyed the cramped space. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncoiled from a pile of research notes on the sofa and stretched, his green eyes narrowing at the intruder. Lucien offered a gloved hand; the cat sniffed the leather and immediately rubbed his chin against the Frenchman’s knuckles. "Traitor," Rory muttered. She turned her back to him, heading toward the small kitchen alcove. Her black hair swayed against her shoulders, the straight edges sharp as a blade. She busied herself with the kettle, her fingers trembling just enough to clatter the lid. "Why are you here? We settled the bill in Soho. I don't owe you any more favors, and I certainly don't owe you any more of my time." Lucien moved through the maze of books with a predator’s grace, his cane silent on the rugs. He stopped just behind her. The heat radiating from his chest brushed against her spine. "We settled a transaction, Aurora. We settled nothing else." Rory spun around, the kettle forgotten. "There is nothing else. You’re a fixer. You fix problems for the things that go bump in the night, and I was just a temporary logistical hurdle. Go back to Marseille, or Avaros, or whatever hole you crawled out of to find me." Lucien’s amber eye flared, a flicker of hellfire behind the iris. He reached out, not to touch her, but to pluck a stray thread from the shoulder of her oversized jumper. His fingers lingered a fraction of a second too long near her neck. "You ran from a man who broke your spirit in Cardiff, and you think I am the same breed of monster." He took a step closer, forcing her back against the laminate counter. "Evan was a coward who used his fists because he lacked a soul. I am a demon who uses his soul because I lack the restraint to stay away from you." Rory stared up at him. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back, exposing the pulse jumping in her throat. "Don't do that. Don't use that silver-tongued poetry on me. I saw how you handled the London covens, Lucien. You’re cold. You’re calculated. You treat people like chess pieces." Lucien dropped his cane. It clattered to the floor, the sound sharp as a gunshot. He planted both hands on the counter on either side of her hips, pinning her within the circle of his arms. The scent of him—the rain and the dark places—swirled around her until she couldn't breathe anything else. "I calculated everything but this," he whispered. His black eye seemed to swallow the light in the room. "I stayed away for three months. I let you deliver your noodles and hide in this dusty flat because I told myself you were safer without a shadow like mine falling over you. Then I heard you were looking into the Avaros scrolls. You're digging into my father's realm, Rory. Why?" Rory pushed against his chest. His suit jacket felt like cold silk over granite. "Because I wanted to understand what makes a man half-human and zero percent honest. I wanted to know why you look at me like I'm a puzzle you can't solve, and then walk away when the pieces start to fit." She felt his heart thudding beneath her palms—a heavy, rhythmic beast. "You left me in that rainstorm outside Silas' bar. No word. No note. Just a dry cleaning bill for the coat you let me borrow." Lucien’s face cracked. The composure he’d worn like armor since Marseille dropped, revealing a raw, jagged hunger. "I left because if I stayed, I would have burned that bar to the ground just to keep you warm. I don't know how to be around you without wanting to possess every thought in your head." He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers. His breath hitched, a jagged sound that felt out of place in such a polished man. "Is that what you want to hear? That the great information broker of London is paralyzed by a girl with a crescent scar and a penchant for trouble?" Rory’s fingers curled into the lapels of his suit. The anger that had sustained her through the weeks of silence began to erode, replaced by a terrifying, liquid heat. "I want the truth, Lucien. Not the version you sell to the vampires at the docks." Lucien slid one hand from the counter to her waist, his thumb hooking into the belt loop of her jeans. He pulled her flush against him. The ivory-handled cane lay forgotten on the floor. "The truth is that I am a creature of greed. It is in my blood. And right now, I am starving." He didn't wait for her to bridge the gap. He tilted his head and captured her mouth with a ferocity that tasted of desperation. It wasn't the kiss of a gentleman; it was the kiss of a man reclaiming something he had tried to throw away and realized he couldn't live without. Rory made a soft sound in the back of her throat, half-moan and half-protest, but her arms wound around his neck, pulling him closer. Her fingers tangled in his slicked-back platinum hair, ruining the perfection he maintained so carefully. The flat narrowed until the only things that existed were the heat of the kitchen and the friction of their bodies. Lucien groaned into her mouth, his hand moving up to cup the back of her head, his gloved fingers sliding through her black tresses. He pulled back just an inch, his eyes searching hers, the amber and the black both blown wide with dark pupils. "Tell me to leave, Aurora. If you say it now, I will walk out that door and I will never cross your path again. I will hire a dozen guards to watch this flat from the shadows, and you will never see my face." Rory looked at the deadbolts on the door, then back at the man who had bypassed every one of her defenses without even trying. "I've spent my life running from men who wanted to dim my light, Lucien." She reached up, tracing the sharp line of his jaw. "You don't want to dim it. You want to stoke the fire. So don't you dare walk out that door." Lucien’s grip tightened on her waist. He lifted her easily, setting her onto the laminate counter among the scattered tea bags and crumbs. He stepped between her knees, his hands sliding up her thighs. "Then the scrolls wait," he murmured against her skin, his lips finding the sensitive spot just below her ear. "The scrolls aren't going anywhere," Rory gasped, her head falling back as his teeth grazed her collarbone. "And neither are you." Outside, the sirens of East London wailed, and the smell of curry hung heavy in the air, but inside the narrow flat, the world had shrunk to the space between their heartbeats. "You're making an mess of my research," she whispered, even as she pulled his shirt from his waistband. "I’ll buy you new books. I’ll buy you the library at Alexandria if it keeps you here." He looked up at her, the mask gone, leaving only the demon and the man, both of them wanting the same thing. "You're a high-maintenance fixer, Moreau." "And you're a delivery girl who's late for her shift." He kissed her again, slower this time, a promise of the wreckage they were about to make of the night. Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa and wandered into the bedroom, leaving the two of them to the chaos of their own making. Rory unbuttoned his waistcoat, her movements frantic and precise. She wanted the suit gone. She wanted the charcoal silk and the tailored prestige out of the way until there was nothing left but the heat and the truth. Lucien pulled her closer, his hands anchoring her to the edge of the world. "I've missed you," he confessed against her lips, the words sounding like a surrender. "I know," she replied, her voice steady despite the fire in her blood. "Now make up for it."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:48:56.005Z" 2/19/2026, 3:48:56 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1674
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1674
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count2
8
word"silk"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"blown wide"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tracing"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"tension"
5"predator"
6"flicker"
7"calculated"
8"silk"
9"rhythmic"
10"silence"
11"blown wide"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1661
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1065
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Gallic1
Frenchman1
Marseille1
Rory12
East1
London1
Lucien12
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Frenchman"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"East"
4"London"
globalScore0.937
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach the tension in his jaw"
1"felt like cold silk over granite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.602
wordCount1661
matches
0"not to touch her, but to pluck a stray thread from the shoulder of her oversized j"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean26.79
std14.65
cv0.547
sampleLengths
053
150
25
325
412
551
632
732
822
966
103
1141
1228
1332
149
156
1643
1744
1821
1912
2031
2122
2229
2353
247
2511
2651
2714
2840
2911
3025
3117
3237
3324
3428
3529
3616
3734
3821
3952
4039
4145
4221
4344
4424
4514
4610
4720
4834
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
2.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences102
ratio0.049
matches
0"It didn't strike the wood; it simply existed there, an immovable tether."
1"Lucien offered a gloved hand; the cat sniffed the leather and immediately rubbed his chin against the Frenchman’s knuckles."
2"The scent of him—the rain and the dark places—swirled around her until she couldn't breathe anything else."
3"She felt his heart thudding beneath her palms—a heavy, rhythmic beast."
4"It wasn't the kiss of a gentleman; it was the kiss of a man reclaiming something he had tried to throw away and realized he couldn't live without."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1075
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025116279069767444
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0074418604651162795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean16.28
std9.46
cv0.581
sampleLengths
020
17
226
310
422
57
611
75
814
911
1012
1118
1212
133
1418
1532
1619
1713
1822
1919
205
2123
2219
233
2412
2514
2615
2728
2817
295
3010
319
326
3343
3411
3520
3613
3721
3812
3931
405
4117
4229
434
4411
4521
4617
477
4811
4951
45.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2647058823529412
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
22.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences75
matches
0"He leaned slightly on his"
1"She moved to swing the"
2"It didn't strike the wood;"
3"He waited, his expression a"
4"She didn't invite him in,"
5"He surveyed the cramped space."
6"She turned her back to"
7"Her black hair swayed against"
8"She busied herself with the"
9"He stopped just behind her."
10"He reached out, not to"
11"His fingers lingered a fraction"
12"He took a step closer,"
13"It clattered to the floor,"
14"He planted both hands on"
15"His black eye seemed to"
16"His suit jacket felt like"
17"She felt his heart thudding"
18"He leaned down, his forehead"
19"His breath hitched, a jagged"
ratio0.493
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rory pulled the heavy oak"
1"The scent of turmeric and"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"The charcoal fabric of his"
4"He leaned slightly on his"
5"Rory gripped the edge of"
6"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
7"She moved to swing the"
8"It didn't strike the wood;"
9"Lucien didn't push."
10"He waited, his expression a"
11"Rory stepped back, her heels"
12"She didn't invite him in,"
13"Lucien stepped over the threshold,"
14"He surveyed the cramped space."
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncoiled"
16"Lucien offered a gloved hand;"
17"She turned her back to"
18"Her black hair swayed against"
19"She busied herself with the"
ratio0.96
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Three deadbolts groaned in sequence, a heavy, metallic percussion that echoed through the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat."
1"He waited, his expression a mask of Gallic indifference that didn't quite reach the tension in his jaw."
2"Lucien stepped over the threshold, closing the door behind him with a softness that felt louder than a slam."
3"The anger that had sustained her through the weeks of silence began to erode, replaced by a terrifying, liquid heat."
4"He tilted his head and captured her mouth with a ferocity that tasted of desperation."
5"Lucien groaned into her mouth, his hand moving up to cup the back of her head, his gloved fingers sliding through her black tresses."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he murmured, his lips finding the sensitive spot just below her ear"
1"Rory gasped, her head falling back as his teeth grazed her collarbone"
2"he confessed, the words sounding like a surrender"
3"she replied, her voice steady despite the fire in her blood"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"Rory gasped (gasp)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.375
71.0620%