Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07QJCRQCYPM58SVN2YVJY

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Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.001706
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted the moment they passed the standing stones. The humid haze of a London summer dissolved, replaced by a scent that smelled of ozone and rain on hot pavement, but sharper. Metallic. Aurora stopped, her boots sinking into grass that was too plush, too perfect. It wasn't the undulating dune grass of Richmond Park, but something stiff, bioluminescent. Tiny blue veins ran through the blades, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic rhythm. "Where are we?" Rory asked. She tugged the strap of her delivery bag higher, adjusting her grip. Her fingers brushed the pendant tucked into her shirt, cool silk against heated skin. Nyx materialized from the gloom beneath an overhanging oak. He had no solid form until fully formed, but the air around him grew heavy with displacement, like pressing a hand into warm water. The humanoid silhouette solidified, flickering into existence with a wet thump. He towered over her, approximately six feet of living darkness. Faint violet light sparked in his hollow eye sockets, the only warm things in the clearing. "Home," Nyx rumbled. His voice wasn't a whisper carried on the wind, but a gravelly shuffle of dead leaves. "Or the edge of it." Isolde stepped forward. Her silver hair flowed behind her like mercury water, untouched by the unnatural breeze. She wore a dress of woven wildflowers that didn't look like fabric at all. Pale lavender eyes scanned the perimeter, landing on Rory with a look of detached interest. "A pocket between breaths," Isolde said. Her speech was a melody, the cadence rolling off her tongue in patterns that made Rory's brain itch. "To the outside, this grove is a memory. To the inside, it is a womb." "Did Eva know about this?" Rory asked, keeping her voice low. "Avery?" Isolde tilted her head. "Avery knows the taste of honey, but she does not know where the bees keep their secrets. She walks in the sunlight, Rory. We walk in the cracks." Nyx stepped into the path ahead, his solid form flickering. He held up a hand, palm open to the air. "We aren't alone. The ambient magic is thick here. It sticks to your skin like honey." Rory reached up, clutching the Heartstone. The deep crimson gemstone beneath her shirt had been warm when they left the flat above Silas’s bar, but now it felt like a branding iron. It throbbed against her sternum, a frantic, syncing beat matching the blue veins in the grass. The heat was radiating outward, heating the skin of her neck. "This way," Rory said, ignoring the warning in Nyx’s posture. She pointed toward a narrow gap in the tree line where the amber sky was bleeding through, a splash of sunlight that looked wrong. It lacked the sharp angles of the real sun; it diffused into the air. Isolde sighed, the sound like rustling parchment. "Curiosity is a rope made of dry hemp. It snaps easily." They moved. The trees here didn't grow straight. They bent toward the group, their trunks twisting like grasping fingers, their bark smooth and obsidian. The canopy above blocked the sky, but the amber glow pulsed downward, casting long, distorted shadows. The silence was broken by a low hum. It wasn't mechanical, not like traffic. It vibrated in their teeth, a sub-bass frequency that made the ground vibrate beneath their soles. Rory walked faster. The pendant’s heat spiked, nearly burning her through her shirt. She needed to know why. The benefactor who gave her this artifact—the unknown someone who knew her scar, her escape, her life—had sent her here. The ground began to change. The grass turned from blue to vibrant green, then to purple, then to black stone. The path they walked upon unspooled, stretching impossibly long before them. "Isolde," Nyx said, his voice dropping an octave. "The wards are failing. The smoke is rising." Rory spun around. Behind them, the forest was turning gray. The vibrant flora withered, bleaching out until there was nothing but skeletal branches clawing at the empty air. The warm amber light was fading, replaced by a sickly, sulfur-yellow twilight. "To step through is to invite the rot," Isolde said, stepping directly into the yellow light. Her footprints evaporated as soon as they touched the stone. "But look. The wind has changed. It carries a savory scent. Roast meat. Spices." Rory stepped forward, her stomach growling in response to the smell. It was overwhelming. It smelt like a high-end banquet in a sealed room, mixed with the reek of burnt sugar and brimstone. The trees ahead were different. They weren't black oak. They were twisted vines, heavy with fruit that looked disturbingly like eyeballs. The ground was covered in deep, red earth. The air grew hot, a sweltering blanket pressing against them. The Heartstone surged, burning so bright Rory thought it might tear through her skin. She yanked the silver chain over her head, clutching the glowing gem in her right hand. It cast a terrifyingly clear light, cutting through the yellow haze. Rory gasped. Where the forest should have been, there was an orchard. Great, gnarled apple trees loaded with fruit the size of melons, glowing with a feverish orange light. But this wasn't Earth. In the distance, beyond the orchard, the sky was a deep, warm amber. It crackled with energy. And in the center of this landscape, rising above the trees, was a colossal tower made of stacked silver platters and dripping tallow candles. Below it, hundreds of figures—shadowy, hunched shapes—clashed together in a chaotic, violent feast. "That..." Rory’s breath hitched. "That’s Dymas." Isolde drifted to her side, her ethereal face pale in the red light. "I see the gluttony," she whispered, her voice trembling for the first time. "I see the Prince feeding his children." Nyx was next to them instantly, his humanoid form darkening until he looked like a void. He reached out, wrapping a hand around Aurora’s elbow. His grip was ice cold, harder than iron. "It shouldn't be accessible," Nyx snarled. The violet light in his eyes flared, turning a dangerous crimson. "The Veil is thinning too fast. Someone breached it." The Heartstone in Rory’s hand pulsed in time with a drumbeat that wasn't coming from the tower. It was coming from her own chest. The heat was overwhelming, a wave of nausea hitting her as the reality of the place sank in. "Rory, drop it," Nyx ordered, tugging her toward the trees. "Get back to the Grove. Now." But Rory couldn't move. The amber sky above them rumbled, a sound like thousands of stomachs growling. The orchard trees below rustled, the eyes on the fruit blinking open, fixing their gazes on the intruders. "This is why I was given this," Rory choked out, clutching the gem despite the pain. "This is what I have to do." Isolde stepped between them and the breach, her silver hair standing on end. She turned her lavender eyes to Rory, filled with a mixture of pity and calculation. "You fight a river with a teaspoon," Isolde said softly. "The tide is coming in, and the water is made of hunger."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:48:56.533Z" 2/19/2026, 3:48:56 AM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.519
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
95.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"mechanical"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"rhythmic"
2"silk"
3"gloom"
4"whisper"
5"scanned"
6"throbbed"
7"pulsed"
8"silence"
9"mechanical"
10"vibrated"
11"stomach"
12"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount996
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory16
Isolde8
Nyx8
Heartstone3
Silas1
Earth1
Aurora2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Heartstone"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.833
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a branding iron"
1"looked like a void"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1187
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
75.30% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.97
std13.64
cv0.414
sampleLengths
034
139
231
370
424
546
639
711
833
936
1059
1148
1218
1340
1430
1538
1631
1716
1840
1940
2033
2139
2241
232
2431
2554
266
2733
2833
2926
3042
3116
3235
3323
3428
3522
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"was broken"
1"was covered"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was radiating"
1"was bleeding"
2"was turning"
3"wasn't coming"
4"was coming"
5"was overwhelming"
61.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences106
ratio0.028
matches
0"It lacked the sharp angles of the real sun; it diffused into the air."
1"The benefactor who gave her this artifact—the unknown someone who knew her scar, her escape, her life—had sent her here."
2"Below it, hundreds of figures—shadowy, hunched shapes—clashed together in a chaotic, violent feast."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sickly, sulfur-yellow twilight."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.023952095808383235
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011976047904191617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.2
std5.69
cv0.508
sampleLengths
010
123
21
313
413
513
65
712
814
99
1024
1111
1210
1316
143
1516
165
173
1814
1914
2015
216
2218
2315
2411
255
2628
2710
2810
2916
306
3126
3216
3311
3410
3524
3614
377
3811
392
406
4116
4216
438
446
4516
463
4710
485
4920
38.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.330188679245283
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences86
matches
0"It wasn't the undulating dune"
1"She tugged the strap of"
2"Her fingers brushed the pendant"
3"He had no solid form"
4"He towered over her, approximately"
5"His voice wasn't a whisper"
6"Her silver hair flowed behind"
7"She wore a dress of"
8"Her speech was a melody,"
9"He held up a hand,"
10"It throbbed against her sternum,"
11"She pointed toward a narrow"
12"It lacked the sharp angles"
13"They bent toward the group,"
14"It wasn't mechanical, not like"
15"It vibrated in their teeth,"
16"She needed to know why."
17"Her footprints evaporated as soon"
18"It was overwhelming."
19"It smelt like a high-end"
ratio0.349
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air shifted the moment"
1"The humid haze of a"
2"Aurora stopped, her boots sinking"
3"It wasn't the undulating dune"
4"She tugged the strap of"
5"Her fingers brushed the pendant"
6"Nyx materialized from the gloom"
7"He had no solid form"
8"The humanoid silhouette solidified, flickering"
9"He towered over her, approximately"
10"His voice wasn't a whisper"
11"Isolde stepped forward."
12"Her silver hair flowed behind"
13"She wore a dress of"
14"Her speech was a melody,"
15"Rory asked, keeping her voice"
16"Isolde tilted her head"
17"Nyx stepped into the path"
18"He held up a hand,"
19"Rory reached up, clutching the"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The humid haze of a London summer dissolved, replaced by a scent that smelled of ozone and rain on hot pavement, but sharper."
1"Her speech was a melody, the cadence rolling off her tongue in patterns that made Rory's brain itch."
2"It vibrated in their teeth, a sub-bass frequency that made the ground vibrate beneath their soles."
3"The benefactor who gave her this artifact—the unknown someone who knew her scar, her escape, her life—had sent her here."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"she whispered, her voice trembling for the first time"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx snarled (snarl)"
2"Nyx ordered (order)"
3"Rory choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.296
73.4738%