Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
146
glossingSentenceCount
15
matches
0
"sounded like a prelude"
1
"as if tasting something bitter and familiar at once"
2
"quite electricity and not quite heat—an old static cling of history, like a room charged with a memory they both pretended didn’t mean anything anymore"
3
"not quite heat—an old static cling of history, like a room charged with a memory they both pretended didn’t mean anything anymore"
4
"as if weighing a decision that could tilt the gravity of the room"
5
"tasted like danger seasoned with a dash o"
6
"quite a refusal and not quite a consent either"
7
"not quite a consent either"
8
"looked like research notes; a leather-bou"
9
"not quite believe but felt compelled to utter anyway"
10
"It was as if the room exhaled at the same time, the quiet breath of a flat that suddenly felt smaller"
11
"not quite a shout but a sword unsheathed in a dark room"
12
"sounded like steel being sharpened"
13
"as if weighing the jar of secrets that sat between them all"
14
"something like steel"
15
"as if bracing for impact, but her eyes didn’t leave Rory’s face, a taut invitation to a fight neither of them were prepared to admit they wanted"
16
"as if anchoring herself to something far above the floor’s drama"
"Her blue eyes narrowed to slits as she took in the echo of his presence—the precise suit, the gloss of his hair, the peculiar, dangerous calm that always rode on him like a tailored overcoat."
1
"The nickname—Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora—slid through his mouth as if tasting something bitter and familiar at once."
2
"The air between them crackled with something that wasn’t quite electricity and not quite heat—an old static cling of history, like a room charged with a memory they both pretended didn’t mean anything anymore."
3
"Lucien’s eyes flickered, and for a second the demon-blood in him—if one believed the whispers—showed itself in the narrow crease by his right temple, a tiny, private tremor that betrayed his control."
4
"He looked around the room again, cataloguing the fragments of Rory’s life laid out in vignettes: a kitchen counter crowded with jars and what looked like research notes; a leather-bound notebook half filled with scrawled equations and sketches of sigils; a mug stained with dark tea, cooled to room temperature."
5
"The room wasn’t just a flat; it was a map of Rory’s mind, half-embedded in every object that lay within reach."
6
"“Tell me what you’re after, and you might find you’re not just a visitor with a blade in his pocket but a liability in someone else’s room.” Her eyes glowed a little brighter; the blue seemed to sharpen, the way ice can cut when albedo is wrong."
7
"Then a sound—a soft, almost negligent scuff from the hallway beyond the door—made both their postures snap taut."
8
"The hallway light flickered and there was a scuff again—the sound of shoes that did not want to belong to the height of a human step."
9
"The door at the far end of the corridor—the door to the main room that led to Eva’s Flat’s single string of mysteries—creaked with a reluctant sigh, as if someone was testing whether the locks would hold."
10
"The name—Harmain—dropped like a stone into the room, and Rory’s breath hitched in a way that did not go unnoticed by either man."
11
"Harmain’s gaze dropped to Rory’s hands, where the papers lay—unfolded, the sigil sketches visible in the lamplight, a map of what Rory had guarded."
12
"The room didn’t contain all of them; it held a battery of histories—each charged with a different possibility, each warning of what would happen if the wrong syllable slipped."
13
"Rory’s breath steadied, and the papers trembled slightly in her hand—not with fear, but with a fierce, stubborn resolve."
14
"Then, with a sudden, almost absurd, quietness, the three of them—Rory, Lucien, Harmain—stood in the small space and watched the door as if the door itself might reveal a way out or a means to sever the thread that connected them all."
15
"A sound shattered the fragile balance—a hard, metallic clink from down the hall, followed by a muffled cry that did not belong to any of them."
16
"The intruder—woman or man, it didn’t matter right then—lunged again, and the fight erupted in a choreography of limbs and shadow, a dance older than the room itself."
17
"The sound of leather, the rasp of metal, the sharp crack of a ceramic mug turned to shards on the floor—these small sounds stitched the bigger picture together: this wasn’t a simple intruder; this was a page torn from a book they all thought sealed."
18
"Rory found a moment of clarity in the confusion: she had protections—sigils on parchment, notes in a language only a few understood, and the raw, stubborn will that had kept her alive through more bad nights than she cared to admit."
19
"The intruder—whoever they were—stood still, weapon lowered, but not forgotten."
20
"The three of them—Rory, Lucien, Harmain—turned as one to meet the new presence, the cat retreating into the shadows behind the sofa with a low, wary oath of survival."
21
"The moment stretched, not long enough to count, and then something gave way—the click of a lock, a stifled breath, a weathered grin that wasn’t here a moment ago."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
107
technicalSentenceCount
28
matches
0
"He studied the room as if it were a map of enemies and alliances, eyes lingering on the three deadbolts on the front door, on the chalked circles scrawled near …"
1
"The nickname—Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora—slid through his mouth as if tasting something bitter and familiar at once."
2
"The air between them crackled with something that wasn’t quite electricity and not quite heat—an old static cling of history, like a room charged with a memory …"
3
"His amber and black eyes flicked to Ptolemy, who lay in the doorway between kitchen and living room, ears flat, tail swishing with earned caution."
4
"Lucien’s eyes flickered, and for a second the demon-blood in him—if one believed the whispers—showed itself in the narrow crease by his right temple, a tiny, pr…"
5
"The cat emitted a low, warning chuff, as if to remind both of them that even old loyalties could be tested by a predator’s presence."
6
"Rory’s jaw tightened and she moved a step closer to the table, as if the physical proximity could anchor her from the tremor in her hands."
7
"Ptolemy padded closer to Rory’s ankle, rubbing beneath her calf with a soft, insistent contact that asked for attention, a small shield against the growing tens…"
8
"The door at the far end of the corridor—the door to the main room that led to Eva’s Flat’s single string of mysteries—creaked with a reluctant sigh, as if someo…"
9
"Then the figure emerged, not with a dramatic stride but with the careful, almost clinical steps of someone who knew how to move in a space without ever becoming…"
10
"A woman’s silhouette, tall but not imposing, wearing a coat that swallowed its wearer, stepped into the glow of the living room lamp."
11
"The newcomer wore nothing familiar on her face, but the intersection of danger and familiarity was a familiar dance to Rory, a dance she’d hoped to avoid after …"
12
"The interloper paused, letting the door close softly behind her as if she preferred the space to have less noise, less audience."
13
"Harmain’s eyes flicked to Lucien with a cool assessment, and then to Rory as if weighing the jar of secrets that sat between them all."
14
"Lucien stepped closer to Rory, not imposing but present, a quiet insistence that he would not be sidelined by someone who had no trust in their past."
15
"Then, with a sudden, almost absurd, quietness, the three of them—Rory, Lucien, Harmain—stood in the small space and watched the door as if the door itself might…"
16
"A sound shattered the fragile balance—a hard, metallic clink from down the hall, followed by a muffled cry that did not belong to any of them."
17
"The cat sprang from the doorway, a grey blur that slipped between legs and skidded under the sofa, tail flicking like a metronome of danger."
18
"The corridor door slammed with a force that shook the plaster, and a shadowed figure burst through, not with the abrupt, flashy entrance of an assassin but with…"
19
"Rory moved first, a lunge that wasn’t simply defensive but decisively offensive, the papers in her hand gone now, her body turning in a fluid motion to shield t…"
20
"Lucien spoke in a low, controlled tone, his cane moving in a precise arc, the blade never leaving its sheath."
21
"Rory struck with the quiet certainty of someone who had learned to survive by not leaving choices unmade, not allowing the situations to degrade into chaos."
22
"Rory looked from Harmain to Lucien, then to the intruder, then back to the ceiling as if anchoring herself to something far above the floor’s drama."
23
"And then, with the suddenness of a closing door, the room settled into a stillness that felt unnatural, almost holy in its danger."
24
"The air hummed with a new tension, a promise that the end of this night would not be quiet, not with the history between them burning bright in the lamp’s glare…"
25
"And as the figures stood in the shrinking light, ready for what would come next, the door beyond the room’s threshold remained the only constant, a stubborn bar…"
26
"The moment stretched, not long enough to count, and then something gave way—the click of a lock, a stifled breath, a weathered grin that wasn’t here a moment ag…"
27
"The noise grew, a chorus that suggested the night itself had decided to intervene, to play its own hand in a game that had begun on a doorstep and would not end…"