Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07XRA4SV0RH4YET9RQJFZ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt scraped open just as Eva shouted something about Ptolemy's dinner from the kitchen. Rory turned, expecting her friend with a bag of Thai takeaway, and found Lucien Moreau standing in the doorway instead. The shock of him hit first, then the details. Platinum hair slicked back the same meticulous way. Charcoal suit despite the hour, though the collar sat slightly askew, and she noticed a wine stain near his cuff. His heterochromatic eyes, that amber and black gaze that had once made her stomach flip, now just made it clench. "Lucien." "Aurora." He leaned against the doorframe with the casual elegance of someone who'd never met a moment they couldn't own. His ivory-handled cane hung from his left hand like he'd forgotten he was holding it. "Unexpected. I was told Eva lived alone." "You weren't told anything. You showed up." "I did." He shifted his weight slightly, and she caught the faintest wince. Not drunk then. Tired. Possibly hurt. "May I?" Eva emerged from the kitchen, flour dusting her cardigan, and froze with her hand suspended mid-air. "Oh. Oh no. Rory, did you—" "He wasn't invited." "Obviously." Lucien stepped inside anyway, brushing past Rory with a careful distance that felt deliberate. The flat suddenly seemed smaller. Everything felt smaller with him in it. "Though I should note, keeping me on the threshold whilst the cat observes is rather theatrical." Ptolemy, the tabby, regarded him from atop the sofa with feline indifference. Eva's eyes darted between them. "I'll just... make more tea. Lots of tea. So much tea." She vanished back toward the kitchen with the tactical retreat of someone who'd learned to recognise dangerous chemistry when it was radiating off two people hard enough to create its own weather system. Rory didn't move. She kept her arms crossed and her expression neutral, a trick she'd perfected after Evan. Never let them see the cracks. Never let them in. "You look well," Lucien said, and it sounded like a question. "You look tired." "Touché." He set the cane against Eva's bookshelf with surprising care, as if the stack of grimoires and tarot decks might crumble if disturbed. "I wasn't certain I'd find you here. London's changed since you left my employ." "It's been two years." "Has it?" He turned to face her properly, and she noticed new lines around his eyes. Fine things, carefully earned, like everything about him. "It felt simultaneous longer and shorter, depending on the night." The flat was too warm. Rory's neck prickled with heat that had nothing to do with ambient temperature. The books stacked around them seemed to press closer. Research notes scattered across every surface—Eva's obsession with blood magic and bargains made manifest in paper and ink. Fitting place for this particular conversation. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Direct. Still your preferred approach, then." He moved to the window, and the city lights caught that unnatural amber eye. "I received a rather pressing inquiry. Someone looking for you. Specifically wanting to know if you were still alive, which seemed an odd question unless they planned to contest the matter." Rory's breath caught. She forced it back down. "Who?" "That's the interesting part. He wasn't particularly forthcoming with names. Muscular fellow. Prison tattoos suggesting a recent release. Perhaps two months. He had your photograph, Aurora. Quite an old one. From Cardiff, judging by the background." "Evan." The name hung between them like something physical. Lucien didn't look at her when he spoke. "Your previous... companion. I've made certain inquiries into his recent movements. Released from HMP Cardiff in September. Residence registered to his sister's address in Penarth, though he's not been there in the last six weeks. Your flat was checked—" "You went to my flat?" "I had someone check your flat. I'm not entirely without resource, despite your apparent belief that I spent the last two years sleeping." He finally turned to face her, and his expression was something she couldn't read. Something she'd never quite managed to read, which was part of the problem. "The landlord indicated you left no forwarding address. Rather rude, that." Rory moved to the window and stared out at the curry house below, at Brick Lane's nighttime bustle, at anything that wasn't Lucien Moreau's face. "I told you why I was leaving." "You told me you were leaving. You didn't explain why you felt obliged to disappear entirely. To cut contact. To leave me standing in my own office wondering if I'd dreamed the last three months." His voice remained level. That was the dangerous part. If he'd shouted, she could have matched him. But Lucien never raised his voice. He just let words land with surgical precision. "I had my reasons." "I'm aware. You've always had reasons, Aurora. Excellent reasons. Rational ones. The problem with excellent, rational reasons is they rarely account for the fact that some people might have liked to have a say in the matter. That some people might have appreciated being trusted with your safety rather than learning you'd fled the country secondhand through a mutual acquaintance." "He was going to hurt me again." "Yes." Lucien picked up the cane again, rolling it between his palms in a gesture she recognised from their time together. Restlessness he couldn't quite conceal. "And instead of allowing me to handle him as I handle all inconvenient people, you decided to handle yourself by becoming a delivery driver and living above a bar. Rather gutsy, actually." "It wasn't about trust, Lucien." "Wasn't it?" He set the cane down again, abandoned it properly. "Because it felt rather like it." Rory turned to look at him properly. In the flat's warm lamp light, he looked almost human. The demon blood that made him a half-blood was invisible most of the time, only suggested by those impossible eyes and an occasional inhuman grace. When they'd been together, she'd sometimes forgotten. Then he'd do something that reminded her exactly what he was—something efficient and dark and capable of things that would make ordinary men weep. "I needed to be away from you," she said quietly. The words landed harder than she'd intended. Lucien absorbed them like a man absorbing a punch, shoulders tensing, jaw tightening. "Because?" "Because I was becoming someone I didn't recognise. Because you made everything seem possible and I stopped thinking about consequences. Because I..." She couldn't finish that sentence. Couldn't say it aloud in this cramped flat surrounded by Eva's research and the ghost of something she'd spent two years trying to bury. "You what, Aurora?" The way he said her name, with that careful French accent wrapping around the syllables, nearly broke her. She'd forbidden herself from remembering that, from remembering the way he sounded when she'd wake to find him reading in the dark of her flat, some book about demonology or economics written in a language she didn't speak. "I couldn't stay," she whispered. "Not with you looking at me like I mattered." The silence that followed was enormous. Then Eva appeared in the kitchen doorway with three steaming mugs and the expression of someone who'd heard significantly more than she'd bargained for. Lucien stepped forward, closing the distance between himself and Rory in one deliberate movement. His hand reached up, thumb brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the one from her childhood accident that had sparked his entire interest in her during the early days of their work together. "Your friend Evan," he said softly, "is currently residing in a flat in Shoreditch under an assumed name. He's been making enquiries about your movements with sufficient frequency that people have noticed. People in my line of work." "Lucien—" "Someone," he continued, "needs to handle him before he decides to stop making enquiries and start making visits. The question, Aurora, is whether I handle him as I handle all my problems." He leaned closer, and she caught the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker underneath, something that whispered of brimstone and careful violence. "Or whether you trust me enough to let me." His phone buzzed. Once. Then again. The notifications came rapid-fire, urgent in a way that made his expression shift into something professional. Something dangerous. He checked it, and his entire demeanour changed. "We have a problem."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She vanished back [back]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.653
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.122
81.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"efficient"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1381
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount846
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Ptolemy2
Thai1
Lucien9
Moreau2
Rory8
Evan1
Fine1
Brick1
Lane1
Restlessness1
Couldn1
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.968
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a question"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1381
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"finish that sentence"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.57
std20.06
cv0.784
sampleLengths
036
157
21
342
47
521
622
73
843
912
1049
1128
1211
133
1438
154
1634
1751
185
1951
209
2136
221
238
2447
255
2661
2732
2835
2931
304
3160
327
3358
345
3517
3673
3710
3821
3951
403
4156
4214
436
4424
4550
4638
471
4832
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was holding"
1"was radiating"
62.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences107
ratio0.028
matches
0"Research notes scattered across every surface—Eva's obsession with blood magic and bargains made manifest in paper and ink."
1"Then he'd do something that reminded her exactly what he was—something efficient and dark and capable of things that would make ordinary men weep."
2"He leaned closer, and she caught the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker underneath, something that whispered of brimstone and careful violence."
90.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.05041031652989449
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01875732708089097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.91
std11.37
cv0.881
sampleLengths
016
120
29
38
420
520
61
720
815
97
107
1113
123
131
142
152
1616
176
183
1915
205
217
2216
2312
245
2544
263
2715
286
294
3011
313
3224
3314
344
3516
368
3710
385
3913
409
4118
426
435
4420
4531
463
475
481
4936
75.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4766355140186916
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners51
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then he'd do something that"
1"Then Eva appeared in the"
ratio0.03
88.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences67
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes, that amber"
1"He leaned against the doorframe"
2"His ivory-handled cane hung from"
3"He shifted his weight slightly,"
4"She vanished back toward the"
5"She kept her arms crossed"
6"He set the cane against"
7"He turned to face her"
8"He moved to the window,"
9"She forced it back down."
10"He finally turned to face"
11"His voice remained level."
12"He just let words land"
13"He set the cane down"
14"she said quietly"
15"She couldn't finish that sentence"
16"She'd forbidden herself from remembering"
17"His hand reached up, thumb"
18"he said softly"
19"He leaned closer, and she"
ratio0.328
57.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences67
matches
0"The third deadbolt scraped open"
1"Rory turned, expecting her friend"
2"The shock of him hit"
3"Platinum hair slicked back the"
4"Charcoal suit despite the hour,"
5"His heterochromatic eyes, that amber"
6"He leaned against the doorframe"
7"His ivory-handled cane hung from"
8"He shifted his weight slightly,"
9"Eva emerged from the kitchen,"
10"Lucien stepped inside anyway, brushing"
11"The flat suddenly seemed smaller."
12"Everything felt smaller with him"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby, regarded him"
14"Eva's eyes darted between them."
15"She vanished back toward the"
16"Rory didn't move."
17"She kept her arms crossed"
18"Lucien said, and it sounded"
19"He set the cane against"
ratio0.806
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"If he'd shouted, she could"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory moved to the window and stared out at the curry house below, at Brick Lane's nighttime bustle, at anything that wasn't Lucien Moreau's face."
1"The demon blood that made him a half-blood was invisible most of the time, only suggested by those impossible eyes and an occasional inhuman grace."
2"Then he'd do something that reminded her exactly what he was—something efficient and dark and capable of things that would make ordinary men weep."
3"Then Eva appeared in the kitchen doorway with three steaming mugs and the expression of someone who'd heard significantly more than she'd bargained for."
4"His hand reached up, thumb brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the one from her childhood accident that had sparked his entire interest in her d…"
5"He leaned closer, and she caught the scent of him—expensive cologne and something darker underneath, something that whispered of brimstone and careful violence."
6"The notifications came rapid-fire, urgent in a way that made his expression shift into something professional."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He set, as if the stack of grimoires and tarot decks might crumble if disturbed"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.102
leniency0.204
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.082
88.9925%