Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07Y35GZ7M95GDWN9FR6J0

Run Details

Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.056336
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the single pane window of the flat above Silas’ bar, drowning out the distant wail of London sirens. Aurora Carter scrubbed the lingering scent of five-spice and grease from her hands, the water running scalding hot over her skin. Her reflection in the cracked bathroom mirror looked jagged, tired. A double shift at the Golden Empress had left her legs throbbing and her patience thin. Three distinct, rhythmic knocks echoed from the front door. Rory froze. She turned the tap off. Silence rushed back in, heavy and suspicious. Silas wouldn't knock; he’d shout from downstairs. Eva would text first. The police pounded. This was precise. Deliberate. She dried her hands on a rough towel and moved into the small living area. Her fingers brushed the cold metal of the deadbolt. If this was trouble, she had a fire escape and a very heavy cast-iron skillet. She threw the bolt and yanked the door open, prepared to snarl at a lost drunk from the pub below. The snarl died in her throat. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe. The hallway landing light flickered, casting erratic shadows over his platinum hair, now plastered to his skull by the downpour. His tailored charcoal suit, usually sharp enough to cut glass, hung heavy and sodden. Water dripped from the hem of his jacket, pooling on Rory’s welcome mat. "You." Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles whitening. "You have five seconds to give me a reason not to slam this in your face." Lucien’s lips, usually curled in a smirk of arrogant amusement, formed a thin, bloodless line. He shifted his weight, and the ivory-handled cane in his right hand rapped sharply against the floorboards. "Hospitality seems to have fallen out of fashion in this borough." His voice rasped, lacking its usual velvet smoothness. "I require... a sanctuary." "Try a church. I hear they’re big on forgiveness. I’m not." She shoved the door. It swung fast, destined for the latch, but the ferrule of his cane shot out, jamming between the wood and the frame. The ivory handle groaned under the pressure. Lucien didn't push back. He slid down the doorframe, his legs folding uselessly beneath him. Rory’s irritation fractured into alarm. She abandoned the door and lunged forward, catching him by the lapels before he hit the floor. He was dead weight, heavy and radiating a feverish heat that soaked instantly through her thin t-shirt. "Dammit, Lucien." She hauled him across the threshold, kicking the door shut with her heel. He groaned, a low, guttural sound that vibrated against her chest. She dragged him toward the worn leather sofa, his expensive Italian leather shoes scuffing trails on her rug. With a heave, she deposited him onto the cushions. He slumped back, his head lolling against the backrest. Under the harsh light of the living room, the damage became clear. The charcoal fabric of his suit jacket was stained a darker, slicker black on the left side, just above the hip. The metallic tang of copper and sulfur filled the cramped room—blood and brimstone. Rory stood over him, hands on her hips, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "You’re bleeding on my couch." Lucien cracked one eye open. The amber iris burned with an unnatural luminescence, while the black eye remained a void, swallowing the light. "An keen observation, chérie. Your investigative skills remain unparalleled." "Don't call me that." She turned on her heel and marched to the kitchenette, throwing open the cabinet under the sink. She grabbed the first Aid kit—a plastic box stuffed with more gauze and antiseptic than a normal delivery driver should own—and a bottle of vodka. She returned, dropping the kit on the coffee table with a clatter. "Jacket. Off." Lucien fumbled with the buttons, his fingers clumsy and shaking. He managed one before his hand dropped, trembling, to his side. He let out a sharp breath through his nose, his jaw clenched tight enough to snap teeth. Rory slapped his hand away. "Stop. You’re useless." She knelt between his spread knees, the proximity stripping the air from her lungs. She worked the buttons of the sodden jacket swiftly, her fingers brushing against the damp silk of his shirt. He smelled of rain, expensive cologne, and the terrifying scent of raw magic. She peeled the jacket down his arms. He hissed when the movement pulled at his side. She tossed the ruined garment onto the floor and went to work on the shirt. The silk was ruined, fused to his skin by drying blood. "This is going to hurt," she said, uncapping the vodka. "I have endured worse." "I haven't." She poured the clear liquid over the fabric where it stuck to the wound. Lucien’s back arched off the sofa. A strangled cry escaped his throat, his hand shooting out to grip her shoulder. His fingers dug in, bruising force behind them. The heterochromatic eyes blew wide, fixing on the ceiling. Rory didn't stop. She peeled the fabric away, revealing a jagged puncture wound just above his hip bone. The flesh around it was black and veined with grey, as if the weapon that struck him had been dipped in rot. "Silver?" she asked, grabbing a sterile pad. "Blessed iron," he gritted out, his grip on her shoulder slowly relaxing, though he didn't let go. "Courtesy of the Order of St. George. They have become... aggressive." "You shouldn't be here, Lucien. If the Order is hunting you, you've painted a target on my back." She pressed the gauze pad hard against the wound. He flinched, his eyes snapping down to meet hers. "I had nowhere else. The safe houses are burned. My contacts are silent. You are the only one who is not on their payroll." "I'm not on your payroll either." "No." His thumb swept unconsciously against her collarbone. "You simply possess a stubborn moral compass that I find inconveniently reliable." Rory focused on the blood seeping through the white gauze. It gave her something to look at besides the expanse of his chest, the pale scars that mapped his history, and the way the water dripped from his chin. Six months. It had been six months since he walked out of that warehouse in Docklands, leaving her with a dead body and a police siren wailing in the distance. He’d used her to flush out a rogue sorcerer, keeping her in the dark until the trap sprung. "I should let you bleed out," she said. Her voice lacked the conviction she wanted. "For Docklands." "For Docklands," he agreed softly. "And for Paris. And for the incident with the ghoul." "Especially the ghoul." She taped the gauze down, her movements efficient. The bleeding was slowing, his demonic physiology already knitting the worst of it, fighting off the holy poisoning. She sat back on her heels, wiping her sticky hands on a rag. Lucien slumped, the tension draining from his frame now that the immediate crisis was managed. He looked wrecked. The platinum hair, usually slicked back in severe perfection, hung in wet strands across his forehead. He looked younger, less like the terrifying Fixer of London and more like a man who’d run until he couldn't take another step. "Why didn't you call?" Rory asked, watching the rise and fall of his chest. "I lost my phone." "You have other ways. You could have sent a message." "I didn't want you involved." Rory laughed, a harsh, humorless sound. "You’re in my flat, dripping blood on my floor. I’m involved." "I intended to wait until I was stable, then leave before you returned." "Liar." She leaned forward, invading his space. "You knew I’d be here. You knew I’d help. You gambled on my stupidity." Lucien’s hand moved from her shoulder to cup her jaw. His skin was scorching hot. The thumb brushed her cheekbone, a tender gesture that felt like a slap after the silence between them. "I gambled on your mercy, Aurora. I had no chips left to play." The use of her full name froze her. He only used it when he was desperate or lying. "Don't touch me," she whispered, but she didn't pull away. "You have a scar," he murmured, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw down to her wrist, where her sleeve had ridden up. He stopped at the crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist. "I remember this." "From a bike accident. Not from your world." "Everything is my world, eventually." He leaned his head back against the cushions again, his eyelids drooping. The adrenaline was crashing. "I am sorry." Rory stared at him. Lucien Moreau did not apologize. He bargained. He negotiated. He explained. He never apologized. "You're hallucinating," she said, standing up abruptly. Her knees popped. "I’m going to make tea. Sugary tea. Treat the shock." She turned toward the kitchen, needing distance. The air around him felt charged, thick with thestatic of unsaid words and the magnetic pull that had caused all this trouble in the first place. "Rory." She stopped, her back to him. "I came because I knew you would be angry," he said, his voice stronger now. "And anger requires you to be alive. Indifference... indifference is where I lose you." She gripped the edge of the counter, the Formica biting into her palms. "You lost me in Docklands, Lucien." "I know." The leather creaked as he shifted. "I intend to earn you back." She filled the kettle, the water rushing loud into the metal basin. "You can’t just show up, bleed on me, and expect to pick up the pieces." "I expect nothing." She slammed the kettle onto the base and clicked the switch. The silence stretched, filled only by the rising hum of the boiling water and the steady patter of rain against the glass. Rory looked over her shoulder. Lucien was watching her, his heterochromatic gaze unblinking. He looked like a fallen angel dragged through the gutter—beautiful, dangerous, and entirely at her mercy. "Drink your tea," she said, her voice steadying. "Then you explain why the Order of St. George is trying to kill you. And if I don't like the answer, I throw you out the window." Lucien’s lips quirked, the ghost of his usual smirk returning. "Second floor. I would likely survive." "I'll aim for the dumpster." She turned back to the mugs, reaching for the sugar. Her hands were shaking. She wasn’t sure if it was fear of the Order, the adrenaline of the blood, or the terrifying realization that despite the betrayal, despite the months of silence, the moment he touched her, she had wanted to lean in. She fixed the tea, dark and sweet. When she turned back, he was still watching her, hunger and pain warring in his mismatched eyes. She walked back to the couch and held the mug out. He took it, his fingers brushing hers, lingering a second too long. The heat of his skin jumped to hers. "Start talking, Moreau," she said, sinking into the armchair opposite him. "And don't skip the details."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:49:03.214Z" 2/19/2026, 3:49:03 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His thumb swept unconsciously [unconsciously]"
1"he agreed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.069
89.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1856
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1856
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"jaw clenched"
count1
10
word"silk"
count2
11
word"efficient"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"velvet"
6"sanctuary"
7"fractured"
8"vibrated"
9"jaw clenched"
10"silk"
11"efficient"
12"tension"
13"tracing"
14"charged"
15"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences132
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1443
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau2
Rory12
Lucien11
Italian1
Aid1
Docklands1
Fixer1
London1
Formica1
Order1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Empress"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a slap after the silence betw"
1"looked like a fallen angel dragged throug"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean25.67
std17.06
cv0.665
sampleLengths
068
19
232
359
46
553
627
732
823
911
1033
1115
1239
1315
1447
1546
1622
1732
1846
1914
2038
218
2246
2342
2410
254
2616
2737
2840
297
3028
3127
3233
336
3420
3587
3617
3715
3842
3957
4014
414
4210
435
4417
4513
4621
4746
4818
4910
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"was stained"
1"was ruined"
2"been dipped"
64.50% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was slowing"
1"was scorching"
2"was crashing"
3"was watching"
4"were shaking"
74.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences167
ratio0.024
matches
0"Silas wouldn't knock; he’d shout from downstairs."
1"The metallic tang of copper and sulfur filled the cramped room—blood and brimstone."
2"She grabbed the first Aid kit—a plastic box stuffed with more gauze and antiseptic than a normal delivery driver should own—and a bottle of vodka."
3"He looked like a fallen angel dragged through the gutter—beautiful, dangerous, and entirely at her mercy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount295
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.023728813559322035
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.013559322033898305
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean11.07
std6.72
cv0.607
sampleLengths
021
121
210
316
49
52
65
77
87
94
103
113
121
1315
149
1515
1620
176
186
1920
2014
2113
2211
2316
2415
2517
2619
274
2811
294
3022
317
324
3311
345
3517
3617
3715
3811
3918
409
419
4212
4321
4413
4517
465
475
4818
499
42.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.281437125748503
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences125
matches
0"Her reflection in the cracked"
1"She turned the tap off."
2"She dried her hands on"
3"Her fingers brushed the cold"
4"She threw the bolt and"
5"His tailored charcoal suit, usually"
6"He shifted his weight, and"
7"His voice rasped, lacking its"
8"She shoved the door."
9"It swung fast, destined for"
10"He slid down the doorframe,"
11"She abandoned the door and"
12"He was dead weight, heavy"
13"She hauled him across the"
14"He groaned, a low, guttural"
15"She dragged him toward the"
16"He slumped back, his head"
17"She turned on her heel"
18"She grabbed the first Aid"
19"She returned, dropping the kit"
ratio0.568
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount120
totalSentences125
matches
0"Rain lashed against the single"
1"Aurora Carter scrubbed the lingering"
2"Her reflection in the cracked"
3"A double shift at the"
4"She turned the tap off."
5"Silence rushed back in, heavy"
6"Silas wouldn't knock; he’d shout"
7"Eva would text first."
8"The police pounded."
9"This was precise."
10"She dried her hands on"
11"Her fingers brushed the cold"
12"She threw the bolt and"
13"The snarl died in her"
14"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
15"The hallway landing light flickered,"
16"His tailored charcoal suit, usually"
17"Water dripped from the hem"
18"Rory gripped the edge of"
19"Lucien’s lips, usually curled in"
ratio0.96
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"If this was trouble, she"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It gave her something to look at besides the expanse of his chest, the pale scars that mapped his history, and the way the water dripped from his chin."
1"The air around him felt charged, thick with thestatic of unsaid words and the magnetic pull that had caused all this trouble in the first place."
2"He took it, his fingers brushing hers, lingering a second too long."
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory gripped, her knuckles whitening"
1"She taped, her movements efficient"
2"He leaned, his eyelids drooping"
3"he said, his voice stronger now"
4"she said, her voice steadying"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"he agreed softly (agree)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.138
78.4315%