Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT086K1CY7X3S69Z0W4TAYG

Run Details

Duration:
13.6s
Cost:
$0.005929
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air hung thick with the metallic reek of dried blood and something else, something acrid, clinging to the damp brick of the abandoned Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper hair cut close to her head, stepped over a fallen support beam, the worn leather of her watch catching the weak beam of her tactical flashlight. The beam danced across a tableau of shattered glass and upturned stalls, illuminating the chaos of what had once been the Veil Market. Her sharp jaw tightened. This wasn't her usual beat. Not even close. Eighteen years on the force and she had seen it all. Or so she thought. This place, though... it hummed with an unsettling silence. The usual hum of the city, even underground, felt absent here, replaced by the drip of unseen water and the scuttling of rats. A figure detached itself from the shadows, its round glasses reflecting the beam of Quinn's light like startled eyes. Eva Kowalski, hair a riot of curly red, clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest, brimming with books. Freckles dusted her nose, pale against her worried face. She looked out of place, a scholar among the grime. “Detective Quinn, thank you for coming.” Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear. Her voice, usually composed, carried a tremor. Quinn regarded the younger woman, her gaze sweeping over Eva's academic attire, then back to the scene. “What exactly am I looking at, Ms. Kowalski?” “A supernatural tear, Detective. Or rather, the aftermath of one.” Eva gestured vaguely towards a section of the ruined market where the very air seemed to waver, a distortion in the brickwork that defied physical explanation. “We believe it opened here, siphoning off a significant amount of ambient energy before it was contained.” Quinn knelt, examining a peculiar brass compass lying amidst the debris. Its casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with sigils she didn't recognise. The needle spun wildly, never settling. She picked it up, noting its unexpected weight. “A ‘supernatural tear’,” Quinn repeated, the words tasting foreign on her tongue. “And this ‘tear’ caused all this destruction?” Her hand swept across the scene of wreckage around them. “Not directly. The tear itself is more of a gateway. It’s the creatures that came through it and the subsequent struggle to close it that caused the damage.” Eva pointed to scorch marks marring the ancient tunnel walls, their patterns too intricate, too specific, to be merely fire damage. “These are residual magical burns. From what we can piece together, it was a fight.” Quinn stood, a crease forming between her brows. "A fight with whom?" Eva wrung her hands. “That’s what we don’t know. The Market’s protective wards are powerful, but something overwhelmed them.” She paused, her green eyes fixed on Quinn. “One of the vendors, a Shade artisan, is missing. And this.” Eva reached into her satchel, pulling out a small, glass vial filled with a viscous, shimmering liquid. “This was found near the breach. A banned alchemical substance. Potent. Designed to suppress otherworldly entities.” Quinn took the vial, holding it up. The liquid within pulsed faintly. "So, you’re suggesting someone here, perhaps the missing artisan, used this to fight off something that came through this... tear?" “It's a plausible theory,” Eva said, her nervous habit returning as she tucked her hair behind her ear again. “Given the nature of the Veil Market, it attracts all sorts of entities. Both those who seek to exploit the supernatural and those who actively hunt it.” Quinn walked over to the distorted brickwork, her eyes narrowing. She ran a gloved hand along the rough surface. No visible entry point, no obvious signs of forced entry. Just this unnatural ripple in reality itself. She had seen similar unexplainable anomalies in her partner's final case – things that defied logic, that felt like a veil had been pulled aside, revealing a monstrous truth. “And this ‘Shade artisan’," Quinn continued, her voice flat, "just vanished? No struggle, no blood trail, nothing?” “We found traces of ectoplasmic residue,” Eva offered, her voice barely a whisper. “A signature left by certain ethereal beings. It suggests they were taken, not killed outright.” Quinn turned, her gaze sharp, piercing. “Taken. By whom? And to where?” Eva shrugged, a helpless gesture. “Beyond our current capabilities, Detective. We believe another dimension. A pocket realm, perhaps.” Quinn dismissed the idea with a shake of her head. “Another dimension. Right.” She squatted, examining a jagged tear in the fabric of a canvas stall. Not just ripped, but melted, as if subjected to extreme heat. But not fire. Not exactly. She touched the singed edges, a strange residue coating her fingers. It felt cold. Impossibly cold. “If there was such a fight,” Quinn said, rising, "where are the bodies? The blood? Besides these few specks?" She indicated a small patch of dried, dark blood on the grimy floor. "And where’s the struggle? The usual chaos of a brawl?" Her eyes swept across the scattered goods, the splintered wood. It was messy, yes, but almost *too* neat for a life-or-death struggle. “The Market clears out quickly in an emergency, Detective,” Eva explained patiently. “The vendors are adept at disappearing. And the entities themselves... their forms are often ephemeral. They leave little behind.” Quinn moved closer to the wall, her boot crunching on shards of iridescent glass. She noticed something then, partly obscured by a fallen iron grate. A small indentation in the brick, too precise to be random damage. She knelt again, shining her light on it. It wasn't chipped or broken, but pressed, as though something had been held against it with intense force. A circular indent, about the size of her thumb. “What were they selling here?” Quinn asked, her voice low. “Enchanted goods, mostly. Banned alchemical substances, like the one I showed you. And information, of course.” Eva began to look more uncomfortable. “It’s a place of exchange for those who exist outside the mundane.” Quinn looked from the small circular indent to the warped space of the supposed "tear." Her eyes narrowed. "And where exactly were your people when all this was happening, Ms. Kowalski?" Eva flinched. “We arrived shortly after, Detective. Responding to the energy signature. We secured the area, as per protocol.” Quinn walked around the area again, her steps measured, deliberate. She ignored Eva's explanations for a moment, letting her senses take over. The metallic tang of blood filled her nostrils again, but now she also noticed a faint, lingering scent of ozone. Not the clean, sharp smell of lightning, but something mustier, heavier. She focused on the bloodstains, a tiny dark splatter against the grey dust, then another, leading away from the “tear” towards a collapsed stall. The trail was sparse, almost insignificant. Too little for a full-scale battle, even if the combatants were partially incorporeal. Her gaze fell upon the brass compass in her hand. The needle still spun wildly. But it wasn't a random spin. There was a rhythm to it, a subtle pull she hadn't noticed before. It wasn’t pointing *to* the tear. It was pointing *away* from it. Towards the far end of the tunnel, into the deeper darkness. “You said this compass points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal?” Quinn asked, holding it up. Eva nodded. “Yes. It’s a Veil Compass. Very rare. Very accurate.” “And it's pointing away from your ‘tear’,” Quinn stated, not a question. Eva looked at the compass, then back at Quinn, her brow furrowed. “That… that doesn’t make sense. The tear was definitely here.” Quinn ignored her. She walked, following the subtle, insistent tug of the compass. Past shattered pottery, past fallen banners that depicted strange, arcane symbols. The blood trail, she now noticed, did not lead *from* the tear, but seemed to originate near the collapsed stall, then peter out. She stopped at the far end of the market, where the tunnel narrowed into another, almost completely dark passage. The compass needle now spun in tight, agitated circles, vibrating in her hand. The scent of ozone was stronger here, almost stinging her nostrils. “What’s down here?” she asked, her voice a low growl. Eva peered into the gloom, her expression uncertain. “Nothing of note. Just an old maintenance shaft, we believe. It’s unstable. We sealed it off.” Quinn stepped over a loose pile of rubble, ignoring Eva’s protests. Her flashlight beam cut through the darkness, illuminating a rough, makeshift barricade of wooden planks and rusted metal. Fresh scratch marks marred the wood, visible even in the dim light. And on the dusty floor, barely discernible against the grime, was another, much larger pool of dried blood. Darker, wider. This wasn’t a few drops. This was a significant amount. She ran her fingers over one of the scratches. Not like an animal’s claw. Sharper. More like a tool, or something with a very specific edge. "You sealed it off, you said?" Quinn turned back to Eva, her brown eyes hard. "When?" Eva swallowed, her earlier confidence faltering. "Yesterday evening, before dawn. After we secured the main breach.” Quinn knelt, tracing a finger through the thicker bloodstain. It was still tacky in places, not fully dried. And there, beside it, reflecting the beam of her light, was a fragment of what looked like polished obsidian. Not shattered glass. Obsidian. “This blood isn't from the same incident, is it, Ms. Kowalski?” Quinn stood, her height a commanding presence. "And this shaft wasn’t just ‘sealed off’. It was broken *into*. And recently." Eva's face paled further, the freckles standing out starkly. She tucked her hair behind her ear again, a frantic gesture. “I… I don’t understand, Detective. Our sensors indicated a single major event.” Quinn looked from the obsidian fragment to the heavy bloodstain, then back to the now-feverishly spinning needle of the Veil Compass in her hand. The scent of ozone hummed around her, stronger, more potent here than anywhere else in the market. “No,” Quinn said, her voice dropping to a near whisper. “Not a single event.” She looked at the blood, at the obsidian. "This isn't the tear. Or at least, it’s not the only one. This is where something *entered*."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Eva explained patiently [patiently]"
2"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.532
leniency1
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.12
82.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"shattered"
count3
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"aftermath"
count1
3
word"amidst"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"ephemeral"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"silence"
2"aftermath"
3"amidst"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"intricate"
7"otherworldly"
8"pulsed"
9"whisper"
10"ephemeral"
11"measured"
12"furrowed"
13"gloom"
14"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1703
ratio0.004
matches
0"too"
1"to"
2"away"
3"from"
4"into"
5"entered"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1206
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn27
Veil2
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva21
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Veil"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places
0"Market"
globalScore0.381
windowScore0.333
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a veil had been pulled aside"
1"looked like polished obsidian"
82.56% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.174
wordCount1703
matches
0"Not just ripped, but melted, as if subjected to extreme heat"
1"Not the clean, sharp smell of lightning, but something mustier, heavier"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.23
std19.5
cv0.538
sampleLengths
080
159
257
322
425
553
642
729
864
912
1071
1132
1246
1365
1417
1528
1612
1718
1858
1964
2031
2172
2210
2334
2431
2519
2653
2743
2857
2917
3011
3112
3222
3347
3443
3510
3624
3761
3810
3926
4016
4116
4241
4331
4432
4541
4639
96.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"was etched"
1"been pulled"
2"been held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs191
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences138
ratio0.007
matches
0"She had seen similar unexplainable anomalies in her partner's final case – things that defied logic, that felt like a veil had been pulled aside, revealing a monstrous truth."
88.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.053674649050371594
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01486374896779521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean12.34
std7.65
cv0.62
sampleLengths
026
131
223
34
45
53
611
74
83
96
1023
1119
1219
139
1410
1515
167
1717
188
1936
2017
2111
2217
236
248
2512
2617
2749
2815
298
304
314
3223
3328
3416
357
365
3720
3819
3927
4010
419
4210
437
4429
4517
4613
4715
486
496
52.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners46
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just this unnatural ripple in"
1"Too little for a full-scale"
2"More like a tool, or"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her sharp jaw tightened."
1"it hummed with an unsettling"
2"She looked out of place,"
3"Her voice, usually composed, carried"
4"Its casing bore a patina"
5"She picked it up, noting"
6"Her hand swept across the"
7"She paused, her green eyes"
8"She ran a gloved hand"
9"She had seen similar unexplainable"
10"She squatted, examining a jagged"
11"She touched the singed edges,"
12"It felt cold."
13"Her eyes swept across the"
14"It was messy, yes, but"
15"She noticed something then, partly"
16"She knelt again, shining her"
17"It wasn't chipped or broken,"
18"She ignored Eva's explanations for"
19"She focused on the bloodstains,"
ratio0.284
42.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences109
matches
0"The air hung thick with"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper"
2"The beam danced across a"
3"Her sharp jaw tightened."
4"This wasn't her usual beat."
5"This place, though..."
6"it hummed with an unsettling"
7"The usual hum of the"
8"A figure detached itself from"
9"Eva Kowalski, hair a riot"
10"Freckles dusted her nose, pale"
11"She looked out of place,"
12"Eva tucked a stray curl"
13"Her voice, usually composed, carried"
14"Quinn regarded the younger woman,"
15"Eva gestured vaguely towards a"
16"Quinn knelt, examining a peculiar"
17"Its casing bore a patina"
18"The needle spun wildly, never"
19"She picked it up, noting"
ratio0.835
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She had seen similar unexplainable anomalies in her partner's final case – things that defied logic, that felt like a veil had been pulled aside, revealing a mo…"
1"It wasn't chipped or broken, but pressed, as though something had been held against it with intense force."
2"Past shattered pottery, past fallen banners that depicted strange, arcane symbols."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn repeated, the words tasting foreign on her tongue"
1"Quinn continued, her voice flat,"
2"Eva offered, her voice barely a whisper"
3"Quinn asked, her voice low"
4"she asked, her voice a low growl"
5"Quinn stood, her height a commanding presence"
6"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a near whisper"
64.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"Quinn continued (continue)"
2"Eva explained patiently (explain)"
3"Quinn stated (state)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.17
81.4924%