Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT086VJ159G5EZEBQ9YKTV4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.031866
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn’s boot crunched on gravel as she descended the narrow stairwell into the disused Camden Tube station. Her torch sliced through gloom, illuminating peeling adverts and flaking tile. A thin hiss whispered from a distant curve. No trains ran here. She paused at the platform’s edge, heart tightening at the unnatural hush. Under a single, sputtering lamp lay the body. A man in a navy suit, half his face pressed against the rail. One arm reached out, fingers anchored to a small brass compass. Quinn crouched, beam trembling over a dark stain on his chest. The stain bubbled like oil. She leaned closer, inhaled copper on her tongue. Behind her, DS Ishaan Patel’s camera clicked. He aimed at chalk-scrawled outlines and the tracks beyond. “Early guess: robbery gone wrong. Stabbed while fighting off muggers. He slipped in front of a train.” Quinn edged closer to the rail. A cluster of bone fragments lay scattered across the gravel like shattered pearls. She nudged one with her gloved finger. It cracked under pressure, fine lines tracing a spiral pattern. Bone token design — something sold only at the underground market. Patel glanced over. “You sure those bits aren’t from the sleepers?” She studied the shards. They gleamed pale against the dark stones. No mineral trace. “Human bones break differently.” She nudged another fragment. It splintered like porcelain. Patel swallowed, scribbled in his notebook. “Right.” Quinn’s beam swept the tunnel wall. Between bricks, someone had etched runes into mortar, then coated them in chalk. The symbols formed a circle of twisting lines, half-faded. She traced one rune with her fingertip. It felt cold as ice, yet pulsed faintly under her glove. Threads of memory snagged at her mind—Morris’s last case, an abandoned dockyard, the same symbol carved into a shattered door. Her partner lost to forces she still couldn’t name. She rose, flashlight illuminating her sharp jawline and the worn leather watch on her wrist. She shone light on the compass. Brass casing patinaed green at the edges. Sigils ringed the glass face, protective glyphs she recognised from occult files. The needle spun, paused, then jerked toward the chalk circle, refusing to settle on magnetic north. Quinn reached for it. Patel stepped back. “Don’t touch.” She ignored him. The compass hummed, warmth radiating through her fingers. “He died holding this.” She flipped it open, caught the needle quivering toward the runes. From deeper in the tunnel came a low pulse, a thrum that pressed against her chest. She lifted her head. The station shifted. Shadows bulged. The lamp’s bulb flickered, then steadied. A voice echoed behind her, soft and urgent. Eva Kowalski appeared on the platform, books and satchel slung over her shoulder. Her curls caught the light like embers. Glasses slid down her nose. She knelt by the runes, fingertips brushing chalk. “Detective,” Eva said, voice taut. “You asked for help.” Patel frowned. “We called the museum on a stabbing?” Eva ignored him. She flipped open a battered volume, pages loose and dog-eared. She traced symbols, tongue poking a corner of her mouth. “These runes aren’t random. They’re sealing glyphs. Used to lock a breach, contain something… or someone.” Patel scoffed. “Someone sealed in and strangled themselves to death? Sounds legit.” Quinn crouched beside Eva. She brushed away a patch of wet gravel. Damp seeped through her gloves. She pressed the compass to the ground. The needle quivered, swung until it pointed behind the chalk circle. She rose, followed its arc to the edge of the platform, then down to the water-stained sleepers. There, a puddle glowed faint red, as though lit from below. Patel crossed his arms. “Blood. Pretty straightforward.” Quinn held up her gloved hand. No smear. The puddle rippled, then receded—like a tide pulling back. She flashed her light through it. The beam glowed red on the far wall, where bricks bulged outward in a smooth arc. A fracture. A slit. She rose rapidly. The lamp overhead flickered again. “Listen.” Silence pressed in. Then came a metallic sigh, a whisper like rustling silk. The puddle shivered. The slit widened. Thin smoke leaked out, curling along the track like a snake. Patel took a step back. Eva rose beside him, face pale. “That’s not a train.” The smoke thickened, coiling free of the wall. Quinn lifted the compass. Its sigil-etched face glowed in response. The needle swung away from north, pinned on the fracture. “Portal,” she said. “It’s still open.” Patel’s eyes narrowed. “You mean a doorway? In a wall? Come on.” Quinn knelt and picked up a bone shard. She held it under the lamp. Etched into the surface: a rune matching one on the wall. She pocketed it. “He used his token as a key. Tried to seal it from the other side. That’s him on the tracks.” Eva stepped closer, voice urgent. “He anchored the seal with this token, but the circle was incomplete. Look here.” She tapped a break in the chalk ring. “That gap reopens the breach.” Quinn studied the runes. They twisted inward around the hollow spot. She shone her light over the wet floor, where no footprints led to or from the body. “He didn’t come back. He died inside.” Patel ran a hand through his hair. He nodded. “Fine. Portal mana things. So what killed him?” Quinn rose, compass in hand. She followed the beam toward the glowing puddle. Each step made the slime recede, leaving damp stone. “Whatever came through.” Eva pulled Quinn aside. “If this breach collapses properly, it’ll close itself. But leaky containment can rip a soul asunder. He stabbed himself trying to force the wound closed.” Her voice trembled. “No blade killed him.” Quinn turned to Patel. “You’ll document the scene. Get the district engineer to seal the entrance permanently. I want that puddle sampled. Full analysis.” She pointed to the runes. “That circle goes to evidence. After we remove the body.” Patel glanced at the widening slit. Smoke seeped, thicker now, tendrils drifting into the station. “You want to chase whatever just crawled out of that?” Quinn smiled, cold. “No.” She clipped her torch to her belt. She pulled the compass free. Needle pulsed, glowing against the sigils. She snapped it shut. “I want to follow it.” Eva zipped her book into her satchel. “I’ll log the rune pattern. Then I can tell you where it leads.” Quinn nodded. “Do it.” She faced the breach. Smoke rose over her visor, carrying a scent of iron and old paper. The station’s walls creaked. Her pulse skimmed her fingers. She held up her leather-watch hand, saw the second hand tick free from time’s grip. “Darren Morris would’ve loved this,” she muttered, voice low. Patel blinked. “Morris?” Quinn pulled out a small photograph from her breast pocket: two detectives in raincoats, grinning beneath a streetlamp. She stared at it a moment, then tucked it away. “He called it a door too. Never told anyone what lay behind.” She squared her shoulders. The breach pulsed, the runes glowed faint. Bones lay scattered like breadcrumbs. The compass vibrated in her hand. Patel exhaled. “I’ll seal the platform.” He turned to gather tape. Quinn didn’t wait. She stepped onto the tracks. Eva followed, boots scuffing gravel. The red pool glowed under her boots, then retreated, exposing sleepers slick with damp. The slit widened, smoke drifting out in lazy spirals. Quinn knelt, held the compass over the breach. The needle spun, then anchored toward the deep curve of the tunnel. “Right that way,” she said. “Come on.” Eva closed in, flipping her book open. She muttered under her breath, matching glyphs to runes, eyes darting. Quinn listened to the hum, rising in pitch. The station around them warped, walls pulsing with each beat. She tasted ozone on her tongue. They crept forward, each step a drum in the tunnel’s hollow throat. The compass needle beat against its casing, as though eager to be free. Each footfall cracked the silence, each breath rang in her ears. The bone token in her pocket throbbed a pulse she felt in her fingertips. The tunnel narrowed. The runes on the wall glowed one by one, as if waking. Eva’s voice whispered over Quinn’s shoulder. “The market shifts at dawn. We’ve got hours before they move this place—if they ever did.” Quinn glanced back at the widened breach. Smoke curled behind them, slow and mournful. She tucked her torch under her arm and pressed the compass to her chest. The needle stopped, pointing straight ahead. She rose to her feet, gravel crunching. “Then we make our own shift,” she said. She led them into darkness, toward whatever waited beyond the edge of light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"etched"
count3
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count3
10
word"flickered"
count2
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"quivered"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"footfall"
count1
19
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"shattered"
2"tracing"
3"porcelain"
4"etched"
5"traced"
6"pulsed"
7"magnetic"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"flickered"
11"echoed"
12"quivered"
13"silence"
14"whisper"
15"silk"
16"trembled"
17"vibrated"
18"footfall"
19"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1446
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1155
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Camden1
Tube1
Ishaan1
Patel14
Morris1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Smoke3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Ishaan"
3"Patel"
4"Morris"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Smoke"
places(empty)
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if waking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1446
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean30.13
std17.4
cv0.577
sampleLengths
054
156
233
347
411
526
67
775
856
99
1026
1131
1241
139
149
1539
1612
1763
187
1943
209
2130
2215
2334
2412
2548
2632
2735
2817
2925
3036
3139
3225
3331
3420
3545
369
373
3840
3922
4011
4156
427
4342
4450
4537
4641
4721
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
96.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences184
ratio0.016
matches
0"Bone token design — something sold only at the underground market."
1"Threads of memory snagged at her mind—Morris’s last case, an abandoned dockyard, the same symbol carved into a shattered door."
2"The puddle rippled, then receded—like a tide pulling back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02153316106804479
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002583979328165375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean7.86
std4.78
cv0.609
sampleLengths
019
111
28
34
412
58
613
711
811
95
108
117
129
1317
146
1513
167
1710
1811
193
208
214
227
233
248
254
266
271
286
2913
309
317
3211
3320
349
3515
366
377
3812
3916
404
413
422
433
448
4515
4616
474
483
492
46.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29347826086956524
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners54
23.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"Then came a metallic sigh,"
ratio0.007
72.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences144
matches
0"Her torch sliced through gloom,"
1"She paused at the platform’s"
2"She leaned closer, inhaled copper"
3"He aimed at chalk-scrawled outlines"
4"She nudged one with her"
5"It cracked under pressure, fine"
6"She studied the shards."
7"They gleamed pale against the"
8"She nudged another fragment"
9"It splintered like porcelain."
10"She traced one rune with"
11"It felt cold as ice,"
12"Her partner lost to forces"
13"She rose, flashlight illuminating her"
14"She shone light on the"
15"She ignored him."
16"She flipped it open, caught"
17"She lifted her head."
18"Her curls caught the light"
19"She knelt by the runes,"
ratio0.368
5.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences144
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boot crunched"
1"Her torch sliced through gloom,"
2"A thin hiss whispered from"
3"She paused at the platform’s"
4"A man in a navy"
5"Quinn crouched, beam trembling over"
6"The stain bubbled like oil."
7"She leaned closer, inhaled copper"
8"He aimed at chalk-scrawled outlines"
9"Quinn edged closer to the"
10"A cluster of bone fragments"
11"She nudged one with her"
12"It cracked under pressure, fine"
13"Patel glanced over."
14"She studied the shards."
15"They gleamed pale against the"
16"She nudged another fragment"
17"It splintered like porcelain."
18"Patel swallowed, scribbled in his"
19"Quinn’s beam swept the tunnel"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She muttered under her breath, matching glyphs to runes, eyes darting."
1"The compass needle beat against its casing, as though eager to be free."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.05
81.4469%