| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked aloud [aloud]" | | 1 | "Isolde’s words folded around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.708 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 88.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 903 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 903 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "trepidation" | | 1 | "sentinel" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "simmering" | | 11 | "dances" | | 12 | "tapestry" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "tangible" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "fragmented" | | 19 | "looming" | | 20 | "potential" | | 21 | "peril" | | 22 | "enigma" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 894 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.10% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 770 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 6 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.461 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if weaving strands of fate" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.237 | | wordCount | 894 | | matches | | 0 | "not of absence, but of intent, each hushed moment more poignant in its quietness" | | 1 | "neither to past nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 28.84 | | std | 11.82 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "No birds sang here—no creature roamed the branches." | | 1 | "Rory knew she stood at an intersection—of fate, will, and wonder." | | 2 | "In this transient realm, Rory understood discovery was both promise and peril—a journey unfurled before her astonished senses." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 779 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "against sun-dappled ground." |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03209242618741977 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010269576379974325 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 72.24% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 13.15 | | std | 4.35 | | cv | 0.331 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 84.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5147058823529411 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Tantalizingly close, constantly elusive, like" | | 1 | "Once more, a breeze ruffled" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes sparkled" | | 1 | "their voice whispered, cool and" | | 2 | "It was a silence not" | | 3 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 4 | "she mused, pale lavender eyes" | | 5 | "she asked, eager to anchor" | | 6 | "They wandered further, past flowers" | | 7 | "she asked, feeling as though" | | 8 | "she asked aloud, seeking Isolde’s" | | 9 | "They continued their journey, and" | | 10 | "It was then Rory found" | | 11 | "They hummed faintly, a sound" | | 12 | "She extended her hand, the" | | 13 | "Her gaze was sapphire-sharp." | | 14 | "Her curiosity hung heavy, a" | | 15 | "Their presence was a constant" | | 16 | "she declared, more to herself" | | 17 | "She grasped the pendant for" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward hesitantly," | | 1 | "The grove seemed to welcome" | | 2 | "Rory murmured, looking back at" | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes sparkled" | | 4 | "Nyx lingered in her shadow," | | 5 | "their voice whispered, cool and" | | 6 | "The standing oaks at the" | | 7 | "Each tree was a sentinel," | | 8 | "It was a silence not" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga drifted past them," | | 10 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 11 | "she mused, pale lavender eyes" | | 12 | "Rory shivered, the warmth of" | | 13 | "she asked, eager to anchor" | | 14 | "Isolde replied, a smile playing" | | 15 | "They wandered further, past flowers" | | 16 | "Rory's fingers brushed petals that" | | 17 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a" | | 18 | "Rory countered, her heartbeat quickening" | | 19 | "The thrill of the unknown" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward hesitantly, her boots making no sound on the impossibly lush grass that carpeted the ground." | | 1 | "The grove seemed to welcome her, the wildflowers dipping their heads in a gentle breeze that played with her straight, shoulder-length black hair." | | 2 | "Nyx lingered in her shadow, their form blurring and sharpening with each subtle shift of light." | | 3 | "Rory's fingers brushed petals that felt spun from silk, releasing tiny sparks of blue light that danced upon the air." | | 4 | "Centered around a cleft rock was a pool, crystalline and deep, its waters catching sunlight and fracturing it into iridescent ripples." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory countered, her heartbeat quickening at the promise of discovery" | | 1 | "Nyx added, their presence a tether to both danger and familiarity" | | 2 | "Rory asked, her voice steady against the growing unreality" | | 3 | "Isolde explained, her voice lilting with poetry" | | 4 | "she declared, more to herself than the others" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "their voice whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx added (add)" | | 4 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 5 | "she declared (declare)" | | 6 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.538 | |