Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT088ZHDDKPKNEETSMH8H3P

Run Details

Duration:
24.3s
Cost:
$0.016497
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped forward hesitantly, her boots making no sound on the impossibly lush grass that carpeted the ground. The grove seemed to welcome her, the wildflowers dipping their heads in a gentle breeze that played with her straight, shoulder-length black hair. "Feels like a dream," Rory murmured, looking back at her companions. Her bright blue eyes sparkled with a mixture of trepidation and awe. Nyx lingered in her shadow, their form blurring and sharpening with each subtle shift of light. "These realms between are always strange," their voice whispered, cool and fragile as autumn’s first breath. "Expect the unexpected, Rory." The standing oaks at the grove’s periphery seemed to nod in agreement. Each tree was a sentinel, cloaked in ancient secrets, their bark etched with the language of the Fae. No birds sang here—no creature roamed the branches. It was a silence not of absence, but of intent, each hushed moment more poignant in its quietness. Isolde Varga drifted past them, her silver hair a cascade of moonlit threads against her ethereal form. Her bare feet left no prints, the ground untouched by her presence. "Time weaves around us here," she mused, pale lavender eyes tracing patterns in the air. "Days may shed like petals, or cling like dew…" Rory shivered, the warmth of the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest strangely comforting in the grove's unnatural climate. "What’s next?" she asked, eager to anchor neither to past nor future, but the moment itself. "Wonder," Isolde replied, a smile playing on lips that held more riddles than answers. They wandered further, past flowers that glowed softly as though starlit, scents of honey and spice teasing their senses. Rory's fingers brushed petals that felt spun from silk, releasing tiny sparks of blue light that danced upon the air. Nyx drifted beside her, a painted shadow against sun-dappled ground. "Beautiful... but unreliable. These lights, they could lead astray." “Or reveal hidden paths,” Rory countered, her heartbeat quickening at the promise of discovery. The thrill of the unknown chased fear from her mind. Moments later, the grove revealed a new allure. Centered around a cleft rock was a pool, crystalline and deep, its waters catching sunlight and fracturing it into iridescent ripples. Beneath the surface, shapes shifted, elusive as dreams tugged from memory. Rory crouched by the water’s edge, peering into its depths. "Do you see it?" she asked, feeling as though she teetered at the edge of some staggering revelation. Nyx edged closer, their eyes simmering with violet luminescence. "Reflections that aren’t our own… the pool speaks, listen." A gossamer-threaded voice wafted over the water, though no form sat beside them. "Here, the past breathes, the future dances," it began. The sound slid under Rory’s skin, prickling, persistent. "What do you make of it?" she asked aloud, seeking Isolde’s gaze, half-lost in its lavender haze. "The pool reveals possibilities," Isolde said, her fingers tracing the air as if weaving strands of fate. "It draws upon the tapestry of choice and chance." Rory studied the shifting waters again, eyes narrowing as shadows traced patterns she couldn't grasp. Tantalizingly close, constantly elusive, like trying to cup water in her hands. They continued their journey, and the air grew dense with shades of twilight, the grove’s boundaries blurring. Trees passed by, their bark smooth as the skin of ripened fruits, branches twined into arcs of whispering leaves. Time ceased to hold its familiar shape, stretching moments like gossamer threads drawn too far. It was then Rory found herself at the edge of another anomaly. A cairn of stones, layered like the strata of forgotten histories. They hummed faintly, a sound like the resonance of a myriad insects in harmonious accord. "Strange," Rory murmured, feeling an inexplicable pull. She extended her hand, the Heartstone Pendant thrumming in response. "Do not disturb their rest," Isolde’s words folded around them like cautioning arms. Her gaze was sapphire-sharp. "These stones mark a crossing." Rory stepped back, caught by the notion of boundaries and the worlds cradled beyond. Her curiosity hung heavy, a tangible weight. "The Veil weakens here," Nyx added, their presence a tether to both danger and familiarity. The Grove began to quiet, perception reshaping like mist retreating in sunlight. Rory’s thoughts felt both fragmented and vast, possibilities running like quicksilver through her consciousness. "What's our purpose here?" Rory asked, her voice steady against the growing unreality. "The Grove is both destination and origin," Isolde explained, her voice lilting with poetry. "It calls, and those who hear must answer." Rory knew she stood at an intersection—of fate, will, and wonder. The paths diverged just out of sight, and she sensed Nyx's growing focus on her. Their presence was a constant shadow, a looming question yet unasked. Once more, a breeze ruffled her hair, carrying with it the scent of far-off rain. Rory turned her face skyward, to where the oak leaves wove a lace canopy, softening the sunlight to muted gold. "We'll find what we've come for," she declared, more to herself than the others. She grasped the pendant for fortitude. "Indeed," Nyx breathed, holding the potential of endless futures in their words. In this transient realm, Rory understood discovery was both promise and peril—a journey unfurled before her astonished senses. The Grove shifted again, a living enigma of dreams and dilemmas, but Rory remained anchored, ready to know it all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she asked aloud [aloud]"
1"Isolde’s words folded around [around]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.708
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
88.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount903
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"hesitantly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount903
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"trepidation"
count1
1
word"sentinel"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"crystalline"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"simmering"
count1
11
word"dances"
count1
12
word"tapestry"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"resonance"
count1
16
word"tangible"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"fragmented"
count1
19
word"looming"
count1
20
word"potential"
count1
21
word"peril"
count1
22
word"enigma"
count1
highlights
0"trepidation"
1"sentinel"
2"etched"
3"silence"
4"tracing"
5"warmth"
6"comforting"
7"silk"
8"crystalline"
9"depths"
10"simmering"
11"dances"
12"tapestry"
13"traced"
14"familiar"
15"resonance"
16"tangible"
17"weight"
18"fragmented"
19"looming"
20"potential"
21"peril"
22"enigma"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords894
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount770
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Varga1
Rory16
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Isolde6
Nyx6
Grove2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Varga"
2"Rory"
3"Pendant"
4"Isolde"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.461
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if weaving strands of fate"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.237
wordCount894
matches
0"not of absence, but of intent, each hushed moment more poignant in its quietness"
1"neither to past nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
74.21% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean28.84
std11.82
cv0.41
sampleLengths
042
123
236
356
453
535
614
739
819
924
1040
1128
1218
1330
1417
1526
1627
1751
1838
1917
2022
2121
2215
2326
2413
2522
2637
2735
2820
2912
3038
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences68
ratio0.044
matches
0"No birds sang here—no creature roamed the branches."
1"Rory knew she stood at an intersection—of fate, will, and wonder."
2"In this transient realm, Rory understood discovery was both promise and peril—a journey unfurled before her astonished senses."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"against sun-dappled ground."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03209242618741977
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010269576379974325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
72.24% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean13.15
std4.35
cv0.331
sampleLengths
019
123
211
312
416
516
64
712
818
98
1018
1117
1212
1315
149
1519
1616
1714
1819
1920
2010
219
2214
2310
248
2521
2611
2710
2818
299
309
3113
329
338
3417
3517
369
3715
3812
3917
4019
4115
4212
4311
4415
457
4610
4713
484
495
84.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5147058823529411
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Tantalizingly close, constantly elusive, like"
1"Once more, a breeze ruffled"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes sparkled"
1"their voice whispered, cool and"
2"It was a silence not"
3"Her bare feet left no"
4"she mused, pale lavender eyes"
5"she asked, eager to anchor"
6"They wandered further, past flowers"
7"she asked, feeling as though"
8"she asked aloud, seeking Isolde’s"
9"They continued their journey, and"
10"It was then Rory found"
11"They hummed faintly, a sound"
12"She extended her hand, the"
13"Her gaze was sapphire-sharp."
14"Her curiosity hung heavy, a"
15"Their presence was a constant"
16"she declared, more to herself"
17"She grasped the pendant for"
ratio0.3
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped forward hesitantly,"
1"The grove seemed to welcome"
2"Rory murmured, looking back at"
3"Her bright blue eyes sparkled"
4"Nyx lingered in her shadow,"
5"their voice whispered, cool and"
6"The standing oaks at the"
7"Each tree was a sentinel,"
8"It was a silence not"
9"Isolde Varga drifted past them,"
10"Her bare feet left no"
11"she mused, pale lavender eyes"
12"Rory shivered, the warmth of"
13"she asked, eager to anchor"
14"Isolde replied, a smile playing"
15"They wandered further, past flowers"
16"Rory's fingers brushed petals that"
17"Nyx drifted beside her, a"
18"Rory countered, her heartbeat quickening"
19"The thrill of the unknown"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped forward hesitantly, her boots making no sound on the impossibly lush grass that carpeted the ground."
1"The grove seemed to welcome her, the wildflowers dipping their heads in a gentle breeze that played with her straight, shoulder-length black hair."
2"Nyx lingered in her shadow, their form blurring and sharpening with each subtle shift of light."
3"Rory's fingers brushed petals that felt spun from silk, releasing tiny sparks of blue light that danced upon the air."
4"Centered around a cleft rock was a pool, crystalline and deep, its waters catching sunlight and fracturing it into iridescent ripples."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory countered, her heartbeat quickening at the promise of discovery"
1"Nyx added, their presence a tether to both danger and familiarity"
2"Rory asked, her voice steady against the growing unreality"
3"Isolde explained, her voice lilting with poetry"
4"she declared, more to herself than the others"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"their voice whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx added (add)"
4"Isolde explained (explain)"
5"she declared (declare)"
6"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.538
69.5960%