Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08A0X6V8PEWGM1P7VGDRJ

Run Details

Duration:
59.7s
Cost:
$0.002525
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock startled Ptolemy off the sofa. Aurora froze mid-step, her takeaway container hovering halfway to her mouth. The clock read 11:47 PM, and no one knocked on Eva’s door this late without good reason—or bad intentions. She set the container down quietly, her heart thudding against her ribs as she approached the door. The peephole revealed a silhouette she hadn’t seen in months, but one she’d recognize anywhere. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, his posture impossibly straight, his cane tapping lightly against the floor like a metronome counting the seconds until she responded. Aurora’s hand hesitated on the deadbolt. "What do you want, Lucien?" "To talk." His voice was smooth, unchanged, but there was a tension beneath it that made her pulse quicken. "Unless you prefer I leave." She scoffed, unlocking the door. "You wouldn’t have come if you were planning to leave." The door swung open, and there he was—tailored charcoal suit, heterochromatic eyes, and that damned cane. He looked impeccable, as always, but there was something in the way he stood, the slight tilt of his head, that betrayed the cracks in his otherwise polished facade. "Charming as ever," he said, stepping inside without waiting for invitation. "I see London hasn’t softened you." "And I see France hasn’t cured you of your arrogance." She shut the door harder than necessary, crossing her arms. "What are you doing here?" He surveyed the flat, his gaze lingering on the stacks of books and scrolls cluttering every surface. Ptolemy hissed from his perch on the bookshelf, his tail flicking like a whip. Lucien ignored him. "You’ve been busy." "Answer the question." He turned to face her, his expression unreadable. "I need your help." "Help?" She laughed, sharp and bitter. "You disappeared for months, Lucien. No calls, no messages, nothing. And now you show up at my door in the middle of the night asking for help?" "You weren’t exactly eager to hear from me," he said, his tone clipped. "And if I recall, you made your feelings quite clear the last time we spoke." Her jaw tightened. "Don’t." "Don’t what? Remind you of the truth? You’re the one who walked away." "And you’re the one who pushed me to." She stepped closer, her voice low. "You don’t get to waltz back in here and act like everything’s fine." He leaned forward, his amber eye catching the light. "Everything’s far from fine, Aurora. That’s why I’m here." She held his gaze, the air between them crackling with unresolved tension. "What happened?" "The Circle," he said, his voice dropping. "They’ve taken something of mine. Something I can’t afford to lose." Her stomach sank. "What did they take?" He hesitated, a rare moment of vulnerability flickering across his face. "My brother." "Your brother?" She blinked, caught off guard. "I thought he was—" "Dead?" He gave a grim smile. "So did I." She exhaled slowly, her anger giving way to unease. "Why come to me? You have resources, connections. What makes you think I can help?" "Because you’re the only one who understands the Circle’s methods." He stepped closer, his cane tapping against the floor. "And because I trust you." "Trust?" She laughed again, though it lacked conviction. "That’s rich, coming from you." "I made mistakes," he admitted, his voice softer now. "But so did you. We both said things we didn’t mean." "Didn’t we?" She met his gaze, her heart pounding. "Or did we finally say what we’d been avoiding?" He didn’t answer, instead reaching into his jacket and pulling out a folded piece of paper. "This is the last location I tracked him to. Near Canary Wharf. The Circle’s been moving through London, operating in the shadows. If we don’t act soon, he’s lost." She took the paper reluctantly, her fingers brushing against his. The touch sent a jolt through her, a reminder of everything they’d left unresolved. "Why should I care?" "Because," he said, his voice steady, "despite everything, we’re still allies. And because I know you, Aurora. You won’t turn your back on someone in need." She unfolded the paper, scanning the cramped handwriting. "Even if it’s you?" "Especially if it’s me." His lips curved into a faint smile. "You’ve never been able to resist a challenge." She looked up, her resolve wavering. "This doesn’t fix what’s broken between us." "Maybe not," he said. "But it’s a start." The room felt too small suddenly, his presence overwhelming. She stepped back, putting distance between them. "Fine. I’ll help you. But this doesn’t mean I forgive you." "Duly noted," he said, his tone dry. "Now, shall we?" She nodded reluctantly, grabbing her coat from the back of a chair. "You owe me for this." "I owe you far more than you know," he said quietly, his gaze lingering on her as she pulled on her boots. The words hung in the air between them, heavy with unspoken meaning. Aurora paused, her hand on the door handle. "Don’t make me regret this." "I’ll do my best," he said, following her into the hallway. "But when have I ever been predictable?" She shot him a look over her shoulder. "That’s what I’m afraid of." He chuckled, the sound low and familiar, and for a moment, it felt like old times. But the weight of their history loomed large, a shadow neither of them could ignore. As they descended the stairs, Ptolemy’s hiss echoed behind them, a final warning neither of them heeded. The night stretched ahead, uncertain and dangerous, but for the first time in months, she wasn’t walking it alone. And that, she realized, was both a comfort and a curse.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:49:15.442Z" 2/19/2026, 3:49:15 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She laughed again [again]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.071
73.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
2"reluctantly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"facade"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"predictable"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"pulse"
2"facade"
3"unreadable"
4"stomach"
5"pounding"
6"reminder"
7"scanning"
8"resolve"
9"wavering"
10"unspoken"
11"predictable"
12"familiar"
13"weight"
14"loomed"
15"echoed"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach sank"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount564
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Eva1
Moreau1
Aurora3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like old times"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean20.89
std11.56
cv0.553
sampleLengths
037
159
211
324
415
545
617
725
837
93
1012
1133
1228
134
1413
1527
1618
1714
1818
197
2013
2111
229
2324
2424
2513
2620
2718
2845
2928
3026
3112
3219
3313
348
3527
3610
3717
3822
3925
4018
4113
4231
4336
4411
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"was—tailored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs108
matches
0"wasn’t walking"
80.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences92
ratio0.022
matches
0"The clock read 11:47 PM, and no one knocked on Eva’s door this late without good reason—or bad intentions."
1"The door swung open, and there he was—tailored charcoal suit, heterochromatic eyes, and that damned cane."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02821869488536155
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014109347442680775
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean10.22
std6.4
cv0.627
sampleLengths
07
111
219
317
415
527
66
75
819
95
105
1110
1216
1329
1411
156
1620
175
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1914
203
213
223
238
244
256
2627
2713
2815
293
301
3113
3214
3313
349
359
3612
372
387
3911
403
414
4211
432
447
454
466
473
489
4915
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.41304347826086957
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences54
matches
0"She set the container down"
1"His voice was smooth, unchanged,"
2"She scoffed, unlocking the door."
3"He looked impeccable, as always,"
4"he said, stepping inside without"
5"She shut the door harder"
6"He surveyed the flat, his"
7"He turned to face her,"
8"She laughed, sharp and bitter"
9"he said, his tone clipped"
10"Her jaw tightened."
11"She stepped closer, her voice"
12"He leaned forward, his amber"
13"She held his gaze, the"
14"he said, his voice dropping"
15"Her stomach sank."
16"He hesitated, a rare moment"
17"She blinked, caught off guard"
18"He gave a grim smile"
19"She exhaled slowly, her anger"
ratio0.685
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"The knock startled Ptolemy off"
1"Aurora froze mid-step, her takeaway"
2"The clock read 11:47 PM,"
3"She set the container down"
4"The peephole revealed a silhouette"
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"Aurora’s hand hesitated on the"
7"His voice was smooth, unchanged,"
8"She scoffed, unlocking the door."
9"The door swung open, and"
10"He looked impeccable, as always,"
11"he said, stepping inside without"
12"She shut the door harder"
13"He surveyed the flat, his"
14"Ptolemy hissed from his perch"
15"Lucien ignored him."
16"He turned to face her,"
17"She laughed, sharp and bitter"
18"he said, his tone clipped"
19"Her jaw tightened."
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, his posture impossibly straight, his cane tapping lightly against the floor like a metronome counting the seconds until …"
1"He looked impeccable, as always, but there was something in the way he stood, the slight tilt of his head, that betrayed the cracks in his otherwise polished fa…"
2"He surveyed the flat, his gaze lingering on the stacks of books and scrolls cluttering every surface."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he said, his tone clipped"
1"She stepped, her voice low"
2"he said, his voice dropping"
3"He stepped, his cane tapping against the floor"
4"he admitted, his voice softer now"
5"She met, her heart pounding"
6"he said, his voice steady,"
7"he said, his tone dry"
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"She laughed again (laugh)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.393
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.107
73.0695%