Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08A5WT83T66XTFJ45N7YK

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Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.000412
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knockerhammered a staccato rhythm against the wood. Three sharp raps, then a pause. Then three more. Aurora Carter, half-hidden behind the flimsy privacy screen of her peephole, pressed her forehead against the cool glass. Her breath fogged the surface. *Who the hell—* She yanked the door open, not bothering with the deadbolts. The hallway beyond was a tunnel of shadow, but the figure silhouetted against the faint streetlight was unmistakable. Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate in charcoal, the ivory-handled cane tucked under his arm. His face was a mask of controlled amusement, one amber eye gleaming in the gloom. "Aurora." His voice was a low rumble, vibrating through the thin door. "Or should I say, Laila? Or perhaps Malphora?" He tilted his head, the platinum blond hair slicked back perfectly. "I know you're still using the Carter alias. Convenient." Aurora didn't flinch, though her knuckles whitened where she gripped the doorframe. "What do you want, Moreau?" The words were clipped, defensive. She took a step back, inviting him in, but her eyes never left his. The flat behind her was a cramped fortress of books and notes, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something metallic—copper, perhaps. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt from the sofa, fur bristling, and skittered away into the shadows near the kitchen. Lucien didn't move forward. He held up a hand, palm out, a silent command. "No need for the barricades, Carter. I'm not here to cause trouble. Yet." He stepped over the threshold, his polished shoes clicking on the worn linoleum. The door swung shut behind him with a soft *thud*, sealing them in the small space. The cat's frantic scratching from the kitchen was the only sound for a moment, a frantic counterpoint to the sudden silence. Aurora crossed her arms, her gaze fixed on the closed door as if willing it to open again. "You know why I left London, Moreau. You were part of it." Her voice was tight, the memory of his betrayal still a raw wound. "You were the reason I fled to Cardiff, then London, then here." He leaned against the flimsy kitchen counter, watching her with that unsettling, half-amber eye. "I was the reason you fled Evan, yes. But not the only one. You left a trail of unfinished business, Carter. Like this." He pulled a small, velvet-lined box from his tailored jacket. It rested on the counter, catching the weak light from the single bulb above the stove. Inside, nestled on dark velvet, was a crescent-shaped scar—the same one Aurora wore on her wrist. A childhood accident, she'd told him once, a clumsy fall from a tree. *A clumsy fall*, he'd thought, remembering the way she'd flinched when he'd touched it once, years ago. Aurora's breath hitched. She took a step towards the counter, her hand hovering near the box, then pulling back. "How did you get this?" Her voice was a whisper, thick with disbelief. "Trade." Lucien's smile was cold, sharp. "A favor owed. You remember the deal we made in that rain-soaked alley behind the Golden Empress? The one where you thought you were selling me information, but I was actually buying your silence?" He tapped the box with a manicured nail. "Your silence about what you saw that night. About the demon in the alley. About what you *knew*." Aurora stared at the scar, then at Lucien, the pieces clicking into place with a sickening certainty. The memory flooded back—the alley, the rain, the creature with eyes like shattered glass, and Lucien's voice, calm and commanding, telling her to forget. To never speak of it. And she had. For years. But the scar on her wrist was a constant reminder. "You used me," she breathed, the accusation hanging heavy in the air, thick with the smell of copper and old paper. "Used you?" Lucien's laugh was devoid of warmth. "I protected you, Carter. From yourself. From the truth. And now, the truth is coming back to bite us both." He pushed off the counter, his movements precise, predatory. "The demon is waking. And it remembers you. It remembers what you saw. What you *know*. And it wants answers. Answers only you can give." Aurora backed away, her heart hammering against her ribs. The flat felt suddenly too small, the walls closing in. The cat's frantic scratching from the kitchen was a frantic heartbeat. "You're lying," she said, her voice trembling despite her efforts to sound defiant. "I don't know anything." Lucien's amber eye narrowed. "Oh, but you do. You saw its mark. You saw its hunger. And you saw me stop it. You saw the price paid." He took another step closer, the box of scars held out between them like a weapon. "Now, Carter. Tell me what you know. Before the waking begins." The silence that followed was deafening. Aurora stared at the box, then at Lucien's unwavering gaze, the amber eye holding hers captive. The scent of copper grew stronger, mingling with the smell of old paper and fear. Outside, the city murmured, oblivious. Inside Eva's flat, the past had walked in, and the future was closing in fast.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"gloom"
2"silence"
3"velvet"
4"whisper"
5"shattered"
6"reminder"
7"warmth"
8"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"k with disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords9
totalWords862
ratio0.01
matches
0"Who the hell—"
1"thud"
2"A clumsy fall"
3"knew"
4"know"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount631
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Aurora8
Lucien8
Eva1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.866
windowScore0.667
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if willing it to open again"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount862
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
35.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean66.31
std18.28
cv0.276
sampleLengths
072
169
280
377
455
5109
632
766
882
962
1047
1154
1257
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"were clipped"
70.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs103
matches
0"was deafening"
1"was closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences60
ratio0.067
matches
0"*Who the hell—* She yanked the door open, not bothering with the deadbolts."
1"The flat behind her was a cramped fortress of books and notes, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something metallic—copper, perhaps."
2"Inside, nestled on dark velvet, was a crescent-shaped scar—the same one Aurora wore on her wrist."
3"The memory flooded back—the alley, the rain, the creature with eyes like shattered glass, and Lucien's voice, calm and commanding, telling her to forget."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount639
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, velvet-lined box"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03129890453834116
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004694835680751174
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean14.37
std8.46
cv0.589
sampleLengths
09
16
23
318
45
513
618
714
815
912
1019
119
1212
1310
1414
1525
1619
174
1810
1926
2016
2121
2218
2325
2412
2514
2633
2716
2816
2913
3017
313
3216
3313
346
3542
3618
3717
3824
395
403
412
4210
4321
448
4529
4625
479
4810
4911
76.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners30
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Then three more."
ratio0.019
84.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her breath fogged the surface."
1"His face was a mask"
2"His voice was a low"
3"He tilted his head, the"
4"She took a step back,"
5"He held up a hand,"
6"He stepped over the threshold,"
7"Her voice was tight, the"
8"He leaned against the flimsy"
9"He pulled a small, velvet-lined"
10"It rested on the counter,"
11"She took a step towards"
12"Her voice was a whisper,"
13"He tapped the box with"
14"she breathed, the accusation hanging"
15"He pushed off the counter,"
16"she said, her voice trembling"
17"He took another step closer,"
ratio0.34
44.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences53
matches
0"The brass knockerhammered a staccato"
1"Aurora Carter, half-hidden behind the"
2"Her breath fogged the surface."
3"The hallway beyond was a"
4"Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate"
5"His face was a mask"
6"His voice was a low"
7"He tilted his head, the"
8"Aurora didn't flinch, though her"
9"The words were clipped, defensive"
10"She took a step back,"
11"The flat behind her was"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt"
13"Lucien didn't move forward."
14"He held up a hand,"
15"He stepped over the threshold,"
16"The door swung shut behind"
17"The cat's frantic scratching from"
18"Aurora crossed her arms, her"
19"Her voice was tight, the"
ratio0.83
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"To never speak of it."
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She took a step towards the counter, her hand hovering near the box, then pulling back."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stepped, his polished shoes clicking on the worn linoleum"
1"He pushed, his movements precise, predatory"
2"she said, her voice trembling despite her efforts to sound defiant"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.1
81.1536%