Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08M080S8M73PV5RE1V96K

Run Details

Duration:
2m 5s
Cost:
$0.002475
Provider:
Inceptron

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ambulance lights painted the tunnel walls in alternating red and white, but Detective Harlow Quinn had stopped seeing them ten minutes ago. She stood at the edge of the crime scene—if you could call it that—her hands clasped behind her back, her posture rigid enough to drill through concrete. The body lay sprawled between two abandoned ticket barriers, the man's face turned toward the arched ceiling as though he'd been watching something fall. "Detective?" DC Marcus Webb appeared at her elbow, his notebook already open. "Forensics are almost done with photos. They're waiting on your call." "What have we got?" "Victim is males, mid-thirties. No ID, no wallet. Multiple contusions to the head, consistent with a fall—or being struck. There's a gash on the back of his skull that went through to the bone." Webb flipped a page. "No visible weapon at the scene. No witnesses yet, though there were apparently vendors operating here until about nine. They cleared out fast when the body was found." Quinn finally moved, stepping closer to the body without crossing the evidence markers. The man's clothes were ordinary—jeans, a grey hoodie, trainers that had seen better days. Nothing that marked him as anything other than another anonymous figure in London. But his hands told a different story. She crouched, ignoring the protest from her knees, and studied his fingers. "His hands," she said. Webb leaned in. "What about them?" "Calluses. Here, and here." She pointed without touching. "Friction marks consistent with climbing. Rope work, possibly. And there's residue under his nails—dark, powdery." "Could be from a fall. Concrete dust." "Could be." Quinn stood, her gaze moving past the body to the far wall of the tunnel. Her eyes narrowed. "Who found him?" "A street sweeper. Apparently she comes through this section every morning at five to clear the trash. She called it in at five-fifteen." "What time did the market close?" "The—" Webb stopped, his brow furrowing. "Market?" "The Veil Market." Quinn said the words carefully, tasting them. She'd heard the name three times in the past month, always in connection with cases that didn't quite close, always from witnesses who clammed up the moment she pushed. "This tunnel. It's not just abandoned. There's a black market operates here. Supernatural goods, enchanted items, information that shouldn't exist." Webb's expression flickered—skepticism held in careful check. "I'm not familiar with—" "No. You're not." Quinn turned back to the body. "Neither was I, six months ago. But I've been collecting reports. Unusual purchases. People who vanish for hours and return changed. Deaths that get classified as accidents or natural causes because no one thinks to look deeper." She gestured at the tunnel around them. "Until now." "Detective Quinn." Webb's voice had gone careful, the tone officers used when they thought someone had crossed a line. "Are you suggesting this is connected to... what, exactly?" "I'm not suggesting anything yet." She walked toward the far wall, her footsteps echoing in the empty space. The red and white lights still pulsed, but they'd become background noise. She was looking at the wall—really looking—at the decades of grime and older stains, the water damage and the graffiti that had been painted over twice. There. She stopped. The graffiti was fresh. Not fresh in the way of days or weeks, but fresh compared to everything else around it. Someone had sprayed a symbol in black—a circle bisected by a vertical line, with smaller markings clustered at the top and bottom. It looked almost like a rune, or a sigil, or— "A ward," she murmured. "What?" Quinn pulled out her phone and took several photographs, angling the shots to capture the symbol along with the surrounding area. Her mind raced through the fragments she'd gathered over months of quiet investigation. Protective circles. Binding marks. The kind of things that existed in mythology books and, increasingly, in case files that got buried in the system. "Get CSU back over here," she said. "I need this wall processed. The paint, the surface beneath it, everything." " we've already—" "We didn't process the wall. We processed the body." Quinn turned back to her colleague, and for the first time that morning, something like emotion crossed her face. It wasn't quite anger. It wasn't quite grief. It was older than both. "This man didn't fall, Webb. He was trying to escape something. And that something is in this tunnel." She moved past him, back toward the crime scene, but her thoughts had already leapt forward. The calluses on his hands suggested he'd descended on a rope—not the action of a man who'd simply wandered into an abandoned station. The fresh ward suggested someone had been preparing for something, or sealing something away. The absence of a weapon didn't mean there hadn't been one; it meant the weapon had been taken, or had never been meant to stay. And the vendors who'd cleared out so quickly—their speed spoke of fear, not just discretion. "Run the victim's prints," she said. "I want to know who he is. And I want a list of everyone who had a stall or a pitch at this location on market nights for the past three months." "Detective Quinn—" "I know what I'm asking." She met his gaze steadily. "I know how it sounds. But I've spent three years chasing ghosts, Webb. Three years watching cases close with explanations that didn't hold up, watching witnesses disappear, watching my partner—" Her voice caught. She buried it. "I know what's out there. And I know that ignoring it doesn't make it go away." The ambulance lights continued their patient rhythm. Somewhere above them, London stirred toward morning, oblivious to what lay beneath its streets. But Quinn had stopped looking at the surface a long time ago. She knelt beside the body once more, studying the man's face—the slack features, the half-closed eyes that had seen their last moment. In his pocket, her flashlight caught a glint of something small and pale. She pulled out a bone token. The size of a coin, carved with symbols she couldn't read, warm to the touch in a way that stone should never be. She turned it over, and theambulance lights caught on the surface, and for a moment, she could have sworn the markings shifted. "Webb." Her voice was quiet now, almost reverent. "Call for backup. Full backup. And find me someone who knows about this market—who knows the people who run it." She closed her fingers around the token, feeling its impossible warmth against her palm. "Because I have a feeling we're not done here." Above them, the first grey light of dawn began to seep down the station's stairs. But in the tunnel, the shadows remained deep and undisturbed, and Quinn knew, with the certainty that had settled into her bones over three years of unanswered questions, that they had only just begun to scratch the surface. The evidence, at last, was beginning to add up. And what it added up to was something she wasn't sure the Metropolitan Police was ready to face.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn turned back [back]"
1"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.878
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.098
87.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"furrowing"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"processed"
count2
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"furrowing"
1"flickered"
2"familiar"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"pulsed"
6"raced"
7"processed"
8"glint"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1179
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount780
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Webb"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Marcus1
Webb6
London2
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marcus"
3"Webb"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.923
windowScore0.667
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite close, always from witnesses who clammed up the moment she pushed"
1"something like emotion crossed her face"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.848
wordCount1179
matches
0"Not fresh in the way of days or weeks, but fresh compared to everything else around it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.03
std23.93
cv0.771
sampleLengths
074
123
24
366
459
54
66
723
87
923
1023
116
127
1359
1411
1555
1628
1756
183
1953
204
211
2258
2319
243
2559
2678
2715
2838
292
3062
3133
3235
336
3445
3551
3653
3727
89.07% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences65
matches
0"been painted"
1"got buried"
2"been taken"
3"been meant"
93.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was looking"
1"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences87
ratio0.115
matches
0"She stood at the edge of the crime scene—if you could call it that—her hands clasped behind her back, her posture rigid enough to drill through concrete."
1"The man's clothes were ordinary—jeans, a grey hoodie, trainers that had seen better days."
2"Webb's expression flickered—skepticism held in careful check."
3"She was looking at the wall—really looking—at the decades of grime and older stains, the water damage and the graffiti that had been painted over twice."
4"Someone had sprayed a symbol in black—a circle bisected by a vertical line, with smaller markings clustered at the top and bottom."
5"It looked almost like a rune, or a sigil, or—"
6"The calluses on his hands suggested he'd descended on a rope—not the action of a man who'd simply wandered into an abandoned station."
7"The absence of a weapon didn't mean there hadn't been one; it meant the weapon had been taken, or had never been meant to stay."
8"And the vendors who'd cleared out so quickly—their speed spoke of fear, not just discretion."
9"She knelt beside the body once more, studying the man's face—the slack features, the half-closed eyes that had seen their last moment."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03666245259165613
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010113780025284451
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.55
std9.88
cv0.729
sampleLengths
023
127
224
312
411
54
638
728
813
914
1013
117
1212
134
143
153
168
1715
187
1917
203
213
2223
236
246
251
2610
2729
2820
297
304
319
3244
332
3419
359
3618
3712
3826
391
402
414
4217
4322
4410
454
461
4721
4813
492
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4482758620689655
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners39
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Somewhere above them, London stirred"
ratio0.018
65.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences57
matches
0"She stood at the edge"
1"She crouched, ignoring the protest"
2"She pointed without touching"
3"Her eyes narrowed."
4"She'd heard the name three"
5"She gestured at the tunnel"
6"She walked toward the far"
7"She was looking at the"
8"It looked almost like a"
9"Her mind raced through the"
10"It wasn't quite anger."
11"It wasn't quite grief."
12"It was older than both."
13"She moved past him, back"
14"She met his gaze steadily"
15"Her voice caught"
16"She buried it."
17"She knelt beside the body"
18"She pulled out a bone"
19"She turned it over, and"
ratio0.386
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences57
matches
0"The ambulance lights painted the"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"The body lay sprawled between"
3"DC Marcus Webb appeared at"
4"Webb flipped a page"
5"Quinn finally moved, stepping closer"
6"The man's clothes were ordinary—jeans,"
7"Nothing that marked him as"
8"She crouched, ignoring the protest"
9"Webb leaned in."
10"She pointed without touching"
11"Quinn stood, her gaze moving"
12"Her eyes narrowed."
13"Webb stopped, his brow furrowing"
14"Quinn said the words carefully,"
15"She'd heard the name three"
16"Webb's expression flickered—skepticism held in"
17"Quinn turned back to the"
18"She gestured at the tunnel"
19"Webb's voice had gone careful,"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The body lay sprawled between two abandoned ticket barriers, the man's face turned toward the arched ceiling as though he'd been watching something fall."
1"She'd heard the name three times in the past month, always in connection with cases that didn't quite close, always from witnesses who clammed up the moment she…"
2"She was looking at the wall—really looking—at the decades of grime and older stains, the water damage and the graffiti that had been painted over twice."
3"The calluses on his hands suggested he'd descended on a rope—not the action of a man who'd simply wandered into an abandoned station."
4"She knelt beside the body once more, studying the man's face—the slack features, the half-closed eyes that had seen their last moment."
5"But in the tunnel, the shadows remained deep and undisturbed, and Quinn knew, with the certainty that had settled into her bones over three years of unanswered …"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"DC Marcus Webb appeared, his notebook already open"
1"Webb stopped, his brow furrowing"
2"She walked, her footsteps echoing in the empty space"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.244
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.049
76.0235%