Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08TP63XQQVSWK6AZC52DC

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.014020
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing in the dim hallway, her bright blue eyes catching the light from the streetlamp outside. She hesitated, her hand still on the doorframe, as if the threshold was a barrier she wasn't sure she wanted to cross. The air was thick with the scent of spices from the curry house below, mingling with the faint aroma of old paper and ink that wafted from inside the flat. Lucien Moreau stood in the center of the room, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and the other black, locked onto hers with an intensity that made her heart skip. The ivory-handled cane rested against the arm of a worn armchair, its blade hidden but ever-present, much like the tension between them. "Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth, carrying a hint of his French accent that always seemed to linger in the air like a whispered secret. She stepped inside, closing the door behind her with a soft click. "Lucien," she replied, her tone neutral, though the undercurrent of emotion was undeniable. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meandered over, weaving between her legs before settling on the armchair, his eyes half-closed in feline indifference. Rory's gaze flickered to the cat, grateful for the distraction, however brief. "You didn't call," Lucien remarked, his eyes never leaving her face. "I didn't think I needed to," she countered, crossing her arms over her chest. The crescent-shaped scar on her wrist caught the light, a silent reminder of past wounds, both physical and emotional. Lucien's lips curved into a faint smile, one that didn't quite reach his eyes. "You always did have a way of surprising me." Rory shrugged, feigning nonchalance. "I thought you liked surprises." He chuckled, a low sound that resonated in the small space. "Only when they're pleasant." The silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words and unresolved feelings. Rory glanced around the flat, noting the stacks of books and scrolls that seemed to multiply since her last visit. Eva's research notes were scattered across the table, a testament to her friend's relentless pursuit of knowledge. "Eva's not here," Lucien said, as if reading her thoughts. "She left for a conference in Edinburgh." Rory nodded, her mind racing with questions she wasn't sure she wanted answers to. "I know. She mentioned it." Lucien moved closer, his presence commanding yet oddly comforting. "Then why are you here, Rory?" She met his gaze, her heart pounding in her chest. "I needed to see you." His expression softened, the guarded look in his eyes giving way to something more vulnerable. "It's been a while." "Too long," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien reached for her hand, his touch gentle yet firm. "I've missed you." The admission hung in the air, a fragile truth that threatened to shatter the delicate balance they maintained. Rory's breath caught, the weight of his words settling over her like a warm blanket on a cold night. "I've missed you too," she confessed, her defenses crumbling under the weight of their shared history. Lucien's thumb brushed over her scar, a tender gesture that spoke volumes. "I never wanted to hurt you." "I know," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. "But you did." He nodded, accepting the truth with a solemnity that was rare for him. "I regret it." Rory's heart ached with the memory of their last encounter, the harsh words and bitter accusations that had driven them apart. Yet here they were, drawn together by forces neither could fully understand. "Can we start over?" Lucien asked, his tone earnest, devoid of the usual bravado. She hesitated, the fear of repeating past mistakes looming large. But the hope in his eyes, the sincerity in his voice, was enough to tip the scales. "Maybe," she replied, a tentative smile tugging at her lips. "If we take it slow." Lucien's smile widened, genuine and full of promise. "Slow sounds perfect." Ptolemy stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled back into his nap. Rory laughed softly, the sound breaking the tension and filling the room with warmth. "He's always liked you," Lucien observed, nodding towards the cat. "He's a good judge of character," Rory teased, her eyes sparkling with mischief. Lucien chuckled, the sound rich and full of life. "Then I suppose I'm in good company." Rory's heart swelled with a mix of relief and anticipation. The road ahead was uncertain, but for the first time in a long while, she felt ready to face it. "Do you want to stay?" Lucien asked, his voice gentle, offering her a choice she hadn't expected. She considered the question, the implications of her answer. But as she looked into his eyes, she knew the decision had already been made. "Yes," she replied, her voice firm, filled with a newfound resolve. Lucien's smile was radiant, a beacon in the darkness that had once surrounded them. "Then let's make the most of it." Rory nodded, her heart light, her spirit buoyed by the promise of a fresh start. Together, they would navigate the complexities of their past, forging a path towards a future that was theirs to shape. As the night deepened, the world outside faded away, leaving only the two of them, bound by the ties of love and the hope of redemption.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount901
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"lazily"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount901
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"tension"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"resonated"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"encounter"
count1
14
word"looming"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"anticipation"
count1
18
word"newfound"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
20
word"radiant"
count1
21
word"beacon"
count1
22
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"tension"
2"flickered"
3"reminder"
4"resonated"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"testament"
8"racing"
9"comforting"
10"pounding"
11"whisper"
12"weight"
13"encounter"
14"looming"
15"perfect"
16"warmth"
17"anticipation"
18"newfound"
19"resolve"
20"radiant"
21"beacon"
22"navigate"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"the weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences55
matches
0"m with warmth"
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords897
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount772
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy2
Rory10
Lucien13
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.658
windowScore0.667
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"as if reading her thoughts"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount897
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean23
std13.73
cv0.597
sampleLengths
075
160
225
325
433
511
633
723
89
915
1049
1117
1219
1315
1415
1519
1610
1713
1837
1916
2018
2114
2216
2333
2414
2527
2615
2711
2827
2910
3013
3116
3230
3317
3424
3511
3621
3735
3826
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"were, drawn"
1"been made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount776
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02190721649484536
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00902061855670103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean12.63
std6.12
cv0.485
sampleLengths
023
122
230
318
420
522
625
712
813
921
1012
1111
1214
1319
1414
159
164
175
1811
194
2012
2120
2217
2310
247
2514
265
279
286
2910
305
3115
324
3310
3410
353
3618
3719
3816
3912
406
4111
423
4313
443
4521
4612
4714
4810
4917
52.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences55
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand still"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
3"She stepped inside, closing the"
4"she replied, her tone neutral,"
5"she countered, crossing her arms"
6"He chuckled, a low sound"
7"She met his gaze, her"
8"His expression softened, the guarded"
9"she admitted, her voice barely"
10"she confessed, her defenses crumbling"
11"she replied, her voice steady"
12"He nodded, accepting the truth"
13"She hesitated, the fear of"
14"she replied, a tentative smile"
15"She considered the question, the"
16"she replied, her voice firm,"
ratio0.309
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences55
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"She hesitated, her hand still"
2"The air was thick with"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
5"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
7"She stepped inside, closing the"
8"she replied, her tone neutral,"
9"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meandered"
10"Rory's gaze flickered to the"
11"Lucien remarked, his eyes never"
12"she countered, crossing her arms"
13"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
14"Lucien's lips curved into a"
15"Rory shrugged, feigning nonchalance."
16"He chuckled, a low sound"
17"The silence stretched between them,"
18"Rory glanced around the flat,"
19"Eva's research notes were scattered"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand still on the doorframe, as if the threshold was a barrier she wasn't sure she wanted to cross."
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and the other black, locked onto hers with an intensity that made her heart skip."
2"The admission hung in the air, a fragile truth that threatened to shatter the delicate balance they maintained."
3"Lucien's thumb brushed over her scar, a tender gesture that spoke volumes."
4"He nodded, accepting the truth with a solemnity that was rare for him."
5"Rory's heart ached with the memory of their last encounter, the harsh words and bitter accusations that had driven them apart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Lucien said, as if reading her thoughts"
1"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she confessed, her defenses crumbling under the weight of their shared history"
3"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
4"Lucien asked, his tone earnest, devoid of the usual bravado"
5"she replied, a tentative smile tugging at her lips"
6"Rory teased, her eyes sparkling with mischief"
7"she replied, her voice firm, filled with a newfound resolve"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she confessed (confess)"
2"Lucien observed (observe)"
3"Rory teased (tease)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.267
70.5905%