Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08YTFHW2NYK3PC7PEV6MT

Run Details

Duration:
54.7s
Cost:
$0.134730

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock rattled through Eva's flat like thunder. Rory froze, chopsticks halfway to her mouth, curry dripping onto the takeaway container balanced on her knee. Nobody visited Eva's place. Three deadbolts and a reputation for hexing unwanted guests saw to that. Another knock, sharper this time. "Eva's not here," Rory called through the door. She set the curry aside and padded barefoot across the cluttered floor, dodging stacks of grimoires and Ptolemy's swishing tail. "I know." The voice on the other side made her stomach drop. Smooth as aged whiskey, with that hint of Marseille that crept in when he was tired. "Open the door, Aurora." She pressed her forehead against the wood, heart hammering. Three months since she'd last heard that voice. Three months since she'd walked out of his Mayfair office with her dignity in tatters and a promise to never darken his doorstep again. "How did you find me?" "I'm an information broker. Finding people is rather the point." "Go away, Lucien." Silence stretched between them, broken only by Ptolemy's curious mrow as he wound around her ankles. Then came the soft tap of his cane against the door — ivory on wood, a sound she'd know anywhere. "I have information about Evan." The name hit her like ice water. Her fingers moved to the deadbolts before she could stop herself, working each lock with practiced efficiency. The door swung open to reveal Lucien Moreau in all his immaculate glory — charcoal suit without a wrinkle, platinum hair catching the dim hallway light. His heterochromatic eyes met hers, amber and black, and for a moment neither of them breathed. "You look well." His gaze traveled over her delivery uniform, the curry stain on her collar, her bare feet. "The glamorous life of a fugitive." "What do you want?" He shifted his weight on the cane, a tell she recognized. Lucien only leaned on it when genuinely tired, too proud to show weakness otherwise. Dark circles shadowed his eyes. "May I come in?" "That depends. Are you here as Lucien or as Moreau the Fixer?" "Which would you prefer?" She stepped aside without answering, and he crossed the threshold with careful grace. Ptolemy immediately began investigating his trouser legs, purring like a motorboat. "Traitor," Rory muttered at the cat. Lucien surveyed the chaos of Eva's flat — books piled on every surface, crystals humming with latent energy, herbs drying from the ceiling beams. His nose wrinkled at the competing scents of sage and curry. "Charming. Very... atmospheric." "Not all of us can afford Mayfair." She crossed her arms. "Talk. What about Evan?" He turned to face her, and she caught something in his expression before he smoothed it away. Pain? Regret? With Lucien, emotions were currency, shown only when they served a purpose. "He's in London." The words landed like a physical blow. She gripped the back of Eva's ancient sofa, knuckles white. "That's impossible. The restraining order—" "Means nothing to someone with his connections." Lucien's cane traced patterns on the worn carpet. "He arrived two days ago. He's been asking questions about you." "And naturally, you came to warn me out of the goodness of your heart." His jaw tightened. "Contrary to your stellar opinion of my character, I don't actually wish to see you harmed." "You made that abundantly clear three months ago." The temperature in the room seemed to drop. Ptolemy stopped purring, sensing the shift in atmosphere. Lucien's eyes — both of them — darkened. "As I recall, you were the one who walked out." "After you chose a business deal over—" She bit off the words, turning away. Through Eva's grimy window, she could see the curry house's neon sign flickering. "It doesn't matter now." "Doesn't it?" She heard him move closer, the soft tap of his cane marking each step. He smelled the same — cardamom and expensive cologne, with that underlying hint of brimstone that marked his heritage. It made her chest ache. "Rory." "Don't." She kept her eyes fixed on the window. "Just tell me what you know about Evan and go." "He's staying at the Dorchester under an assumed name. He's been in contact with several... unsavory individuals. The kind who specialize in finding people who don't want to be found." "Bounty hunters?" "Among other things." His reflection appeared in the window beside hers. "He knows you're in London. It's only a matter of time before he narrows down where." She laughed, bitter and sharp. "And I suppose you're offering your protection? For a price, of course." "I'm offering you information. What you do with it is your choice." "How generous." She spun to face him, anger finally overtaking caution. "Tell me, Lucien, what's the going rate for selling out someone you claimed to care about? Did Evan offer you thirty pieces of silver, or did you hold out for more?" His cane hit the floor with a crack that made Ptolemy bolt for the bedroom. For a moment, Lucien's carefully constructed mask slipped entirely. The amber eye blazed while the black one seemed to swallow light, and she remembered with sudden clarity that he was only half human. "I never sold you out." "Then how does he know I'm in London?" "Because he hired someone else. Someone without my... scruples." The word dripped irony. "I've spent the last two weeks feeding false leads to every information broker in the city. Why do you think he hasn't found you yet?" The revelation knocked the wind from her sails. She sank onto the sofa's arm, suddenly exhausted. "Why would you do that?" "You know why." The words hung between them, heavy with everything they'd left unspoken. Lucien moved closer, close enough that she could see the faint lines of fatigue around his eyes, the slight tremor in his cane hand. "I couldn't give you what you wanted," he said quietly. "My nature, my business, the things I am... they're incompatible with the life you deserve. But that doesn't mean I stopped—" He broke off, jaw working. "It doesn't mean I want you hurt." "You did hurt me." "I know." They stood frozen, inches apart but separated by miles of pride and pain. Somewhere below, the curry house's music drifted up through the floorboards, a Bollywood love song that felt like mockery.
total_cost0.13473

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.04
85.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"constructed"
5"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1051
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount668
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Ptolemy5
Smooth1
Marseille1
Mayfair1
Lucien8
Moreau1
Through1
Bollywood1
Rory3
Three3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Through"
5"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.901
windowScore0.833
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like mockery"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1051
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean19.11
std15.26
cv0.799
sampleLengths
041
15
228
332
441
55
610
73
836
95
1066
1125
124
1330
144
1512
164
1724
186
1935
203
2115
2231
233
2417
255
2626
2714
2819
298
3024
3110
3231
332
3438
351
3619
3730
382
3927
4017
4112
4242
4348
445
458
4638
4716
485
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences97
ratio0.052
matches
0"Then came the soft tap of his cane against the door — ivory on wood, a sound she'd know anywhere."
1"The door swung open to reveal Lucien Moreau in all his immaculate glory — charcoal suit without a wrinkle, platinum hair catching the dim hallway light."
2"Lucien surveyed the chaos of Eva's flat — books piled on every surface, crystals humming with latent energy, herbs drying from the ceiling beams."
3"Lucien's eyes — both of them — darkened."
4"He smelled the same — cardamom and expensive cologne, with that underlying hint of brimstone that marked his heritage."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount662
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03927492447129909
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01661631419939577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean10.84
std6.84
cv0.632
sampleLengths
08
117
24
312
45
58
620
712
816
94
109
118
1224
135
1410
153
1616
1720
185
197
2017
2126
2216
2319
246
254
2611
2714
285
294
3012
314
3213
3311
346
3524
3611
373
3811
394
4017
411
421
4312
443
457
4610
475
4815
4911
86.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5257731958762887
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"Then came the soft tap"
1"Somewhere below, the curry house's"
ratio0.034
47.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences58
matches
0"She set the curry aside"
1"She pressed her forehead against"
2"Her fingers moved to the"
3"His heterochromatic eyes met hers,"
4"His gaze traveled over her"
5"He shifted his weight on"
6"She stepped aside without answering,"
7"His nose wrinkled at the"
8"She crossed her arms"
9"He turned to face her,"
10"She gripped the back of"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"She bit off the words,"
13"She heard him move closer,"
14"He smelled the same —"
15"It made her chest ache."
16"She kept her eyes fixed"
17"His reflection appeared in the"
18"She laughed, bitter and sharp."
19"She spun to face him,"
ratio0.431
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences58
matches
0"The knock rattled through Eva's"
1"Rory froze, chopsticks halfway to"
2"Nobody visited Eva's place."
3"Another knock, sharper this time."
4"Rory called through the door"
5"She set the curry aside"
6"The voice on the other"
7"She pressed her forehead against"
8"Silence stretched between them, broken"
9"The name hit her like"
10"Her fingers moved to the"
11"The door swung open to"
12"His heterochromatic eyes met hers,"
13"His gaze traveled over her"
14"He shifted his weight on"
15"Lucien only leaned on it"
16"She stepped aside without answering,"
17"Ptolemy immediately began investigating his"
18"Rory muttered at the cat"
19"Lucien surveyed the chaos of"
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He smelled the same — cardamom and expensive cologne, with that underlying hint of brimstone that marked his heritage."
1"His cane hit the floor with a crack that made Ptolemy bolt for the bedroom."
2"Somewhere below, the curry house's music drifted up through the floorboards, a Bollywood love song that felt like mockery."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.06
leniency0.12
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.04
85.9293%