| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.212 | | leniency | 0.423 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1695 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1695 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "resonance" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1683 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1024 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aramaic | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 3 | | Avaros | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Cardiff | 1 | | East | 1 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Aramaic" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "East" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1683 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 25.89 | | std | 19.3 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 104 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 57 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of him hit me immediately—expensive sandalwood, old parchment, and the sharp, ozone tang of Avaros that always clung to his skin like a second shadow." | | 1 | "Every surface was a disaster of Eva’s making—occult books splayed open, dried herbs spilling from glass jars, and Ptolemy the tabby cat perched atop a pile of research notes." | | 2 | "I crossed my arms, the small crescent scar on my wrist itching—a ghost of an old trauma meeting the reality of a new one." | | 3 | "For a moment, the mask of the dapper fixer slipped, and I saw something raw behind those mismatched eyes—a hunger that had nothing to do with the supernatural underworld." | | 4 | "He looked around the flat—at the scrolls, the tabby cat, the mess of a life I was trying to build out of scraps." | | 5 | "I looked at the hallway—the three deadbolts I had thought made me safe." | | 6 | "Static hummed in the air—the taste of copper and ozone." | | 7 | "I scrambled onto the fire escape, the cold metal biting into my feet, but as I reached for the railing, a hand—solid, warm, and horrifyingly familiar—clutched my ankle from the darkness below." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1033 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03388189738625363 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013552758954501452 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 14.26 | | std | 9.17 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 39.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2966101694915254 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "I pulled the door open," | | 1 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 2 | "His charcoal suit bore not" | | 3 | "I looked down." | | 4 | "I’d forgotten the cracked glass" | | 5 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 6 | "He never did." | | 7 | "It was a smell that" | | 8 | "He navigated the cramped living" | | 9 | "He merely pointed the tip" | | 10 | "I said, leaning against the" | | 11 | "His movements were deliberate, a" | | 12 | "I crossed my arms, the" | | 13 | "He stepped toward me" | | 14 | "He reached out, his thumb" | | 15 | "I didn't flinch." | | 16 | "I let him feel the" | | 17 | "It wasn't fear, not entirely." | | 18 | "It was the devastating, familiar" | | 19 | "His hand shifted, sliding up" |
| | ratio | 0.557 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt groaned, a" | | 1 | "I pulled the door open," | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 4 | "His charcoal suit bore not" | | 5 | "The amber eye caught the" | | 6 | "I looked down." | | 7 | "A steady drip of crimson" | | 8 | "I’d forgotten the cracked glass" | | 9 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 10 | "He never did." | | 11 | "Lucien stepped past me, the" | | 12 | "The scent of him hit" | | 13 | "It was a smell that" | | 14 | "He navigated the cramped living" | | 15 | "Every surface was a disaster" | | 16 | "The cat hissed, fur spiking" | | 17 | "Lucien didn't flinch." | | 18 | "He merely pointed the tip" | | 19 | "I said, leaning against the" |
| | ratio | 0.971 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt groaned, a stubborn, metallic protest that echoed through the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat." | | 1 | "The amber eye caught the flickering bulb of the hallway, glowing with a predatory warmth that contrasted sharply with the cold, dead black of its twin." | | 2 | "It was a smell that reminded me of things I had spent ninety days trying to bury: the way his hands felt on my waist in the back of a moving car, and the way he…" | | 3 | "I crossed my arms, the small crescent scar on my wrist itching—a ghost of an old trauma meeting the reality of a new one." | | 4 | "It was the devastating, familiar hum of an attraction that bypassed logic and went straight for the marrow." | | 5 | "For a moment, the mask of the dapper fixer slipped, and I saw something raw behind those mismatched eyes—a hunger that had nothing to do with the supernatural u…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He reached out, his thumb grazing the line of my throat" | | 1 | "I asked, my voice trembling despite my best efforts" | | 2 | "he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes narrowing as he turned toward the door" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "I stammered (stammer)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "he hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |