Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT08ZXEGWQ8Q5YEVP7PBYP8

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.037870
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt had barely clicked open when the fist came down on the door again, two sharp raps that rattled the cheap wood in its frame. My hand froze on the knob, a fresh wave of adrenaline souring my tongue. Eva had taught me the sequence: unlock, check the peephole, then unlatch the chain. I never skipped it. Not since Evan. But the courier bike was double-parked, the cold prawn dumplings for table seven were getting colder, and my patience was thinner than cheap rice paper. I yanked the door open. “I’m coming, for God’s sake, keep your…” The words died in my throat. It wasn’t a disgruntled neighbour or a lost tourist. Standing in the cramped, curry-scented landing was a man I had prayed I would never see again. Lucien Moreau. He was exactly as I remembered, a sharp-edged phantom carved from smoke and secrets. The platinum blond hair was slicked back from his high forehead, catching the dim landing light. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, a stark offence against the grimy reality of Brick Lane. One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane; the other was braced against the doorframe, holding it open. His eyes, one the colour of warm amber, the other a pit of polished jet, fixed on me. They stripped away the delivery uniform, the dingy flat, the last two years of carefully constructed anonymity. “Aurora.” His voice was a low velvet rasp, the French accent curling around my name like a caress and a threat all at once. My heart hammered against my ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. My fingers tightened on the edge of the door, knuckles white. “It’s Rory now.” A faint smile touched his lips, a subtle, dangerous thing. “Is it? I always preferred Laila.” The name landed like a punch to the gut. Laila was a ghost, buried deep with a life I’d torched to the ground. Only a handful of people had ever known that name. Most of them were dead. “What do you want, Lucien?” “A charming welcome. Perhaps a cup of tea?” He peered past me into the flat’s cluttered interior. Books overflowed from shelves, papyrus scrolls were stacked precariously on the coffee table, and a half-eaten bowl of cereal sat on the arm of the sofa. “Or has domesticity eluded you still?” “I’m busy.” I pushed against the door, but his hand didn’t move. It was like trying to shift granite. “You’re delivering lukewarm seafood for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress,” he corrected softly. “A significant departure from your previous vocation. Less lucrative, I imagine. But safer.” His gaze flickered down, a knowing look. “Or so you hoped.” The curry smell from the restaurant below seemed to thicken, clawing at the back of my throat. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat, appeared at my ankles, letting out a low, guttural hiss in Lucien’s direction. Smart cat. “Get out.” “In a moment.” He took a deliberate step forward, forcing me to back away into the flat. The door clicked shut behind him, the sound final and damning. The three deadbolts felt like a mockery. He was inside. My sanctuary was breached. “We have something to discuss.” He moved past me, his expensive leather shoes silent on the worn floorboards. He didn’t seem to notice the chaos, the sheer mess of Eva’s obsessive research. His attention was absolute, focused only on me. It was a suffocating, familiar weight. “There’s nothing to discuss. I left. That was the end of it.” “Was it?” He stopped by a tower of books and ran a single, elegant finger over a dusty spine. The title was in ancient Sumerian. “You left a great many untidy threads, Laila. And one of them has found its way to London.” My blood ran cold. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “Don’t you?” The amber eye seemed to glow with amusement, while the black one remained flat, emotionless. The combination was dizzying. “A man has been making enquiries in the markets. Paying too much for whispers. Using your old name.” I swallowed, my throat dry. “Lots of people are named Laila.” “But not many are searching for a woman with bright blue eyes, shoulder-length black hair, and a small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist.” He tapped his ivory cane on the floor once, a sharp, resonant sound that made me flinch. He knew. Of course, he knew. He was an information broker; knowing was his trade. “He also has a fondness for cheap whiskey and breaking the fingers of those who disappoint him. Does that ring any bells, Aurora Carter?” Evan. The name was a ghost on my lips, unspoken but massive in the small room. The air crackled. Ptolemy darted under the sofa. “How?” The question was barely a whisper. I’d covered my tracks. I’d changed my name, my city, my entire life. “You paid for a new identity with a relic you stole from the Blackwood estate,” Lucien said, his tone conversational, as if discussing the weather. “The forger you used, a man named Silas, has a weakness for gin and gossip. It wasn’t difficult to trace the breadcrumbs back to his little establishment. Evan, it seems, is more resourceful than you gave him credit for.” Silas. My landlord. My friend. My stomach twisted into a painful knot. “Why are you here? Why are you telling me this?” “Because his inquiries have moved beyond the mortal realm.” Lucien turned to face me fully, the space between us shrinking. “He’s asking about Avaros. He’s asking about me.” His expression hardened, the playful condescension vanishing, replaced by something cold and sharp. “He is drawing the wrong kind of attention. He has become a liability. And his obsession with you is at the centre of it.” He took another step, closing the distance until I could smell the faint, clean scent of his cologne over the din of spice and old paper. Sandalwood and something else. Something metallic. Like old blood. “I left that world behind.” My voice shook, and I hated myself for it. “Did you?” His gaze dropped to my face, then lower. “The past is not a door you can simply bolt shut, my dear. Sometimes, it burns the whole house down.” He reached out, not to touch me, but to brush a stray piece of lint from the shoulder of my uniform. The gesture was intimate, proprietary. It made my skin crawl. I jerked back, hitting the wall. Trapped. “What do you want from me?” I finally managed, my voice raw. “For now? Information.” His eyes held mine, a silent, swirling vortex. “Then, cooperation. Evan is a problem. You and I, we are going to solve it.” My mind raced, searching for an escape, an angle, an out. There was none. He had me cornered, just as he always had. He knew my real name, my old name, my secrets. And now, he knew my greatest fear. “And if I refuse?” Lucien’s smile returned, wider this time, but it held no warmth. It was the baring of teeth. He reached into the inner pocket of his suit jacket and pulled out a small, folded piece of paper. He flicked it open. It was a photograph, slightly crumpled. He held it out for me to see. It was my parents, Brendan and Jennifer, walking arm in arm down a street in Cardiff, blissfully unaware they were being watched.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.054
87.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood Estate"
47.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"constructed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"constructed"
2"velvet"
3"flickered"
4"sanctuary"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"whisper"
9"stomach"
10"raced"
11"warmth"
12"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount892
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Evan2
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
French1
Books1
Eva3
Lucien5
Sumerian1
Silas1
Brendan1
Jennifer1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Evan"
1"Moreau"
2"Books"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
6"Brendan"
7"Jennifer"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a mockery"
1"as if discussing the weather"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.806
wordCount1240
matches
0"not to touch me, but to brush a stray piece of lint from the shoulder of my unifo"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"known that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.52
std23.74
cv0.804
sampleLengths
087
15
27
332
42
5101
624
723
83
916
1038
115
1249
1319
1436
1537
162
1747
1841
1912
2043
2111
2239
2311
2480
251
2623
2720
2864
2912
3010
3165
3235
3314
3430
3538
3612
3726
3840
394
4054
4122
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was braced"
2"were stacked"
3"was breached"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs147
matches
0"were getting"
1"were being"
91.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences112
ratio0.018
matches
0"One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane; the other was braced against the doorframe, holding it open."
1"He was an information broker; knowing was his trade."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount896
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.033482142857142856
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013392857142857142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.07
std7.92
cv0.715
sampleLengths
027
114
214
34
43
525
65
77
86
99
1017
112
1214
1316
1416
1520
1618
1717
1824
1912
2011
213
2210
236
249
2514
2610
275
285
2917
3026
316
3212
337
3412
3520
364
3717
3818
392
402
4117
4211
437
443
454
465
4713
4814
498
55.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4107142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners46
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Only a handful of people"
1"Of course, he knew."
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences83
matches
0"My hand froze on the"
1"I never skipped it."
2"I yanked the door open."
3"It wasn’t a disgruntled neighbour"
4"He was exactly as I"
5"His tailored charcoal suit was"
6"His eyes, one the colour"
7"They stripped away the delivery"
8"His voice was a low"
9"My heart hammered against my"
10"My fingers tightened on the"
11"He peered past me into"
12"I pushed against the door,"
13"It was like trying to"
14"he corrected softly"
15"His gaze flickered down, a"
16"He took a deliberate step"
17"He was inside."
18"My sanctuary was breached."
19"He moved past me, his"
ratio0.59
20.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences83
matches
0"The third deadbolt had barely"
1"My hand froze on the"
2"Eva had taught me the"
3"I never skipped it."
4"I yanked the door open."
5"The words died in my"
6"It wasn’t a disgruntled neighbour"
7"He was exactly as I"
8"The platinum blond hair was"
9"His tailored charcoal suit was"
10"His eyes, one the colour"
11"They stripped away the delivery"
12"His voice was a low"
13"My heart hammered against my"
14"My fingers tightened on the"
15"A faint smile touched his"
16"The name landed like a"
17"Laila was a ghost, buried"
18"He peered past me into"
19"Books overflowed from shelves, papyrus"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"I pushed, but his hand didn’t move"
1"Lucien said, his tone conversational, as if discussing the weather"
2"His expression hardened, the playful condescension vanishing, replaced by something cold and sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected softly (correct)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.054
80.8704%