Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT091C34EYSFB90V4EFB790

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Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.002585
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and there he was—Lucien Moreau, leaning on his damned ivory-handled cane like he owned the place. Aurora Carter froze, her hand still clutching the doorframe, her bright blue eyes narrowing. The scent of his cologne—something woody and expensive—hit her like a punch to the gut. "You've got three seconds to explain why you're here." "Charming as ever, Rory." His voice curled around her nickname, his accent thickening the syllables in that infuriatingly smooth way she'd once found irresistible. "Two seconds." "I need your help." Her laugh was sharp, brittle. "Right. Because that worked out so well last time." "People are dying." "People die every day, Luc. Comes with being mortal." She moved to shut the door, but his cane shot out, wedging it open. "Not like this." She glared at the cane, then up at him. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, unflinching. The faint scent of copper lingered beneath his cologne. Blood. Recent. "Step inside before someone sees you." He inclined his head, stepping past her into the cramped flat. His polished Oxfords clicked against the worn floorboards, and he glanced around—disapprovingly, she imagined, though his expression remained neutral. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed from atop a precarious stack of books, his tail lashing. Lucien ignored him, his gaze settling on the scar on her left wrist. She crossed her arms, hiding it. "Make it quick." "A demon's hunting in Whitechapel. Three victims in a week. All drained." "And?" "It's using your scent." Her stomach dropped. "What?" "Your scent." He pulled a vial from his pocket, the liquid inside swirling faintly. "Left at each scene. Along with this." She snatched the vial, holding it up to the light. Tiny flecks of silver floated in the clear liquid—her blood, mixed with something else. Something dark. "How?" "You tell me." Her jaw tightened. "I didn't do this." "Didn't say you did." "But you're here." "Because whoever this is, they know you. They're targeting you. And they're dragging innocents into it." Her hand clenched around the vial. "So what, I'm bait now?" "If you're clever about it." "Clever enough to survive?" "That depends on you." She laughed again, though it lacked any real humor. "You always did have a gift for making me feel special." "Rory—" "Don't." She cut him off, her voice brittle. "Don't 'Rory' me. Not after what happened." His jaw twitched, the closest he ever came to showing emotion. "I didn't have a choice." "You always have a choice." Silence stretched between them, heavy and charged. Ptolemy jumped down from the bookshelf, weaving between Lucien's legs before darting into the kitchen. "Fine," she said finally, tossing the vial back to him. "I'll help. But this doesn't change anything." "Wouldn't dream of it." "You'll pay me." His lips curved, the ghost of a smile. "Name your price." "My price is you stay out of my life once this is over." He nodded once, his gaze unreadable. "Done." She stepped past him, heading for the door. Ptolemy hissed again, and she paused, glancing back. "One more thing." "Be quick." "If you lie to me again, I'll kill you myself." His smile widened, sharp and dangerous. "Looking forward to it." She grabbed her coat from the hook, shrugging it on. He followed her out, his cane tapping a steady rhythm against the floorboards. The door clicked shut behind them, the three deadbolts sliding into place. Ptolemy yowled from inside, and Aurora ignored him, her mind already racing. "Where first?" "Whitechapel," Lucien said, gesturing to a sleek black car idling at the curb. "Your fan club awaits." "Charming." "Always." She slid into the passenger seat, her coat bunching uncomfortably against the leather. Lucien followed, his movements smooth, practiced. The engine purred to life, and they pulled away from the curb, the city lights flickering past. "So," she said after a moment, staring out the window. "What aren't you telling me?" "I'm hurt. You think I'd keep secrets?" "I know you would." His chuckle was low, dark. "Fair enough." "Well?" "The demon's not just hunting in Whitechapel." "Where, then?" "Everywhere you've been." Her blood froze. "What?" "Cardiff. Bristol. Even that little village in Wales." "How?" "That's the question, isn't it?" Her hands clenched in her lap, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throbbing faintly. "Who else knows?" "Just us." "For now." "For now." They lapsed into silence as the car sped through the narrow streets, the tension between them thick enough to cut with a knife. Aurora's mind raced, trying to piece together what little she knew, while Lucien watched her from the corner of his eye, his expression unreadable. The car slowed as they approached Whitechapel, the streets darker, quieter. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, the sense of foreboding growing with each passing moment. "You ready?" Lucien asked as they pulled up to an abandoned warehouse. "Ready as I'll ever be." "Good." They stepped out of the car, the night air cool against her skin. The warehouse loomed ahead, its windows shattered, its doors hanging open. Lucien's cane tapped against the pavement as they approached, the sound echoing in the stillness. "Stay close," he murmured. "Don't worry," she whispered back. "I'm not letting you out of my sight." His lips curved in that infuriating smile, and they stepped inside, the shadows swallowing them whole. The faint scent of copper lingered in the air, and Aurora's stomach twisted. Somewhere, something stirred. "This ends tonight," Lucien said, his voice low. "One way or another," she agreed. The darkness shifted, and the hunt began.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His voice curled around [around]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"she whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.329
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.082
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount933
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount933
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count2
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"foreboding"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"charged"
3"unreadable"
4"racing"
5"tension"
6"raced"
7"sense of"
8"foreboding"
9"loomed"
10"shattered"
11"echoing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"the sense of foreboding"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords924
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount623
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau1
Carter1
Oxfords1
Eva1
Aurora5
Whitechapel1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Carter"
3"Oxfords"
4"Eva"
5"Aurora"
6"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.778
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount924
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean11.41
std12.62
cv1.106
sampleLengths
049
19
224
32
44
514
63
723
83
928
106
1164
123
1312
141
154
164
1721
1826
191
203
217
224
233
2416
2511
265
274
284
2920
301
3115
3216
335
3422
3517
364
373
3811
3913
407
4116
423
432
4410
4510
4647
472
4817
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"The door swung open, and there he was—Lucien Moreau, leaning on his damned ivory-handled cane like he owned the place."
1"The scent of his cologne—something woody and expensive—hit her like a punch to the gut."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, unflinching."
3"His polished Oxfords clicked against the worn floorboards, and he glanced around—disapprovingly, she imagined, though his expression remained neutral."
4"Tiny flecks of silver floated in the clear liquid—her blood, mixed with something else."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount632
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damned ivory-handled cane"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03955696202531646
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00949367088607595
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean7.51
std5.5
cv0.732
sampleLengths
020
114
215
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424
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64
75
89
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1023
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129
138
149
151
161
176
1811
1919
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226
233
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251
264
273
281
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307
3110
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341
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374
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393
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416
425
435
444
454
469
4711
481
498
80.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5040650406504065
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners62
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Somewhere, something stirred."
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences57
matches
0"His voice curled around her"
1"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
2"She moved to shut the"
3"She glared at the cane,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"He inclined his head, stepping"
6"His polished Oxfords clicked against"
7"She crossed her arms, hiding"
8"Her stomach dropped."
9"He pulled a vial from"
10"She snatched the vial, holding"
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"Her hand clenched around the"
13"She laughed again, though it"
14"She cut him off, her"
15"His jaw twitched, the closest"
16"she said finally, tossing the"
17"His lips curved, the ghost"
18"He nodded once, his gaze"
19"She stepped past him, heading"
ratio0.561
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences57
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Aurora Carter froze, her hand"
2"The scent of his cologne—something"
3"His voice curled around her"
4"Her laugh was sharp, brittle."
5"She moved to shut the"
6"She glared at the cane,"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"The faint scent of copper"
9"He inclined his head, stepping"
10"His polished Oxfords clicked against"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed"
12"Lucien ignored him, his gaze"
13"She crossed her arms, hiding"
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"He pulled a vial from"
16"She snatched the vial, holding"
17"Her jaw tightened."
18"Her hand clenched around the"
19"She laughed again, though it"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She moved, but his cane shot out, wedging it open"
1"Lucien said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered back (whisper)"
2"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.219
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.082
78.8556%