| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His voice curled around [around]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she whispered back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 73 | | tagDensity | 0.164 | | leniency | 0.329 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 933 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 933 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "foreboding" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "echoing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "the sense of foreboding" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 924 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 623 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 9 | | Moreau | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Oxfords | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Oxfords" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.778 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 924 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 11.41 | | std | 12.62 | | cv | 1.106 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 47 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and there he was—Lucien Moreau, leaning on his damned ivory-handled cane like he owned the place." | | 1 | "The scent of his cologne—something woody and expensive—hit her like a punch to the gut." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held hers, unflinching." | | 3 | "His polished Oxfords clicked against the worn floorboards, and he glanced around—disapprovingly, she imagined, though his expression remained neutral." | | 4 | "Tiny flecks of silver floated in the clear liquid—her blood, mixed with something else." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 632 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damned ivory-handled cane" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03955696202531646 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00949367088607595 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 7.51 | | std | 5.5 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 80.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5040650406504065 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, something stirred." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice curled around her" | | 1 | "Her laugh was sharp, brittle." | | 2 | "She moved to shut the" | | 3 | "She glared at the cane," | | 4 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 5 | "He inclined his head, stepping" | | 6 | "His polished Oxfords clicked against" | | 7 | "She crossed her arms, hiding" | | 8 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 9 | "He pulled a vial from" | | 10 | "She snatched the vial, holding" | | 11 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 12 | "Her hand clenched around the" | | 13 | "She laughed again, though it" | | 14 | "She cut him off, her" | | 15 | "His jaw twitched, the closest" | | 16 | "she said finally, tossing the" | | 17 | "His lips curved, the ghost" | | 18 | "He nodded once, his gaze" | | 19 | "She stepped past him, heading" |
| | ratio | 0.561 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter froze, her hand" | | 2 | "The scent of his cologne—something" | | 3 | "His voice curled around her" | | 4 | "Her laugh was sharp, brittle." | | 5 | "She moved to shut the" | | 6 | "She glared at the cane," | | 7 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 8 | "The faint scent of copper" | | 9 | "He inclined his head, stepping" | | 10 | "His polished Oxfords clicked against" | | 11 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed" | | 12 | "Lucien ignored him, his gaze" | | 13 | "She crossed her arms, hiding" | | 14 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 15 | "He pulled a vial from" | | 16 | "She snatched the vial, holding" | | 17 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 18 | "Her hand clenched around the" | | 19 | "She laughed again, though it" |
| | ratio | 0.965 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved, but his cane shot out, wedging it open" | | 1 | "Lucien said, his voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered back (whisper)" | | 2 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 73 | | tagDensity | 0.11 | | leniency | 0.219 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |