Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT094S5Z811NQ5VAR64QF7E

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Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.001870
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a sound like a gunshot in the quiet flat. Rory froze, one hand still on the cool brass. The chain was still on, leaving a narrow gap. Through it, she saw a sliver of tailored charcoal wool and the polished ivory handle of a cane. Her breath hitched. She knew that cane. “You’re supposed to call first.” Her voice sounded flat, even to her own ears. “My calls appear to be going unanswered.” Lucien Moreau’s tone was smooth, a blend of Marseille and Mayfair. “A rather pointed silence, *chérie*.” “I’ve been busy.” “Delivering spring rolls for Madame Yu-Fei? At two in the morning?” A beat of silence, heavy with the unspoken. “Open the door, Aurora. We are not having this conversation through a gap.” The chain rattled as she unhooked it. The door swung inward, and there he was, filling the frame of Eva’s cluttered Brick Lane flat. He looked immaculate, as always. Platinum hair slicked back, a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her yearly rent, and those eyes—one the colour of dark amber, the other a void of absolute black. The heterochromatic gaze felt like a physical touch, sweeping over her worn jumper and loose pyjama bottoms. Ptolemy the tabby wound himself around Lucien’s ankles, purring like a traitor. “He remembers you,” Rory said, stepping back to let him in. The air in the flat shifted, growing denser, charged with old electricity. “Cats are excellent judges of character. They appreciate… consistency.” Lucien stepped inside, his cane tapping softly on the worn floorboards. He didn’t look around at the towers of books and scrolls; his focus remained entirely on her. He closed the door behind him, the three deadbolts clicking back into place with finality. The familiar scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like cold stone—invaded the space. “Consistency. Is that what you’re selling tonight?” “I am selling nothing. I am delivering a warning.” He leaned his cane against a stack of grimoires. “You’ve been asking questions in places you shouldn’t. About things that should stay buried.” So that was it. She crossed her arms, the fabric of her jumper rough against her skin. “Evan’s gone to ground. Someone helped him. I want to know who.” “And you thought poking the hornet’s nest in Soho was the way to find out?” He took a step closer. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom pain from a different life. “The people who move men like your ex do not take kindly to curiosity. Especially not from a human who lives above a pub and delivers Chinese food.” The words were calculated, meant to sting. They did. “I’m not your client anymore, Luc. You don’t get to manage my risks.” “No.” He was in front of her now, close enough for her to see the faint, almost imperceptible pattern in the amber of his eye. “I am not. Which makes your current course of action all the more vexing. It creates… complications.” “For who? You?” “For you, you stubborn woman.” The frustration cracked through the polished veneer. “They have pictures. Of you leaving the Golden Empress. Of you coming here. They know your routines.” A cold trickle of fear dripped down her spine. She hadn’t seen anyone. Hadn’t felt watched. But Lucien didn’t deal in maybes. “Why do you care?” His jaw tightened. For a long moment, he said nothing, his mismatched eyes searching her face as if looking for an answer he’d lost. The silence between them thickened, crowded with every unsaid thing from the last time they’d stood this close. The memory of his mouth on hers, the taste of regret and expensive whiskey, the way she’d walked out and vowed never to need his particular brand of poison again. “You know why,” he said, the words low and rough. “I don’t. Enlighten me.” She held her ground, lifting her chin. “Is there a debt? Did my father call in a favour with your father? Another transaction in the great demonic ledger?” He moved so fast it was a blur. One hand came up, not to strike, but to cradle the side of her face. His thumb brushed her cheekbone, his skin surprisingly warm. The contact was a jolt, a live wire connecting all the hurt and want she’d tried to bury. “Do not,” he whispered, his voice a dangerous caress, “insult what was between us by reducing it to ledger entries and paternal favours.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. She should pull away. She should slap his hand aside. She did neither. “What was between us, Lucien? You tell me. Because all I remember is you pushing me away right after you pulled me in.” “I was keeping you safe.” “From what? From you?” “From everything that follows me!” The words burst from him, harsh and unvarnished. “From the things that watch from the shadows, from the obligations written in my blood, from the kind of life that grinds bright, clever girls like you into dust. You wanted out of a cage, Rory. I wasn’t about to give you a newer, prettier one with my family crest on the bars.” His hand fell from her face. He turned away, running that same hand through his perfect hair, leaving it dishevelled. It was the most unguarded she’d ever seen him. The confession hung in the air, delicate and devastating. The dusty flat, the purring cat, the distant smell of curry from the restaurant below—all of it faded into a dull background hum. “You don’t get to make that choice for me,” she said, her own voice quieter now. “I realise that.” He turned back. The mask was gone. In its place was a raw, weary honesty that was far more frightening. “Which is why I am here. Not as a fixer. Not as an ally from the shadows. I am here because they are coming. And I cannot… I will not let them have you.” “Who are ‘they’?” “The ones Evan owes money to. A different sort of predator. They don’t care about the human world’s rules. They see a connection, however severed, and they exploit it. They use what you love to make you bleed.” His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the small, pale scar. “They will use you to draw him out. Or they will use you as punishment for his failures. The methodology is irrelevant. The outcome is the same.” The reality of it crashed over her. It wasn’t just Evan anymore. It was a net, and she was tangled in its edges. “What do I do?” “You come with me. Now. Tonight.” He said it like it was simple. Like she hadn’t spent months building walls against him. “To where? Your place? Another safe house you’ll vanish from in three days?” “To my home.” He stressed the word. “Not a bolt-hole. Not an asset location. My home. Where the wards are old, and strong, and personally maintained by a very paranoid half-demon with rather too much to lose.” The offer was a chasm. To go with him was to step back into the dizzying, dangerous world she’d fled. To trust him with her safety after he’d broken her heart. To admit she needed saving. Ptolemy jumped onto a pile of notes, scattering parchment. The sound was absurdly loud. “And after?” she asked. “They get bored? Evan magically pays his debts?” “After, we find him. Together. We remove the problem at its source.” He took a final step, closing the last of the distance between them. “But first, we survive the night. They are not patient men.” A floorboard creaked in the hallway outside the flat. Not the familiar groan of the old building settling. This was a sharp, deliberate sound, followed by another. Then the soft scuff of a shoe against wood. Lucien’s head snapped towards the door. His amber eye seemed to glow faintly in the dim light. His hand went to his cane, his fingers curling around the ivory handle. “Rory,” he said, his voice dropping to a thread of sound. “Get behind me.” The scratching started at the lock. Not a key. Something finer, more insistent. Metal on metal. He twisted the handle of the cane. A faint, deadly *shink* echoed in the silent room as a thin, cruel blade slid free from its hiding place.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.043
92.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1405
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1405
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"unspoken"
2"charged"
3"familiar"
4"calculated"
5"down her spine"
6"perfect"
7"predator"
8"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1398
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"shink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount856
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien5
Moreau1
Marseille1
Mayfair1
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Evan1
Like1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical touch, sweeping ov"
1"as if looking for an answer he’d lost"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.715
wordCount1398
matches
0"not to strike, but to cradle the side of her face"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that cane"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.88
std20.08
cv0.747
sampleLengths
015
136
27
314
423
53
632
776
812
923
1066
117
1232
1329
1464
159
1613
1742
183
1929
2022
214
2272
2310
2432
2550
2623
2742
285
294
3066
3129
3232
3316
3457
353
3676
3723
384
3922
4013
4137
4236
4314
4412
4536
469
4727
4830
4914
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"was gone"
1"was tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was, filling"
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences114
ratio0.035
matches
0"Platinum hair slicked back, a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her yearly rent, and those eyes—one the colour of dark amber, the other a void of absolute black."
1"He didn’t look around at the towers of books and scrolls; his focus remained entirely on her."
2"The familiar scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like cold stone—invaded the space."
3"The dusty flat, the purring cat, the distant smell of curry from the restaurant below—all of it faded into a dull background hum."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03372093023255814
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009302325581395349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean12.26
std8.85
cv0.722
sampleLengths
015
19
29
318
43
54
614
718
85
93
1019
1113
127
1317
145
1530
1617
1712
1811
1912
2020
2117
2215
2314
247
2518
2614
274
2813
2912
3020
3116
3228
337
342
3513
3625
3717
383
3912
4017
419
424
433
446
454
463
4721
4818
4930
51.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.39473684210526316
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners45
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then the soft scuff of"
ratio0.012
52.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her breath hitched."
1"She knew that cane."
2"Her voice sounded flat, even"
3"He looked immaculate, as always."
4"He didn’t look around at"
5"He closed the door behind"
6"He leaned his cane against"
7"She crossed her arms, the"
8"He took a step closer"
9"He was in front of"
10"She hadn’t seen anyone."
11"His jaw tightened."
12"he said, the words low"
13"She held her ground, lifting"
14"He moved so fast it"
15"His thumb brushed her cheekbone,"
16"he whispered, his voice a"
17"Her heart hammered against her"
18"She should pull away."
19"She should slap his hand"
ratio0.419
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences86
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory froze, one hand still"
2"The chain was still on,"
3"Her breath hitched."
4"She knew that cane."
5"Her voice sounded flat, even"
6"Lucien Moreau’s tone was smooth,"
7"A beat of silence, heavy"
8"The chain rattled as she"
9"The door swung inward, and"
10"He looked immaculate, as always."
11"Platinum hair slicked back, a"
12"The heterochromatic gaze felt like"
13"Ptolemy the tabby wound himself"
14"Rory said, stepping back to"
15"The air in the flat"
16"Lucien stepped inside, his cane"
17"He didn’t look around at"
18"He closed the door behind"
19"The familiar scent of his"
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"To go with him was"
1"To trust him with her"
2"To admit she needed saving."
ratio0.035
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"For a long moment, he said nothing, his mismatched eyes searching her face as if looking for an answer he’d lost."
1"In its place was a raw, weary honesty that was far more frightening."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien stepped, his cane tapping softly on the worn floorboards"
1"he whispered, his voice a dangerous caress,"
2"she said, her own voice quieter now"
3"he said, his voice dropping to a thread of sound"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.298
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.043
85.0195%