Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT09EJJMZP666T8RNAWSWF8

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8m 27s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Damp tiles lined the walls of the abandoned Camden Tube station, slick with condensation that smelled of rust and old copper. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow police tape, her boots clicking against the concrete platform. The air hung heavy, colder than the London street above. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:17. PC Miller stood near the edge of the tracks, torch beam cutting through the gloom. He turned as Quinn approached, face pale under the fluorescent emergency lights rigged to the ceiling. Place gives me the creeps, Guv. Never seen a tube station this deep on the maps. Quinn ignored the comment. She crouched beside the body lying on the tracks. A man, mid-thirties, dressed in a suit that cost more than Miller's annual salary. No visible blood. No struggle marks on the platform. Cause of death? Miller shifted his weight. Paramedics say heart failure. Looks like he just dropped. Quinn pulled on latex gloves. She lifted the man's eyelid. The pupil was dilated, fixed. She ran a finger along his jawline, mirroring the sharp angle of her own. Skin cold, waxy. She turned the hand over. Palm facing up. A burn mark sat in the centre, circular, precise. Heart failure doesn't leave a brand. Could be a medical device. Pacemaker malfunction. Quinn stood. She wiped her hand on her trousers. Her salt-and-pepper hair caught the light as she scanned the tunnel ahead. Darkness swallowed the rails fifty metres down. She reached into her coat pocket and withdrew a small brass compass. Verdigris stained the casing. Sigils etched the face, glowing faintly in the low light. Miller stepped closer. What's that? Evidence. You're holding a toy compass at a murder scene. Quinn held the object flat in her palm. The needle spun wildly, then snapped toward the tunnel darkness. It vibrated against her skin. This points to energy signatures. Not magnetic north. Miller laughed, a short, nervous sound. Energy signatures. You sound like those conspiracy lot down at the museum. Quinn tucked the compass away. She walked toward the tunnel, torch beam sweeping the walls. Graffiti covered the tiles, but not spray paint. Symbols drawn in something dark and dried. She recognised the pattern from files on her desk. Cases marked unsolved. Cases like Morris. We need to secure the perimeter. Nobody goes in there. Miller blocked her path. Protocol says we wait for SOCO. You go in there alone, you compromise the scene. Quinn stopped. She looked Miller in the eye. Her bearing stiffened, military precision taking over. SOCO won't find anything here. This isn't a crime scene. It's a marketplace. Miller frowned. A marketplace? Down here? Look at the floor. Quinn pointed her torch at the ground. Dust lay undisturbed except for a single set of footprints leading into the tunnel. No exit prints. The victim hadn't walked out. He hadn't been dragged either. No scuff marks. He vanished. Or he was taken. Miller rubbed his neck. You think someone carried a grown man into that tunnel without leaving a trace? I think the rules of physics don't apply down here. Quinn moved past him. She stepped onto the tracks. Gravel crunched under her boots. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. She stopped where the footprints ended. Empty space. A wall of brick stood ten metres ahead. Miller followed, hesitant. This is madness, Harlow. We need backup. Backup brings questions. Questions bring paperwork. Paperwork buries the truth. Quinn pulled the compass out again. The needle spun faster. The brass casing grew hot against her palm. She held it out. The needle pointed at the brick wall. There's a door here. It's a wall. It's a veil. Quinn reached out. Her fingers brushed the brick. Cold stone gave way to a ripple, like water disturbed by a stone. She pulled her hand back. The surface settled. Miller's torch flickered. He tapped the side of it. Battery's dying. It's not the battery. Quinn looked at her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She tapped the glass. The hand resumed forward motion. She glanced at Miller. He hadn't noticed. You see that? See what? Time skipped. Miller shone his light on the wall. Just bricks, Guv. Old London brickwork. Nothing else. Quinn holstered the compass. She walked along the wall, hand trailing the surface. Rough texture. Damp moss. She stopped at a specific cluster of symbols painted near the ceiling. Red ochre. Fresh. This marks the entry. Requires a token. Token? Bone. Human or animal. Doesn't matter, just needs life residue. Miller lowered his torch. You're talking about ritual magic. I'm talking about motive. Quinn turned back to the body. She walked over, crouching again. She checked the man's pockets. Wallet missing. Phone missing. Keys present. A small pouch tucked in the inner jacket lining. She pulled it out. Heavy. Cloth bound. Miller leaned in. What's in the bag? Quinn untied the string. Inside lay a fragment of bone. Polished. Carved with the same sigils as the compass. Entry ticket. Miller straightened up. So he was a customer. He was a buyer. And someone didn't want him leaving with the goods. Quinn stood. She held the bone fragment up to the light. It hummed, a low frequency that rattled her teeth. She looked at the tunnel again. The darkness seemed deeper now. Shapes moved in the periphery. Shadows detaching from the walls. We need to go. Miller backed away. Why? Because the market opens at the full moon. Quinn checked the sky through the grates above. Clouds parted. Full moon light filtered down, hitting the tracks. The shadows lengthened. Stretched toward them. The compass needle locked. It pointed straight at Miller. Quinn frowned. She adjusted her stance. The needle didn't move. It stayed fixed on the PC. Put the torch down, Miller. Miller gripped the handle tighter. What? The needle points to supernatural rifts. Or sources. I'm not a rift. Quinn stepped closer. She watched his eyes. Pupils dilated. Not from fear. From something else. You knew about this place. I found the body. That's my job. You led me here. Miller shook his head. Dispatch sent us. Dispatch doesn't know this station exists. Quinn's hand hovered near her service weapon. She kept her voice level. Who sent you, Miller? Nobody sent me. I was on patrol. Patrol doesn't come this deep. Miller swallowed. He looked at the bone fragment in Quinn's hand. He reached for it. Give that to me. Quinn stepped back. She pocketed the bone. Why do you want it? It's evidence. It's a key. And you're not taking it anywhere. Miller's face changed. The fear vanished. Replaced by a calm emptiness. He dropped the torch. It rolled on the tracks, beam spinning. You always were too curious, Harlow. Morris said the same thing. Quinn froze. The name hit her like a physical blow. She tightened her jaw. What do you know about Morris? He asked questions. Just like you. Miller moved. Fast. Faster than a human should. He lunged for her. Quinn sidestepped, grabbing his wrist. She twisted. Bone cracked. Miller didn't flinch. He swung his other hand. Quinn ducked. Her fist connected with his ribs. He didn't breathe out. Miller stumbled back. He straightened his jacket. The arm hung limp. You can't arrest me, Detective. I'm not on the payroll anymore. Quinn drew her weapon. She aimed at his centre mass. Stay where you are. Miller laughed. The sound echoed wrong. Distorted. Bullets won't work here. This is the Veil Market. Rules are different. Quinn kept the gun steady. Her hand didn't shake. She glanced at the compass. The needle spun wild again. Pointing everywhere. Then I'll make new rules. Miller smiled. He stepped into the shadows of the tunnel. The darkness swallowed him. Only his voice remained. Find the seller. They have what you want. Information about Morris. Quinn fired. The shot rang out. Sparks flew where the bullet hit the wall. No body fell. No sound of impact. She stood alone on the tracks. The torch light faded completely. Only the compass glow remained. The needle settled. Pointing deeper into the tunnel. Quinn holstered the gun. She checked her watch. 03:25. Eight minutes lost. She tightened the strap. She looked at the wall where the market entrance rippled. She walked toward the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"etched"
4"vibrated"
5"magnetic"
6"flickered"
7"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences286
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences286
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
2"see"
3"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences286
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1387
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions86
wordCount1387
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow3
Quinn30
London2
Miller29
Guv2
Morris4
Detective2
Veil1
Market1
You10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"You"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.419
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1387
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences286
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean13.6
std12.39
cv0.911
sampleLengths
058
131
216
336
43
513
649
76
87
954
105
111
129
1323
148
1518
1645
1710
1819
1915
2013
216
224
2337
242
254
2618
2710
2837
2910
3010
3129
324
333
343
3529
3611
374
3826
393
402
412
4215
4332
447
451
4610
479
484
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences286
matches
0"was dilated"
1"been dragged"
2"was taken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs299
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences286
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1390
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.020863309352517987
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004316546762589928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences286
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences286
mean4.85
std2.95
cv0.608
sampleLengths
021
116
210
310
41
515
616
76
810
94
109
1114
123
136
143
154
164
175
185
195
205
2114
223
235
243
259
266
275
282
292
307
3112
327
3312
344
3510
363
372
381
399
408
4110
425
435
443
456
462
4710
485
4910
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3732394366197183
totalSentences284
uniqueOpeners106
70.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences236
matches
0"Just bricks, Guv."
1"Just like you."
2"Then I'll make new rules."
3"Only his voice remained."
4"Only the compass glow remained."
ratio0.021
77.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences236
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He turned as Quinn approached,"
2"She crouched beside the body"
3"She lifted the man's eyelid."
4"She ran a finger along"
5"She turned the hand over."
6"She wiped her hand on"
7"Her salt-and-pepper hair caught the"
8"She reached into her coat"
9"You're holding a toy compass"
10"It vibrated against her skin."
11"You sound like those conspiracy"
12"She walked toward the tunnel,"
13"She recognised the pattern from"
14"We need to secure the"
15"You go in there alone,"
16"She looked Miller in the"
17"Her bearing stiffened, military precision"
18"It's a marketplace."
19"He hadn't been dragged either."
ratio0.356
53.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount192
totalSentences236
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
1"The air hung heavy, colder"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"PC Miller stood near the"
4"He turned as Quinn approached,"
5"Place gives me the creeps,"
6"Quinn ignored the comment."
7"She crouched beside the body"
8"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in"
9"Cause of death?"
10"Miller shifted his weight."
11"Paramedics say heart failure."
12"Looks like he just dropped."
13"Quinn pulled on latex gloves."
14"She lifted the man's eyelid."
15"The pupil was dilated, fixed."
16"She ran a finger along"
17"Skin cold, waxy."
18"She turned the hand over."
19"Palm facing up."
ratio0.814
21.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences236
matches
0"Because the market opens at"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Damp tiles lined the walls of the abandoned Camden Tube station, slick with condensation that smelled of rust and old copper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.3983%