| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.489 | | leniency | 0.979 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chilling" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "streaming" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1255 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 962 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.305 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "darkness that seemed to drink in the ambient light" | | 1 | "felt like walking on a living mattress" | | 2 | "felt like woven water, slipping through" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1255 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 26.15 | | std | 12.85 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | |
| 68.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy, steel-wool clouds were gone, replaced by a vault of impossible twilight—indigo and violet swirling together like oil on water." | | 1 | "Wildflowers grew in clumps that defied the season—snowdrops tangled with blood-red poppies and oversized bluebells." | | 2 | "Down in the dark, shapes moved—massive, slow forms twisting in the gloom." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 971 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.024716786817713696 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004119464469618949 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 10.82 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 60.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3879310344827586 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked up." | | 1 | "They were a tall, slender" | | 2 | "Their voice was a rustle" | | 3 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 4 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 6 | "She touched the hilt." | | 7 | "She looked around." | | 8 | "They were oaks, mostly, but" | | 9 | "She couldn't help it." | | 10 | "She looked down at the" | | 11 | "She gestured to the floor" | | 12 | "It was freezing cold, colder" | | 13 | "Her breath fogged the surface." | | 14 | "She looked at the endless" | | 15 | "She trailed off, her mouth" | | 16 | "She followed Isolde toward a" | | 17 | "She stood on a bridge" | | 18 | "She pointed ahead." | | 19 | "She rubbed her left wrist," |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The grey drizzle of London" | | 1 | "The traffic noise from the" | | 2 | "Rory blinked, wiping rain from" | | 3 | "She looked up." | | 4 | "The heavy, steel-wool clouds were" | | 5 | "Stars burned with a sharpness" | | 6 | "Nyx materialised beside her." | | 7 | "They were a tall, slender" | | 8 | "Their voice was a rustle" | | 9 | "Rory gripped the strap of" | | 10 | "The silver chain around her" | | 11 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 12 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 13 | "Isolde drifted ahead." | | 14 | "The silver-haired woman didn't walk" | | 15 | "The moss sprang back behind" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 17 | "Isolde said, not turning around" | | 18 | "The Fae-Forged Blade strapped to" | | 19 | "She touched the hilt." |
| | ratio | 0.927 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The grey drizzle of London soaked through Rory’s jacket, chilling her skin, but three steps past the ancient oak standing stones, the weather vanished." | | 1 | "Stars burned with a sharpness that hurt the eyes, none of them constellations she recognised." | | 2 | "The silver chain around her neck warmed against her skin, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing in a slow, rhythmic beat that matched her own heart." | | 3 | "The metal hummed under her fingertips, vibrating with a low frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "They were oaks, mostly, but the bark was a deep, bruised purple, and the branches twisted in spirals that defied geometry, curling inward like fists." | | 5 | "Wildflowers grew in clumps that defied the season—snowdrops tangled with blood-red poppies and oversized bluebells." | | 6 | "Rory pulled her hand back from a towering bluebell that bobbed without wind." | | 7 | "Moonlight, stark and white, flooded down, illuminating a stone table that looked carved from a single giant diamond." | | 8 | "The light caught the crystals embedded in the surrounding rock faces, refracting into a million rainbows that danced over her skin." | | 9 | "Trees loaded with fruit that shimmered like jewels hung low over paths of crushed velvet." |
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| 38.04% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not turning around" | | 1 | "Isolde turned, her ageless face impassive" | | 2 | "Isolde drifted, her silver hair streaming behind her as if underwater" | | 3 | "She trailed, her mouth watering inexplicably" |
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| 86.17% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.298 | | leniency | 0.596 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.128 | |