Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT09GVY75FST5SWZQP5QJS9

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Duration:
3m 36s
Cost:
$0.010309
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The grey drizzle of London soaked through Rory’s jacket, chilling her skin, but three steps past the ancient oak standing stones, the weather vanished. One moment she stood in the damp mud of Richmond Park, the next the air turned dry and sweet, smelling of honeysuckle and ozone. The traffic noise from the nearby road cut out as if snipped with shears. Rory blinked, wiping rain from her lashes, but her hand came away dry. She looked up. The heavy, steel-wool clouds were gone, replaced by a vault of impossible twilight—indigo and violet swirling together like oil on water. Stars burned with a sharpness that hurt the eyes, none of them constellations she recognised. "Keep moving. Don't stop." Nyx materialised beside her. They were a tall, slender cut of darkness that seemed to drink in the ambient light. Their voice was a rustle of dead leaves. Rory gripped the strap of her bag. The silver chain around her neck warmed against her skin, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing in a slow, rhythmic beat that matched her own heart. She took a hesitant step forward. Her boots sank into moss so thick and deep it felt like walking on a living mattress. "This is the Grove?" "The edge of it." Isolde drifted ahead. The silver-haired woman didn't walk so much as glide, her pale lavender robes brushing the tops of the strange, spiralling ferns. Where Rory and Nyx left heavy bootprints and scuffed earth, Isolde left nothing. The moss sprang back behind her, pristine and untouched. "The air feels heavy," Rory said. Her voice sounded too loud, swallowed instantly by the trees then spat back at her with a faint, metallic echo. "Like static electricity before a storm." "Because it is," Isolde said, not turning around. "The barrier here is thin. Breath it in, and it breathes into you. Be careful what you think." Rory shivered. The Fae-Forged Blade strapped to her hip was a block of ice, freezing her side even through the leather of her jacket. She touched the hilt. The metal hummed under her fingertips, vibrating with a low frequency that made her teeth ache. She looked around. The trees weren't right. They were oaks, mostly, but the bark was a deep, bruised purple, and the branches twisted in spirals that defied geometry, curling inward like fists. Leaves shimmered with a bioluminescent sheen, shifting from emerald to gold in the time it took to blink. Wildflowers grew in clumps that defied the season—snowdrops tangled with blood-red poppies and oversized bluebells. The colours were vibrant, almost aggressive. "Don't touch the bell-flowers," Nyx whispered, their form flickering as a breeze that didn't feel like wind brushed past. "They’ll sing you to sleep for a decade. Time runs differently here." Rory pulled her hand back from a towering bluebell that bobbed without wind. "How differently?" "An hour could be a minute," Nyx said. "Or a year. The Fae have no patience for linear tick-tocks." "Relativity." Rory adjusted the bag on her shoulder, scanning the perimeter. "So if we stay too long, we might miss work tomorrow, or we might come back and find London is a ruin." "Optimistic." Nyx flowed over a gnarled root, their shadowy outline stretching and thinning. "You might simply dissolve into memory." Isolde stopped at a clearing where the canopy opened up to reveal the swirling indigo sky. Moonlight, stark and white, flooded down, illuminating a stone table that looked carved from a single giant diamond. Rory gasped. She couldn't help it. The light caught the crystals embedded in the surrounding rock faces, refracting into a million rainbows that danced over her skin. "It’s beautiful." "It is a cage." Isolde turned, her ageless face impassive. "Beauty is the Fae’s favourite bait." Rory stepped forward, drawn to the table. The pendant against her chest grew hot, almost burning now. She looked down at the Heartstone. The deep crimson gem glowed, shedding a faint red light on the silver chain. "It’s reacting to the table," Rory said. "Or the gateway beneath it," Isolde said. She gestured to the floor of the clearing. Rory looked down. The moss and earth gave way to translucent, glass-like stone. Beneath the surface, veins of gold and molten lava flowed sluggishly, but no heat rose from it. Rory knelt, pressing her hand to the glass. It was freezing cold, colder than the blade at her hip. Her breath fogged the surface. "Is this Dymas?" Rory asked, watching the molten rivers shift. "It feels like the descriptions. Excess." "A reflection of it. The Grove touches many places." Isolde drifted closer, her silver hair streaming behind her as if underwater. "That is the Gluttony of the earth itself. Feeding on the magic of the Veil." Nyx moved to the edge of the light, their shadowy substance solidifying into a humanoid shape wearing a tattered coat. "The energy here... it’s thick. I can taste copper." Rory stood, her knees stiff. She looked at the endless orchards beyond the clearing. Trees loaded with fruit that shimmered like jewels hung low over paths of crushed velvet. The scent of ripening sugar was cloying, heavy on the tongue. "We need to keep moving," Rory said, forcing herself to look away from the fruit. "The longer we stand still, the more I want to..." She trailed off, her mouth watering inexplicably. "Want to stay," Nyx finished. "The compulsion. It wants you to eat, to sleep, to forget." "I'm not hungry." Rory clenched her jaw, fighting the sudden urge to sink her teeth into one of the jewel-like apples. "Let's go." She followed Isolde toward a path winding between two towering monoliths of obsidian. The air grew colder as they passed between the stones. The silence deepened, pressing against Rory’s ears like deep water. "Watch your step," Isolde murmured. Rory looked down. The path had vanished. She stood on a bridge made of woven light, suspended over a void that yawned beneath them. Down in the dark, shapes moved—massive, slow forms twisting in the gloom. "What is that?" Rory whispered, grabbing a handful of Isolde’s robe before she realised she’d done it. The fabric felt like woven water, slipping through her fingers. "The Guardians," Isolde said. "Or perhaps, the waste." "Doesn't inspire confidence." Nyx leaned over the edge of the light bridge, peering into the abyss. "They’re sleeping. For now." Rory pulled back, her heart hammering against her ribs. The pendant flared once, a sharp spike of heat that made her wince. "The Heartstone is going crazy. We’re close to something." "We are close to the boundary," Isolde said. She pointed ahead. "The Grove ends. The Wild begins." Beyond the bridge, the landscape shifted again. The riotous colour drained away, replaced by monochrome greys and stark whites. Trees there were skeletal, their branches black ink scratches against a white sky. Rory stepped off the bridge onto solid ground, grateful for the feel of dirt under her boots. She rubbed her left wrist, the crescent scar there throbbing in time with the stone. "Is it safer there?" she asked, gesturing to the monochrome land. "Safe is a word for children," Isolde said, tilting her head. "But it is quieter there. The Fae do not like the colourless places." "Good." Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The leaf-shaped dagger released a wisp of condensation, the metal so cold it burned. "I’ve had enough colour to last a lifetime." Nyx chuckled, a sound like dry skittering insects. "You say that now, little mortal. Wait until you see the shadows in the grey."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:49:55.208Z" 2/19/2026, 3:49:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.979
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chilling"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"stark"
count2
7
word"streaming"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"chilling"
1"rhythmic"
2"pristine"
3"echo"
4"shimmered"
5"scanning"
6"stark"
7"streaming"
8"velvet"
9"silence"
10"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1255
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount962
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory23
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Nyx9
Isolde13
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Heartstone"
globalScore0.305
windowScore0.5
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"darkness that seemed to drink in the ambient light"
1"felt like walking on a living mattress"
2"felt like woven water, slipping through"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1255
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
97.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.15
std12.85
cv0.492
sampleLengths
024
138
252
34
428
554
64
74
846
932
1026
1144
1250
1321
1431
1515
1619
1733
1819
1934
2029
2116
2237
237
2445
2524
2616
2736
2829
2940
3032
3116
3223
3333
345
357
3629
3727
388
3920
4031
4117
4232
4332
4411
4524
4628
4723
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was cloying"
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"The heavy, steel-wool clouds were gone, replaced by a vault of impossible twilight—indigo and violet swirling together like oil on water."
1"Wildflowers grew in clumps that defied the season—snowdrops tangled with blood-red poppies and oversized bluebells."
2"Down in the dark, shapes moved—massive, slow forms twisting in the gloom."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024716786817713696
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004119464469618949
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.82
std6.02
cv0.557
sampleLengths
024
124
214
313
43
521
615
74
84
916
108
117
1224
136
1417
154
164
173
1821
1913
209
216
2220
236
248
2518
262
2722
284
2916
303
314
3225
3318
3415
356
3619
3712
3813
392
408
4111
4211
4322
4413
456
4616
4718
482
494
60.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3879310344827586
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences82
matches
0"She looked up."
1"They were a tall, slender"
2"Their voice was a rustle"
3"She took a hesitant step"
4"Her boots sank into moss"
5"Her voice sounded too loud,"
6"She touched the hilt."
7"She looked around."
8"They were oaks, mostly, but"
9"She couldn't help it."
10"She looked down at the"
11"She gestured to the floor"
12"It was freezing cold, colder"
13"Her breath fogged the surface."
14"She looked at the endless"
15"She trailed off, her mouth"
16"She followed Isolde toward a"
17"She stood on a bridge"
18"She pointed ahead."
19"She rubbed her left wrist,"
ratio0.256
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences82
matches
0"The grey drizzle of London"
1"The traffic noise from the"
2"Rory blinked, wiping rain from"
3"She looked up."
4"The heavy, steel-wool clouds were"
5"Stars burned with a sharpness"
6"Nyx materialised beside her."
7"They were a tall, slender"
8"Their voice was a rustle"
9"Rory gripped the strap of"
10"The silver chain around her"
11"She took a hesitant step"
12"Her boots sank into moss"
13"Isolde drifted ahead."
14"The silver-haired woman didn't walk"
15"The moss sprang back behind"
16"Her voice sounded too loud,"
17"Isolde said, not turning around"
18"The Fae-Forged Blade strapped to"
19"She touched the hilt."
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The grey drizzle of London soaked through Rory’s jacket, chilling her skin, but three steps past the ancient oak standing stones, the weather vanished."
1"Stars burned with a sharpness that hurt the eyes, none of them constellations she recognised."
2"The silver chain around her neck warmed against her skin, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing in a slow, rhythmic beat that matched her own heart."
3"The metal hummed under her fingertips, vibrating with a low frequency that made her teeth ache."
4"They were oaks, mostly, but the bark was a deep, bruised purple, and the branches twisted in spirals that defied geometry, curling inward like fists."
5"Wildflowers grew in clumps that defied the season—snowdrops tangled with blood-red poppies and oversized bluebells."
6"Rory pulled her hand back from a towering bluebell that bobbed without wind."
7"Moonlight, stark and white, flooded down, illuminating a stone table that looked carved from a single giant diamond."
8"The light caught the crystals embedded in the surrounding rock faces, refracting into a million rainbows that danced over her skin."
9"Trees loaded with fruit that shimmered like jewels hung low over paths of crushed velvet."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, not turning around"
1"Isolde turned, her ageless face impassive"
2"Isolde drifted, her silver hair streaming behind her as if underwater"
3"She trailed, her mouth watering inexplicably"
86.17% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.128
75.5528%