| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora asked softly [softly]" | | 1 | "She turned swiftly [swiftly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |
| 69.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "anticipation" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "sanctuary" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "resonance" | | 17 | "unsettled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 10.58% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 987 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 803 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Fae | 3 | | Fae-Seer | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Fae-Seer" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.691 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed sacred" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to echo from just beyond the veil" | | 2 | "runes that seemed to ripple like water when they caught the faint light" | | 3 | "sounded like a puzzle piece clicking into" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.04 | | wordCount | 987 | | matches | | 0 | "neither day nor" | | 1 | "not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind" | | 2 | "not cold, but carrying the scent of distant thunderstorms, of endless rain" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.17% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 35.25 | | std | 15.55 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew these stones marked the boundary— the edge of what was real and what was not." | | 1 | "Colors were richer, more layered than any Aurora had seen—blues deeper than sapphires, greens luminous like emeralds, and flowers blooming in perpetual, impossible vibrancy." | | 2 | "A ripple of sound arose—different than any song Aurora knew." | | 3 | "Then, a faint glow flickered in the distance — not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind that beckoned." | | 4 | "She could feel it now — a residual hum, like the beating of a dormant heart beneath the surface." | | 5 | "The wind picked up — not cold, but carrying the scent of distant thunderstorms, of endless rain-streaked quarrels of the Fae." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 805 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "endless rain-streaked quarrels" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02857142857142857 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013664596273291925 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 15.67 | | std | 7.94 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 83.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5079365079365079 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it flowed like a" | | 1 | "Then, a faint glow flickered" | | 2 | "Then, with a sudden burst," |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked to Nyx, shadows" | | 1 | "They moved past a ring" | | 2 | "She knew these stones marked" | | 3 | "It was a place where" | | 4 | "It was music, but not" | | 5 | "Their form seemed to ripple," | | 6 | "Her voice sounded like a" | | 7 | "Her skin prickled, sensing a" | | 8 | "she asked, voice subdued" | | 9 | "They came upon a clearing," | | 10 | "It radiated faint warmth, pulsing" | | 11 | "She could feel it now" | | 12 | "She moved effortlessly, like the" | | 13 | "her voice like silk and" | | 14 | "She turned swiftly, fading into" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air outside thickened with" | | 1 | "Aurora hesitated, her fingers brushing" | | 2 | "She looked to Nyx, shadows" | | 3 | "Aurora’s voice was careful, almost" | | 4 | "Nyx’s silhouette shifted subtly, a" | | 5 | "Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered" | | 6 | "The faint glow of the" | | 7 | "Aurora prompted, her eyes scanning" | | 8 | "They moved past a ring" | | 9 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 10 | "She knew these stones marked" | | 11 | "The air snapped tight around" | | 12 | "The world on the other" | | 13 | "It was a place where" | | 14 | "Colors were richer, more layered" | | 15 | "The flora stretched endlessly, twisting" | | 16 | "A ripple of sound arose—different" | | 17 | "It was music, but not" | | 18 | "Nyx muttered, voice carrying a" | | 19 | "Their form seemed to ripple," |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The flora stretched endlessly, twisting and spiraling toward a sky that was neither day nor night, but some eternal twilight where planets hung in a distant, sh…" | | 1 | "Instead, it flowed like a living thing, echoing from every direction and yet remaining a distant melody that seemed both alien and familiar." | | 2 | "A small stream wound past their feet, its water shimmering with unnatural clarity, revealing glimpses of distant, submerged worlds flickering beneath the surfac…" | | 3 | "Then, a faint glow flickered in the distance — not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind that beckoned." | | 4 | "Then, with a sudden burst, the glow flared brighter, bathing them in a light that felt simultaneous blinding and warming." | | 5 | "A figure appeared at the edge of the glow, tall and slender, draped in flowing robes that shimmered with a thousand tiny stars." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora prompted, her eyes scanning the shifting shadows ahead" | | 1 | "Nyx muttered, voice carrying a touch of awe" | | 2 | "she asked, voice subdued" | | 3 | "Nyx agreed, eyes narrowing as shadows flickered across the treetops" | | 4 | "Isolde warned, voice barely more than a whisper" | | 5 | "Aurora asked softly, voice almost lost in the thickening silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.316 | |