Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT09MKDS86JE3CRZQ0S1ME3

Run Details

Duration:
15.8s
Cost:
$0.000684
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air outside thickened with a strange hum, like a chorus of whispers carried on a breeze that hadn’t been there moments before. Aurora hesitated, her fingers brushing the chain of the Heartstone Pendant, which pulsed faintly against her chest. She looked to Nyx, shadows flickering at the edge of her vision as the shade’s faint violet glow dimmed and brightened unpredictably. "Think this is it?" Aurora’s voice was careful, almost like she didn't want to break the silence that suddenly seemed sacred. Nyx’s silhouette shifted subtly, a blur in the dimming light, their voice a whisper that seemed to echo from just beyond the veil. “The boundary thins. We step through, and worlds fold beneath our feet.” Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered even in the darkening shadows, her features calm but alert. The faint glow of the Fae-Forged Blade she carried illuminated the uneven ground, flickering like a ghost’s whisper. “Keep close,” Aurora prompted, her eyes scanning the shifting shadows ahead. “We don’t know what’s waiting on the other side.” They moved past a ring of standing stones, ancient and carved with runes that seemed to ripple like water when they caught the faint light. Aurora pressed her palm against a weathered external surface, feeling the cold bite of centuries underneath her fingertips. She knew these stones marked the boundary— the edge of what was real and what was not. With a deep breath, she stepped forward, crossing the threshold as the stones seemed to melt into the earth, dissolving into a shimmer of light that spread across the clearing. The air snapped tight around her, thick with anticipation. The world on the other side was staggering. It was a place where everything seemed to exist in a different temporal fold. Colors were richer, more layered than any Aurora had seen—blues deeper than sapphires, greens luminous like emeralds, and flowers blooming in perpetual, impossible vibrancy. The flora stretched endlessly, twisting and spiraling toward a sky that was neither day nor night, but some eternal twilight where planets hung in a distant, shimmering canopy. A ripple of sound arose—different than any song Aurora knew. It was music, but not music as she understood it. Instead, it flowed like a living thing, echoing from every direction and yet remaining a distant melody that seemed both alien and familiar. "Wow," Nyx muttered, voice carrying a touch of awe. Their form seemed to ripple, shifting as they moved closer to a luminous flower whose petals hummed softly in harmony with the whispers. Isolde’s eyes widened. “The Grove... It’s alive. The very earth breathes.” Her voice sounded like a puzzle piece clicking into place. “This is no ordinary place. It’s a memory — a fragment of the Fae Realm, a sanctuary tucked between worlds.” Aurora glanced around, her hand tightening on the chain of the Heartstone Pendant. Her skin prickled, sensing a faint pulse in the environment like a heartbeat echoing through the ground. “Feel that?” she asked, voice subdued. “It’s the land. We’re close to something much older than us.” The flora around them responded to her words. Flowers with petals of glass shimmered and crackled softly, like tiny glass chimes, their chords ringing through the still air. A small stream wound past their feet, its water shimmering with unnatural clarity, revealing glimpses of distant, submerged worlds flickering beneath the surface. “Yeah,” Nyx agreed, eyes narrowing as shadows flickered across the treetops. “This place’s got layers. It’s like it’s awake, waiting.” The silence grew thick as they advanced. Then, a faint glow flickered in the distance — not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind that beckoned. Aurora’s heart raced. Something ancient was stirring beyond those glowing trees, beyond the rippling flora. They came upon a clearing, where the ground was smooth and unblemished, save for a single, cracked stone pillar at the centre. It radiated faint warmth, pulsing in time with the Heartstone Pendant beneath Aurora’s shirt. “Careful,” Isolde warned, voice barely more than a whisper. “There’s power here. Old magic. It can awaken or consume.” Aurora reached out, fingers hovering over the crack in the stone pillar. She could feel it now — a residual hum, like the beating of a dormant heart beneath the surface. Then, with a sudden burst, the glow flared brighter, bathing them in a light that felt simultaneous blinding and warming. The wind picked up — not cold, but carrying the scent of distant thunderstorms, of endless rain-streaked quarrels of the Fae. A figure appeared at the edge of the glow, tall and slender, draped in flowing robes that shimmered with a thousand tiny stars. Pale lavender eyes studied them, unblinking. She moved effortlessly, like the wind, silent and slow. “You have crossed,” her voice like silk and thunder. “Few do. What seeks you in this forgotten cradle of worlds?” Aurora stepped forward, heart hammering. “We’re searching for answers. For something that’s been lost beyond the Veil. A power… a balance.” The Fae-Seer’s lips curled into a faint smile, riddling but intimate. “Balance is a fragile thing. You tread a thin line here. Beware what lies beneath the surface — the land’s memory is long, and it does not forgive easily.” The air shifted, as if the Grove itself had taken a breath. Aurora could sense the faint resonance of history in the ground beneath her feet, as though the very bones of this world watched and waited. Behind her, Nyx’s shadows flickered darker, unsettled. “Can you tell us where to go?” Aurora asked softly, voice almost lost in the thickening silence. The Seer inclined her head, her smile tight and knowing. “Follow the song of the flowers. Seek the echo in the heart of the Grove. But remember— some truths are better left hidden, and some doors better unopened.” She turned swiftly, fading into the shimmering light as the glow dimmed, leaving the visitors alone in the strange, waiting world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora asked softly [softly]"
1"She turned swiftly [swiftly]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.211
69.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count3
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"anticipation"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count3
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"resonance"
count1
17
word"unsettled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"whisper"
3"echo"
4"shimmered"
5"scanning"
6"anticipation"
7"echoing"
8"familiar"
9"sanctuary"
10"pulse"
11"flickered"
12"raced"
13"warmth"
14"could feel"
15"silk"
16"resonance"
17"unsettled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"k with anticipation"
10.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount803
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx5
Varga1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Aurora13
Fae3
Fae-Seer1
Grove1
Seer2
Isolde3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Varga"
2"Aurora"
3"Fae-Seer"
4"Seer"
5"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.691
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed sacred"
1"whisper that seemed to echo from just beyond the veil"
2"runes that seemed to ripple like water when they caught the faint light"
3"sounded like a puzzle piece clicking into"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.04
wordCount987
matches
0"neither day nor"
1"not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind"
2"not cold, but carrying the scent of distant thunderstorms, of endless rain"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
83.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean35.25
std15.55
cv0.441
sampleLengths
062
121
235
333
420
560
639
774
843
932
1041
1130
1217
1351
1420
1543
1636
1719
1831
1941
2038
2120
2221
2340
2437
257
2617
2759
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences63
ratio0.095
matches
0"She knew these stones marked the boundary— the edge of what was real and what was not."
1"Colors were richer, more layered than any Aurora had seen—blues deeper than sapphires, greens luminous like emeralds, and flowers blooming in perpetual, impossible vibrancy."
2"A ripple of sound arose—different than any song Aurora knew."
3"Then, a faint glow flickered in the distance — not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind that beckoned."
4"She could feel it now — a residual hum, like the beating of a dormant heart beneath the surface."
5"The wind picked up — not cold, but carrying the scent of distant thunderstorms, of endless rain-streaked quarrels of the Fae."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount805
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"endless rain-streaked quarrels"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02857142857142857
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013664596273291925
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean15.67
std7.94
cv0.507
sampleLengths
023
117
222
321
423
512
615
718
811
99
1025
1118
1217
1330
149
158
1614
1724
1828
1910
2010
2123
229
2323
243
2518
2620
2713
2817
296
3011
318
3220
3323
3411
359
367
3721
383
3912
4022
4114
429
4310
4412
4519
4620
4721
4823
496
83.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5079365079365079
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, it flowed like a"
1"Then, a faint glow flickered"
2"Then, with a sudden burst,"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences54
matches
0"She looked to Nyx, shadows"
1"They moved past a ring"
2"She knew these stones marked"
3"It was a place where"
4"It was music, but not"
5"Their form seemed to ripple,"
6"Her voice sounded like a"
7"Her skin prickled, sensing a"
8"she asked, voice subdued"
9"They came upon a clearing,"
10"It radiated faint warmth, pulsing"
11"She could feel it now"
12"She moved effortlessly, like the"
13"her voice like silk and"
14"She turned swiftly, fading into"
ratio0.278
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"The air outside thickened with"
1"Aurora hesitated, her fingers brushing"
2"She looked to Nyx, shadows"
3"Aurora’s voice was careful, almost"
4"Nyx’s silhouette shifted subtly, a"
5"Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered"
6"The faint glow of the"
7"Aurora prompted, her eyes scanning"
8"They moved past a ring"
9"Aurora pressed her palm against"
10"She knew these stones marked"
11"The air snapped tight around"
12"The world on the other"
13"It was a place where"
14"Colors were richer, more layered"
15"The flora stretched endlessly, twisting"
16"A ripple of sound arose—different"
17"It was music, but not"
18"Nyx muttered, voice carrying a"
19"Their form seemed to ripple,"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The flora stretched endlessly, twisting and spiraling toward a sky that was neither day nor night, but some eternal twilight where planets hung in a distant, sh…"
1"Instead, it flowed like a living thing, echoing from every direction and yet remaining a distant melody that seemed both alien and familiar."
2"A small stream wound past their feet, its water shimmering with unnatural clarity, revealing glimpses of distant, submerged worlds flickering beneath the surfac…"
3"Then, a faint glow flickered in the distance — not the kind of light that illuminated, but the kind that beckoned."
4"Then, with a sudden burst, the glow flared brighter, bathing them in a light that felt simultaneous blinding and warming."
5"A figure appeared at the edge of the glow, tall and slender, draped in flowing robes that shimmered with a thousand tiny stars."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Aurora prompted, her eyes scanning the shifting shadows ahead"
1"Nyx muttered, voice carrying a touch of awe"
2"she asked, voice subdued"
3"Nyx agreed, eyes narrowing as shadows flickered across the treetops"
4"Isolde warned, voice barely more than a whisper"
5"Aurora asked softly, voice almost lost in the thickening silence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx agreed (agree)"
2"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.316
61.3947%