| 25.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 7 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Lucien stepped back [back]" | | 2 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "she said slowly [slowly]" | | 4 | "his hands trembled slightly [slightly]" | | 5 | "His hand closed around [around]" | | 6 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.292 | | effectiveRatio | 0.175 | |
| 87.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1659 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1659 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "crystal" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "ensure" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "shattered" | | 8 | "weight" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1662 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 31 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1104 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Eva | 3 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Italian | 1 | | Started | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Frenchman" | | 4 | "Started" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "of which he'd apparently bargained away to s" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1662 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.70% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "meant that he'd" | | 1 | "making that choice" | | 2 | "replaying that moment" |
| |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 19.55 | | std | 18.98 | | cv | 0.97 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 60 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — flickered to the key dangling from her fingers." | | 1 | "Lucien's ivory-handled cane leaned against the radiator, and his jacket hung over the back of the single dining chair — signs he'd been here long enough to settle in." | | 2 | "Lucien's expression shifted — something vulnerable flickering across his features before he locked it away again." | | 3 | "Rory studied his face — the sharp angles of his cheekbones, the thin scar that ran along his hairline that she'd traced with her fingertips once, in a moment of weakness, in the back of a cab at three in the morning when they'd both had too much to drink and the space between them had felt impossible to maintain." | | 4 | "\"Leave it.\" His hand closed around her wrist — gentle, careful, his fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar from her childhood." | | 5 | "\"—beautiful idiot.\"" | | 6 | "Three months of silence, of hurt, of replaying that moment in the warehouse when he'd spoken words in a language that made her ears bleed and the demon had frozen, bound by whatever terrible bargain he'd struck—" | | 7 | "A smile ghosted across his lips — the first genuine one she'd seen from him in months." |
| |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1013 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03652517275419546 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01085883514313919 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 11.46 | | std | 10.25 | | cv | 0.894 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 7 |
| |
| 56.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.38620689655172413 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she knelt down and" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 42.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes — one" | | 1 | "He didn't seem to notice." | | 2 | "She felt him tense at" | | 3 | "He closed the door behind" | | 4 | "They both looked at the" | | 5 | "She dropped her bag on" | | 6 | "She filled it anyway, the" | | 7 | "She slammed the kettle onto" | | 8 | "She turned to face him," | | 9 | "His jaw tightened." | | 10 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 11 | "He said her nickname like" | | 12 | "she said slowly" | | 13 | "He didn't answer." | | 14 | "He didn't need to." | | 15 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 16 | "He reached past her for" | | 17 | "His voice was flat, controlled," | | 18 | "They both stared at the" | | 19 | "She wanted to scream at" |
| | ratio | 0.443 | |
| 23.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Lucien stood in the narrow" | | 2 | "The smell of curry drifted" | | 3 | "Lucien said finally, his French" | | 4 | "Rory crossed her arms" | | 5 | "His mismatched eyes — one" | | 6 | "A muscle twitched in his" | | 7 | "Ptolemy threaded between Lucien's ankles," | | 8 | "Rory watched the cat wind" | | 9 | "He didn't seem to notice." | | 10 | "That was new." | | 11 | "Lucien stepped back from the" | | 12 | "Rory pushed past him into" | | 13 | "She felt him tense at" | | 14 | "Eva's flat looked worse than" | | 15 | "Books towered in precarious stacks" | | 16 | "Lucien's ivory-handled cane leaned against" | | 17 | "He closed the door behind" | | 18 | "They both looked at the" | | 19 | "Lucien's expression didn't change, but" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory studied his face — the sharp angles of his cheekbones, the thin scar that ran along his hairline that she'd traced with her fingertips once, in a moment of…" | | 1 | "They stood in the middle of Eva's cluttered kitchen, surrounded by ancient texts and dying plants and the remnants of a broken teacup, and she watched him strug…" | | 2 | "Three months of silence, of hurt, of replaying that moment in the warehouse when he'd spoken words in a language that made her ears bleed and the demon had froz…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said finally, his French accent thicker than she remembered" |
| |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She pressed (press)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.15 | | leniency | 0.3 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |