Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0A2GE6FMFVWPK712KMPXE

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16.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart pounded in her chest as she climbed the narrow staircase to Eva's flat, her footsteps muffled by the worn carpet. The night had turned chilly, and she pulled her worn leather jacket tighter around herself, her breath creating small clouds in the air. The streets were quiet, the usual hustle of Brick Lane subdued by the late hour. Reaching the landing, Aurora hesitated in front of the door. She didn't like showing up unannounced, but Eva had always made it clear her home was a safe space for Aurora, anytime. With a sigh, she raised her hand and knocked twice, the sound echoing in the hallway. Moments later, the door opened a fraction, the chain still in place. A pair of heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers. "Rory," Lucien said, surprise flickering across his sharp features before he composed himself. "What are you doing here?" Despite the initial shock, Aurora felt a strange familiarity at the sight of him, a mix of comfort and anxiety. It had been months since she last saw him, their parting left with so many words hanging unspoken. "I could ask you the same, Luc," she replied, attempting to keep her voice steady, but the slight tremor betrayed her. "Is Eva here?" Lucien unhooked the chain and opened the door wider, stepping back to let her in. "No, she's not. She's in Brighton for a conference. She asked me to house-sit." Aurora walked past him into the cramped flat, resisting the urge to hug herself for warmth as she scanned the familiar chaos of books and notes. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed from his perch on the windowsill, eyeing her lazily. "So, house-sitting, huh?" Aurora turned to face Lucien, who had closed the door and was now leaning casually against it, his ivory-handled cane propped beside him. "Does that include answering her door at midnight?" His lips curled into a half-smile. "I would assume so. Besides, it's not every day I get a midnight visitor as intriguing as you." She scoffed, trying to ignore the way her pulse quickened at his words. "Always the charmer." His smile faded slightly, replaced by a more serious expression. "Why are you here, Aurora? Really." Aurora exhaled slowly, the weight of the day settling on her shoulders. "I had a rough night. Just needed to be somewhere safe." Lucien's gaze softened, and he took a step closer. "You know Eva's place is always safe for you. But you also know you don't have to do this alone." She looked away, unsure how to navigate the complex terrain of their past. They had once been close, closer than she allowed herself to think now. But time and circumstances had driven a wedge between them. Still, seeing him now, she couldn't deny the pull she felt, the unresolved tension. "I appreciate that, Luc. I do," she said, her voice quieter. "But it's hard to forget how things ended." He sighed and ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, the platinum strands catching the low light. "It wasn't an ending, Rory. More like... a pause. Life got complicated, for both of us." "And we're just supposed to pick up where we left off?" Aurora crossed her arms, her eyes searching his face. "Pretend like none of that pain existed?" "No," he replied firmly, closing the distance between them until he was standing mere inches away. "We acknowledge it, and we try to understand it. Together." Aurora felt the undeniable pull of his presence, the warmth from his body, and the familiar scent of his cologne. She wanted to reach out, to touch him, but the past was a barrier still too solid to break easily. "You hurt me, Luc." Her voice was barely a whisper. "And you hurt me," he replied, gently but with an edge of pain. "But that doesn't mean we should keep hurting each other by staying apart." Ptolemy jumped down from the windowsill, weaving between their legs before trotting off to his food bowl. The cat's presence broke the intensity of the moment, allowing Aurora to take a small step back, to breathe. "Maybe you’re right," she admitted. "Maybe avoiding each other isn't the solution." Lucien watched her carefully, his heterochromatic eyes filled with a mix of hope and caution. "Then how about we start with just being here? In this moment. No expectations, no pressure. Just us." She hesitated, then nodded, a small, tentative smile playing at her lips. "Okay. Just us." He extended his hand, and after a moment's pause, she took it. His fingers were warm and steady, grounding her. "Would you like some tea?" he asked, leading her to the cluttered kitchen area. "Tea sounds good," she replied, feeling the tension ease slightly. Lucien busied himself with the kettle, filling it with water and setting it on the stove. Aurora leaned against the counter, watching him with a mix of curiosity and nostalgia. "You've gotten better at this domestic stuff," she noted. He chuckled softly. "Eva's been a good teacher. She insists on proper tea etiquette." As they waited for the kettle to boil, an unusual sense of calm settled between them. It wasn't perfect, but it was a start. And for Aurora, that was enough for now. Minutes later, they sat at the small, cluttered kitchen table, steaming mugs of tea in front of them. Aurora wrapped her hands around her cup, savoring the warmth that spread through her fingers. "Tell me about Brighton," she said, trying to steer the conversation to safer ground. "What's Eva's conference about?" Lucien took a sip of his tea, considering her question. "It's a symposium on ancient texts. She's presenting some of her latest research on pre-Roman Celtic scripts. Fascinating stuff, really." Aurora smiled, picturing their mutual friend passionately discussing her work. "Sounds like Eva." Silence fell between them again, but this time it felt less heavy, more comfortable. They were making an effort, and that was something. "Aurora," Lucien began softly, his eyes meeting hers across the table. "I know it's going to take time. But I'm willing to wait. You mean too much to me to let the past define our future." Her breath hitched slightly, the sincerity in his words stirring emotions she had kept buried for months. "I don't know what the future holds, Luc. But maybe... we can figure it out together." His smile was warm, tender even. "I would like that very much." They sat in silence for a long time after that, sipping their tea and sharing glances that spoke volumes. The hurt and the history between them hadn't disappeared, but in the small flat on Brick Lane, surrounded by the remnants of Eva's research and the occasional meow from Ptolemy, they found the beginnings of a fragile, hopeful truce. And for now, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he replied firmly [firmly]"
1"Lucien began softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.105
43.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count2
7
adverb"passionately"
count1
8
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
4"gently"
5"carefully"
6"softly"
7"passionately"
8"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"intriguing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"complex"
count1
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"firmly"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"fascinating"
count1
19
word"silence"
count2
20
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"unspoken"
3"warmth"
4"scanned"
5"familiar"
6"intriguing"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"weight"
10"navigate"
11"complex"
12"tension"
13"firmly"
14"whisper"
15"intensity"
16"sense of"
17"perfect"
18"fascinating"
19"silence"
20"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount825
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Brick2
Lane2
Aurora14
Despite1
Lucien8
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.652
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1140
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
93.96% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.51
std12.7
cv0.479
sampleLengths
060
148
223
318
438
524
629
740
834
924
1016
1116
1223
1329
1450
1519
1633
1727
1826
1940
2010
2126
2236
2312
2433
2515
2620
2714
2810
2930
309
3114
3232
3333
3418
3530
3613
3723
3836
3933
4012
4158
426
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was standing"
1"were making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount828
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.035024154589371984
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.018115942028985508
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.26
std6.25
cv0.472
sampleLengths
022
123
215
310
422
516
612
711
813
95
1020
1118
1221
133
1415
1514
1626
1714
1826
198
206
2118
2213
233
2410
256
2612
2711
289
2920
3013
3113
3210
3314
3411
358
3617
3716
3820
397
4016
4110
4220
4320
4410
4513
4613
4717
4819
495
77.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.47674418604651164
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners41
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Still, seeing him now, she"
ratio0.017
46.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences60
matches
0"She didn't like showing up"
1"It had been months since"
2"she replied, attempting to keep"
3"His lips curled into a"
4"She scoffed, trying to ignore"
5"His smile faded slightly, replaced"
6"She looked away, unsure how"
7"They had once been close,"
8"she said, her voice quieter"
9"He sighed and ran a"
10"he replied firmly, closing the"
11"She wanted to reach out,"
12"Her voice was barely a"
13"he replied, gently but with"
14"She hesitated, then nodded, a"
15"He extended his hand, and"
16"His fingers were warm and"
17"he asked, leading her to"
18"she replied, feeling the tension"
19"He chuckled softly."
ratio0.433
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences60
matches
0"Aurora's heart pounded in her"
1"The night had turned chilly,"
2"The streets were quiet, the"
3"She didn't like showing up"
4"Moments later, the door opened"
5"A pair of heterochromatic eyes,"
6"Lucien said, surprise flickering across"
7"It had been months since"
8"she replied, attempting to keep"
9"Lucien unhooked the chain and"
10"Aurora walked past him into"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed"
12"Aurora turned to face Lucien,"
13"His lips curled into a"
14"She scoffed, trying to ignore"
15"His smile faded slightly, replaced"
16"Aurora exhaled slowly, the weight"
17"Lucien's gaze softened, and he"
18"She looked away, unsure how"
19"They had once been close,"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice quieter"
1"Aurora crossed, her eyes searching his face"
2"she said, trying to steer the conversation to safer ground"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she noted (note)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.105
80.3363%