Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0A3XCDCF5WQ1PQG7B9767

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.010504
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Waterdripped from the concave ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, a rhythmic, hollow plinking that echoed off the tiled walls. The air hung heavy and stagnant, smelling of damp iron, ozone, and something older, like burnt sage. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a rusted rail track, her boots crunching softly on the gravel. She checked the leather watch strapped to her left wrist. 02:14 hours. The blue light from the emergency strobes of the squad cars above filtered down the emergency stairs, casting long, dancing shadows that stretched and warped across the platform. She hated the Underground. It reminded her of being buried. "Down here." The voice drifted from the darkness near the old ticket barrier. Quinn moved forward, flashlight cutting a beam through the gloom. The light settled on a mess of curly red hair and a worn leather satchel sitting on the dirty ground. Eva Kowalski crouched over a body, her round glasses reflecting the harsh white beam. Quinn approached, her spine straight, shoulders square. She took in the scene without slowing. The victim lay supine on the dusty tiles. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a charcoal suit that cost more than Quinn made in a month. His skin was pale, drained of colour, and his eyes stared wide at the ceiling, the pupils fixed and blown. "He's cold," Eva said, not looking up. She tucked a stray lock of hair behind her left ear, a tremor in her fingers. "Rigor hasn't set in properly, but the temperature is wrong. He feels like he's been in a meat locker." Quinn knelt on the opposite side of the body. She snapped on a pair of latex gloves. "Time of death is estimated at midnight," Quinn said. "Two hours ago. It’s warm enough down here to delay cooling, but not this much." "It's not just the temperature." Eva stood up, brushing dust from her coat. "Look at the dust on his lapels." Quinn leaned in. A fine layer of grey silt coated the man’s suit. She touched the fabric. Dry. "The floor is wet," Quinn noted. The condensation from the tunnels had created slick patches on the concrete, but the man’s clothes were bone dry. "He didn't walk here," Eva said. "He was placed." "Carried, maybe." "Dropped." Quinn looked at the young researcher. Eva’s green eyes were darting around the station, scanning the shadows rather than the body. She reached into her satchel and pulled out a small brass compass. The casing was covered in a green patina, the face etched with strange, sharp sigils. "What is that?" "A Veil Compass. It tracks rifts." Eva held it flat against her palm. The needle spun violently, twitching north, then south, then snapping back to point directly at the corpse. "It’s going haywire. The resonance here is... loud." "We deal in facts, Kowalski. Fingerprints, DNA, ballistics. Not resonance." "Facts?" Eva gestured at the dead man. "What’s the cause of death? No wounds. No bruising. No ligature marks on the neck. He just stopped." Quinn examined the neck. Smooth skin. The pulse points were unblemished. She checked the wrists. Same. She ran her hands along the torso, feeling for breaks or concealed stab wounds. Nothing. The suit was unbuttoned at the top, the tie loose, but there was no sign of a struggle. The clothes were pristine, aside from the dust. "Massive coronary?" Quinn suggested. "Aneurysm?" "At his age? Maybe. But look at his expression." Eva shone her light on the victim's face. "That isn't the look of a heart attack. That's terror." The man’s mouth was open in a silent scream, the muscles of the neck frozen in extension. Quinn had seen heart attacks. They usually looked like surprise, or pain, or peace. This looked like he had seen the devil coming for him. "Overdose," Quinn said, standing up. "Tox screen will tell us. PCP can induce this kind of panic and catatonia." "There's no kit," Eva pointed out. "No needle, no packet, no wrapper. Junkies don't leave their gear behind. And they don't dress in Savile Row to shoot up in a ghost station." Quinn walked a tight circle around the body. She swept the flashlight over the surrounding debris. Discarded coffee cups, old newspapers, a rats' nest in the corner. Nothing that looked like drug paraphernalia. She stopped near the victim’s right hand. The fingers were curled into a tight fist. Quinn reached down and gently pried the thumb open. It was stiff, resisting her effort. She applied pressure, forcing the hand to unclench. Something small and white fell onto the tiles. Eva gasped. "Is that...?" Quinn picked it up with tweezers. A bone. Small, carved into the shape of a hexagon. A hole had been drilled through the centre. "A token," Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper. "For the Market. Entry fee." "The Veil Market?" Quinn frowned, turning the bone over in the light. "The rumour mill downstairs? I thought that was a fairy tale for grifters." "It's real. It moves. Every full moon. It’s here tonight. Or it was." "So he was a customer." Quinn held the bone up. "If this is a membership card, maybe he was robbed. Someone knocked him out, took the goods, left the body." "Then why leave the token? That’s the most valuable thing he had on him if he wanted to get back in." Quinn pocketed the token in an evidence bag. She shone her light on the walls of the station. The old advertising posters were peeling, revealing layers of history underneath. Victorian brickwork, then 1920s paint, then graffiti. She paused. Near the ceiling, roughly six feet up, the brickwork looked dark. A soot stain, shaped like a starburst. "Kowalski, hand me that compass." Eva hesitated, then passed the brass device over. Quinn held it up. The needle stopped spinning and pointed directly at the scorch mark on the wall. "He wasn't killed here," Quinn said. "We established that." "No. I mean, he wasn't killed on the ground." Quinn angled the beam of her flashlight to match the trajectory from the mark on the wall to where the body lay. "He fell from there." "There's no ledge," Eva said. "He was projected. Thrown." Quinn walked to the wall. She reached up, touching the soot. It came away on her glove, oily and slick. "There’s residue here. Not combustion. Something chemical. Alchemical?" Eva stepped closer, peering at the mark. "Brimstone. Cold iron. Maybe a containment rupture?" "Energy discharge," Quinn corrected. "Enough force to throw a grown man ten feet. But he doesn't have a scratch on him. No blunt force trauma to the head where he hit the tiles." "He hit the floor... gently," Eva murmured. "Like a feather. That explains the dry clothes and the lack of impact injuries. The force threw him, but the magic caught him." Quinn turned back to the body. She looked at the man’s chest again. She pressed her hand flat against the shirt fabric. "His heart isn't beating, obviously. But there's a vibration." "What?" "Put your hand here." Eva tentatively placed her hand over the victim's sternum. She pulled back instantly. "It’s humming. Like a live wire." "He wasn't murdered," Quinn said, her mind racing, piecing the impossible physics into a report she could barely comprehend. "He was a battery." The compass in Quinn’s hand began to heat up. The needle rotated faster, vibrating against the glass. "Whatever killed him took the energy," Eva said, her eyes wide. "A life drain. But it wasn't clean. The feedback loop burnt the wall." "Leaving the husk behind." Quinn looked at the bone token in the evidence bag. "And the key." "Maybe the key was the trigger," Eva suggested. Quinn scanned the darkness of the tunnel mouth. The blackness felt thicker now, oppressive. The Veil Compass was jumping in her palm, ticking like a Geiger counter near a meltdown. "This wasn't a robbery," Quinn said, staring into the dark. "And it wasn't an overdose. Someone—or something—opened a door, and this man was the payment." She clicked off her flashlight, plunging them into relative darkness, save for the dim blue glow from the stairs. "We need to clear the station. Now." "We can't just leave him," Eva protested. "We aren't leaving him. We are retreating to a secure perimeter." Quinn pulled her service weapon, checking the load. "Because the entity that took his payment might be coming back for change." Eva grabbed her satchel, clutching it tight to her chest. "The compass. It's pointing at the tunnel. The rift is still open." "Can you close it?" "Not with this. I need supplies. From the archives." Quinn holstered the weapon but kept her hand resting on the grip. She looked down at the dead man, the grey dust settling on his still-open eyes. "Then we move. Fast." She turned on her heel, her bearing rigid and sharp, heading back toward the emergency stairs. Eva scrambled to follow, the compass needle spinning wildly, pointing the way into the black.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"dancing"
3"gloom"
4"scanning"
5"etched"
6"resonance"
7"pulse"
8"pristine"
9"whisper"
10"racing"
11"scanned"
12"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1499
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount978
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn32
Underground1
Kowalski1
Eva21
Veil1
Compass1
Geiger1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like surprise, or pain, or peace"
1"looked like he had seen the devil coming"
2"looked like drug paraphernalia"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1499
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean20.82
std14.14
cv0.679
sampleLengths
037
156
210
32
455
514
644
742
817
924
1020
1118
1225
139
142
151
1648
173
1838
1910
2025
2157
225
2327
2442
2519
2632
2733
2838
298
304
3124
3215
3325
3413
3530
3621
3736
3820
395
408
4118
426
433
4435
455
4632
4714
4833
4930
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences114
matches
0"being buried"
1"was covered"
2"were unblemished"
3"was unbuttoned"
4"were curled"
5"been drilled"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"were darting"
1"were peeling"
2"was jumping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount772
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.025906735751295335
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007772020725388601
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.61
std5.96
cv0.62
sampleLengths
020
117
216
310
42
528
64
76
82
911
1010
1120
1214
137
147
158
1616
1720
187
1916
2019
219
228
239
2415
2513
267
273
2810
294
301
316
3219
336
343
352
361
376
3815
3912
4015
413
4213
4317
448
4510
467
4718
484
492
55.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3782051282051282
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences96
matches
0"She checked the leather watch"
1"She hated the Underground."
2"It reminded her of being"
3"She took in the scene"
4"His skin was pale, drained"
5"She tucked a stray lock"
6"She snapped on a pair"
7"She touched the fabric."
8"She reached into her satchel"
9"She checked the wrists."
10"She ran her hands along"
11"They usually looked like surprise,"
12"She swept the flashlight over"
13"She stopped near the victim’s"
14"It was stiff, resisting her"
15"She applied pressure, forcing the"
16"She shone her light on"
17"She reached up, touching the"
18"It came away on her"
19"She looked at the man’s"
ratio0.26
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences96
matches
0"The air hung heavy and"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She checked the leather watch"
3"The blue light from the"
4"She hated the Underground."
5"It reminded her of being"
6"The voice drifted from the"
7"Quinn moved forward, flashlight cutting"
8"The light settled on a"
9"Eva Kowalski crouched over a"
10"Quinn approached, her spine straight,"
11"She took in the scene"
12"The victim lay supine on"
13"His skin was pale, drained"
14"Eva said, not looking up"
15"She tucked a stray lock"
16"Quinn knelt on the opposite"
17"She snapped on a pair"
18"Eva stood up, brushing dust"
19"Quinn leaned in."
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Waterdripped from the concave ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, a rhythmic, hollow plinking that echoed off the tiled walls."
1"The blue light from the emergency strobes of the squad cars above filtered down the emergency stairs, casting long, dancing shadows that stretched and warped ac…"
2"The Veil Compass was jumping in her palm, ticking like a Geiger counter near a meltdown."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva said, not looking up"
1"Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
2"Eva said, her eyes wide"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Quinn noted (note)"
1"Quinn suggested (suggest)"
2"Quinn corrected (correct)"
3"Eva murmured (murmur)"
4"Eva suggested (suggest)"
5"Eva protested (protest)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.232
leniency0.464
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.174
77.9479%