Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0A8Z3GDWGCQCE44374VYZ

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32.6s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else, something metallic and cloying. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the final flight of stairs, her worn leather watch catching the single swinging beam of a work light. The sound of her boots on the gritty floor echoed in the cavernous space. A uniformed officer stood by a taped-off section of the platform, his face pale. “Evening, Detective.” Quinn nodded, her gaze sweeping the scene. The curved walls of the old tunnel were stained with decades of grime and efflorescence. In the centre of the taped-off area lay the body. A man, late thirties, dressed in clothes too expensive for a stroll through a derelict station. Her colleague, Detective Sergeant Finch, straightened up from his crouch beside the corpse. He offered a tight smile, his eyes tired. “Harlow. Glad you could make it. Interesting one.” “Interesting how, Finch?” “Looks like a deal gone wrong. Classic. Our vic, Julian Thorne, had a reputation for… unconventional procurement. Wallet’s gone, watch is missing. Probably interrupted a robbery.” Quinn didn’t reply. She stepped past the tape, her movements carrying a military precision that made the uniformed officer stand a little straighter. She circled the body slowly, letting the scene speak to her. Thorne’s eyes were wide, fixed on the grimy ceiling. No visible wounds on his face. His hands were clean, unblemished. No defensive injuries. She knelt, her sharp jaw a tense line in the shadows. The smell was stronger here. Not just blood. It was like ozone after a lightning strike, sharp and unnatural. “COD looks like a single stab wound to the abdomen,” Finch said, gesturing with his pen. “Deep. Perp knew what they were doing. Bled out fast. Minimal struggle.” Quinn’s focus wasn’t on the wound. It was on the floor around the body. She leaned closer, her breath fogging in the chill air. The concrete was stained a dark, spreading crimson, but the pattern was wrong. It wasn’t a pool. It was a circle. A near-perfect ring of blood that enclosed the victim, with only a single, clean break on the western side. “Finch. The blood.” He peered down. “What about it? He bled out. Gravity does the rest.” “Gravity doesn’t arrange itself into a goddamn ritual circle.” Finch sighed, a sound of long-suffering patience. “Harlow, not everything is a conspiracy. He could have been lying on something, a piece of debris that got moved. Or the blood just… flowed that way.” “There’s nothing to flow around. The floor is flat.” She stood, her eyes scanning the darkness beyond the work lights. “And where’s the weapon?” “We’re searching. Perp probably took it with him. Smart.” “Too smart,” Quinn murmured. She walked the perimeter of the taped area, her gaze drifting from the floor to the walls, to the tracks themselves. Something glittered near the rusted rail. She retrieved a pair of nitrile gloves from her coat pocket and knelt again. It was a small brass compass, no bigger than her palm. A fine patina of verdigris bloomed across its casing. The face was etched with sigils she didn’t recognise, intricate and foreign. The needle wasn't pointing north. It spun lazily, then stopped, quivering, aimed directly at the body. “What have you got there?” Finch asked, walking over. “Found this by the rail.” He squinted. “Some old trinket. Probably belonged to the vic. Dropped it in the struggle.” Quinn turned it over in her gloved hand. The sigils felt sharp against her fingertips. “Thorne was a high-end art dealer, Finch. He dealt in Picassos, not… this. This looks like it came from a pawn shop in a fantasy novel.” “Maybe he had a hidden hobby. Look, the forensics team is on their way. Let’s not get sidetracked by weird compasses and blood patterns. The evidence points to a straightforward robbery-homicide. We find the weapon, we canvass for witnesses, we get a lead.” “The only witness is a rat, and the evidence is screaming that we’re missing the point.” Quinn’s gaze fell back to the break in the blood circle. A single point of egress. An opening. “A robbery doesn’t require this much theatre. You take the wallet, you run. You don’t stop to… arrange the scenery.” She walked toward the break, her boots crunching on loose gravel. The air felt different here. Colder. The hairs on her arms stood up. She crouched again, tracing the invisible line of the circle with her eyes. The break was precise. Deliberate. Her mind flashed back three years. DS Morris, her partner, standing in a warehouse just like this one. The same wrongness in the air. The same sense of a reality that had been bent just enough to break. An official report cited a gas explosion. Unexplained circumstances. Quinn knew better. She’d seen something in the flickering darkness before the blast, something that defied every law of physics she held dear. “Harlow?” Finch’s voice pulled her back. She stood, slipping the compass into an evidence bag. “This wasn’t about his wallet, Finch.” “So what was it about? Some kind of cult thing? In Camden? Unlikely.” “Something was traded here. And Thorne was the price.” She looked back at the body, then at the compass in the bag. The needle inside was still pointing at the corpse, a silent, metallic finger pointing at an accusation no one else could see. “He wasn’t killed for what he had on him. He was killed for what he was. A gateway.” Finch shook his head, his expression a mixture of pity and frustration. “You see patterns where there are none, Harlow. Ever since Morris…” “Don’t,” Quinn’s voice was low and sharp. “Don’t say his name.” She turned away from him, her attention fixed on the dark mouth of the tunnel ahead. The work light only reached so far. Beyond its glow was pure, solid black. She knew, with a certainty that settled like ice in her gut, that whatever had happened here wasn't over. The circle was broken. Something had been let out. Or something had been let in. And the little brass compass in her hand was the only clue she had to find it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1040
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"perfect"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"pawn"
7"tracing"
8"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1034
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount709
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Detective2
Sergeant1
Finch6
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Finch"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.865
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1034
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.54
std22.97
cv0.777
sampleLengths
072
12
248
321
48
53
626
757
830
928
1064
113
1213
139
1434
1524
169
1745
1848
199
205
2115
2241
2343
2454
2542
2670
271
2814
296
3013
3162
3223
3311
3481
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"was stained"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.029453015427769985
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009817671809256662
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.44
std7.31
cv0.7
sampleLengths
022
122
214
314
42
57
615
710
816
913
108
118
123
1326
143
1520
1611
179
186
195
203
2111
225
233
2411
2516
2612
276
288
2910
3013
314
324
3319
343
353
3610
379
387
3927
4020
414
429
434
4421
456
4614
4711
489
4912
63.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41414141414141414
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences71
matches
0"Her colleague, Detective Sergeant Finch,"
1"He offered a tight smile,"
2"She stepped past the tape,"
3"She circled the body slowly,"
4"His hands were clean, unblemished."
5"She knelt, her sharp jaw"
6"It was like ozone after"
7"It was on the floor"
8"She leaned closer, her breath"
9"It wasn’t a pool."
10"It was a circle."
11"He peered down."
12"She stood, her eyes scanning"
13"She walked the perimeter of"
14"She retrieved a pair of"
15"It was a small brass"
16"It spun lazily, then stopped,"
17"She walked toward the break,"
18"She crouched again, tracing the"
19"Her mind flashed back three"
ratio0.352
9.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The sound of her boots"
3"A uniformed officer stood by"
4"Quinn nodded, her gaze sweeping"
5"The curved walls of the"
6"A man, late thirties, dressed"
7"Her colleague, Detective Sergeant Finch,"
8"He offered a tight smile,"
9"Quinn didn’t reply."
10"She stepped past the tape,"
11"She circled the body slowly,"
12"Thorne’s eyes were wide, fixed"
13"His hands were clean, unblemished."
14"She knelt, her sharp jaw"
15"The smell was stronger here."
16"It was like ozone after"
17"Finch said, gesturing with his"
18"Quinn’s focus wasn’t on the"
19"It was on the floor"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She stepped past the tape, her movements carrying a military precision that made the uniformed officer stand a little straighter."
1"A near-perfect ring of blood that enclosed the victim, with only a single, clean break on the western side."
2"She’d seen something in the flickering darkness before the blast, something that defied every law of physics she held dear."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stood, her eyes scanning the darkness beyond the work lights"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.069
83.1771%