Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0ACZWSCEV7CAB02B6QPP4

Run Details

Duration:
57.4s
Cost:
$0.055730
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sensation of crossing the Veil felt less like walking through a door and more like pushing through a membrane of freezing oil. Aurora gasped, her lungs seizing as the cold pressure snapped away, replaced instantly by a humid, cloying warmth. She stumbled, boots finding purchase on soft, yielding earth. Her hand flew to her chest. The Heartstone pendant burned against her sternum, its crimson pulse visible even through her shirt, beating in a frantic rhythm that matched her own heart. She gripped the silver chain, steadying her breath, and looked up. The sky burned a bruised, wealthy amber, devoid of a sun yet universally bright. It cast everything in a sepia wash, stealing the vibrancy of true color and replacing it with the gold of old varnish. Beside her, a pool of darkness elongated and rose from the ground. Nyx coalesced into their solid form, a silhouette of black static cut from the universe, towering at over six feet. Violet eyes ignited within the shadow of a face, scanning the horizon. "Dymas," Nyx whispered within the mind of everyone present, the voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement. "The realm of the insatiable." Isolde stepped through the rift behind them. The Half-Fae looked untouched by the transit, her silver hair spilling down to her waist like liquid mercury. She surveyed the landscape, her pale lavender eyes narrowing in distaste. Where her feet touched the loamy soil, the grass refused to bend, leaving no trace of her passage. "It stinks of rot and sugar," Isolde murmured, pulling her robes tighter. "A compost heap masquerading as a garden." Aurora drew the Fae-Forged blade from her belt. The moonsilver leaf-shaped dagger felt reassuringly icy in the suffocating heat. Its faint luminescence battled the oppressive amber glare as she took point. "We find the anchor and we leave," Aurora said, her voice tight. "Stay close." They stood at the edge of a sprawling vineyard that defied logic. Grapevines thick as pythons twisted around trellises made of polished bone. The leaves were the size of shields, sweating a sticky, sweet-smelling resin that dripped onto the path. The silence here had weight; it wasn't empty, but heavy, like a held breath before a scream. Aurora led them onto the main path. The air tasted of fermentation, a thick slurry of wine and yeast that coated the back of her throat. "Do not stray from the center of the track," Nyx advised, their form becoming incorporeal for a moment to flow over a protruding root before solidifying again. "The flora here is... enthusiastic." Aurora eyed a cluster of grapes hanging near her head. Each orb was the size of a swollen fist, the skin translucent and pulsing with purple veins. A low hum emanated from the cluster, a vibration she could feel in her teeth. "They look ready to burst," Aurora noted, stepping carefully around a puddle of viscous red liquid that looked suspiciously unlike grape juice. "They are fed well," Isolde said, her gaze fixed on the roots of the nearest vine. The soil there churned sluggishly. "The soil in this realm is not earth. It is appetite." They pushed deeper. The vineyard gave way to an orchard of trees with bark that resembled cured meat, peeling in greasy strips. Fruits hung from the boughs—pears of spun gold, apples that gleamed like polished rubies, and other shapes that had no earthly analogue, glistening with dew that smelled of expensive perfume. Aurora wiped sweat from her forehead with her left wrist, the crescent scar gleaming white against her flushed skin. The heat pressed against her temples. A profound, gnawing hunger woke in her gut, sharp and sudden. Her mouth watered as she looked at a low-hanging pomegranate, split open to reveal seeds that sparkled like garnets. She halted. The desire to reach out, to snap the fruit from the bough and crush it against her teeth, was physical, a magnetic pull jerking her hand upward. Isolde’s hand clamp around her wrist. The Seer’s grip was surprisingly strong, her fingers cool and dry. "Do not," Isolde commanded, the lyrical quality of her voice hardening into steel. "To eat of Dymas is to become part of the menu. The hunger you feel is not yours." Aurora blinked, the trance shattering. She yanked her hand back, revulsion curling in her stomach. "I wasn't... I didn't even realize I was moving." "That is the nature of the trap," Nyx whispered. The Shade drifted closer to the tree. They extended a hand of coalesced smoke toward the fruit. As the shadow touched the pomegranate, the fruit shrieked—a high, human sound of alarm—and retracted higher into the branches, the leaves shivering violently. Aurora tightened her grip on the moonsilver dagger. "Great. Screaming fruit. Exactly what I needed today." "Prince Belphegor prefers his ingredients lively," Nyx remarked, the violet eyes narrowing. "We are visible here. The amber light leaves no place to hide." "We aren't hiding," Aurora said, forcing confidence into her tone. She marched past the shivering tree. "We're trekking." The path widened, paved now with stones that looked like oversized molars. Ahead, the architecture of the realm began to intrude on the garden. Spires of amber crystal pierced the sky, connected by bridges of woven gold. The structures looked organic, grown rather than built, swelling and bulging like tumors. A sound reached them—a wet, rhythmic tearing noise, accompanied by the clatter of silverware and the dull roar of distant conversation. "The kitchens?" Aurora asked, keeping her voice low. "Or the trough," Isolde corrected. She paused, tilting her head. "The Veil is thin here, torn by the weight of their consumption. That is why the pendant burns." Aurora looked down. The Heartstone was frantic, the heat searing through the fabric of her shirt. She lifted the pendant. It pulled to the east, toward a dense thicket of hedge maze that bordered the golden structures. "This way," Aurora directed. They moved toward the hedge. The leaves here were sharp, serrated edges of copper and brass that chimed in the hot wind. The entrance to the maze loomed, a darkly gaping maw in the metal foliage. As they stepped across the threshold, the temperature spiked. The smell of roasting meat became overpowering, rich and heavy with spices—star anise, cinnamon, and something metallic, like blood on a hot skillet. Nyx stopped abruptly, their form flickering like a candle in a draft. "Wardens." Aurora froze. "Where?" "Not Wardens of the Veil," Nyx clarified, their voice dropping to a subsonic vibration. "Keepers of the Grove. Listen." Aurora strained her ears. Beneath the wind and the distant feasting, she heard heavy thuds. The ground trembled rhythmically. Something massive was moving through the maze, unseen on the other side of the copper hedge. Isolde stepped behind Aurora. "Iron and grease," she hissed. "It has no soul to see." "Does it bleed?" Aurora asked, raising the Fae blade. "If it eats, it bleeds," Nyx said. The hedge to their left exploded inward. Shower of copper leaves rained down like shrapnel. Aurora threw herself into a roll, coming up in a crouch. Through the breach in the hedge, a monstrosity lumbered into the amber light. It was a construct of gluttony—a towering figure nearly ten feet tall, its body a patchwork of stitched leather and iron bands, distended and swollen. Where a face should be, a single, vertical mouth split the head, lined with rows of rusted iron teeth. One hand ended in a cleaver the size of a car door; the other grasped a net of dripping chains. The creature roared, a sound of grinding metal and wet gurgles, and the smell of rancid butter blasted over them. "Spread out!" Aurora yelled. She darted to the right, boots sliding on the molar-paved path. The cleaver swung down, shattering the stones where she had stood a second before, sending tooth-fragments flying like shrapnel. Nyx dissolved. The Shade became a smear of darkness on the ground, sliding under the creature's legs. The monster stomped, confused, crushing only stone. Nyx reformed on its back, a distinct shadow clinging to the leather hide, and plunged a hand of semi-solid darkness into the stitching of the creature’s neck. The construct thrashed, reaching back to tear at the shadow, but there was nothing solid to grab. Isolde stood perfectly still amidst the chaos. Her eyes went white, the lavender iris swallowed by the glow of sight. She raised a hand, palm open. "Your hunger is a cage," Isolde intoned. The air around the creature warped. Vines from the nearby trellis shot forward, responding to the Fae magic. They weren't just plants; they were the hunger of the realm made manifest. The vines lashed around the construct's limbs, not dragging it down, but seeking to feed. The python-thick stems bored into the leather, seeking the fluids within. The creature shrieked, the sound vibrating in Aurora's bones. "Aurora, the knee!" Nyx’s voice carried on the wind. Aurora didn't hesitate. She sprinted forward, ducking under the wild swing of the chain net. She channeled her momentum, sliding onto her knees across the slick stones. As she passed the creature’s massive, iron-shod leg, she slashed outward with the Fae-Forged blade. The moonsilver bit deep. It didn't just cut leather; it severed the binding magic. A hiss of escaping steam and black bile erupted from the wound. The leg buckled. The construct crashed down, shaking the ground so hard Aurora nearly lost her footing as she scrambled upright. "Move," Aurora gasped, not waiting to see if it would rise. "While it's down." They bolted through the gap the monster had made in the hedge, sprinting into the deeper gloom of the maze. The amber light couldn't penetrate the dense copper canopy here, casting the path in jagged, metallic shadows. They ran until the sounds of the thrashing construct faded, replaced by the heavy, rhythmic thumping of their own blood in their ears. Aurora leaned against a wall of woven brass leaves, gasping for air. The air here was cooler, but the smell was worse—stagnant and old. Isolde brushed a stray lock of silver hair from her face, her breathing even, though her eyes were wide. "That was a Butcher. A servant of the lower kitchens. If it was here, we are close to the processing grounds." Nyx checked the perimeter, their form slightly indistinct, edges blurring from the exertion of maintaining solidity in a high-magic realm. "The pendant, Aurora. Check it." Aurora pulled the Heartstone from her shirt. The pulsing had stopped. The stone was dark, cold to the touch. "It's out," she said. "It stopped pulsing." Nyx moved closer, violet eyes scanning the dead gem. "It reacts to portals. If it is dormant, we are not near an exit." "Or we're too deep in," Aurora countered. She looked down the twisting metal corridor of the maze. "Or the portal isn't a place." "A riddle?" Isolde asked, tilting her head. "I detest riddles I do not craft." "No," Aurora said, pointing to the ground. At the center of the junction, the molar-stones were arranged in a spiral pattern. In the very center, the stones were missing, revealing a hole that dropped into absolute darkness. No amber light reflected from it. It was a throat in the earth. "The pendant led us to the mouth," Aurora realized. "We don't walk out of Dymas." She stepped to the edge of the pit. A draft of cold, sterile air blew up—the smell of the void between worlds. "We have to be swallowed," she finished, looking back at her companions. Nyx drifted to the edge, looking down into the abyss. "Fitting." Isolde frowned, smoothing the front of her dress. "Disgusting." "Necessary," Aurora said. She sheathed the glowing dagger. The darkness below seemed to invite them, a stark contrast to the overwhelming gluttony above. "On three?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.519
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1992
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1992
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count2
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"churned"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count2
16
word"searing"
count1
17
word"loomed"
count1
18
word"maw"
count1
19
word"trembled"
count1
20
word"amidst"
count1
21
word"gloom"
count1
22
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"scanning"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"could feel"
7"churned"
8"glistening"
9"gleaming"
10"profound"
11"desire"
12"magnetic"
13"stomach"
14"crystal"
15"rhythmic"
16"searing"
17"loomed"
18"maw"
19"trembled"
20"amidst"
21"gloom"
22"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1971
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1685
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone3
Isolde12
Half-Fae1
Aurora29
Fae-Forged2
Seer1
Shade2
Fae5
Nyx14
persons
0"Veil"
1"Isolde"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Aurora"
4"Seer"
5"Shade"
6"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.639
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences120
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like oversized molars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.507
wordCount1971
matches
0"not dragging it down, but seeking to feed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences177
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean26.64
std15.11
cv0.567
sampleLengths
050
142
236
344
423
554
619
731
814
957
1026
1132
1242
1322
1432
1552
1655
1729
1817
1931
2024
2149
2216
2324
2418
2550
2621
278
2828
2937
304
3136
3232
3313
343
3519
3635
3715
389
397
407
4132
4264
4320
444
4530
4651
4717
4826
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"were arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs304
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences177
ratio0.062
matches
0"The silence here had weight; it wasn't empty, but heavy, like a held breath before a scream."
1"Fruits hung from the boughs—pears of spun gold, apples that gleamed like polished rubies, and other shapes that had no earthly analogue, glistening with dew that smelled of expensive perfume."
2"As the shadow touched the pomegranate, the fruit shrieked—a high, human sound of alarm—and retracted higher into the branches, the leaves shivering violently."
3"A sound reached them—a wet, rhythmic tearing noise, accompanied by the clatter of silverware and the dull roar of distant conversation."
4"The smell of roasting meat became overpowering, rich and heavy with spices—star anise, cinnamon, and something metallic, like blood on a hot skillet."
5"It was a construct of gluttony—a towering figure nearly ten feet tall, its body a patchwork of stitched leather and iron bands, distended and swollen."
6"One hand ended in a cleaver the size of a car door; the other grasped a net of dripping chains."
7"They weren't just plants; they were the hunger of the realm made manifest."
8"It didn't just cut leather; it severed the binding magic."
9"The air here was cooler, but the smell was worse—stagnant and old."
10"A draft of cold, sterile air blew up—the smell of the void between worlds."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1706
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"gleaming white against her"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.021101992966002344
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.00996483001172333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean11.14
std6.3
cv0.565
sampleLengths
023
118
29
36
425
511
614
722
812
920
1012
1118
125
137
1418
1511
1618
1712
187
198
2011
2112
2212
232
2412
2511
2617
2717
287
2919
3027
315
3210
3317
3415
3522
3616
375
3811
393
4019
4130
4219
436
4411
4519
462
4727
486
4911
42.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2994350282485876
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences137
matches
0"She stumbled, boots finding purchase"
1"Her hand flew to her"
2"She gripped the silver chain,"
3"It cast everything in a"
4"She surveyed the landscape, her"
5"Its faint luminescence battled the"
6"They stood at the edge"
7"They pushed deeper."
8"Her mouth watered as she"
9"She yanked her hand back,"
10"They extended a hand of"
11"She marched past the shivering"
12"She paused, tilting her head."
13"She lifted the pendant."
14"It pulled to the east,"
15"They moved toward the hedge."
16"It was a construct of"
17"She darted to the right,"
18"Her eyes went white, the"
19"She raised a hand, palm"
ratio0.226
7.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences137
matches
0"The sensation of crossing the"
1"Aurora gasped, her lungs seizing"
2"She stumbled, boots finding purchase"
3"Her hand flew to her"
4"The Heartstone pendant burned against"
5"She gripped the silver chain,"
6"The sky burned a bruised,"
7"It cast everything in a"
8"Nyx coalesced into their solid"
9"Violet eyes ignited within the"
10"Nyx whispered within the mind"
11"Isolde stepped through the rift"
12"The Half-Fae looked untouched by"
13"She surveyed the landscape, her"
14"Isolde murmured, pulling her robes"
15"Aurora drew the Fae-Forged blade"
16"The moonsilver leaf-shaped dagger felt"
17"Its faint luminescence battled the"
18"Aurora said, her voice tight"
19"They stood at the edge"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.36% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant burned against her sternum, its crimson pulse visible even through her shirt, beating in a frantic rhythm that matched her own heart."
1"The leaves were the size of shields, sweating a sticky, sweet-smelling resin that dripped onto the path."
2"The air tasted of fermentation, a thick slurry of wine and yeast that coated the back of her throat."
3"The vineyard gave way to an orchard of trees with bark that resembled cured meat, peeling in greasy strips."
4"Fruits hung from the boughs—pears of spun gold, apples that gleamed like polished rubies, and other shapes that had no earthly analogue, glistening with dew tha…"
5"Her mouth watered as she looked at a low-hanging pomegranate, split open to reveal seeds that sparkled like garnets."
6"It pulled to the east, toward a dense thicket of hedge maze that bordered the golden structures."
35.71% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement"
1"Aurora said, her voice tight"
2"Nyx remarked, the violet eyes narrowing"
3"Nyx clarified, their voice dropping to a subsonic vibration"
4"Aurora gasped, not waiting to see if it would rise"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx advised (advise)"
3"Aurora noted (note)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"Isolde corrected (correct)"
6"Nyx clarified (clarify)"
7"she hissed (hiss)"
8"Aurora yelled (yell)"
9"Aurora gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.37
74.4957%