Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0AF55SKNR61MG6JYH2HTM

Run Details

Duration:
5m 16s
Cost:
$0.005815
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crimson gem against Aurora's sternum thrummed with heat. She paused before the shimmering distortion hanging between two ancient oak trees in Richmond Park. The air rippled like heat haze off tarmac, yet the London chill bit at her exposed neck. Her breath plumed in the grey afternoon light. Nyx coalesced beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow stretching tall against the bark. Faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on the tear in the Veil. The shadow's edges blurred, merging with the darkness beneath the trees. The Heartstone burns hotter. Aurora lifted the chain. The silver bit into her skin. The pulse matched the beat of her own heart, quickening with every second. She tucked the gem beneath her jacket and stepped forward. Cold London air vanished. Humidity wrapped around her like a wet blanket. The grey sky shattered into warm amber light. Gravity shifted, pressing down on her shoulders before lifting away. She stumbled onto soft grass. The ground sponged under her boots. Nyx flowed through the barrier without resistance. The shadow solidified, taking on the height of a man, six feet and two inches of darkness given form. Violet eyes scanned the horizon. The entity's form rippled, adjusting to the density of this realm. Dymas. Aurora straightened her jacket. Her straight shoulder-length black hair stuck to her cheeks. She wiped sweat from her brow. The air smelled of roasted meats, spiced wines, and rotting fruit. Sweetness cloyed at the back of her throat. It coated her tongue. Rows of vines stretched out before them. Grapes hung heavy, bursting with juice, purple skins translucent in the amber glow. Beyond the vineyards, orchards laden with golden apples and pomegranates rolled toward distant hills. The colors saturated her vision, too vivid, too deep. This place breathes. Aurora touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin tingled. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from the sheath at her hip. The moonsilver dagger gleamed cold against the warm light. Its leaf-shaped edge hummed, a low vibration that traveled up her arm. The weapon remained cold, a stark contrast to the oppressive heat. Nyx drifted ahead, feet not touching the ground. Shadows lengthened around them, pooling like ink. The shadow being moved through the tall grass without bending a single blade. Do not touch the fruit. Aurora sheathed the blade. Her bright blue eyes narrowed. She kicked a fallen pomegranate. Red seeds scattered across the grass. They writhed before settling. Tiny mouths opened on the seeds, snapping at the air. Everything here wants to be eaten. Or wants to eat us. They walked deeper into the vineyard. The vines grew thicker here, twisting into shapes that resembled grasping hands. Leaves whispered without wind. Aurora's boots sank into the loam. Each step released a scent of earth and yeast. The amber sky held no sun, yet light poured from everywhere, casting no distinct shadows except for Nyx. A structure emerged from the foliage. A pavilion constructed of white stone and draped with silks the color of blood. Long tables stood set with gold plates and crystal goblets. Food piled high on platters—whole roasted beasts, mountains of bread, cascades of honey. Flies buzzed around the meat in thick clouds. No one sat at the tables. Aurora approached the nearest platter. Steam rose from the meat. The aroma made her stomach clench with hunger, a sudden sharp pain. Saliva flooded her mouth. She gripped the Heartstone through her jacket. The warmth spread down her arm, fighting the compulsion. Nyx hovered over the table. The shadow passed a hand through a loaf of bread. The bread did not disturb. The crust remained intact. Illusion. Or preserved by magic. Aurora moved to the edge of the pavilion. Beyond the columns, a valley opened up. Smoke rose from pits in the distance. Figures moved among the smoke. Humans. They wore rags and carried heavy baskets. Chains bound their wrists. The metal glowed red hot against their skin. Helbound souls. Nyx descended to stand beside her. The whisper voice carried on the heavy air, sounding like wind through dry leaves. Contracts written in blood and hunger. Prince Belphegor demands excess. Aurora watched a figure stumble under the weight of a basket filled with glowing melons. An overseer clad in bronze armor struck the figure with a whip. The crack echoed across the valley. The figure did not cry out. They only reached for a fallen scrap of food. She tightened her grip on the dagger hilt. The cold metal grounded her. Her knuckles turned white. We need the source of the portal. The Stone leads us deeper. The pendant pulsed again, stronger this time. It pulled toward the center of the valley, toward a massive tree growing on a mound of earth. Its leaves were silver, shimmering like the blade at her hip. Roots sprawled out, thick as city pipes, diving into the ground. The bark looked like cured meat. Aurora stepped away from the pavilion. The grass here grew tall, brushing her waist. Insects buzzed, large and iridescent. One landed on her arm. Legs prickled against her skin. She flicked it off. Its wings sparked with static. Nyx flowed over the tall grass. The shadow form rippled, absorbing the light around it. The tree watches. Aurora looked up. The silver leaves did not move, yet she felt the weight of attention. The amber sky darkened slightly above the tree, clouds gathering like bruised flesh. Lightning flashed within the clouds, silent and violet. She walked toward the mound. The ground sloped upward. Her breath came harder in the thick air. The scent of food intensified, mixing with the smell of ozone and sulfur. Her stomach growled. She ignored it. At the base of the tree, a stone altar stood carved with runes. Bowls filled with wine sat upon it. The liquid remained still, reflecting the amber sky. Flies avoided the altar. Aurora reached out. Her fingers hovered over the bowl. Do not drink. Nyx's warning came sharp. Aurora pulled her hand back. She examined the runes. They matched the markings on the Heartstone chain. The silver of the chain matched the silver of the leaves. This binds the rift. She crouched. The dirt here felt warm, vibrating beneath her knees. She placed her palm flat on the earth. The vibration traveled up her arm, settling in her chest. It matched the rhythm of the pendant. Someone comes. Nyx dissolved into a wisp of smoke, slipping into the shadow of the altar. Aurora stood. She turned toward the path leading up the mound. Footsteps crunching on gravel echoed. The sound was heavy, deliberate. A figure emerged from the tree line. Tall, clad in robes woven from grapevines and gold thread. Horns curled from their temples, spiraling back like a ram. They carried a staff topped with a skull of crystal. The skull's jaw hung open. The figure stopped ten paces away. Dark eyes assessed Aurora, lingering on the bulge of the dagger beneath her jacket. The eyes held no white, only endless black. Mortal flesh smells sweet in Dymas. Aurora stood her ground. Her height felt insignificant against the horned figure, yet she locked her knees. She planted her boots in the soft earth. I'm just passing through. The figure laughed. The sound resembled grinding stones. Dust fell from the horns. None pass through without paying the tithe. Hunger demands payment. The Heartstone burned against her skin. Aurora's hand drifted toward her hip. The wind picked up, rustling the silver leaves of the tree. The sound resembled whispering voices. The whispers grew louder. The horned figure raised the staff. The crystal skull glowed with inner light. Violet light spilled from the eye sockets. Show me what you carry. Aurora shifted her weight. Her boots found purchase on the loose soil. She glanced at the shadow of the altar where Nyx hid. The shadow lengthened, creeping toward the figure's feet. The darkness detached itself from the stone. I carry nothing you want. The figure stepped closer. The scent of wine and decay rolled off them. It overwhelmed the smell of the fruit. The robes brushed the grass, leaving no mark. The Stone sings to me. Hand it over. Aurora's fingers brushed the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade. The cold metal seeped into her skin. She drew a breath. The air tasted of copper. Her lungs burned. Come and take it. The figure's eyes narrowed. The staff lifted higher. Light gathered at the crystal skull's mouth, coalescing into a sphere of energy. The air crackled. Nyx's shadow surged from the ground.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"structure"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count4
9
word"stomach"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"shattered"
3"scanned"
4"stark"
5"oppressive"
6"structure"
7"constructed"
8"crystal"
9"stomach"
10"warmth"
11"whisper"
12"weight"
13"echoed"
14"pulsed"
15"flicked"
16"footsteps"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences198
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences198
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences198
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1429
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1429
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Veil1
Heartstone4
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Nyx11
Belphegor1
Stone2
Dymas2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Belphegor"
4"Stone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Veil"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.835
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences120
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like cured meat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1429
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences198
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.82
std16.89
cv0.709
sampleLengths
049
137
24
333
441
542
61
742
843
93
1056
1128
125
1334
1411
1555
1651
176
1842
1924
205
2147
222
2320
2410
2548
2617
2712
2853
2938
3015
313
3237
3336
3432
359
363
3732
384
3936
402
4135
4242
4328
446
4525
464
4713
4810
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences198
matches
0"being moved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs256
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences198
ratio0.005
matches
0"Food piled high on platters—whole roasted beasts, mountains of bread, cascades of honey."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1435
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"red hot against their"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01602787456445993
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0027874564459930314
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences198
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences198
mean7.22
std3.57
cv0.495
sampleLengths
09
115
217
38
415
511
611
74
84
96
1013
1110
124
138
148
1510
165
176
187
1919
205
2111
221
234
249
256
2611
278
284
297
3013
3114
329
333
3410
353
3611
379
3812
3911
408
417
4213
435
444
455
465
476
484
4910
45.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3282828282828283
totalSentences198
uniqueOpeners65
17.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences191
matches
0"Faintly glowing violet eyes fixed"
ratio0.005
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences191
matches
0"She paused before the shimmering"
1"Her breath plumed in the"
2"She tucked the gem beneath"
3"She stumbled onto soft grass."
4"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
5"She wiped sweat from her"
6"It coated her tongue."
7"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
8"Its leaf-shaped edge hummed, a"
9"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
10"She kicked a fallen pomegranate."
11"They writhed before settling."
12"They walked deeper into the"
13"She gripped the Heartstone through"
14"They wore rags and carried"
15"They only reached for a"
16"She tightened her grip on"
17"Her knuckles turned white."
18"We need the source of"
19"It pulled toward the center"
ratio0.225
12.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount171
totalSentences191
matches
0"The crimson gem against Aurora's"
1"She paused before the shimmering"
2"The air rippled like heat"
3"Her breath plumed in the"
4"Nyx coalesced beside her, a"
5"The shadow's edges blurred, merging"
6"The Heartstone burns hotter."
7"Aurora lifted the chain."
8"The silver bit into her"
9"The pulse matched the beat"
10"She tucked the gem beneath"
11"Humidity wrapped around her like"
12"The grey sky shattered into"
13"Gravity shifted, pressing down on"
14"She stumbled onto soft grass."
15"The ground sponged under her"
16"Nyx flowed through the barrier"
17"The shadow solidified, taking on"
18"Violet eyes scanned the horizon."
19"The entity's form rippled, adjusting"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Its leaf-shaped edge hummed, a low vibration that traveled up her arm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1939%