Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
102
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"as if naming the emotion made it portable, His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with a quiet intensity that could have cracked a globe or kept it intact"
1
"as though granting Rory permission to accept the intrusion"
2
"quite forgiven her"
3
"felt like a bridge, not a trap"
4
"as though approving a dangerous ally’s right to carry a blade"
5
"as if signaling that the moment was real and that the moment deserved a next"
6
"as if laying down an anchor in a current that could pull them apart or pull them closer"
"A small sound—Ptolemy’s cautious meow from the other side of the door—broke the moment."
1
"She dropped her gaze to the map again, tracing a line with the tip of a finger that bore a crescent-shaped scar on the wrist—old, familiar, stubborn."
2
"“Love,” he replied, as if naming the emotion made it portable, “is what you call a risk you don’t mind taking when you’ve already lost the thing you need most.” His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with a quiet intensity that could have cracked a globe or kept it intact."
3
"Lucien’s eyes flickered with a quick flash of something almost ridiculous—resignation, maybe, or remorse—then steadied."
4
"She didn’t slide the blinds or look down; she stared out as if the city itself might offer a clue."
5
"Lucien watched the tremor in her hands—an unguarded thing, as if her own skin remembered a night that hadn’t quite forgiven her."
6
"Instead his gaze softened, and for the smallest instant, a line of vulnerability crossed his face—one that made the lines of his forehead look younger, his cheekbones less severe."
7
"Rory’s shoulders lowered a fraction; her breath, which had become a string pulled tight in her chest, found a slower rhythm."
8
"He looked back at Rory, and in his eyes there was something not easily named—a mixture of longing, resolve, and the stubborn gravity of someone who had spent too long mapping shadows to pretend they didn’t cast light."
9
"They moved toward the desk, the map, the notes—two silhouettes becoming a single, cautious outline."
10
"The room hummed with the quiet of decided actions, the careful, practical kind of romance that makes room for danger and for the possibility that the danger might finally mean something honest—something inevitable."
11
"They listened to the room—the cat’s soft purr, the rain’s slow grid against the glass, the clock’s patient tick—as if a true partnership could be measured in stillness as well as in action."
12
"And for the first time in a long, jagged while, the room felt almost bright with possibility—two people who once stood on the edge now standing at the brink together, not as rescue and rescuee, but as two equal halves attempting to become a whole again, one careful step at a time."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
73
technicalSentenceCount
23
matches
0
"She dropped her gaze to the map again, tracing a line with the tip of a finger that bore a crescent-shaped scar on the wrist—old, familiar, stubborn."
1
"He moved forward just enough to place the cane against the wall by the door, as though granting Rory permission to accept the intrusion."
2
"Rory’s breath hitched once, but she settled it with a careful exhale, the scar on her wrist catching the lamplight, turning pale silver."
3
"She turned her chair a fraction and faced him more fully, as though the distance between them were a fault line she could measure with her gaze."
4
"Her right hand brushed the edge of the map, smooth as river stones, and she spoke with a careful deliberateness that could have cut glass."
5
"He angled his head toward the cat, who had settled onto Rory’s chair, tail curling like a question mark."
6
"Lucien watched the tremor in her hands—an unguarded thing, as if her own skin remembered a night that hadn’t quite forgiven her."
7
"Rory crossed her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the lamplight again as she pressed her fingers against it, as if to remind herself that she could…"
8
"Ptolemy hopped down from the chair and padded along Rory’s leg to Lucien, sniffing him with a cat’s inevitable suspicion before rubbing his face against the can…"
9
"He spoke with a precise evenness that was both infuriating and reassuring."
10
"Rory’s shoulders lowered a fraction; her breath, which had become a string pulled tight in her chest, found a slower rhythm."
11
"Lucien moved as if relieved, a slow, almost mechanical ease returning to his posture."
12
"He held out the cane with a deliberate, almost ceremonial ease, offering it back to the wall as though it were a token of peace."
13
"Rory met his gaze, the blue of her eyes bright again, a spark that hadn’t existed since the day she’d learned to read the street’s weather as if it were a child…"
14
"The flat grew quieter as they stood there, two people who had once reached for something together and then learned to survive apart."
15
"The rain pressed at the glass, and the cat patted Rory’s hand with the rhythm of a small drum, as if signaling that the moment was real and that the moment dese…"
16
"Ptolemy stretched and yawned, a long, patient moment that punctured the tension with a thread of ordinary life."
17
"He looked back at Rory, and in his eyes there was something not easily named—a mixture of longing, resolve, and the stubborn gravity of someone who had spent to…"
18
"He nodded once, a single, quiet assent that carried more weight than a dozen loud promises, and in that nod the old distance dissolved a fraction, replaced by a…"
19
"The cat settled again, content to share a seat between rival loyalties, between two people who had learned to survive separately and now might learn to survive …"
20
"Lucien’s breath caught just enough for her to notice, and he let it go, the moment between them turning into something more solid, something that could be built…"
21
"The room hummed with the quiet of decided actions, the careful, practical kind of romance that makes room for danger and for the possibility that the danger mig…"
22
"They listened to the room—the cat’s soft purr, the rain’s slow grid against the glass, the clock’s patient tick—as if a true partnership could be measured in st…"