Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0AJM8J5ZVPX8AME6XCYZF

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Duration:
40.1s
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$0.002896
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AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell hit her first—copper and ozone, with something underneath like burned sage. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted stairs into the abandoned Camden Town tube station, her torch cutting through darkness that seemed thicker than natural shadows. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to trust her nose before her eyes. This smell meant something had happened here that defied easy explanation. "Detective Quinn!" A uniformed constable appeared at the bottom of the stairs, his face pale in the beam of his own torch. "We weren't expecting—you specifically, I mean." "Who found the body?" "Street cleaner, about five this morning. Called it in at five-forty." The constable swallowed. "We've got CID on scene, but DI Markham said you'd want to see this personally. Given the, ah, circumstances." Quinn didn't bother asking what circumstances. She'd received the call at three a.m., an unusual courtesy from her superintendent that had raised her hackles immediately. The fact that they'd summoned her to an abandoned tube station rather than a proper crime scene told her everything she needed to know about what they expected her to find. She moved past the constable into the main tunnel. The old platform stretched before her, tiles cracked and blackened, original wood paneling rotted to gray lace. Someone had strung battery-powered lanterns along the platform edge, casting pools of sickly yellow light. Two figures stood near the far wall, one hunched over something on the ground, the other pacing. "Harlow." DI Markham looked up as she approached, his mustache twitching with poorly concealed relief. "I was hoping you'd get here before the forensics team finished their initial sweep." "What's wrong with the scene?" Markham exchanged a glance with the other figure—a young woman Quinn didn't recognize, her red hair escaping from a hasty ponytail, round glasses perched on her nose. The woman carried a leather satchel that looked too worn to belong to any police officer Quinn knew. "Everything," Markham said. "Or nothing. That's the bloody problem." Quinn knelt beside the body. Male, she estimated, mid-thirties. Expensive suit, Italian leather shoes, watches on both wrists—a Submariner and something antique she couldn't identify. His face was frozen in an expression of profound surprise, eyes open, mouth slack. No visible wounds. No blood. "Heart?" she asked. "No signs of struggle, no trauma we can find. ME will need to confirm, but initial assessment suggests natural causes." Markham paused. "Except he was found in an abandoned tube station at four in the morning in a part of London that's been condemned for six years. And his pockets were full of these." He handed her an evidence bag. Inside were several objects: a small bone token, carved with symbols she didn't recognize, a brass compass with an emerald-green patina covering its face, and a slip of paper covered in what looked likecoordinates. "What's this place?" Quinn asked, though some part of her already knew. The smell, the strangeness, the way the shadows fell wrong even in the lamplight. "We were hoping you could tell us." The red-haired woman spoke for the first time, her voice steady despite the dark circles under her eyes. "I'm Dr. Kowalski. British Museum. I was asked to consult." "On what grounds?" "The items in his possession." Kowalski pointed to the evidence bag. "That bone token—I've only seen one like it in the restricted archives. It would have granted access to a very specific location. And that compass..." She trailed off, adjusting her glasses with a nervous gesture that involved tucking hair behind her left ear. "I've never seen one in person, but the description matches a Veil Compass. Attuned to supernatural rifts." Quinn stood slowly. "You're telling me this is a supernatural crime scene." "I'm telling you the victim was involved with something beyond conventional investigation." Kowalski met her gaze without flinching. "The question is whether he died here, or whether he died somewhere else and was moved." Markham cleared his throat. "That's actually what I wanted your eye on, Harlow. The scene doesn't make sense. Uniform says there were no tracks, no drag marks, no sign of entry or exit except the stairs we came down. But there's no way he walked here on his own in that state. And the ME can't explain it." Quinn walked the perimeter of the platform, her boots crunching on decades of accumulated debris. The walls were streaked with old water damage and newer graffiti, but there—half-hidden behind a collapsed ticket booth—she stopped. Scuff marks. Fresh. "Someone came through here recently." She crouched, tracing the pattern with her fingers. "Dragged something heavy. Or carried it." "That's what I thought." Markham appeared beside her. "But there's nothing else. No footprints, no fibres, nothing for forensics to work with. It's like the killer walked through and the floor just... forgot." "The floor didn't forget." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her knees. She walked back toward the body, her eyes fixed on something Markham had overlooked. "The position's wrong." "What do you mean?" "He's lying flat on his back, arms at his sides, legs straight. If he'd collapsed naturally, he'd be crumpled. If he'd been dumped, there would be disturbance." She gestured to the ground around the body. "Look at the dust. It's undisturbed except for one set of footprints leading to where he fell. The killer put him here. Carefully. Then walked back out the way they came." "So it was staged," Markham said. "Makes sense. Hiding the body in a place like this—" "No." Quinn pointed toward the far end of the platform, where darkness swallowed the tunnel. "The footprint trail ends there. At the edge of the light. Someone walked into the black and didn't come back." Kowalski stepped forward, her face pale. "The rifts. The compass—it would have pointed toward—" "A portal." Quinn's voice was flat. "You're saying someone opened a door and walked through? With a body?" "Or sent the body through. And then sealed it behind them." Kowalski's hand trembled slightly as she adjusted her glasses again. "It's possible. Some of the old texts describe translocation rituals. They require a... payment. A sacrifice." Quinn looked down at the dead man's face, that frozen expression of surprise. Not fear, she realized now. Recognition. He'd known what was coming. "He wasn't killed," she said slowly. "He was collected. Called here, given a reason to come alone, and then taken." "By who?" Quinn turned back to the darkness at the end of the platform. Something in her chest tightened, a memory she couldn't quite grasp—the smell of copper and ozone, the weight of a gun she hadn't fired in three years, Morris's voice saying something about the shadows in the old district. "That's what we need to find out." She pulled out her phone, already thinking about who she could call, what favours she could call in. The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers about it in the past, dismissed them as urban legend. But Morris had believed. Morris had gone looking. And Morris had ended up in the ground with a story about a case gone wrong that no one believed. "Detective?" Kowalski's voice pulled her back. "What do we do now?" Quinn looked at the evidence bag still clutched in her hand. The compass inside seemed to catch the lantern light strangely, as if the verdigris was trying to spread. "Now we follow the trail." She tucked the bag into her coat pocket. "Someone went to a lot of trouble to make this look like an accident, to make the evidence disappear. That means there's something to find. Someone made a mistake." She walked toward the edge of the light, toward the darkness where the tunnel disappeared into black. The others called after her, but she didn't stop. Three years of questions pressed against her skull like a physical weight. Morris had been looking into something. Something that led to this underground market, this world of rifts and portals and rituals. She would find the door. And whoever had walked through it would answer for what they'd done. The darkness swallowed her torch whole, and Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Kowalski's hand trembled slightly [slightly]"
1"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.08
81.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"profound"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"profound"
1"tracing"
2"trembled"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1355
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount813
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn15
Camden1
Town1
Markham8
Italian1
Submariner1
Kowalski5
Morris5
Veil1
Market1
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Markham"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.577
windowScore0.5
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed thicker than natural shadows"
1"quite grasp—the smell of copper and ozone, the weight of a gun she hadn't fired in three years, Morris's voice saying something about the shadows in the old district"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1355
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.51
std19.95
cv0.633
sampleLengths
064
128
24
333
456
558
629
75
845
99
1044
113
1254
1340
1426
1535
163
1771
1812
1934
2058
2137
2219
2333
2428
254
2666
2716
2835
2914
3018
3137
3224
3320
342
3550
3669
3711
3829
3942
4059
4117
4214
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"was frozen"
1"were streaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was coming"
1"was trying"
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"The smell hit her first—copper and ozone, with something underneath like burned sage."
1"Markham exchanged a glance with the other figure—a young woman Quinn didn't recognize, her red hair escaping from a hasty ponytail, round glasses perched on her nose."
2"Expensive suit, Italian leather shoes, watches on both wrists—a Submariner and something antique she couldn't identify."
3"The walls were streaked with old water damage and newer graffiti, but there—half-hidden behind a collapsed ticket booth—she stopped."
4"Something in her chest tightened, a memory she couldn't quite grasp—the smell of copper and ozone, the weight of a gun she hadn't fired in three years, Morris's voice saying something about the shadows in the old district."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount824
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01820388349514563
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00849514563106796
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean13.42
std9.79
cv0.73
sampleLengths
013
125
215
311
422
56
64
714
819
96
1019
1131
129
1317
1415
1517
1615
1714
185
1927
2018
213
226
235
244
2516
2614
273
282
293
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3132
326
3334
3412
3514
3625
3710
383
3911
4043
4117
423
439
4418
4516
464
4754
4815
4919
72.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45544554455445546
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences66
matches
0"She'd received the call at"
1"She moved past the constable"
2"His face was frozen in"
3"He handed her an evidence"
4"She trailed off, adjusting her"
5"She crouched, tracing the pattern"
6"She walked back toward the"
7"She gestured to the ground"
8"He'd known what was coming."
9"she said slowly"
10"She pulled out her phone,"
11"She'd heard whispers about it"
12"She tucked the bag into"
13"She walked toward the edge"
14"She would find the door."
ratio0.227
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences66
matches
0"The smell hit her first—copper"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"This smell meant something had"
3"A uniformed constable appeared at"
4"The constable swallowed"
5"Quinn didn't bother asking what"
6"She'd received the call at"
7"The fact that they'd summoned"
8"She moved past the constable"
9"The old platform stretched before"
10"Someone had strung battery-powered lanterns"
11"Markham exchanged a glance with"
12"The woman carried a leather"
13"Quinn knelt beside the body."
14"His face was frozen in"
15"He handed her an evidence"
16"Quinn asked, though some part"
17"The smell, the strangeness, the"
18"The red-haired woman spoke for"
19"Kowalski pointed to the evidence"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted stairs into the abandoned Camden Town tube station, her torch cutting through darkness that seemed thicker than natu…"
1"She'd received the call at three a.m., an unusual courtesy from her superintendent that had raised her hackles immediately."
2"The compass inside seemed to catch the lantern light strangely, as if the verdigris was trying to spread."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"constable appeared, his face pale in the beam of his own torch"
1"Markham looked up, his mustache twitching with poorly concealed relief"
2"haired woman spoke, her voice steady despite the dark circles under her eyes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"haired woman spoke (hair speak)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.04
80.4264%