| 42.11% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's hand tightened around [around]" | | 1 | "She turned back [back]" | | 2 | "the Seer said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |
| 78.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "crystalline" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "synchronized" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "comfortable" | | 14 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 95.61% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "From outside came a sound—a voice, human but扭曲, twisted into something that no longer belonged to the mortal plane." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1122 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 863 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.85 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Aurora | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.573 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite purple, not quite blue, tending toward something that existed between both" | | 1 | "not quite blue, tending toward something that existed between both" | | 2 | "gown that seemed to be made of pressed wildflowers, and where her bare feet touched the floor, nothing remained—no impression, no shadow, nothing to suggest weight or presence" | | 3 | "felt like winter, like starlight, like" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 26.71 | | std | 22.07 | | cv | 0.826 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 81 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 66 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 8 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was carved" | | 1 | "been surprised" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "Its bark shimmered with a faint silver luminescence, and its branches—impossibly high, impossibly spread—held leaves that glistened with dew despite the afternoon sun." | | 1 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—the distant traffic, the dog walkers, the twittering of normal birds—vanished." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours she had no names for—not quite purple, not quite blue, tending toward something that existed between both." | | 3 | "The bark around it was carved with scenes she almost understood—figures dancing, figures mourning, figures ascending toward a sky that held two moons instead of one." | | 4 | "She wore a gown that seemed to be made of pressed wildflowers, and where her bare feet touched the floor, nothing remained—no impression, no shadow, nothing to suggest weight or presence." | | 5 | "The temperature dropped, just slightly—just enough for Aurora to notice." | | 6 | "From outside came a sound—a voice, human but扭曲, twisted into something that no longer belonged to the mortal plane." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 878 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.0387243735763098 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011389521640091117 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 12.75 | | std | 8.01 | | cv | 0.628 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 69.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4772727272727273 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, gradually, other sounds emerged." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Its bark shimmered with a" | | 1 | "They grew in spiralling patterns" | | 2 | "She ducked inside." | | 3 | "Her silver hair pooled around" | | 4 | "She wore a gown that" | | 5 | "She touched the pendant" | | 6 | "She leaned forward, and her" | | 7 | "She moved to the great" | | 8 | "She turned back to Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.148 | |
| 25.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak appeared first, then" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice carried on wind" | | 4 | "The ancient oak stood alone" | | 5 | "Its bark shimmered with a" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted forward, their silhouette" | | 7 | "Aurora followed, her sneakers crunching" | | 8 | "The green of something that" | | 9 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 10 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—the" | | 11 | "A crystalline chime from somewhere" | | 12 | "The whisper of flowers opening," | | 13 | "Something that might have been" | | 14 | "Aurora breathed, and the word" | | 15 | "The grove opened around her" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 17 | "They grew in spiralling patterns" | | 18 | "Mushrooms clustered at the bases" | | 19 | "Nyx pointed toward the great" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Its bark shimmered with a faint silver luminescence, and its branches—impossibly high, impossibly spread—held leaves that glistened with dew despite the afterno…" | | 1 | "Twelve smaller oaks ringed it in a perfect circle, each one standing stone-still, their trunks marked with symbols that made Aurora's eyes water when she tried …" | | 2 | "Aurora followed, her sneakers crunching on grass that felt wrong beneath her feet." | | 3 | "The green of something that had never known drought, never known winter." | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours she had no names for—not quite purple, not quite blue, tending toward something that existed between both." | | 5 | "They grew in spiralling patterns that her eyes wanted to follow but kept losing track of, as though the spirals themselves were moving." | | 6 | "The bark around it was carved with scenes she almost understood—figures dancing, figures mourning, figures ascending toward a sky that held two moons instead of…" | | 7 | "The doorway smelled of honey and lightning and something older, something that made her think of the first morning ever, when the world had been new and everyth…" | | 8 | "Her silver hair pooled around her like liquid mercury, and her pale lavender eyes reflected the moss-light in ways that made Aurora's stomach clench." | | 9 | "She wore a gown that seemed to be made of pressed wildflowers, and where her bare feet touched the floor, nothing remained—no impression, no shadow, nothing to …" | | 10 | "The grass in question grew thick and lush, forming a natural seat that looked almost comfortable." | | 11 | "Beside her, Nyx slipped into a deeper shadow, their form growing less defined, as though the Fae Grove's reality was difficult for them to maintain." |
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| 46.05% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, their silhouette solidifying slightly as they approached the standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora breathed, and the word fell flat in the enchanted air" | | 2 | "Nyx's voice had, their form flickering between solid and shadow" |
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| 18.42% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "The voice laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.263 | |