Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0AZEKAEEE7EVAAQRS6SNA

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Duration:
4m 20s
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$0.005068
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked. Not the smooth turn of a key, but the gritty scrape of metal forcing metal. Aurora dropped the takeaway menu she was folding and reached for the knife block. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, rain dripping from the brim of a black umbrella he closed with a sharp snap. He stepped inside without invitation, his ivory-handled cane tapping against the worn floorboards. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne rolled off him, drowning out the smell of stale beer from the bar below. You picked the lock. I knocked. You ignored me. I was busy. He moved further into the room, the charcoal suit untouched by the damp London air. His heterochromatic eyes scanned the cramped space, lingering on the packed boxes in the corner. He stopped near the small kitchen table and rested both hands on the cane. Running again, Aurora. I am not running. You left Cardiff without a word. You changed your number. You vanished into this city like smoke. He tilted his head, the amber eye catching the low light while the black one seemed to swallow it. Do you know how difficult it is to find smoke? I did not ask you to look. No. You never do. Aurora kept her hand near the knife block. Her left wrist throbbed where the crescent scar pulled against the skin. She watched his posture, the relaxed shoulders that hid coiled violence. He was not here for a social call. He was here because something had broken in the delicate ecosystem of the underworld he tended. Why are you here, Lucien? He reached into his jacket. Aurora tensed, her fingers curling around the handle of a chef's knife. Lucien paused, a slow smile touching his lips. He withdrew a folded piece of paper and slid it across the table. A delivery receipt. From the Golden Empress. So you followed my work. I protect my investments. I am not an investment. Everyone is. He pushed the paper closer. The ink was smudged. The address listed was not the restaurant. It was Eva's flat on Brick Lane. Aurora felt the blood drain from her face. She stepped forward and snatched the paper. You went to Eva's. I went to where you should be. The flat is compromised, Aurora. Three deadbolts cannot keep out what is hunting you. Nothing is hunting me. Evan is not the only monster you left in Wales. The name hung in the air, heavy and toxic. Aurora gripped the paper until it crumpled. She remembered the bruising grip of her ex, the way he shattered plates when she spoke back. She had run to London to escape that shadow. Lucien had been the one to help her vanish, then vanished himself when the heat died down. Now he was back, bringing the heat with him. You said it was over. You said he would not follow. I said he would not find you. I did not account for his new associates. Associates. Lucien tapped the cane against the floor. The sound echoed the bass from Silas' bar downstairs. A low thrum that vibrated in Aurora's chest. There are whispers in Avaros. Someone is paying demons to sniff out human bloodlines. Your father's cases in Cardiff made enemies. Enemies with long memories and deeper pockets. My father is a barrister. He argues in courtrooms. He argues against things that do not belong in courtrooms. Lucien moved around the table. Aurora did not retreat. She stood her ground, the knife hidden behind her thigh. He stopped inches from her, tall enough to loom, close enough to touch. She could see the faint scar running through his platinum eyebrow. I told you to stay in the light, Rory. You prefer the shadows. The shadows are safer. The shadows are where they feed. He reached out. Aurora flinched, but he only brushed a stray lock of black hair behind her ear. His fingers were cold. The touch sent a shiver down her spine that had nothing to do with fear. The history between them crackled, unspoken attractions and unresolved debts tangling in the small space. I need you to come with me. No. It is not a request. Everything with you is a command. It is a necessity. Aurora shoved him back. He did not move, solid as a stone wall. She stepped away, putting the table between them. Her heart hammered against her ribs, but her voice remained steady. I am not going anywhere with you. Not after you disappeared for six months. Not after you left me to deal with Evan alone. I dealt with Evan. You vanished. I removed the threat permanently. The silence stretched. Aurora searched his face for a lie. She found none. Only a cold, pragmatic certainty. He had killed Evan. The realization settled in her stomach like lead. Relief and horror mixed together. You killed him. I neutralised the variable. He was human. He was a liability. Lucien straightened his cufflinks. The movement was casual, dismissive. As if discussing a spillage rather than a death. Aurora felt the knife heavy in her hand. She should call the police. She should scream. Instead, she asked the question that mattered. Who is coming for me now? A group called the Obsidian Hand. They believe your bloodline carries a key. To what? To a gate. He walked to the window and peered through the blinds. The street below was dark, illuminated only by the neon sign of the bar. A black van idled across the road. No lights. Engine running. They are already here. Aurora moved to the window. She saw the van. She saw the figures standing in the alleyway opposite. They wore masks. Not ski masks. Something metallic. Something that glinted like scales. How long have they been there? Ten minutes. Why did you wait? I wanted to see if you would run. And? You reached for the knife. Lucien turned from the window. He drew the cane from its sheath. A thin blade slid out with a whisper of steel. He held it out to her, hilt first. You cannot stay here. The bar below will be collateral. Silas does not deserve that. Aurora looked at the blade. Then at the door. The lock clicked again. This time it was not Lucien. Someone was picking it from the outside. Fast. Professional. Lucien's eyes narrowed. The black pupil dilated until the amber was a mere ring of fire. Behind me. No. Aurora grabbed a second knife from the block. She stood beside him, shoulder to shoulder. The door handle turned. The wood groaned under pressure. You do not know how to fight them. I know how to survive. The door burst open. Three figures stepped into the hallway, clad in dark armour that seemed to absorb the light. The leader raised a weapon that hummed with violet energy. Lucien stepped forward, the blade in his hand gleaming. Stay close, Rory. Do not tell me what to do. The leader fired. Lucien deflected the bolt with the cane, the impact sparking against the steel. Aurora lunged, not at the enemy, but at the light switch. She plunged the room into darkness. Chaos erupted. The hum of the weapon whined in the dark. Aurora counted the breaths. One. Two. Three. She knew the layout of her own flat. They did not. She moved low, slashing at the knees of the figure nearest the door. A grunt of pain. The smell of burnt ozone filled the air. Lucien was a blur of motion, his cane striking with precision. Another figure crashed through the window. Glass shattered onto the floor. Aurora rolled under the table as a bolt scorched the wood above her head. They want you alive. Then I will make it difficult. She threw the knife. It buried itself in the shoulder of the figure at the window. He stumbled back, falling into the alley. Lucien grabbed her arm. His grip was iron. We leave. Now. The fire escape. Yes. They moved toward the kitchen window. The leader recovered, raising the weapon again. Aurora kicked the table. It slammed into the leader's legs. He fired wild. The bolt hit the gas pipe. A hiss filled the room. The smell of natural gas mixed with the ozone. Lucien stopped. He looked at the pipe. Then at her. You are mad. Move. They jumped through the window onto the fire escape just as the flat exploded. The blast threw them against the brick wall. Heat washed over them. Aurora coughed, the air thick with smoke and debris. Lucien checked her quickly, his hands running over her arms, her ribs. Satisfied she was whole, he pulled her up. They will not stop. I know. Then we hunt them. Aurora looked down at the street. The black van was gone. Only the burning wreckage of her flat remained. She wiped soot from her cheek. Her hand shook, just once. Then she stilled it. Lead the way, Lucien. He offered his arm. She took it. They descended into the night, leaving the fire behind. But as they hit the ground, a phone buzzed in Lucien's pocket. He glanced at the screen. His face went pale. What is it? He turned the phone toward her. A message flashed on the screen. No sender. Just text. We have Eva.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"variable"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"throbbed"
2"shattered"
3"echoed"
4"vibrated"
5"eyebrow"
6"down her spine"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"stomach"
10"variable"
11"whisper"
12"gleaming"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences245
matches
0"o with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences245
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences245
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1563
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Instead, she asked the question that mattered."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1560
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London2
Aurora22
Cardiff2
Lucien18
Golden1
Empress1
Eva3
Brick1
Lane1
Wales1
Avaros1
Rory2
Evan4
Obsidian1
Hand1
You16
Three3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Hand"
7"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Golden"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Wales"
6"Avaros"
globalScore0.795
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences118
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"As if discussing a spillage rather than a death"
1"armour that seemed to absorb the light"
72.04% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.28
wordCount1563
matches
0"Not the smooth turn of a key, but the gritty scrape of metal forcing metal"
1"not at the enemy, but at the light switch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences245
matches
0"escape that shadow"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std15.34
cv1.04
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125
1338
147
155
164
175
182
1938
204
2121
224
2310
2468
2511
2615
271
2824
2928
309
3110
3243
3313
344
356
3652
377
381
395
406
414
4232
4324
444
452
465
4735
483
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences245
matches
0"was smudged"
1"is compromised"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs305
matches
0"was folding"
1"was picking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount517
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.009671179883945842
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019342359767891683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences245
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences245
mean6.38
std3.92
cv0.614
sampleLengths
03
115
214
34
420
513
621
74
82
93
103
1115
1215
1314
143
154
166
174
187
1919
2010
217
221
233
248
2512
2611
278
2816
295
305
3112
328
3313
343
354
365
374
385
392
405
414
427
437
448
457
464
477
485
499
42.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2571428571428571
totalSentences245
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences217
matches
0"Only a cold, pragmatic certainty."
1"Instead, she asked the question"
2"Then at the door."
3"Then I will make it"
4"Then at her."
5"Then we hunt them."
6"Only the burning wreckage of"
7"Then she stilled it."
ratio0.037
35.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount100
totalSentences217
matches
0"He stepped inside without invitation,"
1"You picked the lock."
2"You ignored me."
3"I was busy."
4"He moved further into the"
5"His heterochromatic eyes scanned the"
6"He stopped near the small"
7"I am not running."
8"You left Cardiff without a"
9"You changed your number."
10"You vanished into this city"
11"He tilted his head, the"
12"I did not ask you"
13"You never do."
14"Her left wrist throbbed where"
15"She watched his posture, the"
16"He was not here for"
17"He was here because something"
18"He reached into his jacket."
19"He withdrew a folded piece"
ratio0.461
36.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount184
totalSentences217
matches
0"The lock clicked."
1"Aurora dropped the takeaway menu"
2"The door swung inward."
3"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
4"He stepped inside without invitation,"
5"The scent of ozone and"
6"You picked the lock."
7"You ignored me."
8"I was busy."
9"He moved further into the"
10"His heterochromatic eyes scanned the"
11"He stopped near the small"
12"I am not running."
13"You left Cardiff without a"
14"You changed your number."
15"You vanished into this city"
16"He tilted his head, the"
17"I did not ask you"
18"You never do."
19"Aurora kept her hand near"
ratio0.848
69.12% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences217
matches
0"Now he was back, bringing"
1"As if discussing a spillage"
2"To a gate."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She watched his posture, the relaxed shoulders that hid coiled violence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9190%