| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "otherworldly" | | 10 | "testament" | | 11 | "palpable" | | 12 | "symphony" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "down her spine" | | 15 | "dance" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 33.85% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 7 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "filled with awe" | | 3 | "d with awe" | | 4 | "filled with wonder" | | 5 | "d with wonder" | | 6 | "a sense of belonging" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1039 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 911 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.512 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "breeze that seemed to come from nowhere, their colors vibrant and otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1039 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.58% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that this" | | 1 | "knew that this" |
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| 95.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 35.83 | | std | 17.39 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 46 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 915 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.022950819672131147 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01092896174863388 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.44% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 14.04 | | std | 5.21 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.2702702702702703 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Their presence was a whisper" | | 2 | "She glanced at the Heartstone" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 4 | "she spoke in riddles, her" | | 5 | "She felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 6 | "their voice was a soft" | | 7 | "She noticed Isolde's footprints left" | | 8 | "They felt cool and smooth," | | 9 | "It was a place of" | | 10 | "It was haunting, a tune" | | 11 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 12 | "She glanced at Nyx, their" | | 13 | "She felt a connection to" | | 14 | "She knelt by the stream," | | 15 | "It felt alive, a current" | | 16 | "She looked up at Nyx," | | 17 | "She knew that this place" | | 18 | "She knew that this journey" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 6.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 1 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 2 | "She felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "Their presence was a whisper" | | 4 | "Rory's voice carried a hint" | | 5 | "Nyx's form shifted slightly, a" | | 6 | "Rory nodded, the air around" | | 7 | "She glanced at the Heartstone" | | 8 | "The grove beckoned, a place" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped" | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 11 | "she spoke in riddles, her" | | 12 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 13 | "She felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 14 | "The blade glowed faintly in" | | 15 | "Time behaved differently here, an" | | 16 | "Rory felt a tingling sensation," | | 17 | "The wildflowers danced in a" | | 18 | "Nyx moved ahead, their form" | | 19 | "their voice was a soft" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint distortion, a reminder of the Veil that separated realms." | | 1 | "Rory nodded, the air around them felt different, charged with an energy that was both alien and familiar." | | 2 | "Rory felt a tingling sensation, as if the grove itself was alive, watching them with unseen eyes." | | 3 | "She felt a connection to the land, a bond that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm." | | 4 | "A stream flowed with water that sparkled like diamonds, its surface reflecting the light in a dance of colors." | | 5 | "She knew that this place held answers, secrets that could change the course of her journey." | | 6 | "As they explored further, Rory felt the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its power a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the Veil." | | 7 | "As they stood in the heart of the grove, Rory felt a sense of belonging, a connection to the land that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she spoke, her voice a melody of ancient wisdom" | | 1 | "Rory pointed, their petals shimmering with an iridescent glow" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |