Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0B14WPND6ABXZ0C9NTK4G

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Duration:
10.6s
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$0.015487
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, her bright blue eyes scanning the ancient oak standing stones that marked its boundary. The air shimmered with a faint distortion, a reminder of the Veil that separated realms. She felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse gently against her chest, its warmth a subtle reassurance. Beside her, Nyx, the Shade, hovered in their incorporeal form, a silhouette of living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes. Their presence was a whisper on the wind, a reminder of the realms beyond. "Are you sure this is the place?" Rory's voice carried a hint of skepticism, her cool-headed nature always demanding certainty. Nyx's form shifted slightly, a ripple of shadow. "The Grove is here, hidden between the folds of reality. You feel it, don't you?" Rory nodded, the air around them felt different, charged with an energy that was both alien and familiar. She glanced at the Heartstone Pendant again, its deep crimson glow a beacon in the dim light. The grove beckoned, a place of wildflowers blooming year-round, untouched by the passage of time. Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped forward, her ethereal presence almost blending with the grove itself. Her pale lavender eyes held secrets, and her silver hair cascaded like moonlight. "The Grove welcomes those who seek its truths," she spoke in riddles, her voice a melody of ancient wisdom. Rory took a deep breath, the scent of wildflowers mingling with the crisp air. She felt the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface cold to the touch, a gift from Isolde herself. The blade glowed faintly in the moonlight, a reminder of the power it held. As they crossed the threshold, the world shifted. Time behaved differently here, an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Rory felt a tingling sensation, as if the grove itself was alive, watching them with unseen eyes. The wildflowers danced in a breeze that seemed to come from nowhere, their colors vibrant and otherworldly. Nyx moved ahead, their form solidifying slightly, a humanoid silhouette against the backdrop of the grove. "The air here is thick with magic," their voice was a soft murmur, barely audible. Rory followed, her steps careful, the ground beneath her feet soft and yielding. She noticed Isolde's footprints left no trace, a testament to her Fae nature. The grove was a place of wonder, its beauty both enchanting and unsettling. "Look," Rory pointed to a cluster of flowers, their petals shimmering with an iridescent glow. "I've never seen anything like it." Isolde smiled, a knowing look in her eyes. "The Grove reveals its secrets to those who listen." Rory crouched down, reaching out to touch the petals. They felt cool and smooth, a texture unlike any flower she'd encountered. The grove was alive, its magic palpable, a symphony of colors and sounds. As they ventured deeper, the air grew warmer, the light shifting in hues of amber and gold. Rory felt a sense of unease, a reminder that the grove was not entirely benign. It was a place of power, a realm where the Veil thinned, allowing glimpses of the worlds beyond. Nyx paused, their form flickering. "Do you hear that?" Rory strained her ears, catching a faint melody, a song carried on the wind. It was haunting, a tune that spoke of ancient times and forgotten lore. She felt a shiver run down her spine, the grove's magic weaving its way into her soul. Isolde's eyes glimmered with understanding. "The Grove sings to those who listen." Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse again, its warmth a steady rhythm. She glanced at Nyx, their violet eyes meeting hers. "What do you think it means?" Nyx's voice was a whisper, a secret shared between shadows. "The Grove holds many truths, some are meant to be discovered, others remain hidden." Rory nodded, her curiosity piqued. The grove was a place of wonder, its mysteries unfolding with each step. She felt a connection to the land, a bond that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm. As they continued, the grove revealed more of its secrets. A stream flowed with water that sparkled like diamonds, its surface reflecting the light in a dance of colors. Rory felt drawn to it, the water calling to her with a silent song. She knelt by the stream, dipping her fingers into the cool liquid. It felt alive, a current of energy that flowed through her, connecting her to the grove's magic. She looked up at Nyx, their form a shadow against the light. "This place is incredible," Rory's voice was filled with awe, the grove's beauty overwhelming. Nyx nodded, their presence a comforting shadow. "The Grove is a place of wonder, a realm where the Veil thins and magic thrives." Isolde watched them, her lavender eyes filled with ancient wisdom. "The Grove reveals its truths to those who seek them." Rory felt a sense of peace, the grove's magic a balm to her soul. She knew that this place held answers, secrets that could change the course of her journey. The grove was a realm of discovery, a world where the boundaries of reality blurred. As they explored further, Rory felt the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its power a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the Veil. The grove was a place of beauty, but it was also a realm of shadows, a world where the line between light and dark was thin. Nyx's voice broke the silence, a whisper carried on the wind. "The Grove holds many secrets, some are meant to be discovered, others remain hidden." Rory nodded, her heart filled with wonder and anticipation. The grove was a place of magic, a realm where the Veil thinned and the worlds beyond beckoned. She knew that this journey was only the beginning, a path that would lead her to truths she had yet to uncover. As they stood in the heart of the grove, Rory felt a sense of belonging, a connection to the land that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm. The grove was a place of wonder, a world where magic thrived and secrets waited to be revealed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count5
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"testament"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"symphony"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count3
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"dance"
count1
16
word"comforting"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"shimmered"
2"reminder"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"charged"
7"familiar"
8"beacon"
9"otherworldly"
10"testament"
11"palpable"
12"symphony"
13"sense of"
14"down her spine"
15"dance"
16"comforting"
17"weight"
18"silence"
19"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
33.85% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells7
narrationSentences64
matches
0"a sense of unease"
1"felt a shiver"
2"filled with awe"
3"d with awe"
4"filled with wonder"
5"d with wonder"
6"a sense of belonging"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1039
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount911
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory18
Fae4
Grove1
Veil4
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx9
Shade1
Varga1
Seer1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Veil"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Seer"
6"Blade"
7"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.512
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"breeze that seemed to come from nowhere, their colors vibrant and otherworldly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1039
matches(empty)
76.58% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"knew that this"
1"knew that this"
95.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.83
std17.39
cv0.485
sampleLengths
094
120
223
350
447
548
655
731
839
921
1017
1134
1250
139
1444
1512
1627
1724
1835
1943
2041
2114
2223
2320
2445
2553
2625
2749
2846
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was haunting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount915
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.022950819672131147
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01092896174863388
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
88.44% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean14.04
std5.21
cv0.371
sampleLengths
030
115
215
320
414
520
68
715
818
917
1015
1115
1213
1319
1414
1520
1614
178
1813
1917
2017
2116
2215
2313
2413
2513
2615
276
288
299
309
3112
3213
3317
3415
3518
365
374
3814
3913
4017
415
427
4312
449
456
4610
4714
485
4913
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.2702702702702703
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences64
matches
0"She felt the Heartstone Pendant"
1"Their presence was a whisper"
2"She glanced at the Heartstone"
3"Her pale lavender eyes held"
4"she spoke in riddles, her"
5"She felt the Fae-Forged Blade"
6"their voice was a soft"
7"She noticed Isolde's footprints left"
8"They felt cool and smooth,"
9"It was a place of"
10"It was haunting, a tune"
11"She felt a shiver run"
12"She glanced at Nyx, their"
13"She felt a connection to"
14"She knelt by the stream,"
15"It felt alive, a current"
16"She looked up at Nyx,"
17"She knew that this place"
18"She knew that this journey"
ratio0.297
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences64
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The air shimmered with a"
2"She felt the Heartstone Pendant"
3"Their presence was a whisper"
4"Rory's voice carried a hint"
5"Nyx's form shifted slightly, a"
6"Rory nodded, the air around"
7"She glanced at the Heartstone"
8"The grove beckoned, a place"
9"Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped"
10"Her pale lavender eyes held"
11"she spoke in riddles, her"
12"Rory took a deep breath,"
13"She felt the Fae-Forged Blade"
14"The blade glowed faintly in"
15"Time behaved differently here, an"
16"Rory felt a tingling sensation,"
17"The wildflowers danced in a"
18"Nyx moved ahead, their form"
19"their voice was a soft"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The air shimmered with a faint distortion, a reminder of the Veil that separated realms."
1"Rory nodded, the air around them felt different, charged with an energy that was both alien and familiar."
2"Rory felt a tingling sensation, as if the grove itself was alive, watching them with unseen eyes."
3"She felt a connection to the land, a bond that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm."
4"A stream flowed with water that sparkled like diamonds, its surface reflecting the light in a dance of colors."
5"She knew that this place held answers, secrets that could change the course of her journey."
6"As they explored further, Rory felt the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its power a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the Veil."
7"As they stood in the heart of the grove, Rory felt a sense of belonging, a connection to the land that transcended the boundaries of the mortal realm."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she spoke, her voice a melody of ancient wisdom"
1"Rory pointed, their petals shimmering with an iridescent glow"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
73.2576%