Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0B1CMCQ915E56BH22ACH2

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.000883
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The insistent rapping on her door, a sound so rare it jolted Rory from the hypnotic drone of a late-night documentary, made her freeze. Ptolemy, usually a creature of supreme apathy, twitched his tail on the worn armchair, one amber eye surveying the hallway outside the flat. Three deadbolts secured Eva’s door, a testament to a paranoia Rory herself sometimes shared, especially after Evan. She padded across the floor, the wood protesting softly beneath her bare feet, and peered through the peephole. The face staring back was one she hadn't seen in years, yet it was as familiar as her own reflection. Polished platinum blond hair, slicked back with effortless precision, framed a face sculpted by shadows and sharp angles. Heterochromatic eyes, one the colour of warm amber, the other a void of black, studied the lens with an unnerving intensity. Lucien Moreau. She hadn't expected him, not ever. Not after that night, not after everything that had evaporated between them like mist on a cold London morning. A breath caught in her throat. He looked exactly the same, perhaps even more refined, his customary charcoal suit a stark silhouette against the dim landing light. The ivory-handled cane he leaned on, a familiar affectation, tapped a quiet rhythm against the scuffed lino. He hadn’t changed, but she certainly had. The pre-law student who had once stumbled into his orbit, all wide-eyed naivety and desperate hope, was gone. In her place stood Rory, a delivery driver for a Cantonese restaurant, living above a pub, with a crescent-shaped scar on her wrist and a past she mostly kept buried. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the locks. What did he want? After all this time, what would bring Lucien Moreau to her doorstep in the dead of night? The silence stretched, punctuated only by the distant wail of a siren and the thumping of her own heart against her ribs. Ptolemy stretched, then sauntered to the door, rubbing his flank against the wood with a low rumble. "Fine," she muttered, her voice raspy with disuse. She slid back the first deadbolt, then the second. The third lock protested with a loud click. The door swung inwards, opening a sliver of the space he now occupied. Lucien’s gaze swept over her, lingering for a fraction longer than necessary. A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips, a subtle shift that hinted at amusement. "Aurora," he greeted, his voice a low, cultured rumble, the French accent still a silken lure. "You look… surprised." "Lucien. What are you doing here?" The words were more blunt than she intended, but a sudden surge of adrenaline had stripped away any desire for pleasantries. "Can one not visit an old acquaintance?" His dark eye crinkled at the corner. "Without occasion?" "It's past midnight. On a Tuesday." She leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, trying to project an composure she didn't entirely feel. His presence was a disruption, a sudden, potent wave of nostalgia and something akin to dread. He pushed the door open a little wider, stepping across the threshold without invitation. Ptolemy weaved around his ankles, a silent, furry ambassador of the flat. "And yet, here I am. I find myself in the neighbourhood. A sudden, unexpected impulse, perhaps." His gaze swept around the cramped entrance hall, taking in the teetering stacks of books, the scattered research notes, the faint aroma of incense and old paper. "Still hoarding literature, I see, Eva." "It's not my flat," Rory corrected, pushing herself away from the door, a new tension coiling in her gut. This was Eva's place, a sanctuary of organised chaos, a stark contrast to the meticulous order Lucien usually inhabited. "She's out of town." His eyes narrowed, the amber one glinting with sudden focus. "Out of town? For how long?" "A few days. A conference." She watched him, trying to decipher the flicker of something behind his impassive expression. "You know Eva?" "We move in similar circles, Aurora." He gestured vaguely with his cane. "London is a surprisingly small place, when one knows where to look. And who to ask." He took another step inside, his tailored suit looking impossibly out of place amidst the bohemian clutter. The air between them thickened, charged with unspoken questions and memories. "What do you want, Lucien?" she asked again, her voice firm. She needed to cut through the dance. "Why are you really here?" He paused, his gaze finally settling on her, intense and probing. He surveyed her from her bare feet to the way her messy black hair fell around her shoulders. "I have a proposition for you, Aurora. Something that requires your particular… talents." Her brow furrowed. "My talents? I deliver noodles, Lucien. Twice a week." Disbelief coloured her tone. He finally let out a soft chuckle, a sound that sent a shiver down her spine. "Do not play coy with me, Laila. I know about your work as Malphora. The little arrangements you make for Mr. Cheung. The quiet disappearances. The discreet recoveries." The alias, Malphora, a name she used for only the most sensitive of Cheung's requests, left her breathless. How did he know? She met his steady gaze, a flicker of defiance igniting within her. "You've been watching me?" "Observing," he corrected smoothly. "A crucial distinction. And I have been most impressed. You possess a certain… flair. A knack for the unconventional." He stepped closer, the ivory-handled cane tapping softly against an overloaded bookshelf. "And I have a problem that requires a very unconventional solution. A problem that, I believe, only you can solve." Rory’s mind raced. Eva’s research notes, scattered across every available surface, suddenly seemed more significant. Eva, with her vast network of contacts and her encyclopedic knowledge of London's occult underbelly, had always been the one to tackle the truly bizarre. But Eva was gone, and Lucien Moreau stood on her doorstep, offering a cryptic task that spoke of danger and secrets she hadn't dared to touch in years. "What kind of problem?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper, the question hanging heavy in the air. Lucien inclined his head, his heterochromatic eyes never leaving hers. "Something rare. Something ancient has resurfaced. Something that requires a delicate touch. And a keen intellect. And, as I said, a certain flair that few possess." He paused, letting the silence amplify the weight of his words. "It concerns a rather… troublesome artifact. And its current guardian is proving most recalcitrant." An artifact? The word conjured images of dusty museums and hushed auction rooms, but Lucien's tone suggested something far more potent, something that pulsed with dark energy. She felt a familiar prickle of unease, the instinct of self-preservation warring with a dangerous curiosity. His presence alone was a memory of a past she had tried to outrun, a past filled with thrilling danger and intoxicating intimacy, a past that still had the power to pull her in. "And why me?" she pressed, needing to understand his logic. "Why not go to one of your… usual contacts?" He took another step closer, and the confined space of the hallway seemed to shrink. He was close enough now that she could smell the faint, sophisticated scent of his cologne, a mix of sandalwood and something unexpectedly floral. "Because, Laila," he murmured, his voice lower now, a subtle shift from his earlier detached tone, "your particular brand of ingenuity, the one that so captivated me all those years ago, is precisely what this situation demands. And because, perhaps," his gaze flickered downwards, towards the crescent scar on her wrist, barely visible beneath the hem of her pyjama sleeve, "you have a certain… shared history with the kind of darkness that deals in such objects." The mention of her scar, a relic of a childhood accident involving a broken pane of glass and a moment of childish recklessness, sent a jolt through her. It was a small thing, barely noticeable, but Lucien had always seen the details others missed. He had seen her, truly seen her, in a way few had before. That alone had been enough, back then, to draw her in. And now, standing here, the air thick with unspoken things, she could feel the tendrils of that old attraction, that potent pull, beginning to reassert themselves. The years had not dimmed the spark between them, merely banked the embers. "I don't know, Lucien," she said, her voice a little unsteady. "It sounds dangerous." And it sounded like a trap, a gilded cage he was offering her once more. He offered her that small, knowing smile again. "All the most interesting things are, wouldn't you agree, Aurora?" He extended a hand, his fingers long and elegant, the skin smooth against the warm air. "Come. Tell me what Eva knows. Perhaps together, we can convince this recalcitrant guardian to release what is rightfully… unpossessed."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:50:44.895Z" 2/19/2026, 3:50:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
9.52% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His gaze swept around [around]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she asked again [again]"
3"he corrected smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.19
73.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count2
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
5"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"testament"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"effortless"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"stark"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"amidst"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"furrowed"
count1
16
word"down her spine"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"pulsed"
count1
21
word"flickered"
count1
22
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"testament"
1"familiar"
2"effortless"
3"intensity"
4"stark"
5"silence"
6"desire"
7"tension"
8"sanctuary"
9"glinting"
10"flicker"
11"amidst"
12"charged"
13"unspoken"
14"dance"
15"furrowed"
16"down her spine"
17"raced"
18"whisper"
19"weight"
20"pulsed"
21"flickered"
22"could feel"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of his words"
2"sent a shiver down"
3"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1477
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1146
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Eva5
Evan1
Moreau3
London2
Cantonese1
Lucien8
French1
Malphora1
Cheung1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Cheung"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
44.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something akin to dread"
1"seemed more significant"
2"sounded like a trap, a gilded cage he was"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1477
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean50.93
std28.11
cv0.552
sampleLengths
082
186
299
368
438
546
627
716
838
975
1042
1116
1222
1356
1423
1542
1616
1744
1838
1955
2068
2118
2261
2377
2419
25115
26107
2729
2854
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was offering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences93
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.01% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1152
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.052083333333333336
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.021701388888888888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.88
std10.64
cv0.67
sampleLengths
024
123
217
318
420
518
621
72
86
919
106
1121
1217
137
1418
1530
168
174
1817
1922
2017
218
229
238
2413
2512
2615
2716
283
2927
3014
312
3222
3316
3414
3512
3643
376
3819
3919
404
4110
426
4319
443
4512
4633
4711
4811
497
70.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45161290322580644
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences77
matches
0"She padded across the floor,"
1"She hadn't expected him, not"
2"He looked exactly the same,"
3"He hadn’t changed, but she"
4"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
5"she muttered, her voice raspy"
6"She slid back the first"
7"he greeted, his voice a"
8"His dark eye crinkled at"
9"She leaned against the doorframe,"
10"His presence was a disruption,"
11"He pushed the door open"
12"His gaze swept around the"
13"His eyes narrowed, the amber"
14"She watched him, trying to"
15"He gestured vaguely with his"
16"He took another step inside,"
17"she asked again, her voice"
18"She needed to cut through"
19"He paused, his gaze finally"
ratio0.506
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"The insistent rapping on her"
1"Ptolemy, usually a creature of"
2"She padded across the floor,"
3"The face staring back was"
4"She hadn't expected him, not"
5"A breath caught in her"
6"He looked exactly the same,"
7"The ivory-handled cane he leaned"
8"He hadn’t changed, but she"
9"The pre-law student who had"
10"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
11"The silence stretched, punctuated only"
12"Ptolemy stretched, then sauntered to"
13"she muttered, her voice raspy"
14"She slid back the first"
15"The third lock protested with"
16"The door swung inwards, opening"
17"Lucien’s gaze swept over her,"
18"A faint, almost imperceptible smile"
19"he greeted, his voice a"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The pre-law student who had once stumbled into his orbit, all wide-eyed naivety and desperate hope, was gone."
1"A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips, a subtle shift that hinted at amusement."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she muttered, her voice raspy with disuse"
1"she asked again, her voice firm"
2"she pressed, needing to understand his logic"
3"she said, her voice a little unsteady"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory corrected (correct)"
2"he corrected smoothly (correct)"
3"she pressed (press)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.286
68.6281%