| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1201 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1201 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "amidst" | | 6 | "enigmatic" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "furrowed" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "tinged" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "structure" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "intricate" | | 18 | "echoing" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.34% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1199 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1019 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 4 | | Blade | 4 | | Earthly | 1 | | Aurora | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Fae-Forged" | | 2 | "Earthly" |
| | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if deciphering a hidden script" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to emanate from the air itself" | | 2 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 3 | "hum that seemed to grow louder the further they ventured" | | 4 | "something like reverence" | | 5 | "revelry that seemed to shift as they approached" | | 6 | "music that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1199 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 33.31 | | std | 22.45 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 81 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 25 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath their feet was carpeted in moss so thick it muffled their footsteps, and wildflowers bloomed in dizzying colors — petals that shifted hues as the light touched them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1022 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03424657534246575 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018590998043052837 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.62 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 51.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3368421052631579 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Nyx, their" | | 1 | "She moved soundlessly, her lavender" | | 2 | "she replied, her voice carrying" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 4 | "It pulsed steadily, its warmth" | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "She turned toward the sound," | | 7 | "They carried a basket woven" | | 8 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade," | | 9 | "They bowed their head, their" | | 10 | "They gestured toward a path" | | 11 | "They walked in silence, the" | | 12 | "Its design was both opulent" | | 13 | "They swung open without a" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted the moment" | | 1 | "Aurora’s skin prickled, as if" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 3 | "She glanced at Nyx, their" | | 4 | "Isolde strode ahead, her silver" | | 5 | "She moved soundlessly, her lavender" | | 6 | "The grove stretched before them," | | 7 | "The trunks spiraled upward, their" | | 8 | "The leaves overhead were unnaturally" | | 9 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 10 | "Aurora whispered, her voice barely" | | 11 | "Isolde didn’t turn, her gaze" | | 12 | "she replied, her voice carrying" | | 13 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their voice" | | 14 | "Isolde paused, her pale lavender" | | 15 | "Aurora’s hand instinctively went to" | | 16 | "The cold metal hummed faintly" | | 17 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 18 | "Isolde’s lips curved into a" | | 19 | "The path ahead twisted and" |
| | ratio | 0.928 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora could react, the" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 14.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s skin prickled, as if the atmosphere itself were alive and aware of their intrusion." | | 1 | "She moved soundlessly, her lavender eyes scanning the surroundings as if deciphering a hidden script." | | 2 | "The ground beneath their feet was carpeted in moss so thick it muffled their footsteps, and wildflowers bloomed in dizzying colors — petals that shifted hues as…" | | 3 | "The amber sky above cast everything in a golden hue, the light filtering through the leaves in dappled patterns that shifted as they walked." | | 4 | "The figure’s distorted form rippled, their laughter a haunting melody that sent a shiver down Aurora’s spine." | | 5 | "Before Aurora could react, the figure lunged, their form dissolving into a cloud of shimmering mist that swirled around them." | | 6 | "Its design was both opulent and otherworldly, with towering spires of amber glass that caught the golden light and refracted it into dazzling patterns." | | 7 | "Intricate carvings adorned the walls, depicting scenes of feasts and revelry that seemed to shift as they approached." | | 8 | "The air was thick with the scent of spices and the faint hum of music that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |