Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0BD7AX5TREKMD824RNGHP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.004315
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tunnel smeared against the light when the bone token slid through the slot and the door sighed open. Damp air crawled over her knuckles, tasting of copper and rain-stained brick. The corridor beyond glittered with a strange, disciplined kind of quiet—the hush that followed a crowd when the last conversation dies and the first flicker of some unseen lantern begins. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through and let the door close with a soft, final thump. The Veil Market lay ahead like the inside of a clock that forgot to tell time. Stalls crowded in impossible spirals, fabrics and sigils and glass vials catching the pale glow of lamps that burned without flame. The air smelled of ozone, iron filings, and something sweet that reminded her of an old fruit she’d once hated as a kid. A figure stood by the entrance, a slender silhouette with a satchel swinging lightly at the hip and eyes that moved too quickly to belong to a single person. Eva Kowalski, her childhood friend and occult researcher, stood framed in the light from a lantern that hung crookedly from a nail on the stall’s post. Eva tucked a curl behind her ear with a nervous flutter of the wrist that Quinn recognized well. The Market didn’t stay in one place for long. The full moon’s pull nudged it along, nudged the walls into a different angle, nudged the stalls into new alignments. Quinn’s tongue remembered the sting of the night partner Morris had vanished into something that hadn’t existed in the daylight—supernatural origins she still didn’t fully understand. The memory tried to twist and settle in her stomach, but she forced it down with a breath she learned long ago to keep steady when the world tilted. Eva moved closer, her satchel brushing a horn of a stall that sold things no cleaner than a rumor. Her voice came soft and quick, as if she’d rehearsed this moment a hundred times and hoped it would go right this time. Quinn scanned the periphery, eyes sliding over a line of coughing lanterns, a vendor polishing glass jars that reflected the Market’s faces back at you, a child’s toy someone long ago forgot. The body wasn’t far away, and the improvised hallways between stalls formed a labyrinth Quinn could navigate in her sleep if she let herself drift. “Something’s wrong,” Eva whispered, almost to herself. “Not just wrong for a crime scene. Wrong for an ordinary room.” Quinn nodded once, and stepped deeper into the Market’s breathing hush. A circle of black stones lay on the floor, arranged with a precision that felt like a trap for a ritual, not a stumble upon a body. The stones formed a rough pentagon, their edges catching the lantern glow and throwing it back in a dozen angry shards. The body lay at the center, rigid, a vendor’s apron smeared with dark stains, a small copper key clenched in one white-knuckled hand. The key wasn’t the sort you’d steal off a door; this one looked as if it were meant to unlock something more than a drawer or cabinet—perhaps a portal the Market concealed behind its moving walls. “Over there,” Eva whispered, pointing toward a stall whose owner was missing, or perhaps hiding. The stall’s sign, half-scratched away by something that wasn’t a human hand, read in curling letters: Shadow Sigils. A glass case showed a row of amulets whose stones pulsed with a slow, irregular breath. Quinn crouched and whispered into the space between worlds where the Market’s gravity pressed her teeth together. The blood on the floor had a pattern. Not random splatter, not a clean line of a strike. It traced a curve that looked almost like a sigil itself, a map of something she couldn’t name, drawn with a careful, almost reverent hand. “Someone wanted us to follow this,” Quinn said, voice low enough that it wouldn’t travel beyond the chalk rings that kept the Market’s whispers from spilling into the street above. Eva stepped closer, eyes narrowed. “Or someone wanted you to see the map the way they see it. The Market’s not random, Harlow. It’s a language.” Quinn stood, dusting off her knees as she rose. The Veil Compass lay on the floor where the body’s hand must have hit when it fell. Brass casing glinted, verdigris turning the metal green in the lantern light. The face of the compass bore intricate sigils that looked more like a heartbeat than a map. The needle quivered, then steadied, pointing not at the door to the street but toward a narrow passage behind a stall that sold ledgers and ceremonial quills. The Market’s walls breathed with a low, hollow sound, as though they were listening for a voice none of the patrons could hear. Quinn reached for the Veil Compass and lifted it. The compass’s needle moved, slow and perceptible, toward the back of the stall, where a curtained doorway hung like a cloth over an opening to a private room. Behind the curtain, a glimmer of something unfamiliar—the pale shimmer of something that wasn’t quite light, more a ripple, a breath of air that seemed to exist only where magic woke. “The token,” Eva said, “the bone token. It’s not the gate’s requirement alone. It’s a key to a path. The Market keeps a ledger of paths, and the token marks who may walk them.” Quinn looked toward the body again, then examined the floor where the body had intended to go. The blood pattern, Eva’s point, was a deliberate guide, not a confession. Someone staged a homicide to push attention toward one corner of the Market, away from the doorway that the Veil Compass was signaling. “Clever,” Quinn said flatly. “Clever and dangerous.” She straightened, her eyes narrowing. “This isn’t a random crime. It’s a message directed at people who know how to listen to the Market’s language.” Eva shrugged, a nervous motion that showed more on her freckled skin than her words could. “Or it’s a map to something someone wants hidden. A door they don’t want anyone else opening.” Quinn stepped toward the back of the stall, careful to keep to the pale line the lanterns threw on the damp floor. The curtain rustled as if somebody behind it had shifted and then remained still, listening. The veil between the Market and the rest of London thinned here, as if the wall itself understood the risk of someone looking too hard and too long. “Breath on the other side,” Eva murmured, almost to herself. “That’s what the token does. It breathes with the Market, lets a chosen observer pass.” Quinn pressed a gloved hand to the curtain, feeling the tremor of a breath against her knuckles. She drew back a fraction, watching the curtain’s edge catch a shimmer from the space beyond. The space wasn’t large, but it wasn’t a room either. It felt like a pocket within a pocket, a corridor between two rooms where the Market’s gravity bent just enough to suggest something else—an entryway that existed only because someone believed it did. “You’re seeing this differently?” Eva asked, a hint of wonder creeping into her voice. “Seeing isn’t the same as believing.” Quinn stepped closer to the secret doorway, let the Veil Compass hover near the seam, and the needle dipped. The compass’s sigils caught a stray glimmer, and the needle steadied again, pointing with a stubborn patience that reminded her of a stubborn man she’d known once—so sure of his conclusions that he’d miss the truth sitting right in front of him. Quinn’s gaze dropped to the floor where the body had lain. The operator’s apron had a threadbare, almost ceremonial look, like it belonged to someone who knew every corner of a ritual and chose to wear it as workwear anyway. Her mind reached for a connection—a thread to pull. The Market’s moving path meant someone desired the layout to change at the full moon, to keep the watchers guessing. “Where does the path lead?” Eva asked, voice hushed, as if she feared drawing the Market’s attention to the doorway. “Not outside London.” Quinn cut a glance at the body. The vendor’s dead hand clamped around something small and hard—a key, yes, but not the sort that unlocked a drawer. This looked more like a token of authority in a hidden system. The vendor’s fingers loosened in the air, palm facing upward, as if the deceased had offered something in death that would not have been accepted in life. A piece of bone? A fragment of a charm? A token of the Market’s own ledger. Quinn stepped into the curtained entry. The air grew cooler, and the lanterns outside this pocket seemed far away; here, nothing fluttered but the faint dust of old secrets. The passage broadened into a narrow corridor lined with slotted shelves. The space glowed with a pale, almost opaline light, not from a flame but something living—the Market’s breath running along the walls, inviting, instructing. The Veil Compass hummed in her hand, a low warmth that told her she wasn’t alone in this discovery. The compass didn’t lie about direction, but it could misdirect a careless observer. She chewed the corner of her lip for a moment, then spoke. “Look at the shelves,” she ordered, keeping her head level. “Items here aren’t just goods. They’re signs.” Eva moved closer, fingertips brushing the edge of a shelf with a careful, almost reverent touch. A glass phial, filled with a silvery liquid, reflected two faces at once—the Market’s crowd and something else that flickered just beyond perception. A ledger lay open on a table, ink smudged as if recently written and then wiped away, leaving only a ghost of a record. “What is this?” Eva whispered, a mix of awe and fear in her voice. Quinn kneeled and studied the ledger’s margins. The handwriting wasn’t human anymore; it moved in short, skittering strokes, as if the writer had been interrupted and then forced to continue by someone else’s will. The entries weren’t about sales or inventory. They tracked events that hadn’t happened yet, predictions that looked suspiciously like what had happened in the Market’s past, rewritten in a handwriting that did not belong to any living scribe. The Veil Compass vibrated in Quinn’s palm, a soft, persistent tremor that tugged her toward the back wall. She stood, brushed off dust, and followed the compass’s pull with Eva at her shoulder, both of them moving with quiet, precise steps. Behind the curtain lay a room that did not look like a room at all but a slab of space carved between two realities. A circle of sigils lay etched on the floor in white chalk. A hooded lamp hung above, casting a pale halo over the circle. In the middle stood a pedestal upon which rested a shallow bowl filled with something glittering and dark—crushed shards of something, or perhaps a refinement of something else entirely. The body’s scent clung to the bones of this room—salt and ash and something old that spoke of rituals rather than violence. The aura around the circle felt like a pulse, a breath that came in rests rather than one long exhale. Eva moved toward the pedestal, then stopped, eyes wide. “The bowl isn’t just a receptacle,” Eva said. “It’s a seal, a threshold device. Someone intended to cross over or to pull something back in.” Quinn’s fingers found a dent in the edge of the pedestal, the kind of scratch a tool would leave when forcing something open. The Veil Compass’s needle convulsed, then settled. It didn’t point to the doorway—this time, it pointed to a seam in the back wall, a seam that looked like it had been patched recently with something pale and brittle. “The mark of a Shade artisan,” Quinn murmured, more to herself than to Eva. “The compass was made by one of their crafters. The sigils aren’t just protection; they’re invitations.” Eva frowned, the freckled skin of her cheeks turning pale. “If someone used this room as a crossing point, the Market would change its location around them. They’d control where the walls thin and where the path opens.” Quinn looked at the sigils on the floor. Her jaw tightened. She’d seen these marks before, in a case that had haunted her for years—the kind of ritual a clique might use to bind a place to a person, a crime, a myth, a memory. The Market’s “clique” wasn’t a rumor, not if the signs were here, laid out in chalk and in bone and in the way the room breathed. She tested the theory with a quick, precise line of questioning. “Who had the bone token? Who could move the Market and control the ritual path?” Eva’s eyes flicked toward a shelf where a row of bone-handled knives rested. “Maybe no one,” she said carefully. “Maybe the Market took what it needed and hid the rest behind its back. Or perhaps the token isn’t a weapon; it’s a password.” Quinn moved to the table by the back wall, where the ledger lay. The pages flicked in a draft she didn’t feel but could hear—the rustle of unseen wings, the sigh of something old that lived on the margins of human law. The handwriting shifted beneath her gaze, a rhythm that matched the Veil Compass’s own pulse. “Let me see that,” she said, voice steady, turning the pages with deliberate care. The entries—their edges crisp, then smeared, then crisp again—told a story built from gaps. Some entries described the Market’s entry rules, others the movements of certain patrons, and the last ones hinted at something called a Gate, a threshold, a crossing not meant for ordinary eyes. “Gate,” Eva repeated, leaning over the ledger’s shoulder. “A threshold that must be opened by a token and then moved by a chosen one who understands the Market’s language.” “The token is the body’s last gesture,” Quinn said, returning the ledger to its cradle. “A dying message pointing at a door.” Eva’s breath caught in a half-sob half-laugh. “You were right, Harlow. The ordinary crime would have been easier to hide. This one wants to be found by people who ask the right questions.” Quinn stepped toward the back seam, the Veil Compass held high as if to steady the ground beneath her feet. The seam widened slightly, a seam that hadn’t been visible before, a seam that felt less like wall and more like opening to a different room. The kind of opening that never stayed open, the kind you walked through as if you’d crossed a river’s edge and slipped into another world, where the past had a louder voice than the present. The Market’s breath changed as they approached. It slowed, as if listening for the right footstep, the right breath, the right word. The compass hummed, then clipped to a higher pitch, a warning that they were close to a truth someone wanted kept hidden. Quinn stepped into the opening and found the corridor beyond more solid than the Market’s smoky interior suggested. The light here was too pale, the air too cold. The pace of the Market’s usual crowd vanished; instead, there was a corridor lined with doors that bore no keys and windows that showed only reflections of themselves. The Veil Compass glowed faintly to life, the sigils on its face shining a pale green. “Look,” Eva said softly, pointing at one of the doors. A sigil burned into the wood—an image of a hand, palm up, with a small circle in the center of the palm. The inscription around the sigil read in letters Quinn did not recognize, but the shape felt familiar, like something she’d traced in a file about a hidden archway used by syndicates to transport contraband and people alike. Quinn examined the door. It wasn’t a door to a safe room or a private office. It was a door to a different kind of room altogether, a room whose walls seemed to shift when you looked away, the way a dream changes as you wake. The door wasn’t locked; it wasn’t even closed. It was simply there, inviting a step forward. She steadied her breathing and touched the door’s edge. The wood warmed under her fingertips, the sigil on the door pulsing softly, as if something on the other side clicked into place the moment she laid her hand on it. The Market’s voice pressed against her ears, a whisper that sounded like a lot of conversations happening at once, all trying to be heard at the same time. Eva moved closer to the door and drew a small, fragile-looking book from her satchel. The leather cover cracked slightly when she opened it, releasing a scent of old parchment and salt. She flicked to a page and whispered, “This is a ritual manual from one of the Shade artisan guilds. It’s not about breaking in; it’s about tuning in, letting the doorway appear to those who know how to listen.” “Then we listen,” Quinn said, her gaze steady on the door. The Veil Compass gave one more, quiet twitch and then settled into a stillness that felt almost reverent. The door did not scream open; it simply yielded to the conjunction of intent and opportunity. The room beyond was not large, but it carried a weight that pressed down on their shoulders as if gravity itself was a suspect. A single table stood under the lamp, and upon it lay a map drawn in small, precise strokes. The map showed the Market’s moving path, scribed not with ink but with something like ash that had never burned. The lines wound around a central circle, and at the circle’s heart appeared the outline of a symbol that looked like a cross between a key and a star. “Someone mapped the Market’s future,” Eva breathed, eyes widening. “They know where the paths cross and where the Gate will open next.” Quinn stepped closer, scanning the map with a detective’s hunger for order in chaos. The body’s key had a counterpart here—a second key of sorts, smaller, delicate, with a notch that matched the central circle. The victim’s palm had held the larger key; on the table lay a matching counterpart, half-finished, as if someone had begun something and never completed it. “The murder isn’t just about killing a person,” Quinn said, voice hard and focused. “It’s about convincing us this is a crime, not a corridor. It’s about hiding a doorway in plain sight.” Eva’s lips pressed into a thin line. “And that doorway leads somewhere the Market wants us not to discover.” Quinn’s jaw set. “Which means someone wants the Market to keep moving, to stay unpredictable, to keep the law chasing its tail. They don’t want us to enter the path.” The Veil Compass glowed more brightly when it pointed at a crack in the wall near the map. Quinn pressed her palm to the crack. The wall gave at a touch, revealing a shallow alcove containing a small, old chest bound in iron straps. The chest’s lid bore the same sigils carved on the Veil Compass’s face. “Open it,” Eva urged, almost pleading. Quinn did not hurry. She slid the iron-bound lid to the side and found within a set of bones—tiny, almost toy-sized—shared among ritual paraphernalia: a few bone tokens, another copper key, and a brittle parchment sealed with wax. The parchment bore a single line of hand-lettered text in a script she did not recognize, but the rhythm of the line looked like a breath: we move as one when the Market moves. “Bone tokens,” Eva said, turning the parchment over with care. “They’re not just entry. They’re signs of consent, a pact with the Market. The user marks the tokens with a promise that they’ll follow the Market’s direction when it comes to them.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “And if you break that pact?” “You disappear,” Eva replied, a touch of steel in her voice. “Or you’re never found again.” The implication hung between them, heavy and cold. They knew what they were dealing with—an internal crime, a ritual used to control motion and mind, to bend a place into its own purpose. The Market wasn’t a market in the ordinary sense. It was a choreography of escape and capture, a loop in the city’s spine where people could vanish or reappear depending on how well they spoke the Market’s language. Quinn tightened her grip on the Veil Compass. It felt heavier now, more important than a tool and more dangerous than a weapon. Eva stepped closer to the table, tracing a finger along the map’s lines as if the marks themselves would reveal the truth the way a confession would. “The victim wasn’t targeted for personal reasons,” Eva said slowly. “They were chosen because they were close to the Market’s gate, the point where its path could bend the easiest. They were a conduit.” Quinn looked at the body, then at the map, and finally at the gate. The path, the tokens, the bones—they belonged to the same system, the same machinery that made the Market move and made human beings vanish where the world would forget them. “Someone wanted the Gate opened,” Quinn said, barely above a whisper. “To what end?” Eva asked. “To hide something,” Quinn answered, her voice firm. “To keep the Market’s power in hands that won’t use it for scholars’ curiosity or law enforcement’s relief. They want to keep it secret and let fear do the listening.” Eva pressed a hand to her mouth, a quick gesture of awe and fear. “Then we’ll need to trace the tokens’ origin and who had access to the Gate’s plan.” Quinn looked around the room, her eye catching the back of the map and the line that disappeared into the wall as if the wall itself had yawned and swallowed the information. The Veil Compass lay at the map’s edge, its glow bright but not blinding, a lighthouse in fog. The Market’s breath pressed against the door’s seam, a reminder that they were not alone in this space. The door behind the curtain began to loosen, as if the corridor itself decided to reveal more of its secrets. The hum of the Veil Compass intensified, and the pale light grew warmer, as if a fire had been lit in a hearth that wasn’t there before. Quinn stepped back, not because she felt afraid, but because she knew what this moment demanded—a careful, deliberate move toward truth rather than the rush of instinct. “Who else knew about the gate?” Quinn asked, almost to herself, then to Eva. “Who would risk letting a crime lead detectives to a doorway?” Eva’s expression sharpened. “The Market’s inner circle. The clique that manages the place, that ensures it keeps moving, that screens visitors for what they can bear. If they saw the doorway and kept it closed, they’d lose something bigger than a market stall. They’d lose control.” Quinn considered the idea for a long breathless moment, letting the weight of Eva’s words press against her ribs. The Market’s logic, if you followed it to the end, led to one truth: the Market existed to bend the city’s will, not to serve it. If you could unlock its gates, you could bend cities, not just markets, to your own ends. She closed the chest with care and rose. The tokens and the map and the confession of a strange law lay in front of them, a bundle of threads ready for the proper pull. She didn’t need to rush; she needed to act with precision; she needed to consider Morris’s death, and what supernatural origin had warned of, long before. The Veil Compass now pointed toward the doorway more decisively than before. The glow from its face felt like a pulse in her palm, a heartbeat she could trust. She stepped toward the back wall and pressed her hand to the seam again, this time with the knowledge that she would not yank the door open with reckless speed but would coax it to yield. “Wait,” Eva said, a touch of urgency in her voice. “Before we move on, we should document this—photos, sketches, every sigil, the map, the tokens. The Court will want it in the morning, and you’ll want it when you lay out a case to someone who won’t listen to rumors.” Quinn nodded once, short and precise. “We’ll document. Then we’ll decide if this is a matter for the precinct or for someone with a longer leash.” Eva raised her satchel with a quick, efficient motion. “I’ll photograph. I’ll sketch. I’ll transcribe every line in the ledger that might help.” Quinn stepped away from the seam and turned back toward the Market’s center, where the stalls hummed with a nervous energy, a cautionary buzz that rewarded only those who moved with careful intention. She could feel the city beyond the Market’s walls pressing in—the ordinary world that would prefer to forget how easily the extraordinary could be coaxed into daylight. “Let’s move,” Quinn said, voice low but clear. “We’ll keep this contained. The Gate’s path is a dangerous thing to follow, and we’re not the only ones who know how to read it.” Eva’s eyes flicked toward the map, then back to Quinn. “We’ll move with care.” Quinn crossed the room with a measured stride, the Veil Compass clutched in her hand as if it were a steadying talisman against the Market’s whispering breath. The trigger of purpose thrummed in her chest, not loud, but undeniable. She paused at the threshold, listening for any sound that wasn’t the Market’s breath, and found only the faint rustle of fabric and the distant drip of water somewhere far away. They returned through the back doorway to the corridor, the Veil Compass’s glow dimming with every step. The Market’s interior pressed in again behind them, but the corridor remained quiet, as if it too was listening for what they might become. At the doorway’s edge, Eva paused and looked back, her lips pressed into a line that was not fear but resolve. “If we’re right, this case will lead to a doorway in every city block that looks ordinary until it isn’t.” Quinn’s mouth tightened. “If we’re right, you’ll document it. If we’re wrong, we’ll walk away with nothing but a story we’ll tell to keep the night calm.” Eva nodded, a small, determined move. The light from the Veil Compass flickered across her glasses, throwing ripples on the stunned, freckled skin of her cheeks. They stepped back into the Market’s main avenue, the stalls and patrons at a respectful distance from the chamber they’d just left. The body’s presence remained, but the crime’s center of gravity had shifted to the hidden door and the map that promised a door bigger than any one crime could hold. The Market’s breath moved through the crowd again, and a murmur rose—a rumor first, then a chorus of voices that might become something else if not checked. Quinn looked around, as if the Market could tell her where to go next, as if the Market’s walls might lean closer and whisper a name. She stood still a moment longer, listening not to the voices of her colleagues, but to the quiet of an engine that ran beneath the city, a machine designed to fake normality while testing limits. “Rein it in,” she finally said to Eva, not loud, but with a stubborn power that surprised even her. “We don’t reveal everything until we’ve understood it.” “We’ll collect, analyze, and present,” Eva replied, stepping beside her with the careful confidence of someone who studied ancient texts for a living and remembered every word that warned against misreading a symbol. Quinn offered a tight smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes. The Veil Compass stayed in her hand, a small compass with the face etched in protective sigils, its needle still, but the world around them not. The Market, ever the host, shifted once more in the distance, its movement a reminder of the power it housed and the risks of opening doors that were meant to stay shut. They moved forward, not toward the street, but toward the room where answers slept in the shape of a token, a map, and a doorway that might yet become a gate for the living or a trap for the wary. The beat of a distant train whispered through the underground, a reminder that London never truly slept, it only paused to listen. The door behind the curtain waited, patient, a hinge that could swing open to reveal the truth—or to seal it off forever. Quinn paused, then stepped closer, eyes fixed on the seam, the compass’s glow brightening once more as if the Market itself leaned in to watch what she would choose to do next. She did not hurry. She did not hesitate. She moved with the measured certainty that had kept her alive for eighteen years of decorated service, the precision that made her a detective even when the world tilted under her feet. The scene paused there, not a cliffhanger so much as a hinge waiting to swing. The Market’s breath settled. The compass glowed. The bone token lay somewhere between ledger and door, a small truth in a vast labyrinth. The next steps would require patience, permission, and a willingness to walk through a doorway the city had not yet admitted existed. And Quinn planned to lead the walk.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags37
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Quinn said flatly [flatly]"
1"she said carefully [carefully]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
3"Eva said slowly [slowly]"
4"she finally said to Eva [finally]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.521
leniency1
rawRatio0.135
effectiveRatio0.135
89.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4972
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
7
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"softly"
5"slowly"
6"barely above a whisper"
7"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4972
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count2
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"etched"
count2
14
word"pulse"
count3
15
word"flicked"
count4
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count3
18
word"weight"
count2
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"implication"
count1
21
word"tracing"
count1
22
word"reminder"
count3
23
word"efficient"
count1
24
word"could feel"
count1
25
word"measured"
count2
26
word"resolve"
count1
27
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"stomach"
2"scanned"
3"navigate"
4"pulsed"
5"traced"
6"intricate"
7"quivered"
8"charm"
9"fluttered"
10"warmth"
11"flickered"
12"vibrated"
13"etched"
14"pulse"
15"flicked"
16"familiar"
17"whisper"
18"weight"
19"scanning"
20"implication"
21"tracing"
22"reminder"
23"efficient"
24"could feel"
25"measured"
26"resolve"
27"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences238
matches
0"felt afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences238
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"tended to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences272
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4933
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions192
wordCount4100
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn54
Veil22
Market43
Kowalski1
Morris2
Shadow1
Sigils1
Eva43
Compass21
London2
Gate1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
5"Sigils"
6"Eva"
7"Compass"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
2"Gate"
globalScore0.841
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences212
glossingSentenceCount13
matches
0"felt like a trap for a ritual, not a st"
1"air that seemed to exist only where magic woke"
2"felt like a pocket within a pocket, a c"
3"seemed far away; here, nothing fluttered but the faint dust of old secrets"
4"felt like a pulse, a breath that came i"
5"looked like it had been patched recently"
6"as if listening for the right footstep, the right breath, the right word"
7"sounded like a lot of conversations happen"
8"something like ash that had never burned"
9"looked like a cross between a key and a s"
10"looked like a breath: we move as one when"
11"felt like a pulse in her palm, a heartb"
12"quite reach her eyes"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches10
per1kWords2.027
wordCount4933
matches
0"not at the door to the street but toward a narrow passage behind a stall"
1"not from a flame but something living"
2"not look like a room at all but a slab of space carved between two realities"
3"not large, but it carried a weight"
4"not with ink but with something like ash"
5"not yank the door open with reckless speed but would coax it to yield"
6"not loud, but undeniable"
7"not to the voices of her colleagues, but to the quiet of an engine"
8"not loud, but with a stubborn power"
9"not toward the street, but toward the room"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences272
matches
0"warning that they"
89.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs103
mean47.89
std22.24
cv0.464
sampleLengths
061
175
273
384
442
557
619
7118
849
960
1030
1126
1255
1350
1468
1534
1652
1732
1833
1965
2025
2176
2214
2367
2469
2520
2642
2743
2864
2944
3017
3163
3214
3372
3441
3577
3651
3725
3861
3930
4038
4171
4226
4343
4457
4560
4629
4722
4833
4981
96.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences238
matches
0"were meant"
1"been accepted"
2"been interrupted"
3"been patched"
4"been lit"
5"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs642
matches
0"were listening"
1"was signaling"
2"were dealing"
3"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount12
flaggedSentences35
totalSentences272
ratio0.129
matches
0"The corridor beyond glittered with a strange, disciplined kind of quiet—the hush that followed a crowd when the last conversation dies and the first flicker of some unseen lantern begins."
1"Quinn’s tongue remembered the sting of the night partner Morris had vanished into something that hadn’t existed in the daylight—supernatural origins she still didn’t fully understand."
2"The key wasn’t the sort you’d steal off a door; this one looked as if it were meant to unlock something more than a drawer or cabinet—perhaps a portal the Market concealed behind its moving walls."
3"Behind the curtain, a glimmer of something unfamiliar—the pale shimmer of something that wasn’t quite light, more a ripple, a breath of air that seemed to exist only where magic woke."
4"It felt like a pocket within a pocket, a corridor between two rooms where the Market’s gravity bent just enough to suggest something else—an entryway that existed only because someone believed it did."
5"The compass’s sigils caught a stray glimmer, and the needle steadied again, pointing with a stubborn patience that reminded her of a stubborn man she’d known once—so sure of his conclusions that he’d miss the truth sitting right in front of him."
6"Her mind reached for a connection—a thread to pull."
7"The vendor’s dead hand clamped around something small and hard—a key, yes, but not the sort that unlocked a drawer."
8"The air grew cooler, and the lanterns outside this pocket seemed far away; here, nothing fluttered but the faint dust of old secrets."
9"The space glowed with a pale, almost opaline light, not from a flame but something living—the Market’s breath running along the walls, inviting, instructing."
10"A glass phial, filled with a silvery liquid, reflected two faces at once—the Market’s crowd and something else that flickered just beyond perception."
11"The handwriting wasn’t human anymore; it moved in short, skittering strokes, as if the writer had been interrupted and then forced to continue by someone else’s will."
12"In the middle stood a pedestal upon which rested a shallow bowl filled with something glittering and dark—crushed shards of something, or perhaps a refinement of something else entirely."
13"The body’s scent clung to the bones of this room—salt and ash and something old that spoke of rituals rather than violence."
14"It didn’t point to the doorway—this time, it pointed to a seam in the back wall, a seam that looked like it had been patched recently with something pale and brittle."
15"“The compass was made by one of their crafters. The sigils aren’t just protection; they’re invitations.”"
16"She’d seen these marks before, in a case that had haunted her for years—the kind of ritual a clique might use to bind a place to a person, a crime, a myth, a memory."
17"“Maybe the Market took what it needed and hid the rest behind its back. Or perhaps the token isn’t a weapon; it’s a password.”"
18"The pages flicked in a draft she didn’t feel but could hear—the rustle of unseen wings, the sigh of something old that lived on the margins of human law."
19"The entries—their edges crisp, then smeared, then crisp again—told a story built from gaps."
20"The pace of the Market’s usual crowd vanished; instead, there was a corridor lined with doors that bore no keys and windows that showed only reflections of themselves."
21"A sigil burned into the wood—an image of a hand, palm up, with a small circle in the center of the palm."
22"The door wasn’t locked; it wasn’t even closed."
23"She flicked to a page and whispered, “This is a ritual manual from one of the Shade artisan guilds. It’s not about breaking in; it’s about tuning in, letting the doorway appear to those who know how to listen.”"
24"The door did not scream open; it simply yielded to the conjunction of intent and opportunity."
25"The body’s key had a counterpart here—a second key of sorts, smaller, delicate, with a notch that matched the central circle."
26"The victim’s palm had held the larger key; on the table lay a matching counterpart, half-finished, as if someone had begun something and never completed it."
27"She slid the iron-bound lid to the side and found within a set of bones—tiny, almost toy-sized—shared among ritual paraphernalia: a few bone tokens, another copper key, and a brittle parchment sealed with wax."
28"They knew what they were dealing with—an internal crime, a ritual used to control motion and mind, to bend a place into its own purpose."
29"The path, the tokens, the bones—they belonged to the same system, the same machinery that made the Market move and made human beings vanish where the world would forget them."
30"Quinn stepped back, not because she felt afraid, but because she knew what this moment demanded—a careful, deliberate move toward truth rather than the rush of instinct."
31"She didn’t need to rush; she needed to act with precision; she needed to consider Morris’s death, and what supernatural origin had warned of, long before."
32"She could feel the city beyond the Market’s walls pressing in—the ordinary world that would prefer to forget how easily the extraordinary could be coaxed into daylight."
33"The Market’s breath moved through the crowd again, and a murmur rose—a rumor first, then a chorus of voices that might become something else if not checked."
34"The door behind the curtain waited, patient, a hinge that could swing open to reveal the truth—or to seal it off forever."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4138
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount163
adverbRatio0.03939101014983084
lyAdverbCount32
lyAdverbRatio0.007733204446592557
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences272
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences272
mean18.14
std9.18
cv0.506
sampleLengths
019
112
230
315
416
521
623
729
826
918
109
1120
1226
1329
1419
1523
1632
1725
187
1912
2011
2127
2221
2323
2436
2515
2618
2716
2817
298
3010
3125
3230
335
3421
359
3617
3712
3817
3927
4023
419
4228
4331
4434
4517
4612
4723
484
498
31.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats50
diversityRatio0.17279411764705882
totalSentences272
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences235
matches
0"Her voice came soft and"
1"It traced a curve that"
2"She straightened, her eyes narrowing"
3"She drew back a fraction,"
4"It felt like a pocket"
5"Her mind reached for a"
6"She chewed the corner of"
7"she ordered, keeping her head"
8"They tracked events that hadn’t"
9"She stood, brushed off dust,"
10"It didn’t point to the"
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"She’d seen these marks before,"
13"She tested the theory with"
14"she said carefully"
15"she said, voice steady, turning"
16"It slowed, as if listening"
17"It wasn’t a door to"
18"It was a door to"
19"It was simply there, inviting"
ratio0.166
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences235
matches
0"The tunnel smeared against the"
1"The corridor beyond glittered with"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through"
3"The Veil Market lay ahead"
4"Stalls crowded in impossible spirals,"
5"The air smelled of ozone,"
6"A figure stood by the"
7"Eva Kowalski, her childhood friend"
8"Eva tucked a curl behind"
9"The Market didn’t stay in"
10"The full moon’s pull nudged"
11"Quinn’s tongue remembered the sting"
12"The memory tried to twist"
13"Eva moved closer, her satchel"
14"Her voice came soft and"
15"Quinn scanned the periphery, eyes"
16"The body wasn’t far away,"
17"Eva whispered, almost to herself"
18"Quinn nodded once, and stepped"
19"A circle of black stones"
ratio0.966
21.28% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences235
matches
0"If you could unlock its"
ratio0.004
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences161
technicalSentenceCount33
matches
0"The corridor beyond glittered with a strange, disciplined kind of quiet—the hush that followed a crowd when the last conversation dies and the first flicker of …"
1"Eva Kowalski, her childhood friend and occult researcher, stood framed in the light from a lantern that hung crookedly from a nail on the stall’s post."
2"Quinn’s tongue remembered the sting of the night partner Morris had vanished into something that hadn’t existed in the daylight—supernatural origins she still d…"
3"Eva moved closer, her satchel brushing a horn of a stall that sold things no cleaner than a rumor."
4"Quinn scanned the periphery, eyes sliding over a line of coughing lanterns, a vendor polishing glass jars that reflected the Market’s faces back at you, a child…"
5"The stones formed a rough pentagon, their edges catching the lantern glow and throwing it back in a dozen angry shards."
6"The key wasn’t the sort you’d steal off a door; this one looked as if it were meant to unlock something more than a drawer or cabinet—perhaps a portal the Marke…"
7"The stall’s sign, half-scratched away by something that wasn’t a human hand, read in curling letters: Shadow Sigils."
8"The needle quivered, then steadied, pointing not at the door to the street but toward a narrow passage behind a stall that sold ledgers and ceremonial quills."
9"The Market’s walls breathed with a low, hollow sound, as though they were listening for a voice none of the patrons could hear."
10"Behind the curtain, a glimmer of something unfamiliar—the pale shimmer of something that wasn’t quite light, more a ripple, a breath of air that seemed to exist…"
11"The veil between the Market and the rest of London thinned here, as if the wall itself understood the risk of someone looking too hard and too long."
12"The compass’s sigils caught a stray glimmer, and the needle steadied again, pointing with a stubborn patience that reminded her of a stubborn man she’d known on…"
13"The operator’s apron had a threadbare, almost ceremonial look, like it belonged to someone who knew every corner of a ritual and chose to wear it as workwear an…"
14"The Veil Compass hummed in her hand, a low warmth that told her she wasn’t alone in this discovery."
15"The handwriting wasn’t human anymore; it moved in short, skittering strokes, as if the writer had been interrupted and then forced to continue by someone else’s…"
16"They tracked events that hadn’t happened yet, predictions that looked suspiciously like what had happened in the Market’s past, rewritten in a handwriting that …"
17"The Veil Compass vibrated in Quinn’s palm, a soft, persistent tremor that tugged her toward the back wall."
18"The handwriting shifted beneath her gaze, a rhythm that matched the Veil Compass’s own pulse."
19"The seam widened slightly, a seam that hadn’t been visible before, a seam that felt less like wall and more like opening to a different room."
20"It slowed, as if listening for the right footstep, the right breath, the right word."
21"The wood warmed under her fingertips, the sigil on the door pulsing softly, as if something on the other side clicked into place the moment she laid her hand on…"
22"The victim’s palm had held the larger key; on the table lay a matching counterpart, half-finished, as if someone had begun something and never completed it."
23"Eva stepped closer to the table, tracing a finger along the map’s lines as if the marks themselves would reveal the truth the way a confession would."
24"Quinn looked around the room, her eye catching the back of the map and the line that disappeared into the wall as if the wall itself had yawned and swallowed th…"
25"Quinn stepped away from the seam and turned back toward the Market’s center, where the stalls hummed with a nervous energy, a cautionary buzz that rewarded only…"
26"She could feel the city beyond the Market’s walls pressing in—the ordinary world that would prefer to forget how easily the extraordinary could be coaxed into d…"
27"Quinn crossed the room with a measured stride, the Veil Compass clutched in her hand as if it were a steadying talisman against the Market’s whispering breath."
28"She paused at the threshold, listening for any sound that wasn’t the Market’s breath, and found only the faint rustle of fabric and the distant drip of water so…"
29"The Market’s interior pressed in again behind them, but the corridor remained quiet, as if it too was listening for what they might become."
30"She stood still a moment longer, listening not to the voices of her colleagues, but to the quiet of an engine that ran beneath the city, a machine designed to f…"
31"Quinn paused, then stepped closer, eyes fixed on the seam, the compass’s glow brightening once more as if the Market itself leaned in to watch what she would ch…"
32"She moved with the measured certainty that had kept her alive for eighteen years of decorated service, the precision that made her a detective even when the wor…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags37
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"Eva whispered, almost to herself"
1"She straightened, her eyes narrowing"
2"Eva murmured, almost to herself"
3"Eva asked, a hint of wonder creeping into her voice"
4"Eva whispered, a mix of awe and fear in her voice"
5"Quinn murmured, more to herself than to Eva"
6"she said, voice steady, turning the pages with deliberate care"
7"Quinn said, her gaze steady on the door"
8"Eva breathed, eyes widening"
9"Quinn said, voice hard and focused"
10"Eva replied, a touch of steel in her voice"
11"Quinn answered, her voice firm"
12"Quinn asked, almost to herself, then to Eva"
13"Eva said, a touch of urgency in her voice"
14"Quinn said, voice low but clear"
9.15% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags33
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"Eva murmured (murmur)"
3"she ordered (order)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
5"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
6"Eva repeated (repeat)"
7"She flicked (flick)"
8"Eva breathed (breathe)"
9"Eva urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.465
leniency0.93
rawRatio0.303
effectiveRatio0.282
64.2505%