Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0BNCWW4WFAZNDX2714H63

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's hand froze on the doorknob, her pulse a frantic drumbeat in her ears. Lucien Moreau stood before her, exuding his usual charm, his tailored charcoal suit hugging his frame like it was woven from shadows themselves. A haughty smile played on his lips, eyes as disparate as his nature — one amber reflecting flames, the other a bottomless well of night. "Miss Carter," he said, his voice smooth yet edged with familiarity that was dangerously tempting. The cane, his constant companion, was planted firmly by his side, but its presence was as unthreatening as it was ornamental. "Lucien." She managed, though her voice betrayed nothing of the turmoil beneath the surface. "How did you find me here?" "A magician never reveals his secrets." He tapped his cane lightly against the worn carpet, the sound crisp and precise. "May I come in?" Momentarily flustered, she stepped aside, allowing him to enter the cramped flat that Eva called home. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, darted from the sofa to disappear behind a stack of scrolls. Every surface was littered with the kind of organised chaos only Eva could maintain — books teetered in precarious piles amid sprawling research notes and sconces filled with wax drippings. Lucien surveyed the room with a practiced eye. "Cozy. I've always admired Eva’s taste for the eclectic." Aurora closed the door, its bolts clattering into place. The sound reminded her of how secure she used to feel when she lived here herself, back before she fled into the solace of the mundane world above Silas's bar. She hadn’t planned on confronting the supernatural—or Lucien—so soon, not with everything bound in sharp memories. "Why are you here?" Her voice had gained strength, her cool-headed nature resurfacing. Leaning against the door for support, she crossed her arms, as if to fortify the barrier she'd carefully constructed around herself since… Since Evan. "I'm searching for a particular scroll, and Eva has the misfortune of keeping an inventory that borders on mythical," Lucien replied, deceptively casual. She raised a brow, decidedly skeptical. "A scroll now? I recall last time it was a rare manuscript." The words felt heavy between them, dragging unwanted recollections to the fore. "Indeed. A manuscript that led to an unfortunate evening…" His gaze drifted, recalling the night with similar complexity. Laughter, tension, disjointed life truths — noises from an opera of duality. "I promise you, no libraries were harmed in my current quest." Aurora bit back a half-hearted retort. Resistance tightened her gut like a vice, yet its determinacy crumbled at the door it guarded. Her eyes met his, a connection that simmered despite their careful avoidance for months now. "What do you want from me, Lucien? Besides scroll knowledge, what's your real motive?" The question fell between them like a gauntlet. Lucien tilted his head, amused, and the deep vibrations of his voice resonated. "Are you always going to presume ulterior motives?" "When it comes to you?" She released an incredulous breath. "It's practically an art form. You crafted it yourself." "I am but a patron of the arts." His smile shifted to something warmer, more intimate, reminiscent of conversations held amidst candlelight and secrets. "Pardon my disbelief." Aurora said, yet layered in her words was that same persistent attraction which was impossible to deny. Their past was painted in hues as vivid as their personalities — electric blues of pursuit and fiery reds of disagreement. She knew more about Lucien's half-demon eyes than any mortal should. Momentum shifted. Aurora watched Lucien stroll toward the collection Eva guarded earnestly. His gaze skimmed titles of potential until he stood circumspectly still, lost in thought. "You never answered my question," she reminded him, seeking to steer the course back. Lucien paused, his face adopting a shade of sincerity that made the air thick with unsaid truths. "Would you believe me if I told you... curiosity? That I wanted to see how the notorious Rory Carter fares, away from twilight tours of enchanted London streets?" "Spare me the charm, Luc," she grumbled, trepidation rising to combat feelings left unexplored. "I can handle curiosity—the real question is whether it's curiosity alone?" His heterochromatic gaze turned serious, silent contemplation cascaded over like a distant breeze. It wasn't curiosity. Aurora felt it, sensed it on a wavelength known only to hearts once entwined. Riveted to the place where she stood, she witnessed his unspoken confession. Then, he spoke as tension mingled with familiarity. "There’s more urgency than curiosity. What happened between us," Lucien hesitated, his voice almost tender, "matters. Or it elicits memories that still cary weight." Aurora felt her resolve rattle, her composure slipping. He was purposeful in his revelation, words touched with weighted responsibility. Their relationship was far from what stories wove of high fantasy romance. What existed between her and Lucien was painted in muted tones of consequence and futures unwritten. But it mattered, yes — mattered to the fabric of the epic shared universe. An intermingling of connections that demanded no less than exploration. "Rory," he began again, stepping toward her like chapters gathered at a narrative climax, and her fortifications thinned disastrously. "Would you consider discussing this further? Perhaps outside of quaint book-papered walls." She said nothing, her internal mechanism torn upon echoes of Eva’s footsteps, reminding those were coming home mattered. The silence wove around them, thickly tangible. The reality of Lucien in her world would be dramatic. But was drama always unwelcome? The heart in Aurora's chest drummed a steady beat that why, despite argument and prior judgment, found serenity under echoes of their night-bound escapades. "Like before, you mean?" When her curiosity became edge-managed — effortless. "I'm hoping," Lucien replied, a hopeful catch in his tone, "considering paths yet unexplored." She did not know how dangerous such paths would be; therein lay potential. Aurora’s heart swayed with its drumbeat advancing some kind of permission. In Lucien's earnest gaze, she found the resolve she'd deemed lost. In hesitant agreement not quite vocalised, Aurora felt the shifting tide of destiny with consequences as tumultuous as recalled. Life often heralded moments where standoffs became stepping stones. Within the rhythm of a thousand unsaid words, she found conviction to speak her truth. "Fine," Aurora whispered, an uncharted agreement, a secret kept in silence loosed to vigorous revelation. "But my terms, Lucien. Never forget who you're negotiating with." Their eyes locked with fiery resolve in Aurora's kept soul. The answer sufficed, its gravity both simple and profound. And the echelons of past attraction, hurt and things left unsaid unfolded before choices and arguments as significant as whispering Aurora’s name in the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he began again [again]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.607
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
90.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"charm"
count2
2
word"firmly"
count1
3
word"solace"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"potential"
count2
10
word"trepidation"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count3
14
word"echoes"
count2
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"silence"
count2
17
word"tangible"
count1
18
word"effortless"
count1
19
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"charm"
2"firmly"
3"solace"
4"constructed"
5"tension"
6"resonated"
7"amidst"
8"electric"
9"potential"
10"trepidation"
11"unspoken"
12"weight"
13"resolve"
14"echoes"
15"footsteps"
16"silence"
17"tangible"
18"effortless"
19"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Then, he spoke as tension mingled with familiarity."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount873
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Momentarily1
Eva4
Silas1
Lucien13
Leaning1
Since1
Evan1
Laughter1
Aurora13
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Momentarily"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Lucien"
6"Since"
7"Evan"
8"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.755
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite vocalised, Aurora felt the shifting tide of destiny with consequences as tumultuous as recalled"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1104
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
85.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean29.84
std13.36
cv0.448
sampleLengths
063
136
220
324
461
517
655
737
823
930
1041
1137
1214
1329
1419
1524
1652
1726
1814
1945
2025
2142
2232
2319
2452
2531
2625
2715
2824
2911
3014
3124
3230
3324
3425
3519
3625
79.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences68
matches
0"was woven"
1"was planted"
2"was littered"
3"was painted"
4"was painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"were coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences79
ratio0.101
matches
0"A haughty smile played on his lips, eyes as disparate as his nature — one amber reflecting flames, the other a bottomless well of night."
1"Every surface was littered with the kind of organised chaos only Eva could maintain — books teetered in precarious piles amid sprawling research notes and sconces filled with wax drippings."
2"She hadn’t planned on confronting the supernatural—or Lucien—so soon, not with everything bound in sharp memories."
3"Laughter, tension, disjointed life truths — noises from an opera of duality."
4"Their past was painted in hues as vivid as their personalities — electric blues of pursuit and fiery reds of disagreement."
5"But it mattered, yes — mattered to the fabric of the epic shared universe."
6"\"Like before, you mean?\" When her curiosity became edge-managed — effortless."
7"She did not know how dangerous such paths would be; therein lay potential."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount874
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.034324942791762014
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014874141876430207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.97
std6.34
cv0.454
sampleLengths
015
123
225
315
421
514
66
720
84
916
1015
1130
128
139
149
1530
1616
1713
1822
192
2023
216
2224
2318
2412
2511
266
2716
2815
2914
308
3113
328
3310
349
3524
3620
3721
3811
392
4010
4114
4214
4317
4428
4514
4611
4713
483
4914
90.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5569620253164557
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Momentarily flustered, she stepped aside,"
1"Then, he spoke as tension"
ratio0.03
80.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences66
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth"
1"She managed, though her voice"
2"He tapped his cane lightly"
3"She hadn’t planned on confronting"
4"Her voice had gained strength,"
5"She raised a brow, decidedly"
6"His gaze drifted, recalling the"
7"Her eyes met his, a"
8"She released an incredulous breath"
9"His smile shifted to something"
10"Their past was painted in"
11"She knew more about Lucien's"
12"His gaze skimmed titles of"
13"she reminded him, seeking to"
14"she grumbled, trepidation rising to"
15"His heterochromatic gaze turned serious,"
16"It wasn't curiosity."
17"He was purposeful in his"
18"Their relationship was far from"
19"he began again, stepping toward"
ratio0.348
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora Carter's hand froze on"
1"Lucien Moreau stood before her,"
2"A haughty smile played on"
3"he said, his voice smooth"
4"The cane, his constant companion,"
5"She managed, though her voice"
6"He tapped his cane lightly"
7"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, darted"
8"Every surface was littered with"
9"Lucien surveyed the room with"
10"Aurora closed the door, its"
11"The sound reminded her of"
12"She hadn’t planned on confronting"
13"Her voice had gained strength,"
14"Lucien replied, deceptively casual"
15"She raised a brow, decidedly"
16"The words felt heavy between"
17"His gaze drifted, recalling the"
18"Laughter, tension, disjointed life truths"
19"Aurora bit back a half-hearted"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Leaning against the door for support, she crossed her arms, as if to fortify the barrier she'd carefully constructed around herself since…"
1"Her eyes met his, a connection that simmered despite their careful avoidance for months now."
2"She said nothing, her internal mechanism torn upon echoes of Eva’s footsteps, reminding those were coming home mattered."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She managed, though her voice betrayed nothing of the turmoil beneath the surface"
1"she reminded, seeking to steer the course back"
2"she grumbled, trepidation rising to combat feelings left unexplored"
3"Lucien hesitated, his voice almost tender,"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she grumbled (grumble)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
80.4945%