| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he began again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.607 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 90.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "charm" | | 2 | "firmly" | | 3 | "solace" | | 4 | "constructed" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "amidst" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "potential" | | 10 | "trepidation" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "echoes" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "tangible" | | 18 | "effortless" | | 19 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1104 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, he spoke as tension mingled with familiarity." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 873 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Momentarily | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Silas | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Leaning | 1 | | Since | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Laughter | 1 | | Aurora | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Momentarily" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Since" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.755 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite vocalised, Aurora felt the shifting tide of destiny with consequences as tumultuous as recalled" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 29.84 | | std | 13.36 | | cv | 0.448 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 25 |
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| 79.46% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "was woven" | | 1 | "was planted" | | 2 | "was littered" | | 3 | "was painted" | | 4 | "was painted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "A haughty smile played on his lips, eyes as disparate as his nature — one amber reflecting flames, the other a bottomless well of night." | | 1 | "Every surface was littered with the kind of organised chaos only Eva could maintain — books teetered in precarious piles amid sprawling research notes and sconces filled with wax drippings." | | 2 | "She hadn’t planned on confronting the supernatural—or Lucien—so soon, not with everything bound in sharp memories." | | 3 | "Laughter, tension, disjointed life truths — noises from an opera of duality." | | 4 | "Their past was painted in hues as vivid as their personalities — electric blues of pursuit and fiery reds of disagreement." | | 5 | "But it mattered, yes — mattered to the fabric of the epic shared universe." | | 6 | "\"Like before, you mean?\" When her curiosity became edge-managed — effortless." | | 7 | "She did not know how dangerous such paths would be; therein lay potential." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 874 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.034324942791762014 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014874141876430207 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 13.97 | | std | 6.34 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 90.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5569620253164557 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Momentarily flustered, she stepped aside," | | 1 | "Then, he spoke as tension" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 80.61% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 1 | "She managed, though her voice" | | 2 | "He tapped his cane lightly" | | 3 | "She hadn’t planned on confronting" | | 4 | "Her voice had gained strength," | | 5 | "She raised a brow, decidedly" | | 6 | "His gaze drifted, recalling the" | | 7 | "Her eyes met his, a" | | 8 | "She released an incredulous breath" | | 9 | "His smile shifted to something" | | 10 | "Their past was painted in" | | 11 | "She knew more about Lucien's" | | 12 | "His gaze skimmed titles of" | | 13 | "she reminded him, seeking to" | | 14 | "she grumbled, trepidation rising to" | | 15 | "His heterochromatic gaze turned serious," | | 16 | "It wasn't curiosity." | | 17 | "He was purposeful in his" | | 18 | "Their relationship was far from" | | 19 | "he began again, stepping toward" |
| | ratio | 0.348 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's hand froze on" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood before her," | | 2 | "A haughty smile played on" | | 3 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 4 | "The cane, his constant companion," | | 5 | "She managed, though her voice" | | 6 | "He tapped his cane lightly" | | 7 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, darted" | | 8 | "Every surface was littered with" | | 9 | "Lucien surveyed the room with" | | 10 | "Aurora closed the door, its" | | 11 | "The sound reminded her of" | | 12 | "She hadn’t planned on confronting" | | 13 | "Her voice had gained strength," | | 14 | "Lucien replied, deceptively casual" | | 15 | "She raised a brow, decidedly" | | 16 | "The words felt heavy between" | | 17 | "His gaze drifted, recalling the" | | 18 | "Laughter, tension, disjointed life truths" | | 19 | "Aurora bit back a half-hearted" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Leaning against the door for support, she crossed her arms, as if to fortify the barrier she'd carefully constructed around herself since…" | | 1 | "Her eyes met his, a connection that simmered despite their careful avoidance for months now." | | 2 | "She said nothing, her internal mechanism torn upon echoes of Eva’s footsteps, reminding those were coming home mattered." |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She managed, though her voice betrayed nothing of the turmoil beneath the surface" | | 1 | "she reminded, seeking to steer the course back" | | 2 | "she grumbled, trepidation rising to combat feelings left unexplored" | | 3 | "Lucien hesitated, his voice almost tender," |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she grumbled (grumble)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |