| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 641 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 641 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cascading" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "crystalline" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "delved" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "kaleidoscope" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "otherworldly" | | 12 | "unravel" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 31 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 642 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 519 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Petals | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Wardens | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Breathless | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.729 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to hold the essence of the stars above" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 642 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.58% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | |
| 67.08% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 35.67 | | std | 13.72 | | cv | 0.385 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 84 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 37 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The world around her dissolved into a kaleidoscope of visions: glimpses of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, with its warm amber skies and opulent feasts; the Wardens, vigilant guardians of the Veil; and a haunting, dark figure lurking beyond the boundaries of perception." | | 1 | "As she peered into the heart of the pool, the water's surface trembled, and a vision began to take shape, threatening to upend her entire understanding of the world – and herself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 518 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.023166023166023165 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009652509652509652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 37 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 37 | | mean | 17.35 | | std | 8.31 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 32 |
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| 82.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5135135135135135 | | totalSentences | 37 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "She had always been skeptical" | | 1 | "Her pale lavender eyes sparkled" | | 2 | "She knelt, marveling at the" | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.129 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's eyes widened as she" | | 1 | "She had always been skeptical" | | 2 | "Nyx's whispery voice trailed off," | | 3 | "Petals in every color of" | | 4 | "Isolde Varga, the Seer, glided" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes sparkled" | | 6 | "Aurora stumbled upon a hidden" | | 7 | "She knelt, marveling at the" | | 8 | "The mushroom's glow intensified, casting" | | 9 | "Nyx's whisper carried on the" | | 10 | "Aurora withdrew her hand, the" | | 11 | "Isolde's voice, low and hypnotic," | | 12 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 13 | "The world around her dissolved" | | 14 | "Nyx's urgent whisper pierced the" | | 15 | "Isolde's enigmatic smile hinted at" | | 16 | "The air vibrated with an" | | 17 | "Aurora glanced up, uneasy, and" | | 18 | "Nyx's voice dropped to a" | | 19 | "Isolde led the way, her" |
| | ratio | 0.71 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Carved into the bark was a symbol that shimmered with the same faint, crimson glow as the Heartstone Pendant around Aurora's neck." | | 1 | "The air vibrated with an otherworldly energy, and the sky above seemed to darken, as if night were descending prematurely." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |