Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0BY7J7SFK0Y6NWKS1XB5N

Run Details

Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.015848
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory hauled the third deadbolt aside. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau filled the frame. He stood drenched, charcoal suit plastered to his frame, ivory-handled cane dangling from one pale hand. One amber eye caught the harsh hallway lamp; the other, dark as spilled ink, tracked Rory’s every move. Ptolemy arched his back, hissing between bared teeth. “Get down,” Rory ordered and yanked the door closed with her shoulder. A click sounded as she slapped the second bolt into place. The cat skidded past her legs, claws rattling on the threshold. Lucien braced his shoulder against the wood before settling the cane’s tip on the mat. Drops of rain pooled in a dark ring around it. He inhaled deep. “I need sanctuary.” Rory pressed her palm against the door. “Not here.” He ducked his head, hair plastered across his forehead. “Your friend won’t mind.” She leaned a shoulder against the frame and let out a breath that trembled between anger and something else. “Eva’s halfway across town. And she’s got three deadbolts for a reason.” Lucien’s smile curled sharp. He clicked the cane tip against the floor once, twice. “I saw. They’ll buy us time.” Rory stepped back. Her toes caught the edge of the Persian rug. The flat smelled of parchment and old tea. Scrolls spilled from every shelf. Open books lined the windowsill. Candle wax pooled on the coffee table. She crossed her arms tight, pressing her scarred wrist into her ribs. “How did you even get this address?” Her voice stayed flat. He shrugged, water sleeting off his shoulders. “I pick locks in four languages.” The dull rasp of the third bolt turning echoed down the hallway. Rory slammed it home. She pivoted, braced her hips. A loose journal tumbled from a stack on the hall table. Pages fanned across the floor. Lucien ignored the clutter. He stepped past her, shoulders squared. Thunder rolled outside. A gust rattled the front windows. Ptolemy scuttled to the other side of the room, ears pinned. Rory dropped to one knee, snatched the journal. The cover curved under her palm: spidery Welsh script. She flipped it closed. “Stay by the door. One step and I’ll lock you out.” He nodded. Loose water droplets clung to his eyelashes. He rubbed one eye with the cane’s thick handle. “You always loud in here.” She stood, shoved the journal onto the nearest shelf. Books teetered, caught themselves. Rory tugged off her raincoat and hung it on a metal hook by the door. A strand of black hair flicked across her face. Bright blue eyes studied him from across the cluttered room. He unbuttoned his suit jacket, draped it over a chair. He let the damp fabric slide through pale fingers, revealing a white shirt heavy with rain. He tucked the blade-cane in the corner and stepped further inside, boots leaving dark prints along the floorboards. Rory beat her fists at her pants, dusting off splinters. “Why are you here?” He cracked a grin that didn’t meet his eyes. “I have enemies.” She scoffed. “You always have.” He took another step. “This time it’s personal.” A thud on the radiator made them both jump. Ptolemy skittered into Rory’s legs. She scooped him up, pressed him tight. “Your troubles aren’t mine.” He ducked under a low beam. “They are if they find me here.” She gritted her teeth. Books rattled on a tall shelf. A yellowed scroll drooped off the edge. Rory slammed a fist onto the wooden frame. “I have enough of my own mess.” He stayed quiet, wet breath spilling in the hush. Rory set Ptolemy on a cushion by the window. The tabby blinked up at Lucien before sniffing the air around him. Rory eyed the cat’s twitching whiskers and turned away. She strode to the kitchen nook, snagged a chipped mug from the sink piled with dishes. With one shoulder she shoved past the cluttered counter. Lucien knelt by the cane. He rolled the tip along the floor’s grooves, testing the balance. He rose, pursed his lips. “Tea.” She glared at him through her hair. He didn’t flinch. She dropped the mug on the table and tore open a teabag over it. Her fingers moved fast, ripping paper, twisting the string around her wrist. He leaned on the table’s corner close enough for his elbow to nudge hers. Steam curled around them. “Milk?” she asked. “Black.” Rory reached over the chaos of scrolls and piled plates to snatch a bottle from the fridge. She poured with a sharp jerk, splashed half into the sink. Her reflection shimmered in the cabinet’s glass door: straight hair, pale skin, that crescent-shaped scar gleaming on her wrist as though branded. He washed his hands in cold water at the small steel sink. Raindrops clung to his lashes. He straightened, rubbed fingers across his chest, blotting damp. “Thank you.” She spat into the empty sink. He held up both hands. “I’ll pay you back.” She tapped the mug’s rim. A drop of tea spilled onto a pile of gilt-edged notes. She swiped at it with her thumb. “You don’t owe me.” His amber eye moved across the room. Shelves groaned under scrolls of incantations, spells half translated, pages littered with bloodlike stains. “I owe you a confession.” She snapped her head up. Steam rose between them in the lamplight. He wrapped his fingers around the mug’s handle and sank into one of the mismatched chairs. Rory sat opposite and rested her elbows on the table, piling clutter between them. “Out with it.” He inhaled, set the mug down. Tea darkened the wood. He tilted his head. “When I walked away that night, I thought I’d break every promise I ever made to you. I was wrong.” Rory closed her eyes. She squeezed the scar on her wrist. “You broke me instead.” A roll of thunder shook the windowpanes. He stared at the swirling tea. “I needed to protect you.” She whipped her gaze back. Her voice cracked like glass. “Protect me by leaving?” He swallowed. The silence stretched until the candle guttered. “Lucien,” she whispered. He raised a hand, as though to touch her face, then dropped it. His blade-cane leaned nearby. She caught sight of the thin sword beneath the ivory handle. “Are you still armed?” she asked. He shrugged. “I never leave unarmed.” She studied him, saw the tension in his shoulders, the wet collar clinging to his throat. The corner of his mouth twitched. Her heart slammed in her chest. She wanted to close the distance, ask him for every answer, but the clutter of the room and the sharp edges of their past held her back. He cleared his throat. “I’ve got a target on my back. The Syndicate marked me for elimination. My sources dry up. I have nowhere else to go—” “Then find another fix,” she said. “Go back to the underworld.” He laughed, a soft, bitter sound. “This isn’t a choice. They came for me before I could leave London.” Rory clenched her mug until her knuckles whitened. Tea seeped through the porcelain. She held it as though it might burn her. “Then you’ll die alone.” He pushed the mug aside, sending a ripple through the liquid. Scattered notes slid off the table’s edge. One fluttered down, pages spreading like wings. Rory’s gaze locked on a line of Welsh script: “Yn y tywyllwch mae gwirionedd.” He watched her read, then whispered, “Truth lives in darkness.” She glared. “I’m not your sanctuary.” He leaned forward. Rain tapped on the window behind him. “You are mine.” A gust rattled loose papers. He reached into his jacket, withdrew a slim envelope. He slid it across the table. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She studied his amber eye, saw something fragile there. Something he had never allowed himself to show. She slid a hand across the wood, stopping the envelope’s slide. Fingertips at the seal. She stared at him, waiting. Outside, the thunder rolled once more. Ptolemy leapt onto her lap, his weight a reminder of the world beyond this table. Rory looked down at the cat, then back at Lucien. He leaned on the table’s edge, cane in his other hand, suit still soaked, but the way he watched her held no threat. Only hope. She opened the envelope. Inside lay a single photograph: Rory and Lucien standing side by side on a bridge in Cardiff, streetlamps flickering behind them. He wore a grin. She laughed, hair blowing in the wind. They looked unguarded. Rory traced the photo’s edge. Her lips parted. The storm rattled the glass panes. Lucien waited, silent. She lifted her gaze. The flicker of candlelight danced across his heterochromatic eyes. He waited for her to speak.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:51:14.442Z" 2/19/2026, 3:51:14 AM
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native_tokens_prompt927
native_tokens_completion3370
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning1344
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1463
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1463
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count2
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"porcelain"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"trembled"
2"echoed"
3"flicked"
4"shimmered"
5"gleaming"
6"silence"
7"tension"
8"porcelain"
9"fluttered"
10"weight"
11"reminder"
12"traced"
13"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences156
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1458
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1240
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory22
Persian1
Welsh2
Ptolemy5
Lucien9
Cardiff1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.613
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1458
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean23.9
std15.18
cv0.635
sampleLengths
049
18
234
331
49
513
631
720
849
911
1013
1137
1230
1332
1423
1547
1644
1714
1812
195
208
2125
2213
2332
249
2555
2622
2754
283
291
3050
3128
3215
3327
3426
3512
3633
3734
3815
3918
4014
419
423
4328
446
456
4655
4727
4811
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs241
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences189
ratio0.005
matches
0"One amber eye caught the harsh hallway lamp; the other, dark as spilled ink, tracked Rory’s every move."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.018473895582329317
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008032128514056225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean7.71
std4.71
cv0.61
sampleLengths
06
14
25
316
418
58
612
711
811
915
1010
113
123
137
142
159
164
1719
1812
194
2010
216
223
239
248
255
265
277
2812
2911
307
316
3212
334
345
3511
365
374
386
393
406
4111
428
439
444
4511
462
477
489
495
47.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2698412698412698
totalSentences189
uniqueOpeners51
22.83% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"Bright blue eyes studied him"
ratio0.007
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences146
matches
0"He stood drenched, charcoal suit"
1"He inhaled deep."
2"He ducked his head, hair"
3"She leaned a shoulder against"
4"He clicked the cane tip"
5"Her toes caught the edge"
6"She crossed her arms tight,"
7"Her voice stayed flat"
8"He shrugged, water sleeting off"
9"She pivoted, braced her hips."
10"He stepped past her, shoulders"
11"She flipped it closed."
12"He rubbed one eye with"
13"She stood, shoved the journal"
14"He unbuttoned his suit jacket,"
15"He let the damp fabric"
16"He tucked the blade-cane in"
17"He cracked a grin that"
18"He took another step."
19"She scooped him up, pressed"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences146
matches
0"Rory hauled the third deadbolt"
1"The door swung inward."
2"Lucien Moreau filled the frame."
3"He stood drenched, charcoal suit"
4"Ptolemy arched his back, hissing"
5"Rory ordered and yanked the"
6"A click sounded as she"
7"The cat skidded past her"
8"Lucien braced his shoulder against"
9"Drops of rain pooled in"
10"He inhaled deep."
11"Rory pressed her palm against"
12"He ducked his head, hair"
13"She leaned a shoulder against"
14"Lucien’s smile curled sharp."
15"He clicked the cane tip"
16"Rory stepped back."
17"Her toes caught the edge"
18"The flat smelled of parchment"
19"Scrolls spilled from every shelf."
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her reflection shimmered in the cabinet’s glass door: straight hair, pale skin, that crescent-shaped scar gleaming on her wrist as though branded."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory ordered (order)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.244
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.098
83.3580%