| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 71 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.62 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 91.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1733 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1733 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pristine" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "calculating" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1739 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1179 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 6 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Canary | 1 | | Wharf | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Rory | 13 | | Ptolemy | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.949 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a smile" | | 1 | "looked like he hadn't slept in days" | | 2 | "quite hide, and Rory saw the dark stain spreading across his white shirt, just above his hip" | | 3 | "something between a laugh and a sob" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1739 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 82 | | mean | 21.21 | | std | 19.54 | | cv | 0.921 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 66 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 46 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "being left" | | 1 | "was laced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The curry house below had closed hours ago, and the building held that particular silence of a London night — distant sirens, the rumble of a late bus, nothing more." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes — amber and black — stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it." | | 2 | "Of course he did — half-demons didn't age the way humans did, and Lucien had always carried himself like time was something that happened to other people." | | 3 | "Lucien's expression flickered — something raw and quickly shuttered." | | 4 | "She wanted to drag him inside by his perfectly knotted tie and demand to know where he'd been, what he'd been doing, why he'd let three months pass without a single word when he knew — he *knew* — how she felt about silence, about being left to wonder." | | 5 | "Eva's research had consumed every available surface — books on demonology stacked beside takeaway containers, scrolls pinned to the walls with pushpins, a whiteboard covered in her cramped handwriting." | | 6 | "The polished fixer, the smooth-talking broker, the man who always had an angle — gone." | | 7 | "His sharp intake of breath had nothing to do with her fingers probing the wound — a deep gash, already starting to close with the accelerated healing his demon blood afforded him, but sluggish." |
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| 97.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1175 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04340425531914894 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011914893617021277 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 11.83 | | std | 10.09 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 54.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.35374149659863946 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Of course he did —" | | 2 | "Instead she stepped back, holding" | | 3 | "Even his heartbeat ran warmer" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 54.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the peephole out" | | 1 | "Her hand froze on the" | | 2 | "He wore charcoal as always," | | 3 | "His mismatched eyes — amber" | | 4 | "She hadn't seen him in" | | 5 | "She slid back the first" | | 6 | "Her fingers hesitated on the" | | 7 | "His voice carried through the" | | 8 | "she said flatly, and pulled" | | 9 | "He looked the same." | | 10 | "She'd taken scissors to it" | | 11 | "She didn't move from the" | | 12 | "His mouth curved, but it" | | 13 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 14 | "She wanted to drag him" | | 15 | "He smelled the same." | | 16 | "She hated that she remembered." | | 17 | "He turned to face her," | | 18 | "She covered it by moving" | | 19 | "He shrugged out of his" |
| | ratio | 0.413 | |
| 30.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 2 | "Rory set down her mug" | | 3 | "The curry house below had" | | 4 | "She checked the peephole out" | | 5 | "Her hand froze on the" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 7 | "He wore charcoal as always," | | 8 | "His mismatched eyes — amber" | | 9 | "Rory's pulse kicked against her" | | 10 | "She hadn't seen him in" | | 11 | "She slid back the first" | | 12 | "Her fingers hesitated on the" | | 13 | "His voice carried through the" | | 14 | "she said flatly, and pulled" | | 15 | "He looked the same." | | 16 | "Rory's hand went involuntarily to" | | 17 | "She'd taken scissors to it" | | 18 | "She didn't move from the" | | 19 | "His mouth curved, but it" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the quiet of Eva's flat like a blade." | | 1 | "Of course he did — half-demons didn't age the way humans did, and Lucien had always carried himself like time was something that happened to other people." | | 2 | "Sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of old churches and older sins." | | 3 | "His sharp intake of breath had nothing to do with her fingers probing the wound — a deep gash, already starting to close with the accelerated healing his demon …" | | 4 | "But there was nothing there except exhaustion and hope and something that looked terrifyingly like surrender." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He stopped, jaw tightening" | | 1 | "She caught, her fingers pressing against the pulse point" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he confirmed (confirm)" | | 1 | "She pressed (press)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 71 | | tagDensity | 0.155 | | leniency | 0.31 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.085 | |