Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0BYS4623D23J8YV8FT27P

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Duration:
53.5s
Cost:
$0.069085
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the quiet of Eva's flat like a blade. Ptolemy lifted his head from the stack of grimoires he'd claimed as a bed, ears swiveling toward the door. Rory set down her mug of cold tea and crossed the cramped space, stepping over a pile of scrolls Eva had left scattered across the floor before disappearing to chase down some lead in Whitechapel. The curry house below had closed hours ago, and the building held that particular silence of a London night — distant sirens, the rumble of a late bus, nothing more. She checked the peephole out of habit. Her hand froze on the first deadbolt. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, his platinum hair catching the sickly fluorescent light from the stairwell. He wore charcoal as always, the cut of his suit pristine despite the hour, his ivory-handled cane tucked under one arm. His mismatched eyes — amber and black — stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it. Knowing him, he probably could. Rory's pulse kicked against her throat. She hadn't seen him in three months. Not since that night in the warehouse off Canary Wharf, when everything had gone sideways and she'd walked away from him standing in the rain, his hand outstretched, her name still hanging in the air between them. She slid back the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her fingers hesitated on the third. "I know you're there, Rory." His voice carried through the wood, that familiar French accent curling around her name like smoke. "I can hear your heartbeat." "That's creepy," she said flatly, and pulled the door open. He looked the same. Of course he did — half-demons didn't age the way humans did, and Lucien had always carried himself like time was something that happened to other people. But there were shadows under his eyes she didn't remember, a tension in the set of his jaw that hadn't been there before. "You changed your hair," he said. Rory's hand went involuntarily to her shoulder, where her black hair now ended in a blunt cut. She'd taken scissors to it herself two weeks after the warehouse, standing in Eva's tiny bathroom at three in the morning, needing something she could control. "You're observant as ever." She didn't move from the doorway. "What do you want, Lucien?" "May I come in?" "That depends on why you're here." His mouth curved, but it wasn't quite a smile. "Still so careful. You never did trust easily." "I trusted you." The words came out sharper than she intended. Ptolemy made a sound of feline judgment from somewhere behind her. Lucien's expression flickered — something raw and quickly shuttered. He shifted his weight, and for the first time Rory noticed he was leaning more heavily on his cane than usual. Not an affectation tonight. An actual need. "You're hurt," she said. "A minor disagreement with some associates of our mutual friend in Southwark. Nothing that won't heal." "Minor disagreements don't usually leave you limping." "You noticed." That almost-smile again. "I'm touched." Rory wanted to slam the door in his face. She wanted to drag him inside by his perfectly knotted tie and demand to know where he'd been, what he'd been doing, why he'd let three months pass without a single word when he knew — he *knew* — how she felt about silence, about being left to wonder. Instead she stepped back, holding the door wider. Lucien moved past her with careful grace, his shoulder brushing hers in the narrow entrance. He smelled the same. Sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of old churches and older sins. She hated that she remembered. The flat was a disaster, as always. Eva's research had consumed every available surface — books on demonology stacked beside takeaway containers, scrolls pinned to the walls with pushpins, a whiteboard covered in her cramped handwriting. Lucien surveyed it all with the practiced eye of an information broker, cataloging and filing. "Your friend has been busy." "Eva's always busy." Rory closed the door and slid all three deadbolts home. "Sit down before you fall down. I'll get the first aid kit." "I didn't come here for medical attention." "Then why did you come?" He turned to face her, and for a moment all the careful masks fell away. The polished fixer, the smooth-talking broker, the man who always had an angle — gone. What remained was something rawer. Someone who looked like he hadn't slept in days. "Because I couldn't stay away any longer." Rory's breath caught. She covered it by moving to the cluttered kitchen, yanking open drawers until she found the first aid kit Eva kept stocked with supplies both mundane and otherwise. When she turned back, Lucien had lowered himself onto the edge of Eva's worn sofa, his cane propped against the armrest. Ptolemy had emerged from his book-nest to investigate, sniffing suspiciously at Lucien's polished shoes. "Take off your jacket," Rory said. "Demanding." "You want to bleed on Eva's couch, be my guest. She'll hex you into next week." Lucien's laugh was low and rough. He shrugged out of his jacket with a wince he couldn't quite hide, and Rory saw the dark stain spreading across his white shirt, just above his hip. She'd been right. Not minor at all. She knelt beside the sofa, her hands steadier than her heart. "Lift your shirt." "If you wanted me undressed, you only had to ask." "Shut up, Luc." The nickname slipped out before she could stop it. His sharp intake of breath had nothing to do with her fingers probing the wound — a deep gash, already starting to close with the accelerated healing his demon blood afforded him, but sluggish. Whatever had made it was laced with something nasty. "Iron blade," he confirmed, reading her expression. "Nasty trick." "Who?" "It doesn't matter." "It matters to me." She pressed gauze against the wound harder than strictly necessary. He hissed. "You show up at my door after three months of nothing, bleeding from an iron wound, and you won't even tell me who did this?" "Would it change anything?" Rory sat back on her heels, the first aid kit forgotten. "I don't know, Lucien. Would it? Because from where I'm sitting, nothing's changed. You're still keeping secrets. Still deciding what I get to know and what gets locked away in that calculating head of yours." "That's not—" He stopped, jaw tightening. "That's not fair." "Fair?" She stood, putting distance between them. "You want to talk about fair? You left me standing in that warehouse. You told me you'd explain everything, and then you just — vanished. No calls, no messages, nothing. I didn't know if you were alive or dead." "I was protecting you." "I don't need your protection!" The words echoed in the cramped flat. Ptolemy bolted for the bedroom, and somewhere below them, the curry house's ancient pipes groaned in sympathy. Lucien rose from the sofa, one hand pressed to his bandaged side. He crossed to her in two uneven steps, close enough that she could see the ring of gold around the pupil of his amber eye, the absolute void of his black one. "Yes," he said quietly. "You do. You have no idea what's coming, Rory. What's already in motion. The people I deal with, the things I've learned — if they knew how much you mattered to me—" He cut himself off, but the words hung between them anyway. Rory's chest ached. "Then tell me. Stop trying to carry this alone and just *tell me*." "I can't." His voice cracked on it. "Not yet. Not until I know I can keep you safe." "That's not your choice to make." "Isn't it?" He reached up, and his fingers hovered near her face without quite touching. "You walked away from me, remember? You made it very clear you didn't want my complications in your life." "I walked away because you shut me out." She caught his wrist, her fingers pressing against the pulse point. Even his heartbeat ran warmer than human. "There's a difference." "Is there?" They stood frozen, his wrist in her grip, his body close enough that she could feel the heat radiating off him. The moment stretched, fragile as spun glass. "I dream about you," Lucien said, so quiet she almost missed it. "Every night since the warehouse. I dream about the look on your face when you turned your back on me. And I deserve it. I know I deserve it. But I couldn't—" He drew a ragged breath. "I couldn't keep staying away. Even knowing it's selfish. Even knowing I should leave you out of this entirely." "You're a bastard," Rory whispered. "I know." "You lied to me." "I omitted. There's a difference." A sound escaped her, something between a laugh and a sob. "You're impossible." "So I've been told." She should push him away. Every rational instinct screamed at her to step back, to demand answers before letting him any closer. But the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist ached the way it always did when she was about to do something reckless, and Lucien was looking at her like she was the only real thing in a world of shadows and schemes. "If you disappear on me again," she said, "I will hunt you down myself. And I won't be gentle about it." His breath caught. "Rory—" "I mean it, Luc. No more vanishing acts. No more protecting me from things I have a right to know. Either you're in this with me, all of it, or you walk out that door right now and you don't come back." The silence stretched. Ptolemy crept back into the room, winding between their legs with pointed disinterest. "I can't promise you safety," Lucien finally said. "I can't promise you answers tonight. But I can promise you—" He turned his wrist in her grip, lacing his fingers through hers. "I can promise I won't leave. Not again. Not unless you tell me to go." Rory studied his face, searching for the lie. The calculation. The angle he was always playing. But there was nothing there except exhaustion and hope and something that looked terrifyingly like surrender. "You're bleeding through your bandage," she said. "I know." "You should sit down." "Probably." Neither of them moved.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:51:14.988Z" 2/19/2026, 3:51:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.62
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.056
91.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pristine"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"tension"
5"flickered"
6"weight"
7"calculating"
8"echoed"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"d in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1739
ratio0.002
matches
0"knew"
1"tell me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1179
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Whitechapel1
London1
Moreau1
Canary1
Wharf1
French1
Lucien12
Rory13
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"London"
globalScore0.949
windowScore1
5.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite a smile"
1"looked like he hadn't slept in days"
2"quite hide, and Rory saw the dark stain spreading across his white shirt, just above his hip"
3"something between a laugh and a sob"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1739
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean21.21
std19.54
cv0.921
sampleLengths
040
165
27
37
460
55
650
715
826
910
1054
116
1243
1315
144
156
1617
1722
1837
194
2016
217
227
2358
248
2538
2651
275
2825
297
305
3144
327
3366
346
351
3616
3741
3814
3910
403
4152
429
431
443
4541
464
4746
489
4946
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"being left"
1"was laced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences147
ratio0.054
matches
0"The curry house below had closed hours ago, and the building held that particular silence of a London night — distant sirens, the rumble of a late bus, nothing more."
1"His mismatched eyes — amber and black — stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it."
2"Of course he did — half-demons didn't age the way humans did, and Lucien had always carried himself like time was something that happened to other people."
3"Lucien's expression flickered — something raw and quickly shuttered."
4"She wanted to drag him inside by his perfectly knotted tie and demand to know where he'd been, what he'd been doing, why he'd let three months pass without a single word when he knew — he *knew* — how she felt about silence, about being left to wonder."
5"Eva's research had consumed every available surface — books on demonology stacked beside takeaway containers, scrolls pinned to the walls with pushpins, a whiteboard covered in her cramped handwriting."
6"The polished fixer, the smooth-talking broker, the man who always had an angle — gone."
7"His sharp intake of breath had nothing to do with her fingers probing the wound — a deep gash, already starting to close with the accelerated healing his demon blood afforded him, but sluggish."
97.02% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1175
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.04340425531914894
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011914893617021277
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean11.83
std10.09
cv0.853
sampleLengths
021
119
235
330
47
57
618
721
821
95
106
117
1237
136
143
156
1621
175
1810
194
2027
2123
226
2317
2426
2510
265
274
286
299
308
3111
3211
339
3421
354
363
374
3816
397
405
412
429
4349
448
4515
464
4714
485
497
54.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35374149659863946
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Of course he did —"
2"Instead she stepped back, holding"
3"Even his heartbeat ran warmer"
ratio0.043
54.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences92
matches
0"She checked the peephole out"
1"Her hand froze on the"
2"He wore charcoal as always,"
3"His mismatched eyes — amber"
4"She hadn't seen him in"
5"She slid back the first"
6"Her fingers hesitated on the"
7"His voice carried through the"
8"she said flatly, and pulled"
9"He looked the same."
10"She'd taken scissors to it"
11"She didn't move from the"
12"His mouth curved, but it"
13"He shifted his weight, and"
14"She wanted to drag him"
15"He smelled the same."
16"She hated that she remembered."
17"He turned to face her,"
18"She covered it by moving"
19"He shrugged out of his"
ratio0.413
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
2"Rory set down her mug"
3"The curry house below had"
4"She checked the peephole out"
5"Her hand froze on the"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"He wore charcoal as always,"
8"His mismatched eyes — amber"
9"Rory's pulse kicked against her"
10"She hadn't seen him in"
11"She slid back the first"
12"Her fingers hesitated on the"
13"His voice carried through the"
14"she said flatly, and pulled"
15"He looked the same."
16"Rory's hand went involuntarily to"
17"She'd taken scissors to it"
18"She didn't move from the"
19"His mouth curved, but it"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the quiet of Eva's flat like a blade."
1"Of course he did — half-demons didn't age the way humans did, and Lucien had always carried himself like time was something that happened to other people."
2"Sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of old churches and older sins."
3"His sharp intake of breath had nothing to do with her fingers probing the wound — a deep gash, already starting to close with the accelerated healing his demon …"
4"But there was nothing there except exhaustion and hope and something that looked terrifyingly like surrender."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He stopped, jaw tightening"
1"She caught, her fingers pressing against the pulse point"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he confirmed (confirm)"
1"She pressed (press)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.155
leniency0.31
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.085
80.5698%