| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "multiple tones speaking simultaneously [simultaneously]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 91.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "tapestry" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1208 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the Grove. Ask the Seer." | | 1 | "much" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Peterborough | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | Varga | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 18 | | Uncertainty | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Seer | 3 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Peterborough" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.645 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to move when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "seemed built on less" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.828 | | wordCount | 1208 | | matches | | 0 | "Not an absence of sound, but a presence of it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.61 | | std | 24.02 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 80 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 62 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 85 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 28 |
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| 89.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were shrouded" | | 2 | "were fixed" | | 3 | "was layered" | | 4 | "being noticed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora checked her phone — six seventeen — and glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadow-form rippling faintly in the cooling air." | | 1 | "The crimson gem had been quiet for weeks now, but ever since she'd received the cryptic message scratched into her doorstep — three words, nothing more — it had begun to hum with that faint, insistent heat." | | 2 | "And there — just at the edge of her perception — she saw it." | | 3 | "The trees were still there — ancient oaks, their trunks wider than houses — but they were different now." | | 4 | "Not an absence of sound, but a presence of it — a thick, living quiet that pressed against her ears like velvet." | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — roses that shone like pearls, bluebells that chimed faintly in a wind she couldn't feel, flowers she had no names for in colors that didn't exist in the mortal world." | | 6 | "Her eyes — pale lavender, almost white — were fixed on them with an intensity that felt less like looking and more like being read." | | 7 | "How *much* — too much substance in a place that seemed built on less." | | 8 | "\"I asked nothing. But I knew you would come.\" She rose in a single fluid motion, her gown — gossamer, silver, impossible — floating around her like mist." | | 9 | "She opened her mouth to ask — what?" |
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| 91.28% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1044 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same endless green-brown tapestry" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04310344827586207 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01532567049808429 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 12.45 | | std | 8.96 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 58.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4020618556701031 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind them, a woodpecker" | | 1 | "Just the softest whisper of" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She still didn't know who" | | 1 | "They walked in silence through" | | 2 | "It was nearly twenty minutes" | | 3 | "they said, their whisper-voice carrying" | | 4 | "She saw nothing but more" | | 5 | "It wasn't the amber-gold of" | | 6 | "Their bark gleamed faintly, etched" | | 7 | "They stood at the edge" | | 8 | "They grew in spiraling patterns" | | 9 | "They didn't leave footprints at" | | 10 | "She, on the other hand," | | 11 | "Their branches reached inward, intertwining" | | 12 | "She was ethereal in a" | | 13 | "Her eyes — pale lavender," | | 14 | "She wore no shoes." | | 15 | "Her feet, like Nyx's, left" | | 16 | "She rose in a single" | | 17 | "It burned now, truly burned," | | 18 | "It felt like a heartbeat." | | 19 | "Her pale eyes flicked to" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi had dropped them" | | 1 | "Aurora checked her phone —" | | 2 | "Nyx's violet eyes, barely visible" | | 3 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The crimson gem had been" | | 5 | "She still didn't know who" | | 6 | "They walked in silence through" | | 7 | "The path wound between coppiced" | | 8 | "It was nearly twenty minutes" | | 9 | "they said, their whisper-voice carrying" | | 10 | "Aurora looked around." | | 11 | "She saw nothing but more" | | 12 | "Nyx extended a hand, their" | | 13 | "Aurora squinted, forcing herself to" | | 14 | "A place where the world" | | 15 | "The pendant flared warm against" | | 16 | "Nyx stepped forward, and the" | | 17 | "Aurora followed, and the world" | | 18 | "The first thing she noticed" | | 19 | "It wasn't the amber-gold of" |
| | ratio | 0.7 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Before the message." | | 1 | "Before the pendant started burning." |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora checked her phone — six seventeen — and glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadow-form rippling faintly in the cooling air." | | 1 | "It wasn't the amber-gold of an autumn evening anymore, but something softer, silvery, as if the moon itself had decided to live in this place." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — roses that shone like pearls, bluebells that chimed faintly in a wind she couldn't feel, flowers she h…" | | 3 | "Their branches reached inward, intertwining to form a natural ceiling that filtered the silver light into dappled patterns on the ground." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx extended, their shadow-fingers brushing against the air itself" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "multiple tones speaking simultaneously (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |