Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0C0NRBBJF90J3M2V7BPR5

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Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.002823
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The taxi had dropped them at the Peterborough Gate entrance to Richmond Park just as the sun began its descent, painting the sky in shades of burnt orange. Aurora checked her phone — six seventeen — and glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadow-form rippling faintly in the cooling air. "You're sure this is the place?" Aurora asked. Nyx's violet eyes, barely visible in the dimming light, turned toward the tree line. "The Grove calls to those with the sight. I've felt it for miles." Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, feeling its familiar warmth pulse against her skin. The crimson gem had been quiet for weeks now, but ever since she'd received the cryptic message scratched into her doorstep — three words, nothing more — it had begun to hum with that faint, insistent heat. *Find the Grove. Ask the Seer.* She still didn't know who had left the message, or why. But Isolde Varga was supposed to be able to see paths forward when all others were shrouded in fog. And right now, with the Veil growing thin and something dark stirring in Hel, Aurora needed answers more than she needed sleep. They walked in silence through the ancient woodland, the autumn evening settling around them like a familiar coat. The path wound between coppiced hornbeam and oak, their branches intertwining overhead to form a natural tunnel of copper and gold. Somewhere behind them, a woodpecker drummed its lazy rhythm into the fading light. It was nearly twenty minutes later when Nyx stopped. "Here," they said, their whisper-voice carrying an unusual edge of something Aurora had never heard from them before. Uncertainty. "The boundary." Aurora looked around. She saw nothing but more trees, more undergrowth, the same endless green-brown tapestry of the park. "I don't—" "Trust your eyes less than your other senses." Nyx extended a hand, their shadow-fingers brushing against the air itself. Where they touched, something rippled. Like heat haze rising from summer tarmac. Like the shimmer of oil on water. "The Grove doesn't announce itself. It waits." Aurora squinted, forcing herself to look past the ordinary visual noise of the park. And there — just at the edge of her perception — she saw it. A distortion. A place where the world seemed to fold in on itself, boundaries blurring between what was real and what was something else entirely. The pendant flared warm against her chest. "Lead the way," she said. Nyx stepped forward, and the air swallowed them whole. Aurora followed, and the world inverted. The first thing she noticed was the light. It wasn't the amber-gold of an autumn evening anymore, but something softer, silvery, as if the moon itself had decided to live in this place. The trees were still there — ancient oaks, their trunks wider than houses — but they were different now. Their bark gleamed faintly, etched with patterns that seemed to move when she looked at them directly. Runes, perhaps. Or simply the dreams of something old made visible. The second thing she noticed was the silence. Not an absence of sound, but a presence of it — a thick, living quiet that pressed against her ears like velvet. No traffic from the distant city. No aircraft humming overhead. Just the softest whisper of wind through leaves that glowed with their own internal luminescence. "By the saints," Aurora breathed. They stood at the edge of a clearing. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — roses that shone like pearls, bluebells that chimed faintly in a wind she couldn't feel, flowers she had no names for in colors that didn't exist in the mortal world. They grew in spiraling patterns that suggested intention, design, purpose. This was no natural meadow. "This way." Nyx moved forward, their solid form flickering between shadow and substance as they walked. Aurora realized with a start that the flowers didn't bend beneath their feet. They didn't leave footprints at all. She, on the other hand, left clear impressions in the soft earth. The Fae-Forged Blade hung at her hip, its cold weight a constant reassurance. Aurora touched it unconsciously as they walked deeper into the grove, feeling the faint pulse of its moonglow even through the sheath. The weapon had been a gift from Isolde herself, though Aurora had only met the Seer once, briefly, in a dream that felt more real than waking. That had been weeks ago. Before the message. Before the pendant started burning. The standing stones appeared between one step and the next, as if they had simply always been there and Aurora's eyes had only just decided to notice them. Twelve oaks, massive and ancient, arranged in a perfect circle around a central clearing. Their branches reached inward, intertwining to form a natural ceiling that filtered the silver light into dappled patterns on the ground. And at the center of the circle, half-hidden by flowering vines, sat a figure. She was ethereal in a way that made Aurora's chest tight. Silver hair cascaded past her waist, pooling around her crossed legs like liquid mercury. Her eyes — pale lavender, almost white — were fixed on them with an intensity that felt less like looking and more like being read. She wore no shoes. Her feet, like Nyx's, left no impression on the earth. "Aurora Carter." The Seer's voice was layered, multiple tones speaking simultaneously in a harmony that danced at the edge of understanding. "You came." "You asked me to." Aurora stopped at the edge of the stone circle, suddenly aware of how mortal she was. How heavy. How *much* — too much substance in a place that seemed built on less. "I think." Isolde smiled, and it was the saddest smile Aurora had ever seen. "I asked nothing. But I knew you would come." She rose in a single fluid motion, her gown — gossamer, silver, impossible — floating around her like mist. "The pendant told you where to find me. The pendant has been telling you many things, has it not?" Aurora's hand flew to the crimson gemstone. It burned now, truly burned, hot enough that she should have been crying out in pain. But the heat wasn't unpleasant. It felt like a heartbeat. Like being noticed. "What's happening to me?" The question came out smaller than she intended. Isolde stepped forward, and the flowers parted for her like a greeting. "You carry a piece of Hel in your pocket, child. A gift from a prince who trades in souls and servitude." Her pale eyes flicked to Nyx, assessing. "And you walk with a Shade, whose kind were once the most powerful sorcerers of the old world. The Veil is thinning, Aurora Carter. It has been thinning for twenty years. And you — you stand at the crossroads of everything that will come next." The air seemed to thicken around them. Aurora felt the weight of words not yet spoken, truths hovering just beyond reach. She opened her mouth to ask — what? Everything. Nothing. Where did she even begin? The trees creaked overhead. The flowers chimed their strange, windless song. And somewhere in the distance, so faint she might have imagined it, a voice called her name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"multiple tones speaking simultaneously [simultaneously]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
91.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"tapestry"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"tapestry"
6"etched"
7"velvet"
8"weight"
9"perfect"
10"intensity"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
94.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1208
ratio0.006
matches
0"Find the Grove. Ask the Seer."
1"much"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1053
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Peterborough1
Gate1
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx8
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Grove1
Isolde4
Varga1
Veil1
Hel1
Aurora18
Uncertainty1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Seer3
Like3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Pendant"
2"Isolde"
3"Aurora"
4"Blade"
5"Seer"
6"Like"
places
0"Peterborough"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.645
windowScore0.833
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to move when she looked at them directly"
1"seemed built on less"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.828
wordCount1208
matches
0"Not an absence of sound, but a presence of it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean36.61
std24.02
cv0.656
sampleLengths
053
18
227
359
452
552
69
721
821
945
1053
117
125
139
146
1580
1655
175
1861
1935
2012
2162
2213
2377
2464
2523
2638
2759
2836
2912
3085
3136
3228
89.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"was supposed"
1"were shrouded"
2"were fixed"
3"was layered"
4"being noticed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences97
ratio0.103
matches
0"Aurora checked her phone — six seventeen — and glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadow-form rippling faintly in the cooling air."
1"The crimson gem had been quiet for weeks now, but ever since she'd received the cryptic message scratched into her doorstep — three words, nothing more — it had begun to hum with that faint, insistent heat."
2"And there — just at the edge of her perception — she saw it."
3"The trees were still there — ancient oaks, their trunks wider than houses — but they were different now."
4"Not an absence of sound, but a presence of it — a thick, living quiet that pressed against her ears like velvet."
5"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — roses that shone like pearls, bluebells that chimed faintly in a wind she couldn't feel, flowers she had no names for in colors that didn't exist in the mortal world."
6"Her eyes — pale lavender, almost white — were fixed on them with an intensity that felt less like looking and more like being read."
7"How *much* — too much substance in a place that seemed built on less."
8"\"I asked nothing. But I knew you would come.\" She rose in a single fluid motion, her gown — gossamer, silver, impossible — floating around her like mist."
9"She opened her mouth to ask — what?"
91.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same endless green-brown tapestry"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04310344827586207
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01532567049808429
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.45
std8.96
cv0.719
sampleLengths
028
125
28
314
413
516
637
73
83
911
1019
1122
1218
1321
1413
159
1618
171
182
193
2016
212
2219
235
247
257
267
2714
2814
292
3023
317
325
339
346
358
3625
3719
3817
392
409
418
4222
436
444
4515
465
478
4838
4910
58.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4020618556701031
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners39
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Somewhere behind them, a woodpecker"
1"Just the softest whisper of"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences80
matches
0"She still didn't know who"
1"They walked in silence through"
2"It was nearly twenty minutes"
3"they said, their whisper-voice carrying"
4"She saw nothing but more"
5"It wasn't the amber-gold of"
6"Their bark gleamed faintly, etched"
7"They stood at the edge"
8"They grew in spiraling patterns"
9"They didn't leave footprints at"
10"She, on the other hand,"
11"Their branches reached inward, intertwining"
12"She was ethereal in a"
13"Her eyes — pale lavender,"
14"She wore no shoes."
15"Her feet, like Nyx's, left"
16"She rose in a single"
17"It burned now, truly burned,"
18"It felt like a heartbeat."
19"Her pale eyes flicked to"
ratio0.263
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences80
matches
0"The taxi had dropped them"
1"Aurora checked her phone —"
2"Nyx's violet eyes, barely visible"
3"Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant"
4"The crimson gem had been"
5"She still didn't know who"
6"They walked in silence through"
7"The path wound between coppiced"
8"It was nearly twenty minutes"
9"they said, their whisper-voice carrying"
10"Aurora looked around."
11"She saw nothing but more"
12"Nyx extended a hand, their"
13"Aurora squinted, forcing herself to"
14"A place where the world"
15"The pendant flared warm against"
16"Nyx stepped forward, and the"
17"Aurora followed, and the world"
18"The first thing she noticed"
19"It wasn't the amber-gold of"
ratio0.7
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Before the message."
1"Before the pendant started burning."
ratio0.025
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora checked her phone — six seventeen — and glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadow-form rippling faintly in the cooling air."
1"It wasn't the amber-gold of an autumn evening anymore, but something softer, silvery, as if the moon itself had decided to live in this place."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — roses that shone like pearls, bluebells that chimed faintly in a wind she couldn't feel, flowers she h…"
3"Their branches reached inward, intertwining to form a natural ceiling that filtered the silver light into dappled patterns on the ground."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx extended, their shadow-fingers brushing against the air itself"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"multiple tones speaking simultaneously (speak)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.211
85.6264%