Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0C3EM616JDDWR24DYT22B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.001154
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock was soft. Three precise raps, the kind that didn’t ask, but announced. Rory was ankle-deep in Eva’s research, surrounded by a fortress of leather-bound tomes on the floor. Ptolemy, the tabby, hissed from his perch on the radiator before streaking under the sofa. She hadn’t been expecting anyone. Eva was in Edinburgh, chasing down a lead on a kelpie. Rory stood, her knees cracking in protest, and edged towards the door. Through the peephole, the world was a fish-eye lens of the dim hallway. He was a smear of expensive charcoal grey, his face distorted but unmistakable. Lucien. Her breath hitched. She hadn’t seen him in eight months. Not since the night at the old docks, the air thick with the stench of rotting fish and spilled magic, when he’d handed her a sealed envelope and told her, in that calm, infuriating tone, that it was safer if she forgot his face for a while. She’d thrown the envelope back at him. It had fluttered to the wet ground between them. She hadn’t said a word. Just walked away, the echo of his cane on the cobbles following her for blocks. Now he was here, standing outside Eva’s door on Brick Lane as if he’d just come for tea. Rory’s hand hovered over the three deadbolts. Every instinct screamed to stay silent, to let him think the flat was empty. But he’d know. He always knew. She slid the bolts back, one after another, the sound like gunshots in the quiet flat. She pulled the door open just enough to frame herself in the gap. The distortion was gone. He looked exactly the same. Impeccable. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. The charcoal suit was tailored to perfection, hugging his broad shoulders and narrow waist. One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane. And his eyes—one a warm, molten amber, the other a bottomless black—held her with an intensity that felt like a physical touch. “Rory.” His voice was a low baritone, smoother than she remembered. It did things to her spine she’d spent months trying to forget. “You’re supposed to be in Marseille,” she said. Her voice came out flat, a dull blade. “Plans change.” “Did you get lost? This isn’t your part of the river.” A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. It didn’t reach his mismatched eyes. “May I come in? The scent of lamb bhuna is… pervasive out here.” “Eva’s not home.” “I’m aware. I came to see you.” The admission hung between them. Rory’s left wrist, where the small crescent scar shone pale against her skin, began to throb with a phantom ache. An old habit, a nervous tell. She fought the urge to cover it. “Whatever you’re selling, I’m not buying, Lucien. We’re done. You made that clear.” He leaned a fraction of an inch on the cane. “We were never done. We were paused. There is a difference.” “Semantics.” “It is the difference between a comma and a full stop. May I please come in? It is a matter of some… delicacy. And it involves you.” Curiosity was a trap. She knew that. But the part of her that was still the girl who’d fled Cardiff, the part that loved puzzles and dangerous information, that part was already turning the bolts. She stepped back, opening the door wider. “Fine. Five minutes.” He moved past her into the cluttered room. He took up space differently than other people. Not by bulk, but by a sheer, quiet certainty. He surveyed the chaotic landscape of books and scrolls, his gaze analytical, missing nothing. He didn’t sit. He stood in the center of the room, a monolith of order amidst the beautiful chaos. “You’ve been busy,” he remarked, nudging a stack of papers with the tip of his cane. “What do you want, Luc?” He turned to face her fully. The amber eye seemed to catch the weak London light filtering through the window. The black one drank it. “Your name has surfaced. In a context you will not enjoy.” A cold trickle traced her spine. “What context?” “The auction houses of Avaros. There is a new collector. He specializes in unique… artifacts. Items of power with a trace of human soul still clinging to them.” Lucien’s voice was clinical, but his grip on the cane tightened, the knuckles whitening. “He has developed a particular interest in the children of barristers from Cardiff who dabble in the nocturnal trades. Especially ones with a crescent-shaped scar on their left wrist.” The air left Rory’s lungs. She instinctively curled her wrist into her chest. “How?” “The same way anyone learns anything. Someone talked. Someone who was not as careful as they should have been after a dockside disagreement eight months ago. Your little display of temper drew attention we had worked very hard to avoid.” The accusation was a slap. “My display? You’re the one who gave me a severance package and a ‘good luck, don’t call me’!” “I gave you distance! A clean break! So the things that follow me would not find you!” For the first time, his calm facade cracked. A ripple of raw frustration, of something hotter and darker, moved beneath the surface. He took a sharp, controlled breath. “It seems I underestimated both the collector’s tenacity and his sources.” “So this is my fault now?” Her voice rose, echoing in the small flat. “You vanish without a word, you leave me to pick up the pieces of that mess, and now you waltz back in here to tell me I’m on some demon’s shopping list because I didn’t disappear politely enough?” “I am not blaming you.” He bit the words out. “I am stating a fact. And I am here to fix it.” “How? Another envelope? Another ‘for your own good’ and then another eight months of radio silence?” He was across the room in three swift strides, the cane forgotten, its tip leaving a faint indentation in Eva’s rug. He didn’t touch her, but he was close enough that she could smell the subtle scent of his cologne—sandalwood and frost. Close enough to see the faint scar through his left eyebrow, a detail she’d memorized in darker, quieter moments. “Do you think I wanted that?” His voice was a low, urgent rasp. “Do you think it was easy for me to walk away from the one person in this godforsaken city who looked at me and saw a man, not a transaction or a monster?” The words hung there, charged and brittle. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. All the hurt, the lonely nights spent wondering what she’d done wrong, the anger that had been her fuel—it all curdled into a sharp, aching lump in her throat. “You saw a solution,” she whispered. “A problem to be managed. That’s what you do, Lucien. You manage things.” His amber eye flashed. “I was managing the only thing that mattered! Your survival!” “And you didn’t think I deserved a say in it? A choice? You just decided. Like you always do.” “Because the choice was between having me in your life and having a life at all!” The shout was silent, contained in the fierce tension of his jaw, the stark planes of his face. “This world, my world, it consumes beautiful things. It grinds them up for power. I have watched it happen. I refused to let it happen to you.” The confession was ripped from him. It lay bare between them, ugly and real. The polished fixer was gone. In his place was just Luc—a man standing in a messy flat, haunted and furious and scared. Rory’s defiance faltered. The wall of anger she’d built brick by brick over the months had a crack. She saw the shadows under his eyes, the new fine lines at their corners. The cost of those eight months. “You don’t get to make that call for me,” she said, but the heat was gone from her words. “I know.” He looked away, a muscle ticking in his jaw. “I know that now. It was the worst mistake I have ever made. And I have made many.” He brought his gaze back to hers. The black eye seemed to swirl, depths upon depths. “But the threat is real, Rory. It is here, now. And my methods, however flawed, are the only ones I have to keep you safe. Please. Let me try again. Differently this time.” He didn’t move. He waited. The ball of anxiety in her chest loosened, unspooling into a tangled mix of fear, residual anger, and a treacherous, undeniable pull. The attraction had never died. It had just gone quiet, buried under the hurt. Now it hummed back to life, a live wire in the scant space between them. “Differently how?” she asked, her voice barely audible. “Together.” The word was simple. Final. “No more unilateral decisions. No more disappearances. You are infuriatingly clever and stubbornly capable. I will not treat you as anything less. We face this. As partners.” Partners. The word was a key, turning in a lock she’d thought was sealed forever. Ptolemy chose that moment to slink out from under the sofa, winding himself around Lucien’s immaculate trouser leg, leaving a trail of grey fur. Lucien glanced down, a flicker of surprise on his face. “He hates everyone,” Rory said, a weak, watery laugh escaping her. “I have been told I have a way with felines.” Lucien looked back at her, and the ghost of his real smile finally touched his eyes, softening the hard line of his mouth. “And with complicated women who are too smart for their own good.” She didn’t smile back. She just stared at him, at the man who had broken her trust and was now standing in the wreckage, offering to help rebuild it. The smell of curry from downstairs seeped under the door. A siren wailed somewhere on Commercial Street. The ordinary world kept turning, oblivious. “Five minutes are up,” she said. His expression didn’t change, but the light in his amber eye dimmed a fraction. He gave a single, slow nod. He reached for his cane. “I’ll see myself out.” “I didn’t say you had to leave.” The words were out before she could stop them. She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture. “I need to know everything. Every detail about this collector. How he got my name. What he wants. And I have some… research of Eva’s that might be relevant. It’s going to take more than five minutes.” Lucien stilled. The hope that flashed across his face was so raw, so quickly schooled back into neutrality, that it made her chest hurt. “As you wish.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.039
94.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"depths"
count2
15
word"treacherous"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"echo"
2"intensity"
3"throb"
4"chaotic"
5"amidst"
6"traced"
7"facade"
8"echoing"
9"silence"
10"eyebrow"
11"charged"
12"tension"
13"stark"
14"depths"
15"treacherous"
16"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences116
matches
0"a flicker of surprise"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1155
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Edinburgh1
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff1
London1
Rory8
Luc1
Final1
Lucien6
Commercial1
Street1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Luc"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Commercial"
6"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.557
wordCount1795
matches
0"Not by bulk, but by a sheer, quiet certainty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean28.95
std20.48
cv0.707
sampleLengths
045
154
21
357
436
518
627
729
868
91
1022
1116
122
1311
1427
153
167
1738
1813
1921
201
2127
2242
233
2458
2516
265
2736
288
2971
3014
3140
3223
3356
3452
3522
3616
3761
3846
3942
4019
4114
4219
4361
4436
4538
4619
4778
4856
498
84.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences116
matches
0"was gone"
1"was slicked"
2"was tailored"
3"was ripped"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
6"was sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
66.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences149
ratio0.027
matches
0"And his eyes—one a warm, molten amber, the other a bottomless black—held her with an intensity that felt like a physical touch."
1"He didn’t touch her, but he was close enough that she could smell the subtle scent of his cologne—sandalwood and frost."
2"All the hurt, the lonely nights spent wondering what she’d done wrong, the anger that had been her fuel—it all curdled into a sharp, aching lump in her throat."
3"In his place was just Luc—a man standing in a messy flat, haunted and furious and scared."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1163
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.027515047291487533
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007738607050730868
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean12.05
std9.34
cv0.776
sampleLengths
04
110
216
315
45
511
612
713
813
91
103
117
1247
137
149
155
1615
1718
187
1914
203
213
2216
2313
244
255
261
2712
2814
2910
3022
311
3210
3312
348
358
362
3711
388
396
4013
413
427
435
4420
456
467
4713
4810
4911
45.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.33557046979865773
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners50
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just walked away, the echo"
ratio0.009
36.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences107
matches
0"She hadn’t been expecting anyone."
1"He was a smear of"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"She hadn’t seen him in"
4"She’d thrown the envelope back"
5"It had fluttered to the"
6"She hadn’t said a word."
7"He always knew."
8"She slid the bolts back,"
9"She pulled the door open"
10"He looked exactly the same."
11"His platinum hair was slicked"
12"His voice was a low"
13"It did things to her"
14"Her voice came out flat,"
15"It didn’t reach his mismatched"
16"She fought the urge to"
17"He leaned a fraction of"
18"She knew that."
19"She stepped back, opening the"
ratio0.458
30.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences107
matches
0"The knock was soft."
1"Rory was ankle-deep in Eva’s"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby, hissed from"
3"She hadn’t been expecting anyone."
4"Eva was in Edinburgh, chasing"
5"Rory stood, her knees cracking"
6"He was a smear of"
7"Her breath hitched."
8"She hadn’t seen him in"
9"She’d thrown the envelope back"
10"It had fluttered to the"
11"She hadn’t said a word."
12"Rory’s hand hovered over the"
13"Every instinct screamed to stay"
14"He always knew."
15"She slid the bolts back,"
16"She pulled the door open"
17"The distortion was gone."
18"He looked exactly the same."
19"His platinum hair was slicked"
ratio0.86
93.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Now he was here, standing"
1"Now it hummed back to"
ratio0.019
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Now he was here, standing outside Eva’s door on Brick Lane as if he’d just come for tea."
1"And his eyes—one a warm, molten amber, the other a bottomless black—held her with an intensity that felt like a physical touch."
2"But the part of her that was still the girl who’d fled Cardiff, the part that loved puzzles and dangerous information, that part was already turning the bolts."
3"All the hurt, the lonely nights spent wondering what she’d done wrong, the anger that had been her fuel—it all curdled into a sharp, aching lump in her throat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"the cane tightened, the knuckles whitening"
1"she said, but the heat was gone from her words"
2"He looked away, a muscle ticking in his jaw"
3"she asked, her voice barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.039
83.3542%