Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0CBAHSD8XNE98REA8Z0BT

Run Details

Duration:
5m 13s
Cost:
$0.004396
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn stepped off the maintenance ladder and onto the cracked tiles of the abandoned Tube platform. Dust motes danced in the beam of her torch, settling on the graffiti that coated the curved ceiling. The air tasted of copper and old ozone, thick enough to coat the back of her throat. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The hands glowed faintly in the dark, marking the time well past midnight. This place did not exist on any Transport for London map. The signage read Camden Town, but the tracks ended in a brick wall fifty yards down. Shadows pooled in the corners, deeper than the darkness should allow. Quinn clicked her torch off. Her eyes adjusted to the dim blue luminescence emanating from stalls set up along the platform edge. The Veil Market. Eva Kowalski crouched near the center of the platform, her back to the detective. The red curls of her hair formed a chaotic halo around her head. She wore round glasses that reflected the blue light. A worn leather satchel sat open beside her, spilling books with cracked spines onto the dirty floor. Quinn approached, her boots making no sound on the grit. She stopped beside the researcher. A body lay between them. A man, dressed in rags that shimmered like oil on water. His skin remained unbroken, yet his eyes were wide, fixed on the ceiling. No blood pooled beneath him. Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear. Her fingers trembled. The researcher opened her satchel further and withdrew a small brass compass. Verdigris stained the casing. Sigils etched into the face glowed faintly. The needle spun wild, then locked, pointing not north, but down into the tracks. Quinn knelt. She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her pocket and snapped them onto her wrists. She leaned over the corpse. Rigor mortis had not set in. The skin felt cold, colder than the ambient temperature of the tunnel. Quinn lifted the man's hand. The fingernails were blackened, as if burned from the inside out. Eva adjusted her glasses. The heat signature is wrong. This isn't natural combustion. Quinn released the hand. It dropped with a dull thud. You think someone used magic. I think something crossed over. The Compass reacts to rifts. The needle holds steady on the tracks. Something came through here and took him. Quinn stood. She walked a circle around the body. Her sharp jaw tightened. She scanned the perimeter. The stalls around them remained shuttered, wooden fronts carved with symbols that hurt the eyes if stared at too long. No vendors. No witnesses. Just the dead man and the silence. She returned to the head of the corpse. She shone her torch into the man's mouth. The tongue was swollen, blackened like the nails. If something came through, where did it go? Eva stood. She brushed dust from her knees. Her green eyes widened behind the lenses. It went back. The rift closed. That is how the Veil works. Open, take, close. Quinn shook her head. She pointed to the man's shoes. Look at the soles. Eva leaned in. The rubber soles were caked in dry, red clay. Quinn walked to the edge of the platform. She shone her light onto the tracks. The ballast consisted of grey London gravel and crushed concrete. No red clay existed in the Camden underground. He didn't die here. Eva frowned. She tucked her hair behind her ear again. The gesture repeated, faster this time. The Compass points here. The energy residue is fresh. The Compass points to energy, not bodies. Someone moved him. Quinn holstered her torch. She reached into her jacket and pulled out a evidence bag. She plucked a fragment of material from the dead man's collar. The fabric felt like silk but burned her fingertips through the latex. She dropped it into the bag. If he died elsewhere, why bring him to the Market? To stage it. To make it look like a breach. Quinn turned her gaze to the brick wall at the end of the tracks. She walked toward it. Her footsteps echoed in the hollow space. Eva followed, the brass compass held out in front of her. The needle swung wildly as they moved away from the body, then settled again, pointing at the wall. Quinn ran a hand over the bricks. Mortar crumbled under her touch. She found a spot near the ground where the dust had been disturbed. A drag mark. Fresh. She crouched. The mark led away from the wall, toward the body. Someone dragged him from the maintenance tunnel behind the wall. Not from a rift. Eva lowered the compass. Her brow furrowed. But the energy reading. It is undeniable. Quinn stood. She wiped her gloved hand on her trousers. Energy lingers. People move bodies. You are looking at the spell, Eva. I am looking at the murderer. The detective walked back to the corpse. She knelt beside the satchel of books. One lay open. Pages filled with handwritten notes on Shade artisans and portal mechanics. Quinn scanned the text. Diagrams of the Veil Compass filled the margins. You brought him here to hide the cause of death. If the Met finds him in a normal morgue, we run tox screens. If we find him here, we call in the specialist unit. We call in you. Eva stepped back. She clutched the compass to her chest. I did not know he was dead when I brought him. I found him wandering the stalls. He collapsed. Quinn rose. She towered over the smaller woman. The blue light cast long shadows across Quinn's salt-and-pepper hair. You found him wandering. In a market that requires a bone token to enter. A market that moves every full moon. Eva's breath hitched. She looked at the tracks, then at Quinn. I have my ways. Quinn checked her watch again. The luminous hands ticked forward. Show me the token. Eva tightened her grip on the compass. The needle jerked, swinging toward Quinn's wrist. Quinn froze. She looked at her own watch. The leather strap appeared normal, worn and cracked from years of service. But the Compass needle vibrated, humming with a low frequency that Quinn felt in her teeth. She peeled back the strap of her watch. Beneath the leather, embedded in the casing, a sliver of bone glowed faintly white. Quinn stared at the object. She had worn this watch for five years. She had worn it when DS Morris died. She had never seen the bone insert before. Eva's eyes locked onto the watch. The fear in her green eyes shifted to recognition. That is not standard issue. Quinn snapped the strap back down. She covered the bone with her thumb. Where did this come from? Eva took a step forward. She reached out, then stopped. The Compass does not lie. That bone... it belongs to the Market. It is a key. Quinn backed away. Her hand hovered near her service weapon. I never came here before tonight. The Compass needle spun again. It pointed from Quinn's watch to the dead man on the floor. A line of energy seemed to connect them, invisible but heavy in the air. Eva opened her satchel. She pulled out a piece of chalk. She began to draw a circle around Quinn's feet. Do not move. Quinn stood still. Her muscles coiled. You think I killed him. I think you brought him here. The bone token opens the way. You walked him through. Quinn looked at the dead man. She looked at the watch. The memory of three years ago flashed behind her eyes. Morris falling. The strange light. The silence. She grabbed Eva's wrist. The chalk snapped. Tell me what this is. Eva pulled free. She rubbed her wrist. It is a tether. You are linked to the Veil. And he died because the link was severed. Quinn looked down at her watch. The leather seemed to pulse. If I am linked, who cut the cord? Eva pointed the compass at the tunnel entrance. The needle swung hard, locking onto the darkness beyond the platform. Someone else is here. And they have the other end. Quinn drew her weapon. The metal felt cold in her grip. She aimed into the dark tunnel. Show yourself. Silence answered. The blue light of the market flickered. The stalls groaned as if shifting position. Eva tucked her hair behind her ear. Her hand shook. They know we found the body. They will come to clean the rest. Quinn kept the gun trained on the shadows. Let them come. She stepped out of the chalk circle. The powder scattered under her boot. We need to move the body. Standard procedure. Eva shook her head. If you move him, the energy dissipates. We lose the trail. Quinn holstered her weapon. She grabbed the body under the arms. Then we follow the trail before it fades. Eva grabbed the legs. They lifted the dead man. The weight felt wrong, lighter than a human should be. Quinn looked at the drag marks leading to the maintenance tunnel. Lead the way. Eva held the compass out. The needle pointed into the dark throat of the tunnel. They began to walk, carrying the dead man between them, deeper into the underground. The air grew colder. The sound of dripping water echoed like footsteps behind them. Quinn did not look back. She focused on the watch on her wrist. The leather felt warm against her skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"standard"
count2
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"shimmered"
2"trembled"
3"etched"
4"scanned"
5"silence"
6"silk"
7"footsteps"
8"echoed"
9"furrowed"
10"vibrated"
11"standard"
12"pulse"
13"flickered"
14"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences236
matches(empty)
52.06% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences236
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
2"look"
3"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences236
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1591
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"If we find him here, we call in the specialist unit."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions89
wordCount1591
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn34
Tube1
Transport1
London2
Camden2
Town1
Veil4
Market3
Kowalski1
Compass7
Eva22
Shade1
Met1
Morris2
You7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Compass"
3"Eva"
4"Met"
5"Morris"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"Town"
3"Market"
globalScore0.431
windowScore0.167
92.31% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like silk but burned her fingertip"
1"appeared normal worn and cracked from years of service"
2"as if shifting position"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.629
wordCount1591
matches
0"not north, but down into the tracks"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences236
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean17.29
std14.73
cv0.852
sampleLengths
075
163
253
315
434
512
637
723
834
94
109
1110
125
1324
1448
1524
168
1715
1815
1910
204
2112
2233
234
2416
259
2610
2744
2810
2910
3054
3129
3212
3314
347
357
3610
3718
3840
3938
4010
4119
4218
4321
4411
454
4610
474
4814
4936
97.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences236
matches
0"were blackened"
1"were caked"
2"been disturbed"
3"are linked"
4"was severed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs300
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences236
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1593
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0194601381042059
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0025109855618330196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences236
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences236
mean6.74
std3.74
cv0.555
sampleLengths
017
118
217
310
413
511
616
711
85
917
103
1114
1213
139
1417
1510
165
175
1811
1913
205
219
223
2312
244
257
2614
272
2816
295
306
3112
325
3311
344
355
364
374
386
395
405
415
427
437
442
457
464
474
4820
492
41.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.21610169491525424
totalSentences236
uniqueOpeners51
30.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences217
matches
0"Just the dead man and"
1"Then we follow the trail"
ratio0.009
76.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences217
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"Her eyes adjusted to the"
2"She wore round glasses that"
3"She stopped beside the researcher."
4"His skin remained unbroken, yet"
5"Her fingers trembled."
6"She pulled a pair of"
7"She leaned over the corpse."
8"It dropped with a dull"
9"You think someone used magic."
10"I think something crossed over."
11"She walked a circle around"
12"Her sharp jaw tightened."
13"She scanned the perimeter."
14"She returned to the head"
15"She shone her torch into"
16"She brushed dust from her"
17"Her green eyes widened behind"
18"It went back."
19"She pointed to the man's"
ratio0.359
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount189
totalSentences217
matches
0"Harlow Quinn stepped off the"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"The air tasted of copper"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"The hands glowed faintly in"
5"This place did not exist"
6"The signage read Camden Town,"
7"Shadows pooled in the corners,"
8"Quinn clicked her torch off."
9"Her eyes adjusted to the"
10"The Veil Market."
11"Eva Kowalski crouched near the"
12"The red curls of her"
13"She wore round glasses that"
14"A worn leather satchel sat"
15"Quinn approached, her boots making"
16"She stopped beside the researcher."
17"A body lay between them."
18"A man, dressed in rags"
19"His skin remained unbroken, yet"
ratio0.871
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount8
totalSentences217
matches
0"If something came through, where"
1"If he died elsewhere, why"
2"To stage it."
3"To make it look like"
4"If the Met finds him"
5"If we find him here,"
6"If I am linked, who"
7"If you move him, the"
ratio0.037
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The fingernails were blackened, as if burned from the inside out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.5311%