Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0CKXYWCEFBDK8JDKD9V6X

Run Details

Duration:
30.9s
Cost:
$0.005277
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cobblestones of the alley behind the Camden Lock market, turning the grime into a black slurry that clung to boot soles. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape, her shoulders brushing the damp brickwork. The air smelled of stale beer, rotting fish, and something sharper, like ozone after a lightning strike. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:14. Too quiet for a Friday night in this part of London. Sergeant Miller stood over the body, his face pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights. He kicked a discarded takeaway container away from the victim's outstretched hand. "Open and shut, Guv," Miller said, rubbing the back of his neck. "Mugging gone wrong. Kid got jumped for his wallet. Look at the state of him." Quinn crouched beside the body. The young man lay on his side, eyes wide and fixed on nothing. His clothes were dry despite the downpour, a stark contrast to the soaking wet pavement around him. No blood pooled beneath the head wound. Instead, a fine, grey ash coated the collar of his jacket, glowing faintly where the light hit it. "Mugging," Quinn repeated, her voice flat. She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her pocket and snapped them onto her wrists. "Where's the blood, Miller?" "Maybe he bled out elsewhere and they dumped him here." "No drag marks. No footprints leading away except ours and the uniform's." Quinn leaned closer. The ash wasn't just dust; it clung to the fabric in intricate, swirling patterns that looked deliberate. She reached out, hovering a finger inches above the substance. The hair on her arm stood up. A static charge prickled against her skin, sharp and unnatural. "See that?" Miller pointed to the victim's empty pockets. "Wallet's gone. Phone's gone. Classic smash and grab." Quinn ignored him. She scanned the alley walls. Graffiti covered every inch of brick, layers of tags overlapping in a chaotic mess. But near the body, the paint had peeled away in a perfect circle, revealing the bare stone beneath. The stone wasn't grey or red. It shimmered with a bruised purple hue, pulsing slowly like a dying heartbeat. "This isn't a mugging," Quinn said, standing up. Her knees popped, a reminder of eighteen years chasing lowlifes through London's underbelly. "Look at the ash. Look at the wall." Miller squinted, shifting his weight. "It's weird graffiti, sure. Maybe some new street artist trying to make a statement. Doesn't change the fact the kid's dead and robbed." "The kid isn't robbed." Quinn stepped over the body, her boots crunching on the grit. She moved toward the wall, ignoring the damp chill seeping through her coat. "If someone took his wallet, why leave the gold chain? Why leave the sneakers? Those are worth more than whatever cash a student carries." She traced the edge of the purple stain on the wall with her gloved finger. The stone felt warm. Not the residual heat of the day, but an active, generating warmth that vibrated against her fingertips. "You're overthinking it, Harlow," Miller said, his tone dipping into that patronizing register she hated. "Stress makes you see things. Remember Morris?" The name hit the air like a physical blow. Quinn froze. The memory of DS Morris flashed behind her eyes—his confused expression, the way the shadows in that warehouse had seemed to detach themselves from the walls, the silence before the scream. Three years. Three years of digging through cold cases and dead ends, searching for a logic that didn't exist. "Morris is dead because he followed procedure while standing in front of something he didn't understand," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous. "I won't make that mistake." She turned back to the victim. Up close, the ash patterns resolved into symbols. Not random swirls, but geometric shapes that hurt the eyes if she focused too long. They matched the sigils she'd seen in a dossier buried deep in the evidence locker, a case filed under 'Vandalism' but marked 'Unexplained Disappearance'. "Get the techs to bag the ash," Quinn ordered. "And tell them to use non-conductive containers. Nothing metal." Miller laughed, a short, nervous sound. "Non-conductive? For dust? You think he got electrocuted?" "I think the evidence doesn't add up, and until it does, we treat this as anything but a standard homicide." Quinn pulled out her notebook, flipping to a fresh page. She sketched the symbol on the wall, her pen moving fast. The lines seemed to shift on the paper, the ink spreading slightly more than it should. A movement in the shadows at the end of the alley caught her eye. Not a person. The darkness itself seemed to ripple, folding in on itself like fabric caught in a draft. The smell of ozone intensified, choking out the scent of rain and rot. "Did you see that?" Quinn spun around, hand drifting toward her holster. "See what?" Miller shone his torch down the alley. The beam cut through the fog, illuminating nothing but stacked crates and overflowing bins. "Just rats, Guv. Plenty of them down here." Quinn walked toward the end of the alley, her senses dialed to maximum. The pavement here felt different. Softer. Spongy, as if the concrete had lost its structural integrity. She knelt, pressing her palm flat against the ground. A hum traveled up her arm, resonating in her teeth. "This ground," she muttered. "It's vibrating." "It's the Tube," Miller called out, staying firmly near the body. "Northern Line runs right under us. Trains cause vibration. Basic physics." "The Northern Line doesn't run at three in the morning on a Friday, and certainly not with enough frequency to make the ground pulse like a heartbeat." Quinn stood, brushing dirt from her trousers. She looked at the wall again, then at the body, then at the rippling shadow at the alley's end. The pieces refused to lock together. A dry body in a wet alley. Ash instead of blood. Glowing stone. A vibration that defied the train schedule. Her mind raced through the files she'd read late at night, the ones her superiors told her to drop. The reports of missing persons near Camden. The strange tokens found in their pockets. Bone fragments carved with similar sigils. "We need to expand the perimeter," Quinn said, her voice cutting through the damp air. "Double the tape. And get me a list of every missing person report filed in Camden Borough in the last six months. Cross-reference with any incidents involving... unusual substances." "Unusual substances?" Miller raised an eyebrow. "You mean drugs?" "I mean anything that doesn't fit the standard chemical profile." Quinn walked back to the body, crouching once more. She noticed something she had missed before. The victim's shoes. The soles were clean. Impossibly clean. No mud, no gutter sludge, no rain splatter. "He didn't walk here," Quinn whispered. "What?" "He didn't walk here," she repeated, louder this time. "Look at his shoes. Pristine. But his socks are soaked through. He appeared here. Dropped from somewhere else." Miller shook his head, muttering about stress and lack of sleep. "You need to go home, Harlow. Let the day shift handle the paperwork." Quinn ignored him. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small brass object, cold and heavy. The Veil Compass. She had confiscated it from a suspect two weeks ago, a nervous man babbling about portals and markets. The casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that matched the ash on the victim's jacket. She held it out over the body. The needle spun wildly, a blur of steel, before snapping to a halt. It didn't point North. It pointed straight down, into the ground beneath the victim's chest. The needle trembled, vibrating with such intensity that the brass casing hummed against her palm. "Miller," Quinn said, her eyes locked on the compass. "Get the heavy equipment. We're digging." "Digging? In the middle of an active investigation? You can't be serious." "The needle doesn't lie," Quinn said, watching the dial. The spinning slowed, then stopped again, this time pointing toward the rippling shadow at the end of the alley. The shadow deepened, stretching toward them like a grasping hand. "Whatever killed him didn't leave. It's still here." The floodlight flickered. Once. Twice. Then died, plunging the alley into near-total darkness. Only the faint, bruised purple glow from the wall remained, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them. Quinn drew her torch, clicking it on. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating the ash on the victim's coat. It glowed brighter now, responding to the darkness. "Stay behind me," Quinn ordered, stepping between Miller and the encroaching shadow. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a steady, rhythmic drumbeat. This wasn't a mugging. This was a door left ajar. And she had just walked right up to the threshold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn spun around [around]"
1"Quinn walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
93.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"intricate"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"resolved"
count1
14
word"standard"
count2
15
word"firmly"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"eyebrow"
count1
19
word"pristine"
count1
20
word"etched"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"intensity"
count1
23
word"flickered"
count1
24
word"gloom"
count1
25
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"intricate"
2"scanned"
3"chaotic"
4"perfect"
5"shimmered"
6"reminder"
7"weight"
8"chill"
9"traced"
10"warmth"
11"vibrated"
12"silence"
13"resolved"
14"standard"
15"firmly"
16"pulse"
17"raced"
18"eyebrow"
19"pristine"
20"etched"
21"trembled"
22"intensity"
23"flickered"
24"gloom"
25"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
81.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1492
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1109
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Lock1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Friday1
London2
Miller11
Morris1
Veil1
Compass1
North1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Lock"
2"London"
globalScore0.508
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them"
65.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.34
wordCount1492
matches
0"Not the residual heat of the day, but an active, generating warmth"
1"Not random swirls, but geometric shapes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean33.91
std19.42
cv0.573
sampleLengths
078
129
227
360
426
510
659
717
859
929
1028
1152
1236
1322
1461
1528
1653
1718
1814
1957
2046
2112
2231
2348
246
2522
2679
2739
2844
299
3043
316
321
3327
3424
3562
3635
3715
3815
3912
4046
4137
4228
4342
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences138
ratio0.014
matches
0"The ash wasn't just dust; it clung to the fabric in intricate, swirling patterns that looked deliberate."
1"The memory of DS Morris flashed behind her eyes—his confused expression, the way the shadows in that warehouse had seemed to detach themselves from the walls, the silence before the scream."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01870503597122302
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0057553956834532375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean10.81
std6.65
cv0.615
sampleLengths
024
115
217
310
41
511
617
712
812
915
105
1113
1217
137
1418
156
1616
174
1810
1915
2017
2110
227
2310
249
258
263
275
2814
2918
306
3113
328
3313
348
355
3623
3715
3813
3924
4015
414
4217
4315
447
459
462
4731
482
4917
62.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.41605839416058393
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"Too quiet for a Friday"
1"Instead, a fine, grey ash"
2"Then died, plunging the alley"
3"Only the faint, bruised purple"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences105
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He kicked a discarded takeaway"
2"His clothes were dry despite"
3"She pulled a pair of"
4"She reached out, hovering a"
5"She scanned the alley walls."
6"It shimmered with a bruised"
7"Her knees popped, a reminder"
8"She moved toward the wall,"
9"She traced the edge of"
10"She turned back to the"
11"They matched the sigils she'd"
12"She sketched the symbol on"
13"She knelt, pressing her palm"
14"She looked at the wall"
15"Her mind raced through the"
16"She noticed something she had"
17"she repeated, louder this time"
18"She reached into her pocket"
19"She had confiscated it from"
ratio0.238
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences105
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The air smelled of stale"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"Sergeant Miller stood over the"
5"He kicked a discarded takeaway"
6"Miller said, rubbing the back"
7"Quinn crouched beside the body."
8"The young man lay on"
9"His clothes were dry despite"
10"Quinn repeated, her voice flat"
11"She pulled a pair of"
12"Quinn leaned closer"
13"The ash wasn't just dust;"
14"She reached out, hovering a"
15"The hair on her arm"
16"A static charge prickled against"
17"Miller pointed to the victim's"
18"Quinn ignored him."
19"She scanned the alley walls."
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of the alley behind the Camden Lock market, turning the grime into a black slurry that clung to boot soles."
1"The ash wasn't just dust; it clung to the fabric in intricate, swirling patterns that looked deliberate."
2"Not the residual heat of the day, but an active, generating warmth that vibrated against her fingertips."
3"Three years of digging through cold cases and dead ends, searching for a logic that didn't exist."
4"Not random swirls, but geometric shapes that hurt the eyes if she focused too long."
5"Spongy, as if the concrete had lost its structural integrity."
6"The casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that matched the ash on the victim's jacket."
7"Only the faint, bruised purple glow from the wall remained, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn repeated, her voice flat"
1"Quinn stepped, her boots crunching on the grit"
2"Miller said, his tone dipping into that patronizing register she hated"
3"Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous"
4"They matched, a case filed under 'Vandalism' but marked 'Unexplained Disappearance'"
5"Quinn said, her voice cutting through the damp air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"Quinn ordered (order)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"Miller called out (call out)"
4"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
5"she repeated (repeat)"
6"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.311
77.1478%