Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0CV2N263XA46AW61NNJF7

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53.1s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked in sequence. One. Two. Three. Aurora opened the door expecting Eva's harried face, another crisis demanding immediate attention. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow corridor above the curry house, immaculate as always despite the late hour. His mismatched eyes caught the hallway's flickering light, amber and black studying her with that familiar intensity that made her stomach twist. "Lovely evening for a visit." "It's past eleven." "Precisely why I assumed you'd be awake." He stepped closer to the threshold without invitation. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light from her flat. "May I?" Aurora's grip tightened on the door frame. Three months. Three months since she'd last seen him, since that disaster in Southwark that ended with her walking away and him letting her. Now he stood here like nothing had happened, all platinum hair and tailored charcoal, filling the cramped corridor with expensive cologne and unfinished business. "Depends what you want." "Information. Always information with me, chérie." The endearment hit like a slap. Her chest tightened, but she stepped aside. Better to get this over with. Lucien moved past her into the flat's main room, his presence immediately shrinking the already small space. Books and research notes covered every surface except the narrow path from door to kitchenette. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, emerged from under a precarious stack of folklore texts to investigate the newcomer. "Charming accommodations." Lucien's cane tapped against a tower of occult journals. "Very... academic." "It's Eva's place." "Ah yes. The scholar. Still buried in dusty tomes, I assume." Aurora closed the door but left it unlocked. Just in case. "She's researching. What do you want, Lucien?" He turned to face her properly, and the months collapsed between them. Same calculating smile. Same way of holding his head slightly tilted, like he was perpetually amused by some private joke. The scar on her left wrist tingled, an old habit whenever stress spiked her pulse. "You've been asking questions about demon hierarchies. Specifically about half-breeds and their... obligations to their paternal realm." Ice flooded her veins. "I don't know what you're talking about." "Please." He moved to the window overlooking Brick Lane, peering through Eva's blackout curtains at the late-night foot traffic below. "Yu-Fei mentioned your curiosity during your last delivery. Something about inheritance laws in Avaros." Damn. She'd thought the restaurant owner's English wasn't good enough to catch the subtext in her casual questions. Apparently she'd underestimated both Yu-Fei's comprehension and the supernatural community's gossip network. "Research for Eva." "Naturally." Lucien's reflection in the window showed that infuriating smile widening. "And I suppose it's mere coincidence that you're researching the exact realm where my dear father holds considerable influence." "The world doesn't revolve around you." "No, but this particular inquiry does." He faced her again, amber eye catching the lamplight while the black one seemed to absorb it entirely. "What aren't you telling me, Aurora?" Her name on his lips. Three months of careful distance, of rebuilding walls he'd helped tear down, and he waltzed in here speaking her name like he still had the right. Like Southwark hadn't happened. Like she hadn't seen him choose his mysterious contacts over her safety, hadn't watched him disappear into shadows while she bled in an alley. "I'm not telling you lots of things. We're not partners anymore, remember?" "We were never partners." The casual dismissal stung more than it should have. "Right. I was the convenient human who knew London's streets. Useful until I became inconvenient." "You became reckless." "I became honest. About what I wanted. About us." The words escaped before she could stop them, three months of buried frustration surfacing like oil on water. "That was my mistake." Lucien's expression shifted, the practiced charm flickering. For a moment, something raw showed through, quickly shuttered. He moved closer, close enough that she caught the scent of his cologne mixing with something else, something that reminded her of warm skin and tangled sheets. "You think I wanted you to walk away?" "I think you let me." "Because you were right to." His voice dropped, accent thickening the way it always did when his careful control slipped. "You think I don't know what I am? What I bring to everything I touch?" "I think you're a coward." The word hung between them like a blade. Lucien's knuckles whitened on his cane, and Aurora realized she'd crossed a line that couldn't be uncrossed. He moved with predatory grace until they stood barely a foot apart, close enough that she had to tilt her head back to maintain eye contact. "Careful, chérie. Some truths cut both ways." "Is that a threat?" "It's a warning." His free hand rose as if to touch her face, then fell away. "The questions you've been asking. They've attracted attention." "What kind of attention?" "The kind that ends with people disappearing. Permanently." He stepped back, the careful mask sliding into place again. "Someone wants to know why a human girl is interested in Avaros succession laws. Someone with enough pull to make inquiries through official channels." Aurora's blood chilled. Official channels meant the Courts, the supernatural government that barely tolerated human awareness of their world. If they thought she posed a threat... "I need those research notes." "They're Eva's." "They're dangerous. And Eva isn't the one asking pointed questions in Chinatown restaurants." Lucien's gaze swept the cluttered room, cataloguing potential hiding spots. "Where are they?" "Why should I trust you? You made your priorities clear in Southwark." "Because whoever's coming won't give you the luxury of choice. They'll take what they want and dispose of the witnesses." The flat suddenly felt smaller, the walls pressing in. Aurora thought of Eva, probably still at the British Library, completely unaware that her research had painted a target on both their backs. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed. "The bedroom. Under the mattress." Lucien moved with fluid efficiency, disappearing into Eva's cramped bedroom. Aurora heard the sounds of a thorough search, springs creaking as he lifted the mattress. When he returned, he carried a manila folder thick with photocopied pages and handwritten notes. "Impressive work. Your friend has connections I didn't expect." He flipped through the papers, expression growing more serious with each page. "This is... comprehensive." "Eva's thorough." "She's also identified three half-demons currently in London. Including me." He looked up sharply. "What exactly did you tell her?" Aurora's mouth went dry. "Just that I needed information about demon inheritance law. For a story I was writing." "And she researched every half-demon in the city? For a fictional story?" The accusation in his voice made her defensive. "She likes to be thorough." "She likes you." Lucien closed the folder, expression unreadable. "Enough to dig into extremely dangerous territory without asking why." "People care about each other, Lucien. I know it's a foreign concept." "Foreign enough that it might get you both killed." The flat's front door rattled, three quick knocks followed by two long ones. Eva's signal. Aurora started toward the door, but Lucien's hand closed around her wrist. "Don't." "It's Eva." "Eva doesn't knock on her own door." The rational part of Aurora's mind knew he was right. Eva had keys. She never knocked, just announced herself while fighting with the deadbolts. The knocking came again, more insistent. "Aurora? I know you're in there. We need to talk." The voice was Eva's, but something felt wrong. Too formal. Eva called her Rory, not Aurora. "Back bedroom. Now." Lucien's whisper was barely audible. "I'm not leaving her." "That's not her."
total_cost0.042663

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.369
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.031
72.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"quickly"
4"suddenly"
5"completely"
6"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"calculating"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"intensity"
2"stomach"
3"calculating"
4"pulse"
5"charm"
6"chilled"
7"potential"
8"throbbed"
9"unreadable"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1258
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount797
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva9
Lucien11
Moreau1
Southwark2
Aurora11
Brick1
Lane1
Damn1
English1
Yu-Fei1
Courts1
British1
Library1
Rory1
Three4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"British"
3"Library"
globalScore0.81
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Apparently she'd underestimate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean18.78
std16.29
cv0.868
sampleLengths
08
154
25
33
429
555
64
76
867
913
103
1111
1218
1347
1417
1511
1634
1730
183
1930
206
2130
2259
2312
244
2524
263
2731
2843
298
305
3135
325
3351
347
354
3624
374
3842
3926
405
412
4226
4312
4420
4539
465
4740
4824
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
90.10% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.05131414267834793
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017521902377972465
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.06
std6.93
cv0.689
sampleLengths
05
11
21
31
413
519
622
75
83
915
1012
112
127
132
1422
1524
164
176
186
197
206
2117
2215
2316
2411
252
263
2711
288
293
307
3112
323
3317
3415
3517
364
377
3820
3914
401
4117
4212
433
4411
4519
466
4724
486
495
77.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.496
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood in"
1"Just in case."
2"Apparently she'd underestimated both Yu-Fei's"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"His mismatched eyes caught the"
1"He stepped closer to the"
2"Her chest tightened, but she"
3"He turned to face her"
4"He moved to the window"
5"She'd thought the restaurant owner's"
6"He faced her again, amber"
7"Her name on his lips."
8"He moved closer, close enough"
9"His voice dropped, accent thickening"
10"He moved with predatory grace"
11"His free hand rose as"
12"He stepped back, the careful"
13"He flipped through the papers,"
14"He looked up sharply"
15"She never knocked, just announced"
ratio0.239
71.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences67
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked in sequence."
1"Aurora opened the door expecting"
2"His mismatched eyes caught the"
3"He stepped closer to the"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"Aurora's grip tightened on the"
6"The endearment hit like a"
7"Her chest tightened, but she"
8"Lucien moved past her into"
9"Books and research notes covered"
10"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, emerged from"
11"Lucien's cane tapped against a"
12"Aurora closed the door but"
13"He turned to face her"
14"The scar on her left"
15"Ice flooded her veins."
16"He moved to the window"
17"She'd thought the restaurant owner's"
18"Lucien's reflection in the window"
19"He faced her again, amber"
ratio0.776
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Now he stood here like"
1"If they thought she posed"
ratio0.03
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His mismatched eyes caught the hallway's flickering light, amber and black studying her with that familiar intensity that made her stomach twist."
1"He moved closer, close enough that she caught the scent of his cologne mixing with something else, something that reminded her of warm skin and tangled sheets."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stepped back, the careful mask sliding into place again"
1"He flipped, expression growing more serious with each page"
2"Lucien closed, expression unreadable"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.9069%